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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju

s dear she is a true warrior, u no love is a feeling which make smone d crazyest thngs in d world, in a love relatnship people cmmit crimes and suisids just becz dey r nt abl to get der love, u no its a serious pbm arizing among teenagers... Cnsderng dis situvatn if a girl cms frward breaks her heart and help her friend to get his true love she is surly a warrior.. And d true meaning of love is sacrifice dear.. Anyway superb story. : )

you got me a new thinking, I never thought like that😃😳 Thanks a lot.😊 As a matter of fact, I am learning so much from the comments on warrior😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanju...

mindblowing!!!

starting lines superb!!
kamya is really a warrior..
she masked her pain n
handled evrythn efficiently..
she deserves a salute 4 dat..
keep goin n BE BRAVE 😉

thanks😊
glad you liked it😃
You know what, since morning I am very low and right now as I am replying to your comment just two words of your comment- BE BRAVE they made me smile a little. so thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaparveen

true warrior
loved it
hatts off

thanks
glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

i have not read yet but will read soon...i am a new reader of ur writings so whern ever u send a pm i have to read the back chapters...this one also i will read and comment...but u truely is AN awesome writer and i love ur writingsss

this series does not have interconnected chapters. every chapter is different and not at all connected with previous ones. Its like a collection of different works. BTW! It feels very good to hear that you like my works. Thanks a lot dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ___SAD___

Nice update

loved the moments
each and every
keep updating

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Emotional one
Nyc update


thanks a lot dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepkriti


ro mat pagli😳agla part tere liye hi likha hai😛
ab tujhse achhe se iss story ko kaun samajh sakta hai😉but still phir se rona mat. dekh meine indirectly tujhe warrior bol diya😃
glad you liked it😳


Ohmygosh...kyaaa?? agla part mere liye hai?? I m a warrior?? *dances in the whole world* tera haath kaha hai deepu?? But usse na kal aftrnoon mein post karna(agar likh diya ho toh) vo kal hum dono ki exam hai na...toh exam ke baad mai shanti se padhungi n yea all the best for aipmt...mujhse jyada marks mat laana, vese hi competition bahot hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
Diamond in the dust
Listen this song- Mean-taylor swift

She was clumsy, she was fat

Never on top, she had a luggage on her back

The fun, the laugh and the giggles haunt her

Every time she took a step, there were enough to daunt her

'Oh you are just a little pig!' That's what she told her- the star girl

'But I am yet another girl.' were the words I gulped down beneath my world

She was a cheer captain and I was a nobody

She got to hear the cheers and I was used to 'Grow up fatty!'

They laugh on my skin, they laugh on my specs

They make me a joke both in front and on my back

I carry a lot, a lot of baggage in my arms

Why noone can see that all I need is a little warmth

Just give me a hug, and say 'its okay'

'I am all there if you need' is what I wanna take.

Well let it be if they really don't care

Cause even I understood that world is not that fair

For the stars to shine bright, you have to wait until the night

And soon the time will come when I'll feel light

The baggage will come down and the wings will grow

I can assure you one thing, I am never gonna get slow

I might be a rusty stone when taken out of crust

But they never realise the worth of a diamond when its kept in the dust.


P.S. This poem is written by me so please don't copy/paste it without permission. This poem is dedicated to namita (anotomy_nerd) Usually I write on topics that comes to my mind but a few days before namita gave me this suggestion. She really wanted me to write on this topic. Today I am not feeling that well so suddenly saare emotions iss poem mein nikal gaye. Sorry! Agar kharab ho to. And ya! yet again this is on a girl who was not a school princess; just an ordinary clumsy, fat girl of school. How much she bear and what she came out of in the end. I think she is a warrior. Give me your opinion. for the first time I tried incorporating the whole warrior journey in a poem. So tell me if I did a good job. I want honest reviews and please do hit like if you liked it

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