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Posted: 11 years ago

try to update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
nice...
poor Maan...
only he and Maahi are here...
where is Geet?
cont soon dear...


😃

know about geet soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

Superb update !!
Maan imagining geet everywhere around him ..also liked mahi ..
waise wht is on nxt day tht maan is running away ??


thanks dear

you know about in upcoming two update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 2

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Maan reached farmhouse with maahi... maahi slept in his arms peacefully...

Kaka (servant/caretaker) : aapke liye kuch laayu

Maan : nhi kaka

**********

Dev : daadi aap please pareshaan mt hoiye

Meri abhi bhai se baat huyi hai

Wo farmhouse puch gye hai

Daadi : wo kb taka se baagte rahenge

Unhe ye sch manana honga

Dev : daadi bhai ko waqt dijiye

Daadi : 2 saal ho jaayenge kal

Itna waqt bit gya hai

Par maan aaj bhi whi khade hai

Hum kb tak unhe asse dard mein dekhenge

Dev : daadi bhai ko in sbse bahar nikalne ka ek hi rasta hai

Meera : dev khi aap

Dev : ha meera

Meera : par maan in sbke liye kbhi raazi nhi honge

Daadi : aap kis baare mein baat kr rhe hai dev

Dev : hume bhai ki shaadi krwa deni chaiye

Isse mahi ko maa bhi mil jaayengi

Aur bhai ko kissi ka sath bhi

Daadi : aap shi kh rhe hai dev

Maan ko aane dijiye abki baar

Hum kissi bi tarah unhe is baat ke liye mana ke hi rahenge

*************

He tries to divert the mind, but her thoughts not leaving him alone...in every corner, each side he feels her...

Maan : why geet

.

.

Geet : Maan I love you

Love you a lot

Maan : "love you too jaan"

Geet : Maan I know I hurt you so much

Maaf kr dena mujhe

Apni geet ko

************

New morning come... he take mahi with, in her special car... spend whole time outside... mahi enjoys so much... he also forget about her life with maahi... now his life around maahi... his princess ...his life...

And other side, khurana family doing Sharad pooja for her... whole day go in pooja, and after pooja, dev, meera goes mandir and give daan dakhshana on her name... and other side daadi making cake for maahi birthday celebration...

Daadi : maan aap kb tak puch rhe hai

Maan : daadi half an hour mein

Daadi : thik hai

Hum aapka aur maahi ka intzaar kr rhe hai

***********

Maahi : daadiii

Daadi : happy birthday princess

Maahi : mera gift

Daadi : gift wo toh hum bhul gye

Maahi turned her face...

Daadi : maahi

Maahi :

Daadi : asa kbhi huya hai

Hum aapka gift na laaye

Aapka gift aapke room mein hai

Maahi : schi

Daadi : muchi

Maahi : chlo dady

Maan : chlo princess

Daadi : maan hume aapse kuch baat krni hai

Maan : daadi abhi nhi

Abhi hum maahi ka birthday celebrate karenge

Kyun maahi

Maahi :ha

**********

Maahi wear daadi gifted dress and came down with maan... whole khurana decorated with balloons...and guest also arrived...

Maahi : daadi

Chachu ...chachi kaha hai

Dev : princess your chachu is here

Maahi : gift

Meera : this is for you

Maahi : itna bda tedy

Meera : hmm

Aapko bhut pasand hai na

Maahi : ha

Maahi kissed her ...then him...

Maan : ab cake kaate

Maahi : ha

Daadi

Daadi : humne aapka favourite cake banaya hai

***********

All stand near maahi...

Maan bent on his knees...

Maan : maahi phle candle ko blew kriye

Maahi : nhi dady

Phle wo

Chachi kya krte hai

Meera : wish maangte hai

Maahi : ha

Meera : apni aakhen band kro maahi

Maahi closed her eyes and make wish...then Maahi blew the candle...

Maan : apna kya maanga

Maahi : batate nhi

Maan : dady se secret

Maahi : nhi

Maan : toh fir batao

Maahi came near to his ear and tell about her wish...

Dev : mujhe bhi batao

Maahi : na

Maan : chlo ab cake cut krte hai

Maahi : dady maa

Maan held her hand and cut the cake...

Precap :- 1)

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2) geet : Mujhe kuch ho jaaye

Aur is zindagi ke safar mein

Koi aur aapko mil jaaye

Toh please uska hath tham lena

Maan : nhi daadi

Daadi : aap kya geet ki aakhri wish bhi puri nhi karenge


see this updates too..

NEW MG FF

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Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
dear this is the first story where geet is not alive from the first part. maan's family is planning to do maan's second marriage. waiting for next dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVLY PART...
WIT MAAN N MAHI MOMENTS...
HER BDAY ND ALL
LOVLY UPDATES

OH GOD...PHOTO PEY HAAR DEKHA NAHI JA RAHA HAI.😔

CONT SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
U hve too many stories n all r fab... They make reader tempted for next, but for next we hve to wait for long. Plz updt frequently. Nice one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...so geet is dead & maan's family is planning for his 2nd marriage...pata nahi kaun hogi??
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Posted: 11 years ago
is geet really died
so sad can't see maan with any one else
waiting whom u setting with him
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh suchi alive nahi hai
geet zinda nahi hai aur maan ki dosri shadi
uniqe story dear
waiting fo next

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