~Because I Love You~ -UPDATED/30DEC14- - Page 12

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Superbbb , Mindblowing update...loved there nok jhok sooo muchhh...
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ha ha ha lovef their less less talk...
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This update left me senseless after laughing on their bickering endless.😆
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Their bickering about the -less was so funny and I simply loved it. So witty😉 They are too cute together. Would love to read more! Continue soon and thanks for the PM😊
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U write brilliantly pooja

supeerrrbbb update loved it

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update soon

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Madhu is one stubborn girl! She will not give RK a break at all.

I loved Madhu and RK's argument. It was very creative!!!!
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cute and superb update pooja..👏👏...really super 👏👏
the talk with god was funny.😆😆...God why do you hate me so much? I agree I dint went to temple yesterday but that doesn't mean you'll punish me for two consecutive days. I'll definitely come to temple today and I am telling you I don't want to see Mr.Kundra anywhere near to me today

and the 'less' word war was awesum dear 👏👏👏
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Brilliant marvelous plz update soon
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Marvellous update Pooja Di!Thanks for pm!Very sorry for extremely late reply!Actually I was away from IF coz of My final exams!Loved Rishbala's fight!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter - 5th

Madhu's POV

He spoke "I can drop you if you want."

I replied "I don't need your favor."

I called out for taxi. A taxi stopped in front of me and I sat in a taxi and left.

I went for shopping with Di and Pulkit but my mind was occupied with the thoughts of that superstar. Not just superstar infact an arrogant superstar.

I was hell tired after all the shopping and when I came back home, I straight forwardly went to my room without having dinner.

As I opened the door of my room, I saw a bouquet of red roses on my bed. This made me confused because who can send me bouquet? Di and Pulkit were with me. Mom doesn't like doing this kind of stuff and Dad is not fond of surprises then who else?

I saw a chit on that bouquet and a line was written over there 'Roses to bring a priceless smile on your face. Yours, Manner less.'

I understood that it's sent by none other than Mr.Kundra but how the heck he knows the address of my home? Was he following me all day long?

I checked my room to see if he is around or not but found no one. Suddenly my phone started buzzing; it was from an unknown number so I picked the call and said

"Hello..."

The caller spoke "Madhubala ahaaann..."

I asked confused "Who's there?"

The caller spoke "You forgot me? Very bad Miss. Brainless."

I understood who's on the line. Dairy did you get who was on the line? Yes that annoying superstar was on the line.

I spoke "Oh so Mr. Shameless is on the line but wait a second, how you got my number? I didn't give you then who?"

He spoke arrogantly "I told you that if you won't tell me your name, number or address, I'll get it somehow."

I replied "Whatever."

He asked "So, did you like the flowers?"

I replied "No, I dint."

He asked "Really? Then why the hell are you still holding them?"

I looked here and there "How the heck you know?"

He spoke "Magic."

I was seeing here and there just then I noticed that he's standing at the gate of my house.

I spoke "Idiot! What are you doing at my home?"

He spoke "Oh hello, I haven't entered in your home yet. I am standing outside."

I replied "That's the place you deserve."

His bouquet was still in my hand.

He spoke "If you want I can come to your room by climbing up through window."

I replied "What? Hell no ways!"

I threw the bouquet from my window near his car, where he was standing and then I flashed a smile at him.

I disconnected the call and spoke loudly to him "Do you get your answer? Go away now."

He spoke "That's not fair Miss. Malik."

I replied "Everything is fair in love and war and this is war... World war..."

I was talking to him when my dad entered into my room and spoke "Madhu with whom you are fighting?"

I replied nervously "No one Dad."

He asked suspiciously "Are you sure?"

I was about to reply when that idiot spoke loudly "Madhubala, I am waiting for you at the gate of your house and I won't go without meeting you."

Frankly speaking I killed him in my head and I wanted to go down and wanted to kill him in real too.

My Dad went near the window and saw him and said "Is he Rishabh Kundra?"

I looked away and said "Yes. He is."

My Dad said "Why does he want to meet you?"

I told him everything from start till end. He said "Go and meet him then."

I replied "Dad, I don't want to."

We were talking about it when we heard some noise from downstairs, we both went downstairs to get the shock of the day. Mr. Kundra is inside my house and guess who let him come in? Of course my idiot Di.

And my mother, oh well what to say, she was giving him a VVIP treatment. Like seriously? Do they look like my mother and sister? I keep saying Dad that I sometimes feel like I am the adopted one. I know a BAD JOKE! But right now I am just feeling so pissed off.

My mother spoke "Madhu, look who's here."

I spoke faking my excitement "Mom who?"

My mom innocently said "The superstar Rishabh Kundra."

I replied again faking "Oh wow! We are so lucky that Mr.Kundra came to our house. God please keep showering your blessings at our home."

And see my mother is so innocent, she believed each and every word which I said and replied "True Madhu."

They were giving him the VIP treatment which was annoying the hell out of me. Seriously man!

Just then Pulkit also arrived, when he entered the living room and saw my mother and sister are sitting around him and talking nonstop with him, he gave me a look what-the-hell-is-happening? I gave him a look of even-I-have-no-idea.

Mr.Kundra wanted to take our leave but my mother and sister were not letting him go. They stopped him saying that 'let's have dinner with us.' But he was still adamant to go then my mother asked me to request him. Like seriously? Out of all the people, why me?

I spoke "Mom, let him go. He is a busy person. He might be having some urgent work."

Guess what he replied?

He said smirking "No, if you really want me to stay, I'll stay for a while for you."

Then said "I mean for all of you."

I wanted to punch him on his face but the situation was just agghh!!

We were on dining table when only three persons were talking, not really three only two, i.e. my mother and sister and RK was just shaking his head in a yes or no or was giving one or two word answers.

I was amused seeing the sight in front of me. If it would have happened two years back, I would have enjoyed his visit at my house and would have gone crazy but things have changed now.

I was lost in my thoughts that I dint realize I am staring at RK. He sent me a message over phone. I opened it and it read "Pervert."

I looked over him and he smirked. I replied in anger "Get lost you idiot."

He replied "Not before you give me a kiss."

I replied "Haah! In your dreams."

I was shocked to see his reply and angry too that I dint even reply him. You know what he sent? He replied "We have crossed that stage in my dreams ;)"

After having dinner, finally my mother and sister let him go and bid a goodbye to him. I said 'Good riddance' and I don't know how the hell he listened to me and sent me a reply over sms "Not so soon. ;)"

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The End! :P

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