SS -TUM HO MERE DIL KA CHAIN. ~*NEW* ~ update 5 on page 40. 27- 6-14 - Page 6

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Originally posted by: anuraya

very nyc update..

serial m nhi yha sahi sbke asli chehre samne aa gaye..most fav part ram slap pihu 😛

viraj-malika part awesumm

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Hello readers,

I am so glad u all liked my ss so mch . most of have liked pihu's slap [ just kidding]. THANK YOU so much for the likes and comments though late I came for u with part 2. do read and let me know your ideas the track going on this SS. how would u like me to do it. I may not impress u all but your suggestions will help me to do better. help me to learn through my mistake. Every one can share their ideas too. Hoping to hear to ur response.

here you go with the update .

In the wee hours of the day he heard, jingling sound of her anklets, she got up early. He felt like he was in KM. On opening his eyes he was in the paradise of Mallika n Viraj. Sh came to room to take her idol Ganapati bappa which she got from suhaani . She walked gracefully with wet hairs offered Pooja. He finished his daily chores, sat down in the balcony with news paper. His eyes stuck into the business world reading and analyzing the sensex drifts. She came to him serving him lemon &mint green tea. He is hesitating to drink but her sherni glare made him not to sulk further.. she leaned on his shoulder peeping into the same paper. she seldom do this leaning on him and read her Editorial column to tease her he then says she is trying to seduce him.

V: what s the matter my dear some one is romantic so early in the morning.

M: hmm... haa hai.. as if it will have little effect on u . u read ur business news.

V; hmmm, if there is no effect on me, y were u pleading me to let u sleep at 3 in the morning.?

M: oh that makes u think ur romantic Mr. Then you were wrong. That is just ur snoring a lot. I hardly slept in the night aap sone dethi tab na.. mushkil se aankh lag gayi intne mein aap ki karathe.. aadath hogayi par u were too loud last night.

V: hahaha as if i trust u, this is ur age old debacle, don't make stories baby.. I might be loud coz am very tired in romancing my GF.

M: y do i make stories, had hai,uff. u r old now accept it.. " mein kya karu ram mujhe budda mil gaya" ... u fatigue quick and snore like a silencer less bike. I recorded it again. 😛

V: what ! y is it needed now u can hear it live.. daily till i take my last sound breath.

M: raam please.. Dont talk like that . then i wil follow u where ever u go, 7 yrs is so much i can't stay away from u. Their eyes locked, speaking volume in the sweet silence., speacking their heart out . [ making things lite she said,,..] r u not going back to KM

V: what is mine there? When maa left me at 20 I worked like a ATM machine every hour for family till now I did not take time for me alone. Now realizing how cruel my dearies are! I want to live with the one love of my life. Bohot hogaya 7 years pihu kheliye. She is spoilt n I dont want to interfere.

M: ram please, she is our daughter. If we don't make her realize who else will do ? am in coma it was u who took the responsibility. But pihu manipulated u easily with help of juhi. I felt she was true. Tell me one thing.. do u really want to marry her.

V: hmm pihu ki kushi kheliye. I cant let her word go away. So i accepted this for naina. Not for juhi but juhi had more ideas to separate us. NUTS told me not to do this. Am ...am fortunate god made us for each other, I ran from mandap for u. I cant tell u how hard it is for me to sit in the same mandap where we took our vows, i could not bear juhi beside me in ur place. I have seen omens then, which felt u around me, something clinching my heart. U came back to me.

M; ram.. I love u.. so much .. galti meri bhi hai.. I left home thinking of pihu's words n shattered of the divorce. I miss myra n pari a lot. They were also like their sister.

V: priya, they were ur babies, more than pihu they were attached to kush . pihu had always bossed all but kush learned to win hearts. I missed 5 yrs of pihu but u missed most beautiful 7 years in ur babies lives. Myra is very intelligent she will take care of her sister.

M: i miss them a lot...

He hugged her . close to him

IN KM- NUTS CAME

Twins came and hugged their bua. Kush came hearing some noises in hall.they want their mom n dad. Nuts made them silent for a while. Bansikaka cooked them their fav breakfast. Reluctant to eat n nuts had to feed them . naina appeared there.

Naina: myra am going to squash court will u come along? No reply from them . she buzzed again.

Kush : naina they wont , u go and enjoy [she left]. Well I have a better plan for my sisters. Kush tried to cheer up . nuts kush decided to go on shopping, movie s and long drive , whole day fun day, nuts promised she wil contact ram by the day end. PIHU came there. She saw sammy coming inside. Kush asked sammy to join them . he said yes.

Pihu: sammy i never expected this from u , u told everything to papa. Na.. I hate u sammy.

Sammy : listen pihu, think what ever u want i have hidden things from all for u al these years, yes pam left me, u know y pam does it? for varun beause they love eachother. U have to get things right. U never know what happened after ur lie. Varun lost his life, his mom is shattered and mentally ill, ur mom is in coma, and uncle suffered a lot, ,my mom is in the feeling that u were right. U r mad n changed boy friends more than i changed Girl Friends. ha one thing u have no commitment in life. life is and emotions are just fun for u. U r sick pihu.

Juhi: sammy mind ur language u have no right to talk to pihu like this.

Niha: u stay out of this JUHI. U r not her mom, she calls u so but ur not her mom not her dad's wife. PIHU am ashamed of u. Sammy don't u dare to involve with her again ..

Natash: juhi, u know what,, when we r kids bhai arranged a bai for us. Mom used to be busy all day time. We called her maa, I hope u got my point priya ki absence mein they have called u maa like i called my bai maa.but she wan never my mom.

Pihu : bua ur insulting juhi maa..

Natasha: so what?

Myra: bua chodo yeah saab. we will get maa back to her family.

Pihu : myra pari if that women comes here u will loose ur freedom. Y dont u listen to u r di..

Myra: di , bas we know how ideal is our didi.

Pari: di sorry , because of u we lost mom's love for 7 years and we ended up hurting her falling into ur words again. WE want our parents to be happy and live with them only.

Kush: when dad said ur my sister, i felt happy . and i met my angel. I was jealous of u to be priya angels daughter. But today am glad am not so un grateful like u pihu. I know to protect my sisters.

NUTS; kush let her do what ever she want. Come will go out, first shopping, lunch movie and long drive.. a whole day masti who all are coming with me and kush..

Myra pari said - me - me-..

Kush: sammy r u free to day, join us it will be some change to u.

Everyone left, no one asked pihu.

IN VIRAJ- MALLIKA, LAND-

"Ah so delicious, no one can cook better parata's than u. U made my day darling"

Saying so he relished on the served parantha's, popping each morsel into his mouth. He seems like a kid. Her eyes moistened thinking of baby pihu relishing her fav food saying "wow mummy this is so yummy, ek ar milega , chota sa, please mmmy'. Now she is changed and her likes too. One thing remained constant over years is he and his love. she came to reality when he kept a morsel infront of her. they finished BF.

She went to kitchen, he went after her.

What u wanna eat in after noon. No more alooo parnta for this week. She said sternly.

He came close to her back .. caught her from waist. His cold hand felt the skin of he r bare waist, she shivered to his touch. He pulled her close to him.

"we are going out today so dont cook." Ram said.

'Where r we going?'- priya asked

'Hmm nothing decided yet, u decide what to do'. he left it on her

then priya said, "Oh great, then i need to get somethings for this place."

"Uff, priya !stop it dont u dare to forget u r mallika, cant u think other than home kids duties and all," said ram being worried of women and shopping.

What to do viraj, my fatty has made me this way. He is a golu n was busy in office all the time and me has to dedicate myself to family. She smiled naughtly

Accha, am not golu like him u better know it or else am always ready to demonstrate well . he winked at her.

Uffo , aap bhi na.. kabhi bhi shuru hojathe hai, ram u r papa for 4 grown p kids. ..please dont forget. Priya said and try to push him aside.

Big deal, I can create one more if u agree! And who the hell is ram am viraj n u mallika.

Haan , aap 60 + nahi, u behave like 16+ .. but am 50+ only not 15+ .. she pleaded through eyes to leave her.

Oh u think am 16 + no problem, if u r 50+ this affair can still go on.. i will call u aunty.. , she gave him a sherni look and he laughed out loud.

ok no jokes but on a serious note, we worked hard for family all these years, either of us cared for being selfish for our selfs. Now this time no one else only u and me. Kids can handle their life especially pihu she needs my money nothing more n pari myra our son will take care of them I have faith in ksh this time its for u n me. 7 years is too much long priya I no more can stay away from you.

His eyes filled with tears , she cupped his face and promised him, he is important for her now no one else. Yes they need to spend time for them self.

I agree with u ram. Pihu! I never though she will do something like that. where are we wrong in nurturing her. All that matters to me now is u Ram, god gave me life for u only'

Yes he knows u r my life..i love u priya..

Yes will spend whole day for our self first shopping, lunch and drive to beach .. how abt it?

Good but shopping is it needed. ram sulked

Very much .. i want u to buy lot of things for me.. shall we start now or u want to be in kitchen.. priya said, who else can ans sherni?

Out side KM

Nuts instructing kush abt the things he has to take care of, and sammy getting his gypsee ready, pari myra is exited to go along with. Naina came and asked them if she can join they said yes. Mean while suhani came to KM for priya's reports. Kush insisted nuts ask suhani to join. Pihu fumed no one cared to ask her. juhi filled pihu with some more venom. Pihu went to her room furious and smashed a family pic hung on the wall on floor. Juhi smiled at her victory. Rishab came there and shouted at pihu to behave. When juhi came between, saumya said it their family matter, their means kapoors and it is a matter of discipline. she strictly said she has more rights on pihu than her in absence of ram and priya, if she wanna clarify she can ask ram. juhi remained quite. Pihu stood shocked how everyone behaving with her.

At the Mall:

Raya reached, ram in baby pink linen shirt sleeves folded up, un tucked shirt over a kaki pants looking utterly handsome with the maui jim black shades on. On ram's insist priya is in blue tunic with white pants,loose hair and wearing wedge shoes to match his height. They looked much younger than they really are. Priya took him to a men's wear section made herself busy in selecting shirts for him. she wanted to buy things for house , ram asked her.

Is this u wanted to buy? U said..." before he complete.she gave him some shirts to try..

" try this.. and yes since came as it is no luggage so we need to buy these and more over am bore to see u in ur business suits" he went off to try the shirts, she is searching some for him.

Nut and gang came to same mall, walking past by the same section! Accidentally nuts n pari's eyes fell on Priya , talking to ram abt shirt. Every one stood still, kush myra pari remained open mouth . nuts thanked god for their happiness. Sammy is surprised to see shrewd ram. n suhani is admiring the wonderful couple. They were seeing a muted image wondering what would they talking !

in the shop- RAYA

Hmm , ram this one is good, what about that blue one?

" its a bit tight to me... priya ."

"oh , ok .. then will take it too.." priya declared removing the first button open.

" what! madam that is not fitting me! And what r u doing in public, if u want will leave home!" he smiled, she playfully hit his shoulder..

"raam... ha u have to shed few kilo''s then it will fit u so we are taking that too." She poked her index finger to his tummy .. saying this.. while the convo is going on nuts gang entered the shop, they were surprised to see their parents , and were happy too see them happy

Ram slowly crawled his hand around her waist casually, by the time nuts manage these chillar party, they reached to place where they can hear n see raya clear. myra and pari went still near hiding behind rails of shirts and they could not hear RAYA whispers and were still trying harder.

"Please RAM , what is this? we r in public and if any reporter sees we will be the headlines of the news tomorrow. Please" priya pleaded.

Enjoying her discomfort " hmm, i have to leave u now, then ... u have to come inside and help me changing"

" aww, what!aaap! u have lost it , what do people think? I can't come with u. Plz don't embarrass me"

"Dont u dare to forget am ur viraj n u my mallika, how do u think I will embarrass you. Its just i want to finish this shopping quick. " he said.

"ok viraj, how will that be quick if i come in.[ coming out of his grip, standing close to him]" she asked.

" haan , u will come inside, u will help me unbutton my shirt, i will wear new one, In this way we can save time, I go wear another one come here to show, its killing lot of time."ram said

" How could I? overreact when its u mr.Kapoor? hmmm", she sternly glares at him thinking- golu ki golu hai, I assumed he is being romantic hmmm, priya viraj ya Ram, iss golu ka kuch nahi ho saktha.

"what ! chalo na!, please.. you're wasting my time" he pulled her near to the changing room,

Myra pari dint see where, as they were fighting for better view. Myra shouted out loud, priya who heard her voice stopped ram to. Turning around priya saw, myra. Myra turn around saw priya n Ram , she bite her tongue, pick up a shirt to hide her face to escape by that time its too late , kush s head popped out of some stand, then sammy, pari, suhani .

is there anyone else to come out" priya asked. In a sherni tone.

Every one looked back, for nuts to come out of their hiding place, but she dint come out. Ram who saw that it was nuts who is behind blazers went there moved all blazers aside. To unveil nuts. Nuts closed her eyes tight and freeze. Priya is stoop preplexed in open mouth wondering what they were doing. She is not sure if they heard raya's conversation? She is tensed now. Ram pulled nuts out..

" bhai! Priya aap yeha... hi," nuts said.

" hmm, what were u doing here nuts" he asked..

" ah.. woh, wo... sammy nahi kush... myra pari... haaan. Myra pari want to buy kush a suit so we all came here" she wincked at her team. Who smiled in confusion

" oh! So u were checking the blazer hiding behind the them right"

" haaan ... no... bhai , hum .. dint wanna disturb u .. bacche ...moody hai ..."

"come here all of u" priya commanded. She asked what were they doing hiding there. Kush said everything. Priya is so happy to see them. While ram is sulking. She saw him.

"dad u looking very cool like this" myra said,

"hitler ki choice hai" ram chuckled. She gave a stern look to him.

"its priya's choice." he smiled

" mom is there anyone with u here?"

" y" priya asked.

" i heard some one calling viraj n mallika."

Ram swallowed a lump down his throat, scratching his temple he looked at worried priya who is struggling to give an answer.

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Awww very beautiful part yaaayyy Raya romancing in mall superb n really i like viraj n mallika great work n pls continue soon

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Nice

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Awww very beautiful part yaaayyy Raya romancing in mall superb n really i like viraj n mallika great work n pls continue soon

Originally posted by: RosiNishaN

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Lovely update!