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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello my readers,

Satsriyakaal! Namaste! Vanakkam! Whenever my updates start to slow down, due to exam or some other problem, I start giving daily progress reports for DFL and DP! And when the updates pick up the speed I stop posting the progress report. As due to my wrist pain, my updates have slowed down recently, I have decided to start putting up the reports again.

OK! Before I start today's daily report, I have to tell you certain things. From 11 to 1 at night, I come online to reply reviews, mails and chat with some of my friends. So if you come online around that time and want to discuss my stories, you can post a message in the thread of the story you want to discuss about and I will definitely have the discussion with you.

Also, I won't post any report in JSTN Thread and neither will I post any information about it here as I have allotted one hour daily for each of my story (I consider all the three versions of Dh Dh as one) and reflecting on that I can safely say I will be able to update the fic every three days. So it can be said that it does not need any reports!

Now onwards to the daily report:

For two days I did not work on any stories because yesterday I had mild wrist pain and so just replied reviews of Dh Dh and today the pen drive having my stories was borrowed by my mom in the afternoon.

1. Work on DFL's Chapter 70 (B) had begun the day before yesterday and tomorrow I will write more of it. Cannot give any estimate for the next update's date but will be able to reflect on it tomorrow.

2. Work on DP's Chapter 15 will not start tomorrow. I will work on the intro for new thread. So expect a PM with link to new thread pretty soon.

That's all of today folks! Hope to come with more interesting news tomorrow!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. Will post reports only here till new thread for DP is ready!

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 70 A
awesome dear...
lovely...
its only 9 in the morning?
they were playing in the early hours?
whoa...
Anjali u are taking a huge risk now...
allowing that relative of hers to visit them and sending the boys out...
oh and Geet also in the plan...
hope Arnav and Maan dont trouble her later...
but even Geet is also angry at Anjali for this...
Geet and her antics are so funny...
and Aakash was an easy target this time...
poor him...
seriously this girl is too smart...
hahaha the way they were making Maan Arnav and Aakash to go with them was so hilarious...
cant believe Arnav changed his decision...
and the whole gang is so shocked at this...
well they will be more shocked when they come to know about everything...
seriously Anjali can make Maan dance to her tunes is so amusing...
Arnav is going but Aakash has other plans...
poor the people at the RM they are shocked to see such change in the characters...
only in the name of their lady loves these guys actually work...
hahaha...
OMG shes so naughty...
Arnav is doing everything what Geet asks him to do...
and the whole family is so shocked to see this and want to know like what does she know about him and using them...
cant wait for that update where everyone will come to know about Arnav's every doings...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

Chapter 68 (B)

It always happens in this game that one letter always messes you up; because it keeps coming and you are like damnn I don't know any more songs. But thankfully we still have Geet who always has her songs stocks ready haha. I just love Geet and Arnav arguments, the way he was like Toh Motormouth goa na.


Glad you liked that scene!


I have never heard that song so I was like lets go listen to that song while I read the chapter. Sajna Aa bhi jaa. Truly Nt said the right thing this song is really beautiful, I heard it first time and I am in love with the song now.


It is a truly beautiful song isn't it?


Awee Khushi is remembering when Arnav bought her the whole basket of bangles, yeh judaai abh nahi sayi jati Di. Even Maan is remembering how he bought Geet /Soni earings with the help of no other than khushi Kumari Gupta. Both of the Jodi's are remembering about eachother. Though two of them are remembering the past and two of them are remembering about the present.


Judaai thodi aur lambi hogi! Aur thode twists baaki hain story mein!


OMG yes he sang the same song she sang when he was mad, this is I guess his way of saying sorry lol or making her remember about what she had done for him. It was hilarious how both Maan and Anjali were stupefied about how Arnav was singing lol, they were so shocked. Obviously they will be, they are never heard Arnav sing and now all of a sudden. Even I'll be like that if my brother never sang and all of sudden he does. He is being congratulated like as if he just got the business man trophy of the year.


😆 My reaction to the last song!


Awee Arjun and Annie are so cute, everybody were so happy and smiling so much at them, perfect song that you put for them. A proper dance they did, just so romantic.


Thank you!😃


I am so that most of the songs you post I have never heard them, but this way I get to listen to new songs to me lol. Omg Geet obviously remembers about the song, how she can ever forget anything, except her own memory. I can't believe shyam was late to his own sangeet. But I understand lol during my sister's wedding stupid groom family came like 1 hour late, and by the time they came us teenagers wanted to kill someone haha. And they took such a long time to come in because they were apparently taking selfies. I just couldn't stop laughing when my cousin told me that.


Seriously?????🤣 That was so funny! Selfies????😆


Khushi, Arnav will always be yours all you have to do is be with him and that is all. And geet we all are waiting for them moment when maan realizes that you are Geet and you are Soni too. Dev the saviour of his team.. That song totally describes their situation. How both of them can't even imagine being away from their loved ones. But how both maan and khushi are both hiding their feelings.

Arnav I think you have been listening to the radio a lot. He knows so many songs, that he saved his team and told akash to sing this song. Don't worry khushi you'll get your Arnav back too and you'll be happy as payal is.

Thanks for the update.
Loved it as usual.
Sorry for the late review.

Thanks for the review dear! Loved reading it!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21

Chapter 68 (C)

I like the nickname you came up with for Lavanya. She was like what is he talking about and then nk told her how she is taken was so cute, I am pretty sure that she laughed after a really long time. She was actually sitting on the window and looking at everyone sing and dance, but she was not in a mood to join them. Okie that NandKishor part was hilarious, even she was like have you met my bua ji yet.


Glad you liked that scene!😃


Awee Lavanya and Nk are truly made for eachother. But I am glad that Nk told her that keeping this secret of her will never help her, she needs to tell someone if not her family or others than why not nk. And him being him, he will never judge her because he has lived all his life in a western country.


Exactly!


It is really hard to let go of someone you love dearly, but that does not mean that you will sit around and mop. Lavanya needs to get on her feet and embrace what life is bringing her way. This way she will forget about the guy who ditched her, because really he wasn't worth wasting time on. Nk my man you have solved her problem once again. You rock haha.


La will forget the other guy soon! Dont worry!


Even though they don't know each other that well, they are still enjoying eachothers company. Also nk has already made a promise to himself to always keep La happy. He is already falling for her. They just met eachother and literally nk has made her laugh so much with his silliness. Poor Lavanya she never got this much attention from Arnav because his whole attention is on her younger sister.


Exactly!


What a song you sang SJ, even geet and akash couldn't stop themselves from singing, and their antics. Perfect. OMG she winked at Maan, i am sure he was like holy shit she just winked at me. Haha! Love this due.


😆


Yes arnav this marriage will be something Sheeshmahal will look forward, this time there will be not tragedy happening, this time it will only be love and happiness.


Yup! Defo!


Nk was a sweet boy he is, he went and got lavanya and himself an ice cream because he knew that she was sad so he got her ice cream to cheer her up. She was so happy and surprised by what Nk did.

Omg I love you arnav so much, he never gives away a chance to tease khushi. And basically this song is saying that Arnav will make Khushi his no matter what. And khushi being herself she started worrying about lavanya. And obviously arnav had told geet about the names (Heer Ranjah). I felt so sad for Arnav, Geet, Khushi, And Maan. What they are going through.


I know!


Only Arnav and Geet can understand eachother. Because both of them are going through similar situation. But hey soon they will have their loved ones back and I for most cannot wait to read about it.

Lovely update,
Enjoyed reading a lot.

Continue soon.
Love you.

Thanks for the reviews dear! Loved reading it!

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CHAPTER 70 (B). LUCKNOW OUTING PART II

Place - In Lucknow near Hasratganj

Day - 3 Sunday continued

Khushi moved a bit uncomfortably and Arnav gave her a smug smile. She glared at him and Arnav felt a grin coming onto his face. When Arnav sat in the driver's seat, Geet, with her sneaky talks and sweet smile, made sure that Khushi sat right beside him in the passenger seat. Hence, here was Khushi squirming as Arnav grabbed her hand tightly under the guise of using the gear. Khushi had made the mistake of placing her hand on the car's gear and Arnav had happily placed his hand on hers and from then till now had not left it once. Hence, Khushi was glaring at Arnav while Arnav was grinning happily.

Geet used her smartness on Paayal and Aakash too by making Maan, La and NK sit with her in the back leaving the middle seats free for Paayal and Aakash. Of course Paayal and Aakash appreciated it and promptly got lost into each other not caring about Arnav and Khushi in the front seats or the four in the back seats. Geet did not even keep Maan away from her planning. The back seats were perpendicular to the front and middle seats and had two seats facing each other. Geet made sure that Maan was sitting right across her and made sure to stare at him full time in between winking at him. Maan did not know what to do; whether to run away screaming or pull Geet into his arms forgetting his companions. Oblivious to all this madness, Lavanya and NK sat across each other sharing their college life details and having a merry time.

Soon, their mini van reached the mela and Geet, NK and Paayal scrambled off eagerly with Aakash, Lavanya and Maan leisurely following them. NK was excited and eager to go explore the place as he had never been to a mela his whole life. Khushi wanted to follow them too but yeh Rakshas haath chode tab na! She turned and glared at him but Arnav just smiled at her. Hey Devi Maiyya! Humein is rakshas se bachaao!

"Chodiye Humein!"

"Nahi Chodunga!"

"Dekhiye..."

"Dekh toh raha hoon! Tumhein! Waise iss dress mein achchi lag rahi ho!"

"Hey Devi Maiyya! Dekhiye Arnavji! Aap apni hadd paar kar rahe hain!"

"Achcha? Aur hadd ki tum baat kar rahi ho? Tumhein yaad hai, aise hi ek mele mein hum bhi gaye aur maine tumhaare liye jhumke jeete the! Kuch yaad aaya?"

"Nahi!"

"Jhoot! Main jaanta hoon tuhmein sab yaad hai! Waise kya woh jhumke tum pehenti ho ya kahin sambhaalke rakha hai?"

Khushi wrenched her hand away and scrambled off the van as Arnav looked on smilingly. Main jaanta hoon Khushi, tumne us jhumke ko sambhaalke rakha hoga mere pyaar ki nishaani banaakar! Itna toh jaanta hoon tumhein!

Khushi reached Geet and when Geet smiled at her she smiled back hesitantly. Un jhumkon ko hum kaise pehne Arnavji! Aapki pyaar ki nishaani hai woh jise sambhaalke hum apne paas rakhe hue hain!

Soon Khushi put the incident in the back of her mind and started to enjoy the trip. All had lots of fun enjoying the games and going on rides. Aakash and NK managed to convince even Maan and Arnav to get on some of the rides. Girls even enjoyed the songs blaring from the speakers placed all around the mela. After a while as they roamed around the streets, Geet's eyes fell on small stall selling earrings of all kinds. Her eyes lit up as she saw some simple but beautiful Jhumkas hanging there.

"Veere! AB! Dekho! Jhumke ki dukaan! Chalo na jhumke dekhte hain!"

"What the! You will buy these road side earrings?", Arnav's face looked like he had swollen something bitter.

Geet huffed, "Haan! Mujhe yahi chaahiye!"

Aakash smiled but Arnav shook his head, "You can have the world's best designer earrings! Why do you want these road side jhumkas?" The word jhumkas was said as if it was something very foreign.

Geet pouted and glared at Arnav, "Mujhe aapke mehenge waale jhumke nahi chaahiye! I want these!"

Arnav rolled his eyes, "Fine! Lets go and get you your Jhumkas!"

Geet and Arnav walked away to check out the earrings. Aakash followed them holding Paayal's hand wanting to buy some for her too. Behind Aakash, NK and Lavanya followed them chatting about the difference between Indian dressing sense and foreign ones. Khushi and Maan lagged behind them.

"Veerji! Aapko yaad hai? Jab aap aur main Parjaayiji ke liye gift lene gaye the unhein manaane ke liye?"

Maan looked sharply at Khushi when she said Parjaayiji' but other than that did not give any indication that he heard her.

"Aisi hi Jhumke liye the na aapne unke liye? Aur unhein pasand bhi aaye the?"

Maan's eyes met Khushi's and Khushi saw that they were filled with sadness. She looked away but continued to speak.

"Kuch bhi kaho Maan Veerji! Soni ho ya Geet, insaan toh ek hi hai! Na woh badli hain aur na unka dil! Yaaddaasht bhale hi chali gayi ho par hai toh yeh wahi!"

Maan's eyes widened and he turned to look at Khushi but by then Khushi had walked away to stand beside Geet. Maan's eyes remained on Geet the whole time she selected the earrings and bought them.

Suddenly, Geet noticed a stall selling bangles and before they knew the whole gang was dragged over there to look at the varieties of bangles. Various baskets were arranged in front of them, filled with nothing but bangles. Each basket filled with varieties of them, not one set looked same as other. Geet, Khushi and Paayal took in the bangles eagerly with their eyes. The boys and Lavanya stood behind waiting for them impatiently.

Geet turned and smiled at Lavanya, "Arre! LB! Aaona! Aap bhi apne liye choodiyaan le lo!"

Lavanya shrugged, "Mujhe choodiyaan pasand nahi! I prefer bracelets."

Aakash piped up, "Annie aur NT ko bhi pasand nahi! Even they prefer bracelets. But Anjali Di loves bangles!"

After a while, Geet pouted, "Kaun si loon? Kuch samajh nahi aa raha! Sab itne pyaare hain!"

NK spoke up, "Jaldi decide karo! Mujhe bhook lagi hai! I want to eat something!"

"NKji! Bas do minute please!", Paayal mumbled as she looked through the bangles unable to choose one.

Another ten minutes passed but the girls had yet to decide on what they wanted.

NK spoke up, "Please ladies! Jaldi karo! I am hungry!"

Aakash supported NK, "Haan! Geetto jaldi kar! Paayal! Khushi! Itna kya soch rahi ho?"

All three girls nodded but continued to look through the baskets more while advising each other on what they should try.

Another ten minutes passed and Arnav had enough. He stormed over to them, pulled out wads of money and slammed it in front of the shocked shop keeper. "Keep the change!", he mumbled as he chose four baskets. All seven looked at him in astonishment as Arnav handed one basket to Aakash, one to NK and one to Maan and holding one in his hand.

"Arnav...", Maan mumbled in shock.

Arnav shrugged, "What? They were taking so much time, I had to do something."

He looked at the three girls and growled; "Now you have enough variety to choose from. Har ek ke liye ek ek tokri. Aur apni tokri waali choodiyon se bore hui toh doosre ki tokri mein se le lena! Ab chalo sab! Gaadi mein yeh baskets rakhni hai aur phir NK ke liye khaane waala stall bhi dhoondhna hai!"

Everyone followed Arnav with shock written on their faces. As they reached the van and placed the basket under the seats in the back, Aakash spoke up, "Bhai! But Lavanya toh bangles pehenti nahi then why four!" Maan smiled, "Arre! Baaki teeno ke liye choodiyaan lekar apni Anjali Di ke liye nahi loge kya?" All smiled softly as Arnav closed the van. Khushi looked away as she remembered the time when Arnav had brought her basket full of bangles just because he did not know which one she would like. She smiled softly as she remembered lying to Buaji and saying that she bought them as she got bonus. Arnav noticed her smiling and his mind went back to the time when he bought basket just like this for her. Both lost in their thoughts walked off with others to the mela to look for food.

Another drama ensued when they reached the food area. Whichever stall they went to, Maan and Arnav refused to eat there by finding faults like the place being dirty or the maker making the food with hands or the food being placed in open. In some places even NK joined the protests as he was not used to eating in such open places. Soon, all the stalls were rejected and the group sat dejected wondering what to eat. Geet and Khushi were annoyed at Maan, Arnav and NK's protests while all of them started having hunger pangs. Arnav and Maan wanted to go home to eat but driving home would take time and the girls could not wait till then.

Suddenly, Lavanya's eyes fell on a lassi making stall where the place seemed neat. She pointed the place to others and other agreed to have Lassi there. As Lassi was thick, they were sure it would sustain them till they reached home. Soon, Maan treated all of them with Lassi and all enjoyed drinking it. Khushi's eyes reached Arnav's as they drank and both remembered the time they drank lassi at a dhaaba when Arnav's car stopped working in the middle of the road. Khushi averted her eyes while Arnav smiled softly.

Soon, the whole gang walked towards the parking lot wanting to go home and eat piping hot homemade food. As they were walking, suddenly there was a lot of noise and people starting murmuring and whispering. Soon, gunshots were heard all around and people started running around in confusion. Geet, Maan, Khushi, Arnav, NK, Lavanya, Paayal, Aakash; all were pushed around and soon all eight were separated. The girls screamed each others' names and the guys hollered for the girls but the songs playing from the speakers, the shouts of people around and the gunshots muted their voice and not one of them could reach the other.

Maan pushed around the throngs of people as he looked around for anyone of the remaining seven. He crashed right into Paayal. "Veerji!", she squeaked with fear. Her eyes were tearing up and her clothes looked to be smudged with dirt. She hugged him tightly and Maan hugged her back, happy that atleast his one sister was fine. She pulled away and he noticed her elbow slightly bleeding.

"Yeh chot kaisi?"

, "Kisi ne neeche gira diya tha dhakka dekar! Aur kuch nahi!", she spoke between sniffles.

Maan pulled her away from the crowd and took her near to a stall. They heard gunshots nearby and were stunned to see people coming on jeeps and bikes firing shots in the air. They seemed to be some kind of goons. Maan pulled Paayal behind the stall and they ducked there.

"Tum yahin ruko, main baaki sabko dhoond laata hoon!", Maan spoke up.

Paayal shook her head vigorously, "Nahi Veerji! Aap humein chodke mat jaayiye!"

Maan tried to convince Paayal to let him go but she refused. Luckily for Maan, he spotted Aakash. He called for him but Aakash seemed to not hear him. Maan suddenly had an idea and pulled out his mobile. He called up Aakash and Aakash seemed to pull out his mobile.

"Saamne dekho!", Maan ordered and he waved his hand as Aakash looked up and saw him. Aakash scrambled over to them. His shirt seemed to torn at some places but other than that he seemed alright. When he neared them and saw Paayal his eyes lit up with relief. He came close and crouched beside Paayal. Both hugged each other tightly. "Bro! Chunaav ki wajah se do parties mein jhagde chal rahe hain! Yeh danga usi ka nateeja hai!", Aakash informed Maan who nodded.

"Aakash! Tum Paayal ke saath raho! Woh akele nahi reh sakegi! Main Geet, Khushi aur Lavanya ko dekhta hoon!", Maan ordered as he turned to walk away. Then he stopped and turned back, "Aur haan! Arnav aur NK ko message kardo ki Paayal is safe aur agar baaki teen ladkiyon se koi bhi mile unhein toh hum sabko inform kardein!"

Arnav looked around in horror. Khushi! Aakash! Geet! Maan! Are they safe? Aur Paayal, Lavanya aur NK kahaan hai? Dammit! Yeh sab kya ho raha hai? People continued to jostle him as they ran around like headless chicken. He even heard gunshots and saw bottles being thrown on floor and people getting hit by it and that filled his body with dread. He started searching for others when he felt someone grab his shirt from back. He turned around to see Geet looking at him with worry. Arnav hugged her in relief and then looked at her in worry, "Tum theek toh ho na? Tumhein lagi toh nahi?" Geet shook her head, "Main theek hoon AB!" Arnav grabbed her hand and dragged her to someplace where they could hide when they came across a worried Maan. Maan told them that Paayal was safe with Aakash and he had hidden them there. Arnav promptly handed over Geet to Maan, "Theek hai! Tum Geet ko Aakash ke paas chod do and start searching for others! I will also try to find them!" Maan nodded and grabbed Geet's hand. He dragged her away while Arnav messaged Aakash that he had found Geet and she was with Maan.

Arnav was the first one to find Khushi. Dust was filled in the air and it took Arnav some time to realize that Khushi was standing in front of him. She did not seem to be hurt, just scared. He grabbed Khushi's hand and dragged her away not noticing that some feet from them stood Lavanya shouting his name.

Lavanya looked at Arnav in shock as he did not even notice her. The loudspeaker continued to blare out songs drowning out her voice. "ARNAV!", she screamed but Arnav did not notice her while Khushi was so shocked that she seemed to be lost in her own world. What was she to do now? How was she to save herself? Suddenly, she felt someone grabbed her hand and she turned only to see NK standing there. "Chalo!", he ordered her and dragged her away. She looked at NK in shock and wonder. As he dragged her she continued to stare at him with wonder in her eyes. The loudspeakers continued to blare around them as NK dragged La to safety.

Tu Jahaan

Main Wahaan

Lavanya continued to stare as NK dragged her to a cart nearby and both hid under it.

Sang Sang Yun Chalun Tere

Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Her eyes refused to leave him as NK kept on looking around for others.

Tu Jahaan

Main Wahaan

Noticing her glance, he gave her a smile. Lavanya smiled back teary eyed.

Sang Sang Yun Chalun Tere

Jaise Tera Aasmaan

Maan dragged Geet to the place where Paayal and Aakash were hiding. But in the way, they were pushed towards the side by the scared crowd till they were far off from Paayal and Aakash's hiding place. Suddenly, a bike came right towards them and was about to hit them when Maan pulled Geet away from there. Realising the futility of finding the others, Maan and Geet hid in the narrow pathway between two houses nearby. The pathway was narrow enough to make both stand very close to each other. He messaged other guys that he and Geet were safe but were in hiding. He soon got a message back from Arnav and NK that Lavanya and Khushi are safe.

Jo Dhoop Nikle

Chaaya Ban Jaaunga

Geet stared at Maan with love in her eyes.

Jo Ho Tu Akeli

Saaya Ban Jaaunga

"Tum darna mat Geet! Sab theek ho jaayega!", Maan whispered as gunshots were heard close by.

Jo Uljhan Mein Ho Mann

Main Behlaaunga

Geet smiled softly, "Main kyun darun? Mere saath toh mere Maan hain!"

Tum Aa Gaye Ho

Toh Jeena Aaya Hai

Maan looked at her in shock.

Khushiyaan Ka Tumne

Yeh Jaal Bichaaya Hai

She looked at him with love and trust in her eyes.

Khoya Hai Khudko Ya

Sab Kuch Paaya Hai

Maan looked away not wanting to fall under her spell again.

"Paayal! Tum theek ho na?", Aakash spoke and Paayal nodded.

Tu Jahaan

Main Wahaan

Sang Sang Yun Chalun Tere

Jaise Tera Aasmaan

"Jab tak aap saath ho, mujhe kya ho sakta hai!", Paayal whispered and Aakash hugged her tightly.

Few feet away from them, hidden behind a circus tent were Khushi and Arnav. "Arnavji!", Khushi whispered tearfully. Arnav, who was on the lookout, turned around. "Humaari Jiji aur Di...", Khushi whispered sobbingly. Arnav nodded her head, "They are safe. Paayal is with Aakash and La is with NK!" Khushi felt relief fill into her body and she lunged forward and hugged Arnav tightly.

Ho Gam Ke Baadal

Mujhpe Tham Jaane De

"Hum bahut dar gaye the Arnavji!", Khushi whispered.

Bechainiyon Ko

Mujhse Takraane De

"Darti kyun ho Khushi? Apne Arnavji pe bharosa nahi?", Arnav whispered back.

Dukhti Ho Koi Baat

Mujhpe Aane De

Khushi pulled away and wiped the tears from her eyes.

Dil Sochta Tha

Ke Koi Apna Ho

Arnav looked around making sure that they were safe. Khushi looked at him with love in her eyes.

Koi Raaz Na Ho

Jo Usse Rakhna Ho

She closed her eyes; Kaash yeh ek sapna hota Devi Maiyya!

Aankhein Na Kholu Main

Shaayad Sapna Ho

Suddenly some gunshots were heard and the song stopped. The music player system was shot to stop it from playing. Half hour passed but the Danga continued. Luckily soon the Police arrived and managed to control the situation. After a while, all eight emerged from their hiding places holding each others' hands and meeting at the parking lot. It was a mutual consensus that they would all head home as all wanted to feel safe and only Sheeshmahal could provide them that right now.

WISH LIST

Fulfilled Deepa's (spvd) wish about the song Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan played on Maaneet!

Created the whole Lucknow outing plan just to fulfill your wish!

SONG DETAILS

The song is from the movie Salaam Namaste (Year 2005) picturised on Preity Zinta and Saif Ali Khan and sung by Mahalakshmi and Sonu Nigam.

TRIVIA

For those who have forgotten the older chapters (which is possible coz I wrote the first chapter nearly two years back) here are the details about the older chapters I am referring to in the story.

1. The mela scene which Arnav refers while holding Khushi's hand is in Chapter 32.

2. The scene which Khushi refers to when she talks to Maan is in Chapter 18 where Maan goes to buy apology gifts for Soni with help of Khushi.

3. The scene which Khushi remembers about bangles' basket is in Chapter 36.

4. The scene which Arnav and Khushi remember as they drink Lassi is from the Chapter 37.

PRECAP

Lets deal with the unwanted guest aka Arnav's Chachaji!

After all we don't want him in the wedding, do we?

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Well outing is finally here huh

And about time too

They get to spend some time together don't they

Aww bless thanx for this

And thanx to your reader that we got this outing

They sure needed this

Ahhh so lets get down to it without too much hassle shall we

So no chacha in this

Good to know but hope arnav still doesn't come across his chacha

That will be bad read bad for sure

And all this would be in vain for sure

I mean poor geet she had to make so many excuses to get them outta the house naa

Khushi and arnav together huh

Dude don't over do it please

Warna teri hi band bajegi re

But am glad he finally gets to be with her

Khushi glaring and not arnav

That sure makes a change don't it

Geet is good for sure

Not only did she get them all out

But she also managed to get khushi sitting next to arnav huh

Now that sure made his day

No wonder he is so smug about the same

Bless poor khushi she gets stuck don't she

But she has to right

Haila solid romance right under their noses

Aww car mein romance bless so cute

Hmmm advantages of a manual car I tell ya

Although if it were automatic he could hold it till the drive comes to an end naa

That's why love automatic cars no gear changing

But I am digressing

Back to arhi then

Khushi bhi naa

She keeps forgetting that this is arnav

He will use any and every opportunity to be with his afreen

And if he gets the chance to hold her hand he will do that

No matter what or who happens to be looking

Or one hopes not looking

Of course now he isn't gonna let go of her hand

Badi mushkil se toh inhe maukka mila hai re

How can he let that go naa

Khushi glaring and arnav grinning

Sur eis change from normal

But this was bound to happen as well

And am loving this sneaky romance

Kabhi kabhi logon ke beech mein bhi hote huye romance karna and not letting them know can be fun too

As our dear ranjha is doing with his heer

But what about the other lovers

I mean payash lank and of course maneet

Will she be able to get to sit next to him

Oh ho so geet to rescue of all the lovers huh

But what about herself man

Payash bhi kahin bhi kabhi bhi shuru ho jaate hai

Which is good for arhi you see

This way those who know whats going on between arhi will know what might happen between them

And those who don't know hopefully wont know more of this

Payash are lost in each other

Waah kya baat

Aur kya scene hai sweetie

Ahhh so she cant sit next to him but she is sititng opposite him

Chalo acha hai even she got to be with maan

Haila geet winking at maan

She is in full mood to tease him for sure

Lago raho geet puttar

Chodna mat inhe

Maan babu we know you so want to pull her to yourself

Don't you even think of running mate

Not when she has managed to get you both so close

Aww even lank are enjoying

Am glad that this outing happened now

Bless all is well for now

Haiyye its love is in the air

Even if some of them wont accept that love

Chalo yeh toh bahut achi planning huyi ji

And they are here well am I glad or what

Man that journey was way too short nahin

Well it seemed like it but it wasn't really that short now was it

Nk bhi naa

He is one hell of an over the top excited fella

Geet se jyada toh nk babua is excuted to be here

Well more than the girls

Though to be fair it must be because he hasn't had the chance to see mela like these in Australia right

Plus its his first time so yeah more excited dude

Even I love those things

Well you miss such things when staying abroad

Again I am going off the track sorry about that dear

Khushi becahri she wanted to be with them

But of course arnav haath chode tab naa

Parr ek baar haath yeh pakad le toh naa chode kyun hai naa aru

So cute when she calls him rakshas naa

Hey its her endearment of sorts man for aru

She is in full form today glaring and being mad at him

More than usual it seems

Isn't that just cute bet this is what aru is thinking too

At least I hope he is

I don't think DM will help here

Not when your rakshas is hell bent not to be a rakshas

Bachne ko toh aise keh rahi ho jaise yeh inke saath kuch aisa waisa karr rahe ho

He wouldn't dare not with her jiju to be there and her veerji

Haiyye loved their dialogues

Dekh hi toh raha hoon

That was faint worthy for sure I tell ya

Oh ho full romance ka mood hai bhai

Toh compliments toh bante hi hain

Hai naa aru and that's what he did

Oyye hoyye I love this lover boy side of aru

As well as maan but since maan is being DD and aru isn't being a LG might as well enjoy this till it lasts

But it will last wont it this time

Forever till the end I hopes

You really think she would actually say she does remember

Even if she does she wont say so naa

Of course she wont

She is like that only

Aap se kuch kum ziddi naa hai khushi

Of course she wont say yes

He knew that she wont accept it that she remembers that time

Isn't it cute how he knows her so well

What do you think aru

I think she has kept them aside for now

Lets see if right or not

Dude you knew she wont answer that either

If she did that would be something wont it

But she wont either

Of course not

Kaash yeh jo aap khushi ke bare mein jante hain uss ke bare mein aap ne phele socha hota

Toh aaj yeh din naa dekhna padhta

I really cant let go of that can i

Sorry kappa but I just cant let it go

Do forgive me

If only thinking of those are of no use right

But cant help but remind him of that again and again

Hmmm yes she would have kept them safely

As it is she isn't going to be yours or so she thinks

So will keep things you gave her as keepsake naa

Aha we and aru were right

She did keep them safely

Well she can wear them when arhi are gonna be together

But then that don't matter

What matters is that he knew she would have done that

And she did that's the main thing

Yeah well why think of past

They are here to enjoy after al aint they

So lets enjoy the mela

Hain so our not much having fun lover boys enjoyed too

Aww bless isn't that cute of them

Well they might as well enjoy it too right

Warna phir kya faiyada to get maan and aru here

I know it was so arnav don't know of his chacha coming

But still they too should enjoy man

Am glad this outing worked

Aww so cute to see them like this

Geet and her jhumka fascination

Well actually would have done the same

Just love such things

Aww sirf jhumke hain

Yaa phir baaki jewellery bhi

Like kanch ki chudiyan and all

And well she has maan there too to help her

That's if he does help her out

Well mela aiyye hain toh yeh sab bhi hoga naa

Aww look how excited she is for those jhumkes

Really aru way to deflate her there

What difference does it make

In fact road side and small shop such trinkets are better than you find in malls and all

No really they are

Aru tujhe pehene hai kya nahin naa

So if she likes them let her buy them naa

What to do with him man

Good she is determined to have those only

Aru shut up man

Whats with this guy

Such snob he is

Sorry but he so is there man

Aru she wants them from there on

Yand no matter what you say to her she wont listen

I thought you knew her better than that

Ek jhumke ki kimat tum kya jaano aru babu

Sorry just had to say that here

Gosh yeh jhumke ko lekar argument sure is funny man

No really

So had to say that line I said

See she wants these jhumkes only

Of course she did

Zid toh inki bhi kuch kum nahin

Not that I would have it any different either

Well glad that got sorted out

Not that it was much to sort out anyway

So payal ka haath nahin chodne waale aki huh

Well why should he

Badi mushkil se he got chance didn't he

Why leave it now right

Lage raho beta

Lank and their talks so cute naa

Am glad they are enjoying too

Though la fianc is here but she isn't with him

And neither is he

Well so much better

This way the couples can be together naa

So maan aur khushi kafi time se inke beech kuch baat cheet nahin huyi naa

Well so it seems to me

Khushi even he wont forget that time

Like you didn't with aru

Oh yeah they got her gift so he could say sorry

As most of his other ideas flopped big time didn't they

Well they were bound to

This is geet sorry soni we were on about

She doesn't like fancy things

But simple things

Which is why she finally forgave him when he got her something he chose by himself and went out for too

Instead of those expensive gifts he had ordered online

Ahhh those days kidhar gaye ji

Time for reminiscence it seems

Maan what else will khushi call geet if not parjaayiji

After all geet too calls khushi KB don't she

Uff maan bhi naa

Total DD mode aint he

Well of course he is right

Khushi you are so cute

Thanx for remnidng him of that

Though am sure he might be thinking same too

But of course he wont say it

Well this is MSK not maan right

But she is right she always loved simple things

Soni is geet more indications are before maan

And yet he wont agree

Ahhh maan all this sadness but for what

When you have your soni in geet

Though he wont accept even now

Waise yeh udasi toh khushi ki bhi aamkhon mein hogi

That's what all are trying to tell him

But is he gonna listen hell no he wont

She is right dude

Geet hi soni thi

Aur soni hi geet hai yaar

Maan lo well you have to in the end

And like she said they are one and as is her heart

Which again only beats for you

She just forgot the memories of that love

But she still loves you maan

He knows it too but cant accept the fact

Which again is such shame for sure

She is right maan

And don't you dare deny it to yourself at least

Please maan khud ko toh naa dohka dijiye

Maan you know in your heart of hearts that geet and soni are one and the same

But you are worried if you give your love another chance it will break you again

But it still is breaking you anyway

Wohooo chudiyon ki bhi stall hai

Geet sure is keeping an eye out for that aint she

Aww even I would do the same

Just looking at those glass bangles fascinated

And not make up my mind about them

Well you do need help

And they have peeps to help them out

Like aru maan and aki

So it seems la isn't much fond of bangles huh

Guess the boys and la will have to wait for a while

Well the girls are confused naa what to take

And what not to take

Ahhh seems your LB isn't much fan of those

She will still be LB wont she

What with her getting married to nk

And he is like a brother too right

Or is he

That's not what maan thinks

Chalo who chodo

Ahhh that's why she isn't with them

Well pasabnd apni apni right

Aki unhe nahin pasand parr aapki payal ko toh pasand hai na

So you can help her out ther mate

Dude don't waste such opportunities man

Uff geet bhi naa so cute

Nk bitwa don't try to hurry her there she wont like it

Aww par bechare ko bhook lag rahi hai

Thoda toh zaldi kijiye

Yeah right payal as if its just two minutes there

I toh doubt if it will be two mins man

Just as I suspected not two but ten

Damn now the boys must be getting impatient

And nk is feeling more and more hungry naa

Poor nk bhooka marengi yeh ladkiyaan use

Well not really but had to say it

Uff agar itni hi jaldi hai toh madad karo naa

Damn these boys lost such god opportunity to be with their giuls man

Chaddo what else to expect from them

They are still not deciding

And am sure soon someone and I mean someone is gonna snap

So this is where my first part ends

Damn should have made sure the whole bangle scene in one part

Osrry but gotta cut it off here

Or others will be too short

Next time maybe 500 of 6 might be better

But that's for later

So this is my first part

Hope you like it

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
achanak e danga kaise ho sakta hai...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved it❤️

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hi thanks 4 da pm n marvellous update! Well written! Terrific song! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update geet make khushi sat with arnav and others too sat with their partners. Mela was surely fun with old memories lol they all were hiding with there partner i feel said for la arnav ignore her hmm so now maybe she figurout that arnav like khushi i wish that happen soon excitited for precap

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