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Please update soon.

Hahaha. Seems like you are quite into this.

Do not worry dear, update will be posted by today or maximum by tomorrow. That is what I predict. 😆

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Originally posted by: amrit2000

Hahaha. Seems like you are quite into this.
Do not worry dear, update will be posted by today or maximum by tomorrow. That is what I predict. 😆

Please try to update today only :)

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Originally posted by: _PanCake_

Please try to update today only :)

Surely girl. I am trying my best. Its just I am not getting time. Plus, I am lazy. Lol.

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BOARD & PAINTING

St. Louis! One of the most elite college for all the riches. Obviously, nerds would occupy their own space. SCHOLORSHIPS! Elites hate these nerds from top to bottom of their well build bodies. Be it boys, whose bodies are well toned and macho types. Or, be it girls, who are sexy like hell. Their heavenly bodies with tons of make-up. On the other hand, there are SCHOLORS! They hate these rich brats to zenith. And, between this big crowd lies the EXTRA ORDINARIES! ROYAL PEOPLE!

"Weeesh!" A red Lamborgani stops in front on this elite college. Here comes out a girl. Well, not some ordinary girl. But, the diva! Miss Raiprakash. Miss diva entered her college premises, fuming! Angry as hell. No one can dare to come in her way. She entered in girls locker room. Her eyes scanned the whole room in just seconds. "she is not here" the only thought which came in her mind. Only place left is, the auditorium. Without even thinking for second, she started her journey towards the audi.

An innocent girl by looks, but, clever she is. She is in her own world. Her own dream land. The land of LOVE. Yes. She is reading the most famous novel, NOTEBOOK. "TAAANI!" a shrill voice disturbed her beautiful time. Not good! Looks like Taani has to calm her only best friend. All ready to kill anyone, Sharon entered the audi. "realx. Its okay! I know what is wrong. We wil do that right away. Okay?" taani said this in one go, before the lioness could shudder even a single glass of the audi. If there were any. Lol. " you know how to calm me, Taani. This is why you have always won my heart. Love you, babe." Said Sharon, calming a bit. Her mate just smiled and asked her to come, through her eyes. Sharon just nodded with a wide smile plastered on her face.

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The two hunks! Yeah they were. "The" Reyaansh Sighania and "The" Swayam Bhargav, all ready to have basket ball match. Here the game starts! The two hotties alone in basket ball court, having fun. Sweat dripping of their bodies, making them look hot as sun and cool as ice.mouths can just went dry. "Bro, it's a tie." Swayam is the first to break their silence. "okay!" well, it was Rey. "so, now what?" said rey, hell confused as what to do next? "dude, you really don't know? Come on!" said swayam, smirking evily. Both the boys had their killer smiles on. Something was cooking in their mind.

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"here we are!" said Taani all excited. They were in an empty class room. On the right hand of a room, a big board hung. This classroom had been vacated for years. No one was allowed in. but, our two daring chicks, they were ready for some good adventure, as they stood all confident to have an adventures trip.

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"Ready?" said the long haired guy, Swayam. "Always, bro" said the short heighted guy, Rey. "time for some adventure" said both in unison, as they stood infront of a big painting, which hung on big vacant wall, in store room. It was a wide painting. From the very looks of the painting, anyone could say that it was made years ago.

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The two girls and the two boys, all ready to hit on an adventure trip. What will happen? What problems are they going to go through? What is the mystery? Many questions, but, answer, well,..

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Hola peeps! I know, I am late. And, this update is very small. But, I cannot help it. But, I promise to give a big update next time. Anyway, this was the introduction. Many things are still left to unfold. And, also, the love story, too. 😳

ENJOY READING.😊

Edited by amrit2000 - 11 years ago

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Nice chapter
Update nxt chapter soon
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Nice start.update the nxt pt soon

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#29

Nyc update
Loved shaani bonding
Its becoming more interesting 😃
Update soon n do pm me nxt tym

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PAST & PLACE

I turned to my right. ouch! Something stabbed me directly in my stomach. Wait! When did my bed became like a ground? A ground on which stones are scattered, commiting the ground to be their property and insects, who are busy playing basket ball. It never made sound! Then how come am I hearing this crackling sound? A sound similar to that of crackling of dead leaves!? My body ached. my every limb was crying with pain. I opened my eyes, only to shut it very instant. They were burning badly. And, the sudden light was just adding the salt to the burned. While my eyes continued the process of opening. I tried standing up, stumbling a little. My legs were weak. But, I managed to get up.

As I stood up, I travelled my gaze in all directions. I was baffeled to see a place like this. It was like a fake set, created for some movie shoot. The place was covered by trees, or let me say, wild plants and trees from all directions. The sun! Well, it penitrated its light, accompanied by heat only in a particular area. And, the very area was in which I stood, all dumbfounded. The place around my was a flat, circular land, covered with dried leaves. How did I end up here? I forced my mind. When, suddenly, my mind started receiving flashes of the past event, which landed me here.

FLASH-BACK

"Taani, lets get going!," said Sharon. She was excited. But, inside, she waa hell nervous, too. Her excitment failed to hide her nervousness, which could easily be seen in her beautiful, black eyes. I knowingly patted her shoulder, and give her a Are-You-Sure look?! The first thing she did was, sign. But then, an approving smile flashed across her face. She can be unpredictible at times. We started our work. We slowly, yet steadily, started roaming our hands from every corner of the surface of board, to every other corner. The surface was rough. It was giving our smooth, yet gentle hands a tough time. But, we dint care. We were not like those bimbos. Chicks! My mind was busy thinking all this useless stuff. when suddenly, I gasped. I heard a gasp from beside me, too. It must have been Sharon. We gapped from the board, as it started lifting up. Yes, the board was lifting up itself. I looked at Sharon, whose face was adorned by a winning smile. I gave her a Tell-Me look! She smirked first. urgh! Bitch! "I was hell frustated. When suddenly I banged my hand on the wall beside the board," said Sharon, pointing towards the wall. "What happened next?" I said, getting more interested in this mystery. "The wall pushed inside. And, rest you know." she said, giving me a knowing look. I nodded.

As soon as the board finished its work. Sharon and I were dumbfounded to see the scene in front of us. There stood a lifted board, under which, a dark, a very very dark whole was present. Fear. It was tye emotion which would have crept inside us, and occupied our every single muscle. But, instead, our bodies were ready for a great adventure with lots of horror in it. Yes, we both are different from those chicklets. Who are all over their boyfriends. Yuck! They stink.

Without thinking much, we both stepped inside the whole. When, the board came down in a swift movement, without even giving us a chance to know. But, we would have not stopped that either. We interwinded our hands. "Are you okay?" said Sharon, knowing that darkness is my weakness. "Yeah." I said, in a very low and plain voice. I could feel her squeeze my hands, indicating that she is always there with me. I thanked god mentally for this. "Ahhh!" a loud shreik escaped our moths, when the land below us started shaking. We both cling to each other for our dear lives. After other few seconds, everything went black.
FLASH-BACK ends

That is when I snapped out of my past. I could not remember anything after I and Sha.. wait! SHARON! Where is she? I scanned the ground. When, my eyes caught a fearful sight. There laid Sharon, unconsious. My mind went blank. my body started shivering. My legs trembled. My eyes sticked to the sight in front of me. I never realised when a cluster of salty drops started drizzling out of my eyes. "Sharon!" the only word escaped my mouth in form of scream. I ran to save my lifee...
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Holaa all! so, here is the second chapter. I know, only Shaani scenes are being upated since the last chapeter. But, right now, I need to tell you all the situation. In next chapter boys and girls will meet, hopefully. Anyway, editing is still left. I have upates this chapter from my mobile. So, when I will get my laptop, I will edit it. Right now, please cooperate with it. I am sorry for the inconvinience. I will reply to all comments, asap. Dont worry!

Edited by amrit2000 - 11 years ago