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Posted: 10 years ago
#31



Update kaha hain...u promised😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Congratz on the new thread !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Maan confessed all his feelings to Geet and the main thing is that he said he always and only loves her
I know Maan had hurt her alot and took her for granted but now I do think Geet should at least give him a chance to build on their relationship
Maans dialogue was fantastic
a stunning update filled with Maans emotions
 ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Congrats for new thread,,
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
congrats on the new thread!
Emotional superb update!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

          

           Awesome part 
      Love it..
    
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on d new thread 🥳
awesome update...
loved it...
plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pretty much painful N emotional part.. Geet is too right... Maan.. U broke her to the end so that she can't ever mend up.. Give her some time Maan..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 44
nice part...
poor Geet and Maan too...
cont soon dear...
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Part 45

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Geet pack all things and ready to leave... between Maan try to talk her... But she not gives any answer...

Maan : geet listen me once

Geet : maan saari packing ho gyi

Chaliye mujhe drop kr dijiye

Maan : mein tumhi khi drop nhi krne wala

Geet : thik hai

Mein taxi se chali jaayungi

Maan held her wrist...

Maan : geet stop of all this

Abhi abhi dil ki suni hai


Geet : maan mein bhi kbse yhi kh rhi hu

Bs kriye ab

Par maan aap nhi smjhe

Abhi na karo zamaane ki baat

Maan : geet mein jaanta hu

Maine tumhe takleef puchayi hai

Abhi abhi baatein ruki hain

Tum iske liye chaho jo  bhi sja de do mujhe

Par ase mt jaayo

Abhi abhi dohraane ki baat

Geet : sja toh mein khud ko de rhi hu Maan

She left...

He throws all things, all placed messed up in few minutes... He remembers how she held him in every step... but today she left like this...

Maan : ek baar mood ke bhi nhi dekha

.

Maan : geet mein nhi aata toh

Geet : aap jaroor aate

Mujhe pura vishwaas tha

.

Tumne toh humesha vishwaas kiya

Mein hi nhi kr saka

.

Tumne humesha mera intzaar kiya

Bina kissi shikayat ke

.

Maan : geet tum abhi tak soyi nhi

Geet : mein so jaati toh aapko dinner kaun deta

Maan : common geet

Mein koi chotta bacha nhi hu

Jo khud leke nhi kha sakta

Geet : maan mein toh bus

Maan : geet dinner room mein le aana

Geet : hmm

.

I deserve this

Bilkul thik huya maan tere sath

.

He felt someone presence on room door... he see geet stand here...

He takes step towards geet fast and felt some pain in foot...

Geet : maan

She leaves the suitcase near door and come near to him...

Geet :maan ye sb kya halaat bna rakhi hai

Aur aapke par se khoon aa raha hai

.

Maan aap baithye

Mein first Aid box leke aati hu

.

.

She came and sees he stand in same position...

Geet : maan maine aapko baithne ke liye kaha tha

He hugged her tightly...

Abhi abhi aawaragi aayi

Abhi na karo sambhalne ki baat

Geet : maan

Maan : geet mujhe pata tha

Tum mujhe chodke nhi jaa sakti

He breaks the hug and cupped her face ...

Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai

geet : maan mein wapas nhi aayi hu

wo mere documents ki file rh gyi thi

He removed own hands ...

Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat

Maan : jaayo fir


Woh subah toh bewajah ho

Geet make sit him on bed and take dipped dettol cotton for clearing his wounds... he stop her...

Maan : tumhe ye sb krne ki koi jaroorat nhi hai

Ke guzre bin tumhare jiski raat

Geet : chup

She cleans his wound and ties the bandage...

Geet : maan mein aapse kuch maangu toh denge aap

.

Please

Maan : hmm

Geet : phle promise kijiye

Jo mein maangungi

Aap denge

Mna nhi karenge

Maan : hmm

Geet : aap ghar mein shift ho jaaiye

Yaha outhouse mein ab rhehne ki kya jaroorat hai

Maan : geet ye nhi ho sakta

Geet : kyun nhi ho sakta

Maan : tumhe jaana tha na

He held her hand and from other hand he carries her suitcase ...

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Both sited into car...

Geet : jb kuch de nhi sakte

Toh ha kyun khehte ho

Maan : jo tum maang rhi ho

Wo tumhare sath bin adhura hai geet

Geet : mere sath ke bina

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Maan: Maine abhi sb kuch kaha paaya hai

Tum toh jaa rhi ho na

Ruk jaayo geet

Geet : maan maine unse vadaa kiya hai

Contract sign kiya hai

Maan : geet tum in sbki tension mt lo

Mein sb smbhal lunga

Geet : maan

Mujhe apne vaade se piche hatna pasand nhi hai

Maan : aur mera sath nibhane ka vaada bhi tumne hi kiya tha na

Uska kya

.

Geet : maan I promise

Mein humesha aapka sath dungi

Har mod pe

Aur mujhe pura vishwaas hai

Aap ek din apni company firse start jaroor karenge

.

.

Geet : maan mein toh aaj bhi aapke sath hu

.

Toh bs ye final raha

Aap shift karenge

.

Aur mujhse ek aur vadaa kijiye

Jo aaj huya

Wo phir kbhi dobara nhi honga

Maan : hmm

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Both reached Airport...

Geet : bye maan

Maan : hmm

.

She takes step but his voice makes stop.

Maan : geet tum waha kaha rahongi

Geet : wo mujhe house provide kr rhe hai

Maan : address toh deti jaayo

Geet : maan aap waha nhi aayenge

Mujhe kuch waqt chaiye

.

Akele rhehne ke liye

Maan : geet tum meri wajh se megha mohan , suhsant in sbse durr kyun jaa rhi ho

Is sbme unki kya galati hai

Geet : galati na aapki hai

Na kisi aur ki

Galati toh meri hai

.

Ye jaroori toh nhi na

Pyaar ke badle pyaar hi mile

Mujhe ye smjhna chaiye tha

.

Maan : geet

Geet : maan meri mushkile aur mt badaiye

She hugged him tightly and he also hugged her back...

Teri baazuon mein meri chahatein samaaye

Teri dhadkano ko meri dhadkane sunaaye

geet : maan apna dhyan rakhna

khud ko koi bhi chot mt puchana

nhi toh mein


Teri khwahishon se meri khwaishein riha hain

maan : I promise geet

mein tumse kiya huya ab har vadaa nibhayunga

geet : hmm


Teri karwaton se meri daastan bayan hai

Kya sukoon kya junoon humnawa

maan : geet jaldi wapas aana

mein intzaar karunga

geet : l love you maan

maan : I love you too...

Hum toh haare mahiya re

Moonde naina, neend tihaare

 

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Geet left ... Maan stand on same spot for few minutes...

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Mohan : megha tumne geet ko jaane kyun diya

Usse humare sath ki jaroorat thi

.

Jaroor Maan ne hi usse kuch kaha honga

Megha : maan ki wajh se geet kyun jaayengi

Mohan : wo megha

Mein tumhe phle bhi batana chahata tha

Par kh nhi paaya

Megha : its ok mohan

Mein jaanti hu

Mohan : kbse

Megha : geet jb ghir gyi thi tbse

Mohan : what

Tumne mujhse kuch kaha kyun nhi

Megha : ek toh galati tumne ki

Aur upar se mujhpe chilaa rhe ho

Mohan : megha mein chila nhi raha

Bs pcuh raha hu

Megha : hmm

Mohan : sorry baba

Megha : good

Mohan ydi tumne mujhe nhi batya

Jaroor uske peeche koi wajh hongi

Mein smjhati  hu is baat ko

Tumhe yhi lag raha tha na

Mein sayad tumhare is faisle se khush nhi hongi

.

Mein nhi thi

Par ek baat jaroor smjh gyi thi

Geet bhut pyaar krti hai maan se

.

Uski khushi ke liye hum ek chance toh le hi skate the

.

Mohan : par wo chance bekar chala gya megha

Megha : nhi mohan

Mein nhi jaanti un dono ke beech kya huya

Par ha ab jb bhi wo milenge

Toh humesha sath rahenge

Mohan : par

Megha : geet ko thoda waqt chaiye mohan

Hume wo dena honga

 

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see this update too :- 

MG- Kya pyaar karonge mujhse- part 30 on page 10 

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago