NEW AASHLOK TS REMINSCING UR LOVE updtd pt 3 pg 12 - Page 2

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Aishaa3 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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do continue sure it will be wonderful
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REMINSCING UR LOVE...

PART 1

A sleek black Mercedes came to a screeching halt outside a 20 storeyed building in one of the posh localities of Delhi...a man of around 30 years entered the building with his 2 bodyguards by his side...he stepped into the elevator and motioned them to stop with his fingers...he entered the office dressed in a 3 piece with his glares on..all the girls drooled at their new boss who was not less than a Greek God but he gave a damn to all of them and entered his new cabin he was none other than SHLOK AGNIHOTRI the top businessman in the field of education...he sat down on his seat and took out a photo from his wallet... "baby..ur love has added another company in his name" and kissed her photo...

His manager informed him that he had to meet the principal of the school which was now a part of the Agnihotri Institutions but there were some issues which needed to be sorted out...he reached the school and suddenly he felt a sense of attachment towards it but he shrugged all those thoughts as he has stopped experiencing those feelings from a long time...he had a word with the principal but she had refused to sort out things and threatened him to take a legal action against his company...he lost his temper and told her they would have a formal meeting in an hour in his office with their respective solicitors...

"what do u mean he is out of the country?"he shouted at his assistant who gave him the news that his lawyer was out of the country...he was high in his anger now at any cost he could not let go of this one this easily...he had toiled days and nights for this and he could not afford to lose it...he suggested his manager to look out for a lawyer here in Delhi itself and explain him the case well...his manager immediately rushed to find the best lawyer of the city...he was sulking in anger when he saw a pair of innocent eyes looking at him with fear...instantly his eyes turned softer seeing the owner of the eyes smiling at him...he called out to her and bend down on his knees to reach her height...

Girl - y r u angry? Did ur mother shout at you or u lost something..she asked him innocently...

Seeing the girl he felt a heart to heart connection with her as if she was his own part...he smiled at her probably a genuine smile after years...they say it right Children are truly God's form on the earth...

Shlok - its just that m about to lose something...

Girl - don't worry u will not lose it my mom says if u truly want anything then u should close ur eyes imagine the thing u want and pray to God to give u that...u know I think I have seen u somewhere she said cutely...

He froze at her statement and didn't hear the last line what she said it was the same statement that she used to say him whenever he would be dejected or was scared to lose something...he was broken out of the thoughts by a boy's voice...he looked at the boy and then came another shock he was totally her replica... "heck, what was going on today why was he reminded of her today so much"...he sighed...


Boy - Aara, what are u doing here... how many times to tell u not to talk with strangers...he eyed Shlok from top to bottom...

Aara - but bhai he is not a stranger she whispered something in his ears and he looked at Shlok with narrowed eyes...

Boy - leave it Aara lets go...mom would be waiting for us

He left with her but before leaving Aara ran and kissed his cheeks leaving him all the more shocked...Shaurya gave him a backward glance and then walked away with Aara...he felt as if someone is pulling the life out of him...he followed them with quick steps and there she saw both of them hugging a petite woman who was dressed in a chiffon saree and was no way looking like a mother of 2 children...her back was facing him but he could hear her laughter while she was talking with them and again that laughter reminded him of her...

Aara - Bhai m sure he was that guy whose photo we had seen in mom's cupboard that is what she has whispered in his ears...but Shaurya was doubtful about it

Woman - what is cooking between u 2? She asked them but Shaurya was quick enough to save themselves from their mother's suspicion...they all hopped in the car and left to their home...

He sat on the bench in the school's garden as he started to feel nostalgic about the past and her memories seeped in through his mind and he again drifted to the most beautiful phase of his life...

8 yrs back...

He was 22 years old then and had gone to Canada to pursue higher studies in management and got himself enrolled in the prestigious university there...it was then he had seen her for the first time..she studied in the same university as he did but she was a law student and 2 years younger to him...the girl was Aastha Kapoor a Punjabi girl...vivacious, bubbly, chirpy, independent, modern in her outlook as well...her family was settled in Canada for past 60 yrs hence she was a Canadian but she preferred herself to call an Indian...he was an angry young man from his childhood basically due to the stupid rituals, traditions and customs which were followed in his house and he always felt suffocated in that environment...only he knew how much difficult it was for him to convince his parents to marry Jyoti with the guy whom she loved...she was the only person who understood her in the so called house...he wanted to free himself that is y he requested him to send Canada for studies he knew he was his grandad's favorite as he was his only heir after his elder brother who had quitted all his wealth to marry off a girl who was out of their religion...hence all the responsibility of his so called family reputation on him...and that is the reason he would generally be in a sulking mood or angry...his mother never gave him the motherly love which he always wanted bcoz she was more engaged in handling her household chores, her traditions and that is y he always maintained a distance from her and stayed away from the girls by giving them a cold shoulder whenever they would approach him..and frankly there was not even a single girl who was able to win his heart till date...

He remembered their first meeting...she had accidentally bumped into him and that is when he had fallen for her...it was love at first sight for him...she had just smiled mumbled a sorry to him and left from there but she had made a straight way into his heart...after that they met up several times sometimes in canteen or in campus etc...it was one fine day it was his friend's birthday bash and he was invited over his house..he went and even she was present there and it was then that they got formally introduced to each other...they became friends and gelled up instantly...Shlok was reserved whereas Aastha was an extreme extrovert..being with her made him forget all his worries and he started to open up with her...both started to like each other's company after 6 months of friendship Shlok finally confessed his feelings to her and she answered with a kiss.and Shlok was bowled over by her boldness...after 6 months of relationship they started to have physical intimacy...later they both were busy in their respective studies so they hardly got time with each other...after the exams Shlok hesitantly asked Aastha to move in with him...she agreed in an instant but he feared her family...but to his good luck her family was never a hurdle in their relationship...her family always liked him and she moved in with him...day by day their love and intimacy for each other was growing into new heights...

The thing that always scared him was her blind trust on him...he sometimes thought what if he breaks it he will never be able to forgive himself...he remembered how naive she was...once when they had gone to hospital to see her friend's baby she was very scared to touch the baby and hearing all the women shouting in labour pain she had clearly told him that they would have an adopted baby and that she will never conceive.. he had chuckled at her innocence then...it was 2 years they were together...everyday was a new day for them...Shlok had changed completely he was not the same person when he had come to Canada..he was Aastha's Shlok now...what they say is true ''Good days also come to an end'' it was a Sunday and they were cuddled up in each other's arms when the shrill sound of his phone broke their moment..and what he heard made him drop the phone...Aastha asked him what is the matter and he told her that his grandpa was breathing his last and wanted to see him...she immediately arranged the tickets for him and he promised her that he would be back in a months time...god knows y she was having a gut feeling that something wrong was going to happen but she didn't want to tense him and that is y put a smiling face in front of him...he bade her good bye and she hugged him for the last time...it had been over 3 mths since he was in India he called only once that is also when he reached safely..after that there was no sign of him...from past few days she was feeling nauseatic and was constantly throwing up when she went to the doctor she got the shock of her life when she came to know that she was pregnant...she tried to contact him on his home's number and finally someone picked up the phone...it was an elderly lady who picked up the phone when she asked to hand over the phone to Shlok...she snapped at her saying that he is getting married and she should forget him...her life came to a standstill..she was somehow sure that Shlok could never this to her but what the lady spoke also made her think twice...so she was determined to move on in life and give birth to their child...she continued with her studies and gave her final exam when she was 8 months pregnant...she could not thank more to God who gave her such a supportive family...her mom and dad supported her doing this phase...during her pregnancy only she knew how she controlled her craving for him..she would cry all night remembering him..after she was in labour pain all the time shouting Shlok's name...and she gave birth to twins Aara and Shaurya...Aara was same like her father and Shaurya like her...after a year she moved to Delhi with her children inorder to give his dream to see her as a successful lawyer...

Here on reaching Shlok got the biggest shock of his life...his grandpa was fit and fine they had deceived him so that he comes to India...he hardly contacted them in 2 years and an instantly a fear had grown in them of losing their second son also so they lied to him and arrange his marriage with a girl of their choice...

here is the first part, hope u all like it

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loads of love

Nazia😊😊😊



Aishaa3 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my god😳 just lvd it...Astha kapoor hmm😃 sad that they gt separatd..bt stil crave fr each othr😳 cnt wait fr their 1st meet..cnt sooon😃

Edited by Aishaa3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hooking prologue...two people?...giggling one?
waiting for your first update
mayabharathi thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb start I know I will enjoy the next too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks fpr pm.I also want u to update INTEZAAR also.I really like ur fictions.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Lovely and awesome story, loved it so much! Thank you for the PM😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story and gud start
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg...loved the update dear.
Aara is so cute and innocent. Shaurya is smart.
Loved the kids...shlok and aastha's past is interesting.
Waiting for them to meet now. Want shlok to know about his kids.
Update ASAP

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