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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepkriti

thanks a lot😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lose it or chose it


What seems like days, Taani finally found herself awake with a straining headache and a terrible body pain. Her opened eyes faced a bulb hanging on the ceiling making her vision blur. She closed her eyes in reflex only to be opened after a few minutes as she found her lens getting accustomed to the light. She tried standing up but of no use. Her legs were terribly weak. She looked at herself and found her clothes tattered and skin bruised at a lot of places. She was definitely not in a position to understand anything. As if this was not enough, she heard a voice enough to shock her.

"Good morning princess!!" She looked up to find a well built man standing in three-piece suit at the door.

"Where am I? Who the hell are you??" She said as she grabbed her head again. She was panicking.

"Wait!! Don't push your head too much baby...it'll hurt more." He smirked looking at her tattered clothes and the revealing bruised skin.

"Who the hell are you??" She was in rage now.

He bend to her level so as to face her. Looking straight into her eyes, he grinned, "Shivam!"

The hot water of the shower created vapours inside the bathroom as his body gets rinsed under it. He was angry, frustrated, in pain but more than that he was in grief. Grief of a 'NO'. He pushed the knob of shower raising the velocity of water strings. All he wanted was to wash that NO from his mind. But alas! He couldn't. He banged on the wall and his closed eyes finally opened showing the redness filled in them. He had cried- because of her denial...because of his love. The hot shower was not at all helping it. No matter how hard he tried, he just couldn't get that event out of his mind. That event..that occurred last night. If only he wished not to go to Dusky beauty last night...

The bar was as usual filled with a lot of druken perverts; all gathered to look sexy girls putting off their clothes. But there was something different today. The seating arrangement of the bar changed as a special reserved table was kept in the centre. Rey entered the bar in anxiety. It was another Saturday and yes, she was going to perform. Taani aka Rose. That's what she told him when they met this morning. Today's performance was highly special as some special guests of Robin were arriving and she was specifically performing for them. A single thought of Taani stripping in front of other men brought him goosebumps creating havoc in his heart. No doubt, she was not doing it for the first time but rather things were also not like before. Unknown to his own feelings, he just couldn't bear that thought which ultimately brought him at the club to look at the whole thing by himself.

"God knows! Why she even do this??" He murmured as he smelled the alcohol in air. Men were getting lose while in different corners of the club, some were getting lap dance. It was surely erotic but not for him. Little did he knew, his turn was coming soon.

The announcement came that she is going to enter the stage. His fist got tighten on its own as men growled and called her with their dirty looks. How much he wished to kick all of their a*s and take her back, but this is her job and under no circumstances he wanted to make her think that he doesn't respect her life.

The speakers explode the sexy music as she entered on the stage. The other girls knew, their time was over as every single men in the club ogled at her. None was left who didn't carry lust for her. Not even that one man whose one glimpse was something she was dying for- Reyaansh Singhania. His jaw dropped at the instant she entered in her sexy stripper's dress, blowing away his mind. Yes, he was definetly lucky enough to have seen her other side. Else he could never imagine a single girl playing such diverse roles. This Rose just can't be Taani.


Her hands reached her jacket as she pulled it off her shoulder creating a much required friction. The crowd cheered as she threw it to a group of men who catch it like a bowl of nectar. She winked at them with a smirk as she pointed her locket that was stuck in her short top. She bend a little giving a nice view of her cleavage as she asked one man to free the locket. His eyes looked as if they are going to pop out as her cleavage came to his level. She was busy in doing her show with full loyalty unknown to a burning man sitting near the bar. He was definitely on the rocks.

The man tried his best to free her locket but all in vain. Finally giving up, she herself bend down a little more and pull off her top revealing her naked stomach along with her chest covered with string less bra. The stage was on fire along with a corner of the club.

He couldn't take it anymore. Those ogling eyes were making him insane. All of those lusty men were eyeing her and a sense of protection evoked in him as he saw that. He stood with a force as he moved towards the stage. Little did he knew, he was already 6 shots high as he drank one after the other as he saw the scene in front of him. She was busy in her show when suddenly she felt a pair of hands wrapped around her knees and before she could realise it, he pulled her down the stage. She looked at him in shock while his eyes only show deep effect of alcohol and jealousy. Yes, he was jealous. He was mature enough to guess that. But he cared least. All he knew that he can't bear her doing all this.

He pulled her wrist to take her away. They were soon blocked by a army of bouncers. She was scared knowing what could happen if he didn't stopped. But to her shock, Robin asked his men to give them the way. Soon he had left the smell of alcohol and aura of lust behind as he took her almost at the back exit. Unknown to him, all this time she tried to cover herself. He finally let go of her hand and looked at her. Her eyes low and hands trying to cover her upper body. She was very conscious. He soon realised that and opened his jacket to offer it to her. Grabbing it hastily, she cover herself up.

"I'm really sorry taani.." He couldn't say more. His power of speech was getting lost with the effect of alcohol.

"What the hell are you doing??" She snapped at him.

"What the hell am I doing?!!" He was sarcastic now. "What is wrong with you?? Why are you doing this?" He shouted on her.

"Doing what?? Stripping. That's my job!!" she was equally vocal.

"F*ck that job! You can get much better. Leave this place taani. I'll help you in getting a good job." He said with a pool of tears in his eyes. He was hating fighting with her. His tone gradually became a little soft.

She didn't knew how to react on his words. The happiness was not the word to describe her state. Morever she knew that his wish can't be granted. She can't leave the job. Robin OWNS her.

"I can't.." She said in a low voice. He couldn't believe his ears. How could she say a 'NO'? What was wrong with her.

"I am sorry Rey but I can't leave this job." Her eyes never faced him.

"But why?" His voice choked while his eyes spoke volumes.

"I can't tell you the reason. Just go for now and please don't ever do what you did today.." She was equally in pain.

"I don't know what's the reason. I am going right now but believe me taani, next time you are going to do the show...and those perverts looked at you like they did today; I won't just take you out from the place but also break every little eye that was ogling on you. And that's my promise." He hissed and moved a step back. She was confused, shocked but somewhere quite delighted. For the first time, someone in this world stood for her. She saw him walking away and soon clutched his jacket more. She could feel his warmth in it.

He closed the shower. The bathroom was filled with vapours. He quickly wrapped his towel and came out. Contrary to his expectations, the hot shower instead of calming him down, ignited his fire even more. He quickly changed to his clothes trying hard to get her out of his mind. While he was getting ready, he heard a sudden knock on the door with a loud voice yelling, 'MAIL!!!'

"Who would send me mail?" He murmured but soon shrugged it off as he head downstairs to pick the mail from the doorstep. He picked the red envelope with his name written on it. But what shocked him was the name of sender- JULIET.

"You've been kidnapped my dear baby.." Shivam tried touching her chin. She instantly shrugged off his hand.

"Why are you doing this?? What do you want?" She screamed at him.

"Correction. I don't want anything now. Cause what I wanted is what I get last night. YOU." He said as a evil grin took its place on his lips. She couldn't believe his words. She was used, yet again. They say the world is round. Well its right. Cause she again ended up on being raped by some monster. "Don't be shocked taani..I can show you the proofs.." He slid her tattered top a little revealing her mercilessly bitten shoulder. She was in tears. "You cannot go anywhere now.." He got up from his place as he started to leave the room.

"You are highly wrong." He turned to find her glaring at him with anger and rage. Enough was enough. She was not going to sit down and cry. This time, she will FIGHT. "You've got what you want. Now its my turn. I'll get out of this place and mark my words you'll regret what you've done. This is my promise." With the support of the wall, she stood on her feet. No longer pain. Just more confidence. The feeling of getting used was nothing new but the feeling of 'standing against odds' was and it gives her immense feeling to state that now she had nothing to lose. Nothing.

P.S.- Half of flashback has been shown in this update. The rest where taani got kidnapped will be shown in next one. I know you guys will hurry for the next update and this one will sound a bit confusing but just wait a bit. All I can clear is taani has been kidnapped by shivam and also raped (don't kill me for this one) Rey is upset from taani for denying to leave the stripper's job and got the letter of juliet. Taani can't leave the job since Robin owns her *remember human trafficking* Taani is determined to flee from shivam's grip and the rest will be revealed later.


Please give honest reviews to this one. I think I messed it up. Hit like if you are reading this😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG taani being kidnapped and raped
I m definitely going to kill that ba****d shivam arghhh
I sooo hate him.
Taani had been gone through this before also poor girl
Wat a cruel world.
But i m really happy to see the bold taani shivam will regret his deeds. Taani keep going.

Loved the rey getting jealous part
Wow so protective and loving.
Loved the entire fb scene specially taarey part after he pull her fown from stage.
Aweee poor rey frustrated from taani saying NO to quit the job.

I hope taani get escape from shivam trap and open up to rey. He and swayam are the only ones who can help her to pull shivam to his death grave.

Finally rey received the letter/reply from Juliet.
Waiting to know wat is in it.

Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I literary want to marro u 4 showing taani raped, that too that gadha monkey shivam, kidnapped was a big thing 4 me 4 taani n u showed raped !!!!!!!!! no!!!!!!!!! ab kya hoga will rey lov her now too, wht r u trying to do wth my taarey? ????????? ab kya hoga 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
coffee & revealations
sorry i know am late but i was busy
awesome update
omg i can't believe this how could he do this
i mean her dad that was ridiculous
but am not feel pity 4 taani
infact she was brave girl
who survived in that situations

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Posted: 11 years ago
lose it or chose it
amazing update
whole update was superb
& last stanza of this update was awesome

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing!
Love that at the end, Tani got the zeal to fight back!
I think Rey's mind will divert by Juliet's letter!
Hope Tani teaches Shivam a good lesson!
And also there's great possibility of Rey misunderstanding Tani due to her denial!
Continue soon!
Very interesting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
haaawww ye kya kar diya
mere taarey
luved rey possessiveness
hate that shivam uska rape hona chahiye
creep kahi ka
taani has to suffer a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deepkriti sry but I am highly disappointed
N angry on u how can u make taani get kidnap n rape too
Tht too second time r u mad hav u lost it I am crying also how can u do this
Taani said no to rey one side I was happy to see tht rey is
Jealous n u show tht rey luv taani n thn u show tht
shivam raped taani wow I am hurt disappointed 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
amzng updt
OMG taani being kidnapped and raped poor girl
shivam i m gonna kill him i hate him

but it was past dat she kidnaped or now in present i m confuse abt dat part??
luvd the way rey getting jealous n rey getting frustrated bcoz of she saying no
flashback was superb
i hope taani escapes from shivam
finally rey got the latter
waiting to knw wats in it
updt sn
Edited by zulfinazi - 11 years ago

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