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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Nice update but don't make khushi n Arnav suffer! Khushi has done enough foolishness!
Don't make this a punishment for Arnav he can't live without her

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yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Amazing chapter...thanks for the PM

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Purnima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

OMG..OMG.. This story is reallyy awesome.. Better than all I've read till now.. 👏You can improve your way of writing a little bit.. But the storyline is excellent..

Read the whole story and plese don't kill khushi..all my reading will go waste if U plan to kill khushi..

please pm me updates.. I'm not in a situation to comment on all updates but when I read I'll surely respond..

do write a lot more.. U R really talented..

Update soon

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Param

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

awesome story.. read all parts in one go.. hope nothing will happen to khushi as her arnav will not able to live without her.. just like she killed herself in past after her arnav.. loved the story.. looking forward to see what happens next.. who is the one who is supporting shyam inside.. as khushi's father have not come for wedding.. do continue soon..

thanks for pm 😊

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saal24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

This story is reallyy awesome.. . 👏

please pm me updates.. . U R really talented.Please update soon😊

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simi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

HEY FRIENDS

first of all thanks a lot for your lovely lovely comments on my part , i am glad you liked the part and on the same time i knew many of you were not convinced with it specially that inspite of so many security safety still khushi got hurt

well for that i would like to just add a little saying that you can just get prepared for future , you know the future, but you can never change the future, destiny and fate are so powerful that the most powerful person on the earth can not win over destiny

and khushi dying was their destiny hope you didnt forgot guruji's verdict , still they tried hard to change it but as you cant change the future so they all were helpless, even after all the security still this situation came like this there is a well saying that when a persons time is wrong than he can even get bite by a dog even after he is sitting on a camel, just cause is time and destiny is wrong, and so it occurred here, if not in this way than in some other way but khushi was destined to be in this situation

AND IMPORTANT THING
i am sorry i have not read the last part properly before posting , actually i by mistake posted the unedited version , while later now i have changed in to the edited version, there are few changes in that part , if you wish you can re read last part

part 37 B on page 119

PART 38

[khushi remembering arnav and one last time whispering his name she closed her eyes]
[Finally everything became dark she closed her eyes]
Alvida

Arnav still sitting in the same position on the floor leaning his back on the wall behind, he was quite really quite, the whole family friends were already there and lots of prayers were going on between lots of crying everyone was trying to control each other and wishing and hoping for the best while arnav was quite he was still like a statue sitting in the same place its been an hour now and he have not even moved from there

Adhiraj and angad both many times tried to make him speak or say something but he didn't , he just didn't said a word kept on looking at his hands and clothes which still had blood stains , khushi's blood when the door of the operation room opened and doctors came out, everyone got attentive and rushed towards the doctor even arnav stood up first he immediately rushed to the doctor

"doctor hows she, she is fine right" said arnav in a rush, the first time after the incident he said only this few words

"we have operated and taken the bullet out of patients body but" said doctor

"but what" said arnav in frustration

"the bullet have ruptured few veins of her intestine and so there is a lots of internal bleeding going on, we tried to stop it , but nothing is working positively, I am afraid if the internal bleeding didn't stopped in another two hours than it will be tough to save her" doctor tried saying

"how dare you even said that, nothing will happen to her, you do something to stop the bleeding I just want her to be fine" said arnav in anger holding the doctor harshly

When angad stopped him its not the right way , his anger and frustration everyone understands but he cant get it out on anybody like this

"I can understand your state sir, but we have given her every possible treatment, and still even if after this the bleeding wont stop than we all are helpless" said the doctor

"helpless you are the doctors , and if you yourself will be helpless than who can treat her" said adhiraj in same frustration now

"we are trying our best hope some miracle occurs and her body reacts positively to our treatments" said the doctors and he quickly went inside , its better to save himself first right now , there were lots of people almost ready to murder him if anything happened to this patient

"you don't worry arnav nothing will happen to her, I have already arranged the group of best doctors of the world and they will be here soon to treat her, they will save her" said sujal keeping a hand on arnav shoulder calming him down

"I knew nothing will happen to her , I have faith in my god he wont let anything happen to my daughter" said prerna gathering all courage , she was so tired crying , but still she have faith in her god

Only than kashish came there, she was not there in the hospital since last hour

"kashish where were you I called you so many times here khushi operation was going on and you" said sujal in anger

"I knew sujal I was in temple, I went to meet guruji doctors have said that they cant do anything I knew who can help us now, its only guruji , he was the one who even warned us that this will happen we didn't took it seriously , we just didn't took proper precaution that's why all this happened" said kashish

"we did everything guruji said , he said that arnav and khushi should get married by today , but even before the said time all that happened and as for the precaution than we did every possible cure for this, all security everything still this happened" said sujal in frustration

"cause this was destiny , I told you its tough its really tough to change what is about to happen, no one can prevent the bad from happening" said guruji from behind ,

The same guruji who said arnav and khushi to get married or else khushi have to die , everyone calmly took the guruji's blessing first , except arnav he was still rooted at his original place again

"but guruji you said that nothing will happen to khushi if she gets married to arnav today and even before that all this happened" said prerna crying

"yes I knew I said that but with that I even said that effects have already started and all the time she wont be so lucky that you can save her, or anyone can save her, you can get prepared for the future but you can never change the future , what is to happen it will happen no matter how much you try to do that, in front of time and god even a king is nowhere more than a helpless asker even after all that highly tight and accurate security all the people so many person to take care of her and protect her still she is here, and everyone of you are helpless and regret that you were not able to save her, but its not anyone's fault cause nothing was in your hands, the fate is too powerful and no one can stand it" said guruji

"but what to do now , please do something please save my daughter" said prerna begging and crying

"no one can do anything no one is that powerful to fight the fate , there is only one thing that have the power to stand against the death and fate and that's true love, only true love have got the powers to fight even death, that's why I asked for that marriage , once there lifes and horoscope tied together only that arnav love can be so powerful to save her , to get her back" said guruji

"but guruji khushi is there , and so marriage was not able to occur" said nandini

"I said you that many obstacles will come to stop this from happening but we have to do this now, the auspicious time for arnav and khushi marriage have already started still nothing have went wrong once they both will get married than khushi will be fine, than only she can be saved" said guruji

"marriage here I mean in the hospital, and khushi is unconscious" said nandini

"it can happen you don't worry that's why I went to take guruji here, there is a little temple of the hospital and I have made all the arrangements for the marriage to happen there, if this is the last hope to cure khushi than we shall do this as well, guruji will himself chant all the mantra's and get them married" said kashish

"I am sorry mom , I am not going to be a part in all this, I don't believe anything mom nothing no god no destiny nothing , I don't really want to believe in that god who have given me this destiny , giving her back to me and than taking her away like this, and I , I am standing here like a helpless fool , I cant even do anything , I was just not able to protect her I am just not worth it mom , I am not worthy enough to get her love she is here at my place , she just didn't had to be here, that bullet was aimed at me it should have hit on me and not on her" said arnav shattering again

"calm down arnav look I knew how you are feeling right now, but its no where your fault in this arnav ,please don't blame yourself and if today you feel that khushi is there at your place so instead of blaming her or god for this make this worth, she saved you arnav khushi herself stood in front of that bullet that was for you, she took it for herself so that you are safe that was her part of love for you, now when you have one opportunity to save her so do that arnav , save her this is your part of love" said sujal calming him down

"yes arnav why are you losing hope without even trying, the defeated person is not the one who didn't won even after trying hard , the defeated person is the one who don't even participate because of the fear of losing so how can you accept your defeat when you didn't even tried once hove faith in that god arnav he is the one who did that miracle once getting you both again in this new life, once again to live your love, and this time he wont be that cruel to take it like this, still if you don't have faith in him anymore than not for your's but for everyone present here, our satisfaction o whatever guruji says , I have faith in god he wont let anything happen to her" said kashish

"kashish ji is right arnav , if this is the last hope for khushi to be safe so we wont let it go without even trying, we all are in this, we just want khushi to be fine and safe soon" said prerna

"get your khushi back from that god fight with him or snatch her from him or beg with him do whatever you want just get her back, marry her arnav and tie her so hard with yourself that she just cant go away from you even she herself try to in every vow of your marriage just ask for her life and safety" said kashish making him determined

"ok mom if this is how I can save her I will do whatever and however you all say, I wont let her go, she have to come back, she is stubborn but I am more impossible than her, if she is determined to go away from me than I am also determined to never let her go" said arnav

And than cutting the detail of convincing the hospital administration to let her go, and all the arrangements done after exactly 15 minutes , arnav was sitting in the mandap and guruji chanting the mantra and sacred fire was lighten in everything ready for arnav and khushi marriage

Khushi was lying unconscious on that stretcher lifeless

As guruji said to get khushi down , arnav immediately went and picking her up in his arms sat back in the same place , the mantra again began , it was already late night when the rituals began only the chanting of the mantra can be heard

Soon he asked for starting the vows , the seven phere in presence of that sacred fire

Arnav stood up and carefully taking khushi in her arms he started moving ahead , taking rounds against the fire , and all the time just looking at khushi

He remembering their first marriage and the way khushi happily moved with him hands in hands they did this ritual and now

"please don't go khushi please come back what will I do without you" said arnav to khushi rather to himself in tears

Soon he and khushi completed the seven rounds and arnav came and sat back again

And it was time to tie the mangalsutra and sindoor , so mayank and adhiraj came ahead for helping them they both holding khushi so that arnav can complete the ritual and he did that

Finally again they both were married , in this life as well khushi was once again arnav's khushi

As the rituals ended, arnav still standing there holding her in his arms

"khushi get up, get up khushi look its been enough now , just get up and come back , come back khushi now , you have no right to go away like this alone ok , get up" said arnav crying, in anger pain and tears at the same time

He was so helpless didn't knew what to do, when he kept her back on that hospital stretcher , and as he lied her down she took a deep breath ,

Khushi moved a little taking deep breaths and doctor and nurse standing there immediately rushed ahead dragging her back , taking her inside the icu again

While everyone as well rushed back , behind them

"arnav this place is just perfect I never wanted to go away from here , why don't we stay here forever, I just want to be here forever" said khushi sitting on the roof and looking at the water in the sea , slow tides coming and she was here in Mumbai the arnav's beach house in the same night with arnav leaning her head over arnav

"no khushi we cant stay here come back, lets come back home , we cant stay here forever" said arnav dragging her back

"no arnav I don't want to go its so peaceful here , no worries of anything at all , I want to sit and stay here , I want to absorb this place forever in me , I never want to go away from here this is our heavens arnav" said khushi

"but I am not a part of this heavens yet, cause for me where ever you are that's my heavens be with me khushi we will find our heavens anywhere , I am calling you why are you not listening to me , come back khushi , look its been enough now, just get up and come back , come back khushi now , you have no right to go away like this alone ok , get up" arnav words coming in her ears but arnav was not there

She was alone in that place , arnav was calling her , she have to go back, she shall go back arnav was gone , rather arnav's soul was gone and now khushi soul was alone and she came back behind arnav

[khushi soul came back , she was dragged back by arnav]

While here arnav was standing inside the temple only in front of lord shiva's ideal

"no god you can't take her like this, getting her so close to me and then taking her like no, ok I was wrong the one who never had faith in you and so you all the time tried to prove me your existence, but now I believe in you I knew you are here, you separated us and than you yourself made us meet again , and now today getting us again so near getting us apart this is not right , this is injustice, why , why is it that all the time our love our love have to suffer, not this time god , if anything happened to her than I will also not live I will die here in front of you either get her back to me or take me from here to her , where she is , but don't separate me from her" said arnav crying and begging in front of god

While here inside the icu , doctors again applied the oxygen mask and pulse checking machines and gave her injections and medicines to calm her down

And after a while she again took one breath

"she was standing alone in the middle of that beach , lots of water everywhere around her , she was drowning alone , she was all alone this time arnav was not there with her, she was drowning her breath was getting hard , she cant breath anymore and the old khushi was gone , gone deep inside the water

And then came arnav holding her again , holding her soul again getting her out of the water

And she took a breath , her breaths were back ,she opened her eyes and she was in the hospital

She was back , this new khushi was back leaving behind all the past , all the memories good or bad of that old khushi

This new khushi was back for her arnav ,just for him on his call

While here arnav was in the temple

"arnav god have heard your prayer, khushi is fine, doctors just said she is out of danger" said angad smiling , he came rushing to arnav when doctors confirmed this news

And here arnav sat on the floor and taking a deep breathe a sign of relief and thankfulness for the god at the same time

ok thats all for now,

i knew very bad and short part , i was free from last 2 hours so i wrote this part just now in 2 hours, and i knew there must b many mistake and over that i still dont knew whether i did this part right or not

still i just felt you will like to read it like this so here i am

and yes hope i didnt confused you much with that khushi subconscious mind talks her soul talking

will update ahead soon thanks for your reply in advance