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Posted: 11 years ago
good one ramya sis,hari & simi in same project hmm,quite interesting. prem & preethi story is also nice to read👍🏼.waiting for krish part😃.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ sathya, lekha..

I know that u ppl are waiting to know abt Krish's pair... but adha track konja later ah dhaan varum... not now..

but already a lead given about his past love... his classmate and the reason for their breakup is that she suspected Krish-Simi friendship...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sathya87

any chance of Preety and prem moving to Chennai as well..??



sathya.. idhukkum adhe badhil..

not as of now😃

Preethi is in final year and Prem has to complete his 1 year course... have to wait and see about their future plans.. 😉 (yedaagudamaa answer panrenaa? )
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ramy so many characters, curious to know how you keep track of everyone lol? Awesome job! Looks like everyone is busy with things happening. Thanks for the updates!

I might have missed this but who is DM?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Ramy so many characters, curious to know how you keep track of everyone lol? Awesome job! Looks like everyone is busy with things happening. Thanks for the updates!

I might have missed this but who is DM?



ha ha... smiles.. I wud keep track of everyone... the challenging part is to make u ppl keep track of it without any confusions or lost in between... that I wud be able to judge only from ur comments... lets see how it goes... 😉

and DM is Delivery Manager who takes care of the transfer requests which is one of their responsibilities...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Same project ah ok ok...
Krish - Simi friendship romba pidichurukku ramya...
Preethi yaroda daughter pa?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi sis Ramya , me too have a doubt how can u keep track of all the characters and the story line between them . Great talent pa . Hat off sis.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Devino

Same project ah ok ok...

Krish - Simi friendship romba pidichurukku ramya...


Preethi yaroda daughter pa?????



Jothika (Karthi's twin sister) voda valarppu magal...

and to make it easy for reference.. let me add character sketch in the first page.. so that if someone misses... they cud go back and get it cleared 😉

will update it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: plily

Hi sis Ramya , me too have a doubt how can u keep track of all the characters and the story line between them . Great talent pa . Hat off sis.



Thanks a lot friend...

As I said.. I'll be happy if I get to know that you ppl are also able to follow clearly.. which wud be helpful for me when I write... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 19 :

Previous Part : Part 18


Next Day (Saturday) morning :

Simi : dei Krish... un kitta oru matter sollanum...

Krish : sollu...

Simi : you will be surprised...


Krish : build up yethaama sollumaa...

Simi : naan annaikku sonnene... enga project oda Jaipur team la Hari nu oru peru paarthennu


Krish : aamaa... adhukkenna.. ?

Simi : adhu un brother Hari dhaan...

Krish : appadiyaa ?

Simi : ennadaa... shock aagaama.. saadhaaranamaa ketkkura ?


Krish : therinja vishayathukku edhukku shock aaganum ?

Simi : you mean ?

Krish : I mean... I already know..

Simi : annaikku illa nu sonne ? you lied ?

Krish : No... appo theriyaadhu... then chinna doubt vandhu avankitta ye ketten... payyan maattikittaan...

Simi : oh... but idha yen hide pannanum... ?

Krish : namma company la ye transfer vaangittu inga vandu Mom and Dad ah surprise panna poraanaa...

Simi : Oh... adhukkaa... ok ok...

Krish : hey Simi... yaarkitta yum sollaadha... appodhaan ammaavukku surprise ah irukkum...

Simi : adhaan reason sollitta la... then how will I tell.. ? naan enna unna maadhiri oatta vaayaa enna ?

Krish : sari sari vidu... unakku eppadi theriyum.. ?

Simi : client oda video conference irundhu la... obviously ellaarum intro kudukkum bodhu gavanichen...

Krish : cha... sariyaa loosu avan... appadi theriya kodaadhu nu... andha meeting ku varaama leave pottirukkalaam la.. ? naan na appadi dhaan panniruppen...

Simi : dei... client meeting... adhuvum naama ippo dhaan join pannirukkom... romba thayiriyam dhaan...



Krish is busy into his banking project and in fact he liked working and get to know and learn new things but he couldn't mingle with that team members.

While the retail project is still in its initial stage and for some reasons it got delayed and the team has been just blocked for that with hope that the issues will be sorted out soon...

Simi got very bored doing nothing.. She then thought of chatting with Hari through the official messenger within the company...

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Following is the chat window of Simi and Hari :

Simi : Hi Hari...


Hari : Hi Simi... what a surprise.. I was about to ping u..


Simi : is it... ? whats up ?

Hari : neenga first sollunga...


Simi : neenga busy yaa ?

Hari : illa... oru request..

Simi : what ?

Hari : vaanga ponga gradha avoid pannalaame...


Simi : yen... neengalum dhaan appadi kooppidureenga...

Hari : ok ok... naanum vittuduren... ippa ungalukku ok vaa ?


Simi : hello...

Hari : sorry... unakku ok va...

Simi : fine...

Hari : then... sollu.. enna vishayam ?

Simi : adhu... project la innum work start pannalaye... eppadi time pass pannittu irukkeenga nu kekka dhaan ping pannen...

Hari : irukkeenga la ?

Simi : hmmm... idhu plural... you and other team members out there...

Hari : nallaa samalikkura..

Simi : kandi pidichitta... you didn't answer my question yet...

Hari : adhuvaa... I'm just surfing around the intranet site... lots and lots of information irukku...

Simi : ohoo... but evlo neram dhaan adhaiye paakuradhu... ?

Hari : what to do... ? I'm just keeping myself engaged...

Simi : naanum library la poi konja time spend panren... first few days onnum theriyala... now it's very boring..

Hari : appappo... ippadi chat pannittu irukka vendiyadhu dhaan...

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After which they talked once or twice but then Simi's status was mostly found to be 'Away'

Hari : (mindvoice) adikkadi ping panren nu nenachuttaalo ?


While he was thinking, his messenger window pops up and its none other than Simi.

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Simi : Hello Hari...

Hari : Hi.. (thinks for a while) enna nu ketkkalamaa ?

Hari : enna... romba busy oh ? online la paakkave mudiyala...


Simi : oh adhuvaa... romba bore adikkudhu nu ennoda team leader kitta sonnen... he asked me to get me involved in some additional tasks... internal site maintenance la support panren...

Hari : oh great... so time pass aagudhu...


Simi : appadi illa... infact time poradhe theriyala...

Hari : thats cool...

Simi : pinna... fresher ah training mudichu work panna enthu vaa irundhaa... ippadi indha problem irukkura project la maatti kittom...

Hari : hey appadi illa... just initial kick off la dhaan problem pola... we'll get it soon...

Simi : whatever seekkiram vandhaa sari... actual ah indha designing work remote system la panradhaala... status away la kammikkudhu...

Hari : oh ok ok...

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On Karthik-Jaya's wedding day, Simi gifts them new dress, pattu veshtti and saree...

Karthi : what a surprise... enna dhideernu.. ?

Simi : hello dad... innaikku unga wedding day nu marandhutteengalaa ?

Karthi : how can I forget the day... iva kitta mattuna naal ah...

Jaya : unna... goes to beat him...

Karthi : kalyaana naal layaavadhu adikkaama irumaa...

Simi : ok ok.. unga vilayaatta apparamaa vachikkonga... first poi indha dress pottuuttu vaanga...

Jaya : sari... eppo idhellaam purchase panne ?

Simi : ellaam apparam pesikkalaam... modhalla naan sonnadha seinga..




They come back in the new dress gifted by their lovely daughter...

Simi : ippa solren... this is my gift to my lovable parents... got with my first month salary...


Jaya : paarraaa...

Simi : pidichirukkaa ?


Karthi : kalakkitta daa chellam...

They both kiss her...

Simi : idhu mattum podhaadhu... treat venum... adhuvum.. 25th year... I need something big..

Karthi : en chellathukku illaadhadhaa.. ? enna venum... kelu...

Simi : adha apparamaa solren... ippo kovilukku poittu vaanga...

Jaya : hey vera vela irukku...

Simi : ellaam cancelled ... or postponed... innaikku program naan plan pannitten...


Karthi : vaa Jaya.. poittu vandhudalaam...

Jaya : neeyum vaa...

Simi : edhukku.. ? its your wedding annivesary.. getting late.. nalla neram mudiyiradhukkulla poittu vaanga...

Jaya : sariyaana vaayaadi... paatti maadhiri pesittu..

Karthi : un ponnu... unna pola dhaane iruppaa...



Jaya : dei Karthi... bike la polaam daa..

Karthi : enna dhideernu... ?

Jaya : dhideer aasai...

Karthi : madam... flashback poyaachaa... ?

Jaya : yen.. nee nenaikkalayaa.. ?

Karthi : enakkum thonuchu... naan nenachen... nee sollitta...

They both go to the same temple where they went at first together... and went back down the memory lane and cherished those moments...

When they are back home, they are surprised to see both their parents (Karthi's and Jaya's) and also Jothika...

The couple get the blessings from the elders...

The hall was decorated and there was a cake on the table...

Jaya : hey... Vishnu, Krish yaarum oorla illa... neeye yeppadi manage panna...?

Karthi : en ponna pathi enna nenacha... ? orey aalaa manage panniduvaa ?

Jaya : un ishttathukkku maathu... over ah pesumbodhu... ennoda ponnu nu sonna...

Simi : hello hello... fight aarambichaacha... ? paarunga thaatha... daily.. idhe velayaa pochu ivangalukku...

The elders are happy to see their bonding..

Vishnu and family are back to home in the night and all of them had dinner together...



Next Day morning :

Jaya : Simi... thanks a lot da... had a wonderful time yesterday...

Simi : No thanks... I have to thanks god for giving me such a nice Dad and Mom...

Jaya : sari sari... enga wedding day va super ah panniyaachu... naalaikku enna day nu theriyum la... ?

Simi : Krish oda B'day dhaane ?


Jaya : yes... last year nee first wish pannala nu kochikkittaan la..

Simi : avan oru kumbakarnan...


Jaya : nee mattum...

Simi : birthday ku 12 o clock first wish pannuvaanga... appo nallaa thongiduvaan...

naan late ah thoongura aalu... edho morning asandhu thoongitten... actual ah paathaa... adhukku neenga dhaan kaaranam...


Jaya : what.. ?

Simi : pinna.. ? neenga seekkiramaa enna ezhuppirukkanum...


Jaya : thookkathula ezhuppi nee panra adaavadiya ennaala thaanga mudiyaadhu maa...

Simi : indha year.. night muzhichirukken nu sollirukkaan Krish... paakkalaam what he does nu...



Night 11: 45 PM :

VL home :

Laksh : dei.. nee muzhichirukkanum naa ireendaa... ennayum sethu.. imsa panra...

Krish : Mom... naan mattum muzhichirukka mudiyaadhu... thoongiduven... apparam bet enna aaguradhu...

Laksh : pollaadha bet...

Krish : maa... its a prestige issue...



same time Simi was also awake...

Simi : (thinks) Hari kum naalaikku dhaan birthday... idhukku munnadidhaan pazhakkam illa... atleast this year wish pannalaame...

eppadiyum indha kumbakarnan thoongittu dhaan iruppaan... But Hari eppadi nu theriyala ye...?

edhukkum try panni paarkkalaam...


Simi calls Hari exactly at 12 AM, she waits for him to pick up... Full ring goes and when she was about to cut the call, he picks it up...



Simi : Happy Birthday... Wish you many more happy returns of the day...

Hari : Thanks a lot... what a surprise...

Simi : just try pannen... was not sure if you are awake or not...

Hari : usually I don't... enna nu theriyala... innaikku thookkam varala...

Simi : appadiyaa ?


Just casual talks went on for sometime and they kept the call..



In the meantime, as Lakshmi and Krish were awake, they tried calling Hari to wish him but found his number engaged for quite sometime...

Also, from 12 o clock , Krish was waiting for Simi's call and quite disappointed about it... Only thing is that he is little happy that she lost the bet...



--- to be continued ---

Link to : Part 20
Edited by ramyvijay - 10 years ago

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