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Posted: 11 years ago
part 14
nice part...
poor Geet...
OMG what was she doing...
glad Maan came at the right time and saved Muski baby from Geet's state...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

part 13 n 14

awesome parts
maan and muski are so cute and maan slapping geet is justified but she is broken beyond limits to be mend
hope everything gets fine
love suhana




hi dear thanks for comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice and painful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi friend today i update two story
tomorrow i cant come on online
have ti fill Net exam from , so have to go university
poor mahi 😭
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 15

geet say in high voice what you think I don't try to fight back , i try my best Sir and for that I got this , she just pull her gown from her legs , maan just froze in his place , there are so mark of burn and bitten in her leg ,inside near her feminist part i try my best to fight back sir , but no one near me who support me , save me no one , when he first tied me on bed and just put burning cigarette on my leg i cant yell also because he just tied my mouth with cloth , sir and that is not only punishment but igot next punishment to satisfied his friend for hole night , I just crying , begging but they just hurting me . they never stop for whole night , muje to pata bhi nahi chala when I lost my hosh sir pata hi nahi chala kab main behosh ho gayi pata hi nahi chala

geet closed her eyes , she feel so much wick she shake for second , maan just run to her and took her in his hand ask softly are you ok ...geet just went away from him and say i don't want pity sir but i am helpless , i am helpless he is monster under name of human , my parent only one mistake that they trust to own relative who give false knowledge about this monster

maan once again come near her took her hand in his hand and say , geet feel so emotionally week she don't try to protest , like she so much tired with all this maan took chance of her silence and say first I am sorry for that day in hotel it is just my pain and alcohol nothing else and geet i know i get idea that how much you suffer in your life , but you have to come out from all this , you want to muskan suffer in her life , geet nodded in no ,tear start to come from geet eyes , its agony , pain ,helpless , fear of so many days just come in that tears , she loudly cry out why babaji why me , why all this happen to me why what i make sin that I get this punishment in name of marriage , geet all body shaking with her cry , maan cant control himself and just took her in his arm , his safe hug , and geet just hug him back , like searching this hug , this solace from so many days like his hug medicine of her wounded body , soul ,mind she just put her head on his shoulder and cried out its true that some time we more comfort to stranger than our know person , she feel more comfort with maan than to rano to open her past


maan just caressed her back with lots of thinking , he have fear that she don't mistook his touch


after some time she come out from his hug and mummer sorry but imm maan stop her and say till now we are stranger to each other , so lets give name to this relation , all say I am amazing friend , can you become my friend , and I promise , i will support you in your every step geet just trust me once

Tear just following from geet eyes, after 2 and half year, a man act with her in decent manner, no lust, no dirty touch etc, etc


Maan just reading her face and say jitna rona chati hu ro lo geet, it help you to free from all this pain , agony , dirty past geet try it geet ager pani bhi jaada din ek hi jager per raha gaya to usmain se bhi smell aane lagti hai you have to come out from all this , don't put them on your mind , flow them like water geet your all pain , agony , emotions , cry , fear just free them from your mind , geet just took his hand and say I low voice he, they make me dirty ,how I will face all ,maa , muskan how , my body now also feel their dirty touch , their eyes , its so dirty , how I will...she again cried loudly

Maan geet you saw lotus , flower

geet look him with confusion

Lotus come in dirt , mud it blossom in mud , so can you say that lotus is dirty flower because its blossom in mud tell me geet , Geet your are world most pure soul ,who took all this pain for her parent , her child , geet look from my eyes you are pure like flower, who only give happiness to other with their beauty smell , we can use that flower in mandir , don't say it blossom in mud so we don't use it no na , geet nature is big teacher of us it say that don't look to mud but look to flower geet

maan just in slow voice , I know its is hard for you but think like this na , which is your dear one they don't care for all this who really love you and who pointed to you they are not your love one geet they are just stranger geet don't think about them , can you punish your closed one for stranger , society and all tell me geet just ans my one qus

What is more imp to you ,your past or your present , muskan present ,future , tale me , can anyone else love your muskan like you love , care her geet tell me

geet nodded in yes say she is my life

maan -than live for your life geet , your muskan ,just your muskan please she only four moth baby totally deepened on you , you suffer so much for her life , than why you don't give her new life with full of happiness geet think about muskan future geet that is more important , you know are more lucky than that person who don't have a single one in their life who really need him ,when no one need its more painful to life geet (he himself always feel like this ) , that thought that nobody need us it brake human geet , but you have two person in your life who need you geet , muskan and your mother geet

geet look to maan with teary eyes and ask if muskan mistook mw when she become big

maan just hold geet hand tightly , say no geet she is your child she never ever mistook you , just you want to show your courage to live this life not only live but live with all happiness they scratch happiness from you , you scratch happiness from you own destiny geet

geet ask with so much innocence such aisa ho sakta hai

maan eyes get teary with her innocent qus , he just think what a monster they will cant see this innocent , only look to her body , he himself feel chocked with emotions , he just control himself and nodded in yes

precap

Itanii Shakti Hamen De Na Daataa

Manakaa Vishvaas Kamazor Ho Naa

Ham Chalen Nek Raaste Pe Hamase

Bhuulakar Bhii Koi Bhuul Ho Naa

Har Taraf Zulm Hai Bebasii Hai

Sahamaa-Sahamaa-Saa Har Aadamii Hai

Paap Kaa Bojh Badhataa Hii Jaaye

Jaane Kaise Ye Dharatii Thamii Hai

Bojh Mamataa Kaa Tu Ye Uthaa Le

Terii Rachanaa Ka Ye Ant Ho Naa

Ham Chale

Duur Agyaan Ke Ho Andhere

Tu Hamen Gyaan Kii Raushanii De

Har Buraaii Se Bachake Rahen Ham

Jitanii Bhii De, Bhalii Zindagii De

Bair Ho Naa Kisikaa Kisiise

Bhaavanaa Man Men Badale Kii Ho Naa

Ham Chale

Ham Na Sochen Hamen Kyaa Milaa Hai

Ham Ye Sochen Kiyaa Kyaa Hai Arpan

Phuul Khushiyon Ke Baaten Sabhii Ko

Sabakaa Jiivan Hii Ban Jaaye Madhuban

Apanii Karunaa Ko Jab Tu Bahaa De

Karade Paavan Har Ik Man Kaa Konaa

Ham Chale

Ham Andhere Men Hain Raushanii De,

Kho Naa De Khud Ko Hii Dush{}Manii Se,

Ham Sazaa Paaye Apane Kiye Kii,

Maut Bhii Ho To Sah Le Khushii Se,

Kal Jo Guzaraa Hai Phirase Naa Guzare,

Aanevaalaa Vo Kal Aisaa Ho Naa

Ham Chale Nek Raaste Pe Hamase,

Bhulakar Bhii Koi Bhuul Ho Naa

Itanii Shakti Hamen De Naa Daataa,

Manakaa Vish{}Vaas Kamazor Ho Naa

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love maan he is so nice cute and pure
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update finally geet talk to maan emotionally update
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan ne geet ko kitni achi tarah se sambhaal liya aur uski saari pain and emotions ko bahar laadiya hope now geet fights back
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you maan
Man that was so emotional
Seing her finally opening up
Am glad she did
Geet needed to let it all go
So she cant try to live again
With her baby and ma
Maybe him as well
But that is for later
She let it out her grief in front of him
Now she has to try to go forward
And not look back anymore
For herself and those who love her
Cheers for pm
Thats okay if you wont be online tomorrow
Best of luck for that

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