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Posted: 11 years ago

Updating it in a while... 😊
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Hello all,😃

I am very late in updating the next part of this story and I apologise for it!! 😳😳
I thank you all for appreciating the previous part... I wasn't expecting that you all would love RK's entry so much!! I had written it very weirdly!! Thank you all!! 😳

You can check the replies I have given individually to all the comments... after so long!! Finally, I got sometime to do so... 😆

I would love to dedicate this part to my sister... Uma (@uma88) as she was repeatedly reminding me to update it!! 😆

This part will be subdivided into two part. Today, I am posting the first subpart... Enjoy!! 😃


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PART- 4 (A)

"Trishu! Stretch your limbs completely... Stretch them! Yes! We need a 360 degree split!! C'mon yaar!!" Madhu was continuously instigating Trishna with her words while helping her in the stretching in the practice hall. "Ouuch!!" Trishna cried. "Stop it Madhu! It's enough for me!" "NO! It's not a complete 360 split! Stretch yourself a little Trishu!!" Madhu blurted out. "It is a 360 split for me!! I am not gonna do anymore!! If you want then do it by yourself!! It really hurts Madhu!!" Trishna replied irately and immediately got up in quitting mood. "Trishu... you..." "Hey beauties!!" Both of them turned back in the voice's direction. "What's up girls? Stretching??" asked RK in a very cool tone. He came forward to Trishna and patted her back in a friendly manner. "Hey RK! What's up hunnn? Yeah... Madhubala Madam is instructing me!!" Trishna rolled her eyes half panting to which Madhu gave a glare. RK smirked and turned to Madhu, "Hi Madhooobaaalaa...!" Madhu simply gave a casual smile in reply. She wasn't interested to talk to him. "I said, Hi Madhooobaalaa...!" He again imitated his previous words deliberately. "For your information, there is no Madhooobaalaa' here in this academy but MADHUBALA... and... that's me!!" Madhu replied in attitude. "So, if you are talking to me then call it... MADHUBALA!! I hope you got it!!" Here she was fuming in irritation and there, he was staring at her hypnotically. After so many days, he has met with someone competing with him in attitude. "Ahaaannn!! Madhubala... I like it!! Impressive... hunn!!" He smirked in amazement. "Guys and Girls!!" Mike came inside, calling all the people there in the room for an announcement. He stepped up at the podium. "Good Morning all! Hope you all are practicing quite well!" Everybody gathered near the podium. Madhu hurriedly came near it so as to get free from that attitudinal Kundra. Mike continued, "Well... I am here to make an announcement! As you all know, like every year, we will have our Annual National Enigma Hunt for finding the most enigmatic dancing couple of our academy from our branches all over the country. Since years, unfortunately we haven't get any couple from our main branch to be the best. Last year, though Madhubala and Sameer stood at third position but still... as a manager I want more!! I want the best!! So, this time I have done a little changes in the procedure here... This time, you guys won't dance with your usual partners!!" Everybody started murmuring as it was a shocking news for them. Mike shouted, "Silence! I am not yet done! I know, you have become quite perfect with your partner till now but the management has decided to change the things a little... This time, your partners will be changed! But to your ease, we won't choose anyone!! It will be you who will choose one's partner among your troop!! You can follow your own criteria for the selection- looks, skills or whatever... but remember, he or she shouldn't be the old one!! We don't care how you all will do it. What we want is a perfect dancing duo... who can match to each other's flaws and strengths; who can complement each other on stage! In short, we want a pair who has the calibre to win this trophy for us!! So, remember this competition before looking for your partner!! We want the pair names after three days. So, do well... choose well and... Good Luck!!" And he left from there leaving behind the troubled dancers. "What the hell is this yaar??" Kapil shouted. "Is that so easy to find one and that too in three days?? "Mike has gone nuts!!" RK giggled hearing such comments for Mike. "Chillax guys!! It's not impossible though!! Don't waste your energy in cribbing and start searching for your BETTER HALF now!!" Everybody laughed on his words and get back to their practice.

Within half an hour, seven girls have asked RK to be their partner but he simply denied to their proposals. He removed his T shirt and started warming up in black vest and trouser. After few minutes, Madhu came there as her bag was lying there aside the wall. She took out her bottle to drink when RK dropped in from somewhere, "SO!" "So what?" She asked confusingly. "Have you found your Better half? I mean... your partner?" He chuckled. "Ammm... Not yet. And I haven't think of it till now!" She replied indifferently. Suddenly her phone buzzed. She saw the screen and immediately cut it off. "Why? Why didn't you think of it? It's only three days left Madhubala." He asked. "I don't have much time for it now. I'll think later." She replied quickly to shut it off. "Why so? What are doing now?" He asked again curiously. "Can't you see, I am doing practice?" "Yeah... But that's not a big deal no!! You can think of your partner and all no, Madhubala!" His trail of questions started to irritate her. She sighed loudly to control herself. RK smiled inwardly seeing her irritated. "What's your problem Mr Kundra? Just mind your own business! Don't interfere in my matters!" "But I am your colleague no! And you can't just ignore this matter. You are last year runner up so you must work harder now! You should choose the one who can..." "OH Shut Up!! Just shut up!" She shouted. "I know what I have to do!! You just care for yourself Mr Rishabh Kundra!! Got it!!" And she was about to turn back in rage when her phone buzzed again. She again cut it off and threw it on her bag and walked off furiously. RK chuckled seeing her like this. His deliberate attempt to irritate Madhoobaalaaa' successfully worked. Her phone ringed again. RK lazily picked it up. He took it and walked to Madhu, "Madhubala, your..." "SHUT UP! I don't want to listen any of your nonsense!" And she turned on the stereo in chafe to avoid his voice and gave him a smirk. RK replied back with similar smirk and threw her cell on the bag and got back to his practice. The phone hummed again after few minutes. RK first looked at Madhu and then picked up her phone and went outside. "Hello!" "Hello! Who is this?" "You have called up so you tell me who this is?" "Where is Madhu? And who are you Mr?" A furious reply came from other side. "Well... I am R...K... and Madhu is busy with..." "Busy with?" "First you tell me who are you?" RK asked. "I am Sameer Damn you! Give her the phone, you idiot! Whom is she with?" He replied in rage. RK didn't like his way of talking. "With me!!" RK replied firmly. "WHAT??" "Yes! Anything else you want to know Mr Sameer? By the way, may I know who are you to her? Relative... or... boyf" But Sameer disconnected the call in reply. RK casually shrugged off and walked in. Inside the hall, Madhu was searching for her cell but couldn't find it. "Are you looking for it, sweetheart?" She turned back to face him. He was grinning at her, twisting her cell in his fingers. She immediately snatched it, "You idiot! How dare you touch my phone?" "It was ringing continuously and you were least bothered about it so I thought why I shouldn't do your work. So, I talked to the caller... Some Sameer called from an unknown number!" Madhu stared at him wide eyed. RK continued, "He was sounding quite angry with something... Who is he by the way?" "How dare you?" Madhu gritted her teeth. "How dare you received my calls? Who the hell are you to interfere?" Madhu was extremely angry this time. "I was just..." "You were just what Mr Kundra?" She shouted at the top. Everybody else stopped their work. She continued, "This is my life. You have no right to interfere in between. Who told you to talk to him?" "Madhu, he was asking about you very rudely as if he is a spy. He felt to be an ill-mannered guy so I just told him that..." "That what?" "That you are with me... Just in a kidding manner but he cut off the call before I could say else!" RK was explaining very casually as if he hasn't done anything wrong. Madhu was shocked hearing him. "You Stupid, idiot!! Who told you to say such a stupid thing? Why did you do this?" Trishna immediately intervened. "Hey... Hey... What's the matter guys?" "Just tell your so called friend to stay out of my life!! Don't try to act so close to me!!" Madhu's eyes were red by now in anger and unknown tears. "What does he think of himself- very smart... intelligent... can handle anything... everything?? Who told you to come in between my matters? Mr Kundra, show your smartness to others but not me!! I am genuinely not interested in your silly acts!! Don't you dare come near me or my life after now!! Just stay out of it otherwise I won't spare you... And I really mean it!!" She pulled her bag and turned back to leave when Trishna stopped, "Madhu! Where are you going?" "I need some time, Trishu!" And she walked off from there before she could broke down in front of others which she wasn't willing to do. A pin drop silence blew for some moments. RK stood numb. Trishna tried to pacify the surroundings, "Ammm... Get back to your work people! It's alright!!" Everybody moved but RK. She held his arm, "RK! I... I am..." "Did I do something extremely wrong Trishna?" He asked innocently. "I know, I shouldn't have used her phone but that man... if you have heard him speaking like that then you also have..." "Tell me everything completely first." RK explained her the entire fiasco. She sighed, "RK! Sameer is like this only! It's his nature." "Nature? You call it his nature? He seemed to me a mad... a lost case!! And who is he by the way to Madhu? Why she acted so furiously?" Trishna got little hesitant to reply anything to him. "RK, he is her ex-boyfriend. That's all I can tell you this moment. Madhu... She is not like other girls! She is very introvert... very emotional... strong at heart but sweet at the same time!! See RK, we are friends but not best of till now! I can't tell you everything! I hope you understand... We should respect it!" RK smiled, "I understand Trishna and I respect your space too! I can be a silly child at times, you know!! But I can assure you one thing that I will be there for you... and for Madhu too... if you ever need my help!! Just remember that!!" He replied in an assertive, friendly manner to which Trishna's eyes got moistened. Both of them shared a friendly hug and she went back to her work sadly leaving behind a silent RK, who was still staring at the door...




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I know it is very short in length but it has to be divided in two parts. I didn't want it to be packed up in one update!!
The next part will be posted most probably by tomorrow!! 😉😉

Till then... waiting for your likes and comments!! 😃😃




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Posted: 11 years ago
i m 1st jolly jolly jolly🥳
nice update dear👍🏼 very well written👏
hate - love story huh?😉 i 'm lovin' it😳
hope madhu's better half oops dance partner will be THE RK...ahaan!!!😉 & set d dance floor on fire & steel d 1st place⭐️
omg! madhu is so rude & harsh towards my rk😭 🥺 actually she should show this kind of anger & attitude towards that useful for nothing sameer😡
"WITH ME" wow rk what a way to shut that idiots mouth😆 i love ur smart reply rk😉😎
rk is such a sweet heart & i loved trish & rk's convo & their friendly hug too😛
u know what dear after reading this story i m imagining rk only with cow boy hat😆
awesome siggie😳
waiting for next update😛
thanks 4 d pm dear😃🤗




Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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sis, i got back to my place, but still second place only, sudha, next time i will be back at my place😈

Coming to the update, am falling more and more for this story, i like this madhu, and love this RK, and trish also seem to have some space apart from other stories, where friends, just come and go, this sameer😡, i want him to be beaten black and blue by RK, after knowing how he treated madhu.

I liked the way RK attending the call and returning it to her and replying casually like nothing much has happened, i accpet that he doesn't know anything about the caller and the happenings between him and madhu, but i liked his way, and i liked where trish stopped saying , we were friends, but no the best, and didn't explain it more.

Loved this caring RK, when he told that he was there for trish and madhu too, wow, how sweet he is, even after madhu yelling at him like something, he is ready to help her, madhu deserve one like him.
And about the future update, i was more excited to see the lovely dance of this couple.

Oh i forgot to tel about the siggy, it was so nice, i must tel u sis, u r becoming a expert in doing this.

And finally a big big hug the dedication


Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Before coming to the update let me do my victory dance first!!! Wuhooo!!🥳 I am 3rd!! Climbing back the ladder!!! Soon i will be on that No.1 spot again!!!⭐️
Anyways...The update was superbbb Sis!!! Even though u updated after a long long time but still fab!!!⭐️
RK does seem a bit annoying...he shouldn't have just picked up her phone as he doesn't even knw her well yet...but still am kinda thankful he did! That Sameer is an absolute Jerk!!😡 Want him to burn in Guilt and Jealousy seeing them together...not even in his dreams does he deserve her...so let him think of whatever he wants to of what is going on between them!😡

And i have a stong feeling that RK-Madhu would be dance partners which they would not only win but also it would bring them close😳...am i right or am I right? lol 😆

And awww RK will turn out to be a great sweet friend...he already seems so supportive without even knwing them properly!!!😳

Please do update soon!!! And i mean real soon!!!
Edited by Mentally-Insane - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally an update and that too a wonderful one! Thanks to Uma for reminding you 😊
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awww i love this part only bcoz pf my darling rk
hating mb over here she insulted rk bcoz of her sameer infront of everyone grrr
is she planning to go back to him then she can go aaram se i m keeping rk for my self as.i m already loving this sexy rk very much
amazing update
continue soon
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Originally posted by: NehaVdian

awww i love this part only bcoz pf my darling rk
hating mb over here she insulted rk bcoz of her sameer infront of everyone grrr
is she planning to go back to him then she can go aaram se i m keeping rk for my self as.i m already loving this sexy rk very much
amazing update
continue soon

Neha i like the way u always defend RK, nobody could be like u, u r a true VDian,
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Originally posted by: rinku06

Finally an update and that too a wonderful one! Thanks to Uma for reminding you 😊

u r always welcome, but am in love with this story, so can't leave this, and hence will always be asking kavya about this. Little selfish 😆

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