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my story is continued at the bottom guys. please read it and comment...
I am just repeating the beginning for the people who missed it.
Alisha: zoya daughter no 1
Almost same to same copy of her mom. She is very bubbly and open. She believes in freedom and enjoyment however she hates pizza.
Nadia: zoya daughter no 2
Completely the opposite of Alisha. She is very shy and sweet. Believes in her religion a lot. Wears hijjab.
Ali: Tanveer son
Really really rich and spoiled. Loves to hang with his friends. However, he did not turn out to be like his mom.good from heart
Hareem: Najma s daughter
Cute and bubbly. Very simple and sweet.
Family number 1: alisha and Nadia live with Noor kala
Family number 2: Ali, Tanveer and shareef live together. By the way Shareef is another man Tanveer trapped.
Family 3: Imran and his daughter Hareem
Family no 1
Alisha: diii how long are you gonna take? The auto man is waiting from last 19 minutes.
( Nadia rushes out of her room)
Alisha: Dii not again. Come on it's our first day of college and you can't wear this hijjab. People will make fun of us.
Nadia: we should never leave or forget our religion because of others. I don't care
Alisha: okay baba I know u won't listen.
Both sit in the auto and leave for college
Both enter the college and everybody starts staring
Alisha: Kai kai.?? ... Hum chand sai aye hay
Unknown: lag tou kuch aisa he raha hai. Miss Hijabi ki Behna
Alisha: teri Tou!!!!!
Nadia: stop Alisha... Just ignore them
Alisha: okay di you go to your class and I need to go to my chemistry class. Bye bye
Bell rings( Alisha runs towards her class and bumps into a guy)
Ali: aaaiii. What the hell? What the hell?
Alisha: ohhh I am so sorry I need to go
Ali blocks Alisha's way
Ali: where do u think you are going mam without picking up me books.
Alisha: look I said sorry na now let me go
Ali: oh... Showing an attitude instead of feeling guilty
Alisha: aiii
Ali: aiii finger down . You don't know who you are talking to. Ali Fahad Rehman. The owner of this 3 malls in this city.
Alisha: Larki deki nahe... Kay show off shorow
Ali: hey mam whatever. You are wasting my time and your time. So it is better to pick up my books.
Hareem: Ali Kay hua...
Ali: nothing yaar ... Just stuck between weird people.
Hareem: come yaar we are getting late ... And why are your books laying on the ground?
Ali picks up the books and whispers to Alisha
Ali: you will have to pay for this "mam"
Hareem, Alisha and Ali are in the same class. Ali gets shocked to see Alisha in.his class.
Ali: tum
Alisha: pata nahe ...? Kis manhos ka cehra deka tha maina subh subh. Sara din Karab
Sarah: hey did you call me?
Alisha: oh no
Alisha whispered to herself
Alisha: who cAn talk to you. You are busy in your make up 24 hours
Sarah: by the way you know yaar. There is a new guy in our college. His is sooo rich.i need to trap him.
Alisha: ohhh that guy. Don't even talk about that loser
Sarah: no you might be mistaken...
Mr. Haider makes an entry in the class room.everybody stands up except Ali.
Haider: ohhh hello no manners
Ali: no sir... My manners are lost deeply deeply inside my richness. I don't know how to bring them out
Everybody begins to laugh
Haider: batameez. We need to have a talk. I guess a real one.
Ali: please sir. May we proceed... Out of this room
Haider: no now ... After this class.
Now Nadia s class
Nadia enters the class. Her friend comes towards her
Feza: aj tou Torah fashion kar late.. It was our college first day...
Gang of modern girl: ohhh shes from the old 50s girls... Ahahahhahahah
Fahad( haider son): what the hell is wrong with you guys. Why are you always behind her.
Gand if girls: so who should we be behind handsome... Ahahhahahah
Fahad: very very funny. Hah hahahaha right . You guys actually don't have the brains to understand who the actual modern one is.
Gang of girls: you are handsome as you dad... But your anger sits on your nose just like your dad.
Fahad: oh just shut up
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A girl name Purvi( Fahad's friend) comes and sits beside him
Purvi: Hi
Fahad: (Angry reply) Reply
Purvi: O ho why is your mood off in the early morning. I know because of the lipstick gang.
Yaar I know they are little stupid
Fahad: Little? oh God ... you call them little stupid...
Purvi: Okay fine a lot stupid. Can I ask you a question?
Purvi: Dont you think there is a solid reason behind this all...
Fahad: Look don't irritate me and be clear.
Purvi: I think you like Nadia...
Fahad: Noways
Purvi: come on ...I can clearly see it on your face...u can lie to the world but not me I know u from grade 6.
Fahad: There is nothing like that...
Purvi: I saw it all on your face when Nadia joined our school in grade 8. I think you should think about this
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Fahad at home.
Humera: How are u my Faho?
Fahad: Mom please dont call me with this name u know I dont like it.
Humera: and thats why I do it...( rubs Fahad's hair)
Haider: Humera u are always behind this poor boy...
Humera: Look Fahad ... mashallah u are going to turn 20 this year...I am thinking of your marriage.
Fahad: Mom are u okay... I am only 20...
Humera: Look Fahad.. Before u get into this Pyaar wala chakkar I want u all settled.
Fahad: Mom I wont dont worry.. He says with a low tune.
Humera: No no
Fahad: (Screams) and what if I already did.
Humera and Haider are shocked. Fahad closes his laptop with anger and goes inside the room.
Fahad: Am I really in love? Is it really true? Maybe I should call Purvi.
( He calls Purvi)
Fahad: Hi yaar
Purvi:Hiii
Fahad: Yaar I think what u said to me was right.
Purvi: What?
Fahad: Look dont irritate me again
Purvi: Okay Okay
Fahad: Now what should I do yaar?
Purvi: Common sense arrange a good date with her.
Fahad: Dont you think we are rushing too much.
Purvi: Look of u go to slow u will lose the race
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Morning at Alisha and Nadia home. Its sunday and no college.
Noor kala: Nadia Nadia Beta
Nadia: yes Kala
Noor Kala: Come sit I need to have a talk with you. A marriage proposal just came for you. They are going to come and see you tomorrow.
Nadia:(Blushes) okay Kala
Noor Kala: Stay ready and wear good clothes
Phone rings
Nadia: Hello
Fahad: Hi Nadia its me Fahad
Nadia: Oh Hi everything okay
Fahad: Yeah yeah all good.
Nadia: Oh okay..
Fahad: can we meet today...somewhere
Nadia: why?
Fahad: I need to tell u something important. DMG coffee shop 5:00pm
Nadia: Okay
Alisha: Diii who was it ha? who ?
Nadia: Nobody meri maa
Alisha: (Laughs and runs behind her sis)
Nadia: It was Fahad he wants to meet me today
Alisha: hmmm Something is fishy hahahhahaha
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Nadia: Hi
Fahad: Hi
(both are really shy from each other)
Fahad: Nice weather right
Nadia: Yeah
Fahad: come lets sit.
Both sit on chairs and Nadia is looking at her hands and Fahad is really confused he doesnt know how to say it.
Fahad: Look Nadia this maybe a little shocking but I think I like you.
Nadia:(looks at Fhad.. turns red)
Fahad: I think I actually love you. Not from now but from the time when u joined our class in grade 8.
Fahad: do u except my love proposal...
Nadia: (Quiet) (confused)
she begins to cryyy... Look Fahad I cant really say anything about it..My Noor Kala has a lot of dreams for me and tomorrow a family is coming to see me.The family is really close to her. I cant break her heart by telling her that I love a stranger. And I dont want to get married to the guy of her choice.
Nadia: (Gets up and leaves from there)
Fahad: ( tears roll down his cheeks and he puts his head on the table in the coffee shop.
after 4 hours
Waiter: Sir? Sir
Fahad: wake up..(rubbing his eyes)What what
Waiter: Sir we are closing the the shop it is 9
Fahad: Its nine...
Fahad leaves the coffee shop...
Fhad at home
Humera: Sooo did you propose the girl..
Fahad: everything is ruined mom;... dont even ask me ...everything
Humera: What happen...
Fahad: Mom she wants to marry this guy of her Kala choice.(Fahad begins to cry)Mom you were talking about some girls family u wanted to visit. I am ready for that.
Humera: but beta...
Fahad: Please mom
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