Fought For Ur Soul..(ar ff) part ~ 16 updated 28/5/2015- Page 2

very interesting dear

Hey lovenyour concrpt , it was awesome :) contbsoon n do update :)

Love ur concept. .
Outstanding start. ...
Love ridhima n sapna bonding. .
Waiting for armaan entry..
Love ur wrk. ..
Plzzz write more on virman. .
I m big fan of virman. .
Continue soon
Thanks alot for pm dea.
Keep rocking

The concept seems to be interesting

Wow nice concept...loved it...cont soon...!!!

Great start!
Its quite intriguing!
Continue soon!
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part -2

Ridhimas place..
1150 pm night

Anji : ridhima ridhima..
R : kya hua di..
Anji : come down kuch baat krni hai..
R : di can v talk tom im sleepy..
Anji : ridhima abhi its urgent..

Ridhima was in very bad mood bt she came down coz her wanted to talk something urgent... At this point of hr..

R : di kahan ho.. Lite toh on krlete..!!

Sudenly lites fall on grup of people with their back facing ridhima... One by one each turn around...

Anji & Girl 1 : Tum jiyo hajaro sal, sal ke din hon pachas hajar Suraj roj aata rahe roj gata rahe, leke kirano ke mele Palachhin kaliya gin gin teraa har din, tab tak rango se khele Rang jab tak bakee hai baharo me Tum jiyo hajaro sal, sal ke din ho pachas hajar Yaha vahansham ho chaahe jahan Yu hee jhume shama sunake tumharee baate Pyar liye chand kaa tika liye Yu hee juganu liye chamake tumharee raate Nur jab tak bakee hai sitaro me Tum jiyo hajaro sal, sal ke din ho pachas hajar...

Girl 2 & Boy 1 : haye ni tere happy birhday te
haye ni tennu happy birthday ni
haye ni tere happy birhday te
haye ni tennu happy birthday ni
keh ke denna .denna denna...
suit tennu patiala shahi sohniye leke dena
suit tennu patiala shahi sohniye leke dena

Boy 2 & sapna: Listen babe,
I'll dedicate this song for you.
A really happy you, who is next to me
I waited for today, your birthday
Your smile that looks at me oh
It's really, really bright
I want to pick those stars for you
Happy birthday to you
My beautiful love
Baby, only for you
Because you're here, I'm happy
Happy birthday to you
Just like today, forever
Baby, only for you
We're going to be together

Sh : Badhaai ho badhaai janamdin ki tumko
Janamdin tumhara milenge laddoo humko
Badhaai ho badhaai janamdin ki tumko
Naa i have chocolates.. Ladsoo are nt my type..!! Doge na ridz !!

( sh --ridhimas another frnd 'shilpa' she lives with anji and ridhima as a paying guest..)

All of them form a circle around ridhima n move in circle + sing. : Happy Birthday To You - 2
Happy Birthday To You, ridhima..!! Happy Birthday To You
Baar Baar Din Ye Aaye, Baar Baar Dil Ye Gaaye
Tu Jiye Hazaaron Saal, Ye Meri Hai Aarzoo
Happy Birthday To You - 2

(anjali invited some of ridhima 's frnds to have a small surprise get together )

**flash back
9 pm..
Anji : helo sapna..
S : hey di...
Anji : ridhima is really upset coz maine party pr nahi jne dia.. So i was planing to arange a small surpise toning.. N i want ur help..
S : sure di ap bs btao kya krna hai ill do that...

** end of flash back..

Ridhima was surpised cun scocked to see her frnds n di wishing her like this at sharp 12 am..
R : di ye sab..
Anji : ek rockstar ko wish krne ja isse beter option kya ho sakta kyu guys wat se..
S : ofcouse di..!!

R : shilpi tu kb ayi.. Omg tu toh 3 bad ane wali thi..
Sh : maine kaha n tumne mnlia..!!
How can i miss my ridz bday..
R : shilpiii ( n higed her..) i mised u..
Sh : i mised u tooo...
R : thanku soo much guys..
Dii.. I love u u r the best..

Ridhima then cuts the cake n feds every one..
All of them are sittung n chit chating...

Boy : i hope di kl party hogi.. Ye uski reolacement nahi hai..
Anji : ofcouse tom v gonna have a blast party.. I hope invites sab ko milgye hai..
All of them noded in +ve.

Anji : ridhima this is for u..
N gives her a beautuful pendwnt..
Every one was amesed by its beauty execpt one...
S : can v plz see it..
Anji : sure saps.
N gives her the pendent..
Girl 2 its really prity yaar... Wat zay shilpi..
Sh : yeah its gud.. ( in a low tone..

R : kya hua shilpi..
Sh : kuch nahi just feling tired.. Ill go in my rum..
R : u need something ?? U are nt wel ill spel wth u
Sh : not a need rids... a long nap will help..

After some more chit chat..

S : now ill also leave iys too late..
R : yahi ruk jao na..
S : i came with driver.. Ill leave.
R : ok..

All others also bid gud bye n leave from her olace..!!!

R : di.. Ye sab kb kaise plan kia apne...??
Anji : ofo ridhima.. Rwlax shanti.. Let me speek..
R : ok now wil nt say a word...
Anji : aj sham se tra mood off tha so maine sapna ke sath ye plan kia n baki sab ko mna kia tujhe na btaye...!! Ok.. Now go n sleep.. Its late...

R : bye di love u... Gud nite..
Anji : gud nite love u too..!!

A dark rum some other place..

: i guess o have found her..
A man in ful black black over coat.. : are u sure..??
: yes i am.. Vo pendent ki chamak.. I can not forget it.. Usse hlka sa hath lgate hi a curent flowed down my body...
Im sure ye vahi hai jiski hume pichle 18 salon aw talash thi..!!
Man : idiot sirf us pendent ke through tumne ye gues krlia.. Yaad hai ma pichli bar kya hua tha... Aisa hi same oendent jis ldke ke pas tga uska dur dur tk usse koi relation nahi tha..!!
: yes bt this time i cant be wrong..!!
Man : ye loo.. Ye potion kl uske drink main mila dena.. Agar uske nails green hue for some time.. Fir pta chalega kitni sahi hai tumhri baat...
: ok chief...
Man : a agar ye expreiment fail hua.. Pta hai na tumhe main kya kr sakta hn..
: yes chief...
Man : this will be ur last experiment... Mind it.. Soch smj kr use krna ise.. Got it .!!
: yes chief...!!
Man : idiot mera muh kya dekh rahio jao ab yahan se..!!!
: sorry chief..
Hade (gud bye..)
( bows down n leaves from there.. )

Out side that rum..
: is bar main ye moka nahi jne dungi..!! Main pta lga krhi rahungi.. Chahe jo hijaye... Itni asani nahi chodungi.. Chief ne mujhe aj uski vja se dhamki di tu finish me off.. Ab ye ldai chief ya humare clan ki nahi balki meri exestance hai...!!!

Plz let me know how it is.. I wrote it in really a tiring mood..

replies to previous update coments..

Originally posted by: keenu

Luv it <3<3 <3 continue soon <3<3

thanks dear,..😊😊

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

nyc part diks...keep it up...

plzz post the next part soon... :)

thank u megha..!!😊😃

Originally posted by: panamaa

nice starting dil

love this

really awesome dil

waiting for next one...

thank u soo much anu...!!!😊

Originally posted by: polishedtechie

Thats a nice start Diks :) All the best on your new story.. great going

thank u dii...!!!😊

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome start

loved it

continu soon

thankx for pm

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Originally posted by: Prizi

Hey wowww awesum concept
luvd it diksh...

thank u soo much...!!!😊😊

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

very interesting dear

thanks for the Pm

Continue soon 😊

thanks dear..!!!😊

Originally posted by: sara.dmg

interesting concept
update soon

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Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

rocking yaar...

the combo of a bold but inoccent cute girl in one only ...

loved it yaar...

par mera ko armaan ka samjh nahi aaya kya hain armaan...

ridhima ki entry dhua daar hain toh armaan ki kaise hogi hayeee... loved it yaar dikss

continue super soon

thank u aayyuu...!!!
armaan ki entry bhi jaldi hi hogi..!!

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome

thanks dear..!!😊

Originally posted by: cuteshilpa

Hey lovenyour concrpt , it was awesome :) contbsoon n do update :)

thaks dear..!!!😊

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Love ur concept. .
Outstanding start. ...
Love ridhima n sapna bonding. .
Waiting for armaan entry..
Love ur wrk. ..
Plzzz write more on virman. .
I m big fan of virman. .
Continue soon
Thanks alot for pm dea.
Keep rocking

thanks dera..
ill be starting virman virsion of this story soon..!!😊

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

The concept seems to be interesting

plz add me to your pm list if u have any

<3

thanks dear..😊
ill pm u pkka..!!

Originally posted by: ojaswi_kajen

Wow nice concept...loved it...cont soon...!!!

thank u dera,...😊

Originally posted by: ..Neha..

Great start!
Its quite intriguing!
Continue soon!
Would love to read more!

thank u soo much dear...😊😊

looking forward the read :)