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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


hmmm... after spending a Hectic day and ruining the Prime time by reading Reviews on EDT abt CID...
I started to Read Ur Classical Story SONALI...😊
Honestly, I am Speechless...⭐️⭐️
I have No Words to Praise such a Beautiful attempt...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Yes and Yesternight I feel what is CID a True CID...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
there is Not need of Jhatka, Chichorpan, OTT, YSPT, Loudness...😑
there is only a Crisp Script, Excillent way of Investigation, Prooper Interrogation, Checks and Counter Checks the Previous Clues with Verification, Presence of Characters and a Perfect Execution...πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
Yes I find all these in Ur Story...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ‘
It have all the Proper Ingredients, Mix it Well with Pros and Cons and give a Super Duper Fantastic Story...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Yaar, I really want to watch it on Screen and Dunt be sad, when I'll get a DECENT PAY from any side in My Life, I'll Make it, Yes with Ur Permission giving U the Royality even U are the the Director of this as I m avoiding Mr B P Singh...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
U are a True Geniune Writer Yaar and I must Learn so many Things from U inshaALLAH...πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thank you so much for such Relief...πŸ€—
may Almight ALLAH Paak shower His Countless Blessings Upon U and Ppl around U... aameen..πŸ€—


GD aap se itni taarif sun kar main toh saatve aasmaan par hoon... Thank you so much for reading boss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Since Election is approaching, I scribbled this...

Chunaav

Aaya Aaya Chunav Ka Daur Aaya
Aam Aadmi Bhi Ab Khas Kehlaya 
Bade Bade Netaon Ne Chuna Apna Manch
Vaado Aur Aashwasano ka fir Shuru huva Prapanch
Jinhe Dekha Bhi Naa Tha 5 Sallon Mein Woh Achanak Huve Prakat
Baatein Aise Karte Jaise Humari Har Samasya Se Hai Nikat
Achanak Milne Wali Ehmiyat Ko Kya Hum Nahi Jaante? 
Ye Vaade Hai Bas Pralobhan Kya Hum Nahi Pehchaante?
Achanak Humari Choti Choti Samasyaon Ke Milte Hai Hal
Par Jaante Hai Chunaav Ke Baad Ka Kal Hoga Vaisa Hi Jaisa Tha Beeta Huva Kal
Hume Khush Karne Ke Liye Diye Jaate Hai Aneko Pralobhan
Aur Jab Satta Milti Hai Unhe Toh Hota Hai Humara Shoshan
Magar Aise Mein Matadaan Hi Naa Karna Kya Hai Sahi Oopay? 
Shayaad Aisi Hi Soch Iss Desh Ko Aur Kamzoor Banayee
Matdaan Kar Ke Ekdum Sahi Umeedwar Shayad Hum Naa Chun Payee
Par Hume Haq Hai, Hum Desh Tak Apni Aawaz Pahunchayee
Badlaav Laane Ka Zimma Agar Hum Khud Uthayee...
Toh Shayad Badlaav Ki Shurvaat Aaj Hi Se Ho Jaayee...
Edited by Sonali. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great poem! You have penned down the darkest side of all the selfish and corrupt politicians who become our well wishers and put forward various false claims all of a sudden, whenever election approaches.
I love the selection of words.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shruti

Great poem! You have penned down the darkest side of all the selfish and corrupt politicians who become our well wishers and put forward various false claims all of a sudden, whenever election approaches.
I love the selection of words.


Thank you so much Shruti...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very true sonali, all politicians are same, they promised to change everything for us for our convienience but soon after elections they themselves change 
Very well done sonali πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena..

Very true sonali, all politicians are same, they promised to change everything for us for our convienience but soon after elections they themselves change 

Very well done sonali πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘


Thank you so much for the appreciation Veena... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written Sonali πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written Sonali.Well done.  πŸ‘  πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ

You have beautifully put into words, the sad state of affairs of the country,where the politicians make their appearance only to claim votes and then conveniently forget their assurances and go back to their old ways once they get into power. 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: debasree04

Well written Sonali πŸ‘


Thanks Deba πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: beena.thomas

Well written Sonali.Well done.  πŸ‘  πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ

You have beautifully put into words, the sad state of affairs of the country,where the politicians make their appearance only to claim votes and then conveniently forget their assurances and go back to their old ways once they get into power. 


Thank you so much for this awesome appreciation Beena... Thanks a ton... πŸ˜Š