Dimple becomes HarshIka's Cupid! **Part 2 Updated** - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome loved itt.plz conyinue and dow rite mor.on thtem.superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik

Kyu aisa keh rahe ho sab that MODS will close the thread? 😭

I don't even feel like writing more when I think about it.
I hope they don't close.
Problem kya hai isme?
I hope they are more understanding.
Please don't close the thread. Pretty please.
Itni Mehnat se likha hai maine.
I've even started the next part. Paani will phirofy on all my mehnat.


actually ... mujhe bas darr hai... i liked this one sooo much ki i don't want mods to say it is not related to BI... i wish/hope/pray ki mods will understand!!!!
n darling...pls don't lose ur heart... we r loving this one... waiting for the next update which i'm sure will be better than the best👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ishaaa!!!! 😲
Turns out that you are not an idiot after all 😲
But you're still a nerd babe.. 😉
This is just amazing... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can I say I loved it? Nah am not saying that.
because that would totally be an understatement man, this is just...am speechless!!👏
Every bit of it was outstanding, I would love to read more of it. Awesome job 👏👏👏

Please continue soon! and do pm me please 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love it, please continue soon and sent me a pm aswell.
Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Aisa kaise ho sakta hai...
Asliyat me to nahin ho sakta...
Green tea leke jane tk to thk hai fir dimple kahan se :p
In reality it wud trn out
Dimple keh ri thi uske xbox me problem h to woi dekh ra tha pr tum kyun puchri
Kyun na puchu
Achcha jb jawab mil jae tb bata dena main chala sone aur tym mile to koi game dwnload kr lena..
:p taki main fir apne cell pe transfer kr lun..angrybirds me maza ni aya..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ThankYou all for your love and support!
And Watch out..PART 2 is on it's way 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey wow I loved it... kyun ki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi 😉 and yes, I also wanna know, where he goes with dimple? [:O] before her answer I want this answer n WOW loved it
don't forget to pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG this was awesome 😆
Harshad 😆
Can't wait for the next part!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Everybody!

I'm back with Part 2.

ThankYou so much for all your Likes&&Comments for the previous part. Each and Every Comment means a LOT! Trust me.

Presenting the LAST Part of the Two-Shot.

It's long, like shit long.

10 word pages. Would be very obliged if you could give a feedback. 😊

PART 2

Precap: Preetika is gonna confess...


PREETIKA: Because I--

She was cut short by a crunch and a crack. The curtain near the window was moving. More like someone was clutching on to it.

PREETIKA: Harshad! Harshad koi hai wahan. Koi--

Harshad swore under his breath.

HARSHAD: Nahi!!!!! I mean nahi, nahi koi galat fehmi hui hai tumhe. Koi nahi hai wahan tum--

But Mrs. Bond Abdullah was already on her way.

HARSHAD: Preetika! DON'T!

She moved towards the window and in a swift movement removed the curtains.

To say she was shocked would be an understatement.

She could've expected a Saya and Chudail instead of this.

Dimple and Vikas (Rizwan) were comically hanging, yeah, hanging would be the correct word. One leg on the nearby trees branch which was on the verge of breaking, the other leg dangling off in air and their hands clutching on to the window sill and the poor curtains for their dear life.

HARSHAD: God! Tum Dono? Ruk nahin sakte the?

Preetika: Wha--What the hell? You two-- what is this? You were eavesdropping? Vikas you too? I just can't beli"

HARSHAD: Preetika! For the Lord's sake pehle unhe kamre ke andar karo! Agar media bahar hogi toh Bhagwaan hi jaane kal news me kya report chhapegi: Barkat aur Rizwan Ki Ban gayi hai Jodi, Jhaank rahe hain Zain aur Aliya ke kamre me Chori Chori. Aur gire to Khuda Kasam saari ki saari 370 bones piccha ho jayeng--

VIKAS: Harshad! This is so not the time for flaunting your Bio skills!

DIMPLE: Yeah! And anyways it's 270 not 370, dumbo.

HARSHAD: Shut up you both! Now come.

Harshad somehow hauled up Vikas and Dimple while Preetika stood rooted to where she was.

All she did was just stare. From Harshad to Dimple to Vikas and back to Harshad. Her look demanding one simple thing: Explanation.

HARSHAD (to Preetika): What?

Preetika: I'm supposed to be the one asking this. What khichdi was this trio making? May I know?

VIKAS: Confession time, bro.

HARSHAD: But"

DIMPLE: Come on man, spit it out now.

*FLASHBACK: SCENE 1*

Dimple was sitting on the dining table browsing through her iPad. Harshad and Vikas on either side of hers, learning their dialogues for the upcoming scene.

DIMPLE: Have you ever been to India-Forums?

HARSHAD: Suna hai, but never really got the time.

DIMPLE: You should go. Huge fan base you've got there...

DIMPLE(suddenly): Listen, what's your last name?

HARSHAD: Arora.

DIMPLE: And Preetika's?

HARSHAD: Why?

DIMPLE: Answer, man.

HARSHAD: Rao, but why?

DIMPLE: Then what's this dude?

HARSHAD: What's what?

DIMPLE: Look!

Mumbai: Colors new show "Beintehaa", which is observing a lovy-dovy sequence between the lead pair Aaliya (Preetika Arora) and Zain (Harshad Arora), is soon going to witness a heartbreaking track, when Surraiya (Suchitra Pillai) will ask her to leave Zain's life and Barkat Villa.

HARSHAD: Preetika Aaarr...

DIMPLE: Yeah, Preetika Arora. Has a nice ring to it, doesn't it? Infact, it sounds quite normal. As if it's actually her name.

HARSHAD: What are you saying man...

He turned away and busied himself in his script. Buried himself in it, actually. In an attempt to hide the deep red colour which was metro-ki-speed se spreading across his face. Who said guys didn't blush?

DIMPLE: Arey! Ye kya? Why are you--

HARSHAD: What I'm not blushing okay? Why would I blush? It's not like I like Preetika or anything. So why would I blush? And--

DIMPLE: Like Preetika...? Par maine to tumse kuch poocha hi nahi.

HARSHAD: Tum...abhi who-- I mean you were saying na why are you--

DIMPLE: Ya...but I was just asking you to...

She took the script he was so engrossed in, straightened it and handed it back to him.

DIMPLE: I was just asking you to keep you script straight and not-upside down, but you started ranting about your...

And laughing at him, she went away.

*FLASHBACK: SCENE 2*

VIKAS: He Bhagwaan! Itni khichdi pak rahi thi in dono ke beech aur mujhe pata hi nahi chala.

DIMPLE: Guys are blind.

VIKAS: Aye! Hamari mardaangi par mat jaana varna--

HARSHAD: Bad karo ye ChitChit apni!

VIKAS: Chitchit? Chii Harshad...You could've come up with a better word...like KitKit.

HARSHAD: Ayee! Kitkit solely belongs to me and Preet--uh--Zain and Aliya, I mean.

DIMPLE: Okay okay! Enough we've got a task at hand. Any ideas?

Both Vikas and Harshad look up to Dimple expectantly.

DIMPLE: You two are hopeless. Step 1 is always Get-The-Girl-Jealous.

HARSHAD: But--

DIMPLE: And it works.

HARSHAD: But--

DIMPLE: What? You want her or not?

HARSHAD (sheepishly): Yeah.

DIMPLE: Cool. Then follow me.

VIKAS: Mission Pehle Jalao, Phir Apna banao is on!

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

VIKAAS: So yeah, that's that.


DIMPLE (whispers to Vikaas): Ab Khade kya ho? Chalo! Look at their faces. Tamater ho rahe hain. They need to spend time alone.


Vikaas and Dimple leave.


Preetika was gazing at Harshad accusingly and Harshad suddenly became very interested in the zip of his jacket.


PREETIKA: You.


She pointed a finger towards him and started nearing him, step by step.

And step by step he started backing away.


He'd always imagined how she'd look when she would be angry. Now after seeing her face he wished he'd never seen her like this. She looked murderous. He hated to admit, but Harshad Arora was scared of her.


HARSHAD: Me?


PREETIKA: Nahi. Bawdi ki chudail se baat kar rahi hoon mein.


HARSHAD: Oh Thank God! Tumhe abhi bhi dikhti hai who? I thought ki--

He went on blabbering. Something which only happened when he was nervous. And right now he was nervous, like shit nervous.


PREETIKA: Harshad, Stop! Enough of beating around the bush. Come to the point.


HARSHAD: Point...??


His legs hit the bed and he fell on it.


He was now sitting on the bed and she was standing, towering above him.


PREETIKA: Apne aap ko bahut smart samajhte ho?


Samajhta nahin hoon...mein hoon, he wanted to say. But the look on her face stopped him. She was in a no nonsense mood. And he was scared.


She continued.


PREETIKA: Khud apni feelings chupa kar mujhe chale the confess karane. (imitating his voice) "Mujhe mera Jawaab nahi mila." "I want an answer." And blah blah blah...Bahot hero ban rahe the na.


He gulped. His Adam's Apple bobbing up and down.


HARSHAD: Ugh...


PREETIKA: Bolo! Bolo! Bolti kyu band ho gayi tumhari?


She hit him on his shoulders. And Harshad who was already not in control of himself couldn't balance and fell on the bed. Taking Preetika along with him too in the process.


They both fell on the bed. Harshad beneath and Preetika on top of him.


HARSHAD: Nahi Preetika..aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahi ho..I mean..aisa hai par waisa--


She touched her palm to his face.


PREETIKA: To kaisa hai Harshad? Kya hai? What is it between us? Kya hai yeh?


HARSHAD: Woh to mujhe bhi nahin pata...


He turned over so that their postions were interchanged. Now she was beneath.


HARSHAD: Lekin itna zaroor jaanta hoon ki since the time I've seen you I can't stop thinking about you. You're the first thing I think of when I wake up in the morning and last thing on my mind when I go to sleep at night. If I think about my life thirty years later, I can totally imagine you by my side. Being with you seems like a dream come true and nothing in this world could be more perfect than the idea of us being together. I don't know how it happened but it did. And I've fallen for you and fallen hard. And I can't help it but I'm head over heels in love with you.


Her glassy eyes were looking into his. A mixture of emotions playing across her face. She'd gotten it. Her answer. She'd gotten him. Her Harshad.


PREETIKA: Kya...Kya kaha tumne?


HARSHAD: That I'm head over heels in love with you.


He looked at her shocked face and knew that he'd done it. He had ruined everything. Even their friendship. She'd hate him now. Hate him for being the way he was. He should've stopped himself from spilling out all this...


HARSHAD: Preetika! Look I'm--I'm sorry. I shouldn't have said-- I--I'll go.


He started to lift himself off her.


And it happened so suddenly that he couldn't even process it.


Preetika grabbed him by his collar and smashed her lips with his.


He froze.

Time seemed to stop and it was just him and her.

He remembered how fascinated he was of her lips and how he always thought she could never be his.

So now even though he could feel them against his, so soft, he could taste her strawberry lip gloss, so sweet, he could not believe it was really happening.

Only when she started to pull back did he realize what he should be doing and responded.

They lay there for what seemed like an eternity, in each other's arms.

***

Preetika: Why didn't you say before? Stupid, Idiot. Learn something fron Zain.


HARSHAD (scratches his head): He's not even confessed.


Preetika: But he will. Tumhari tarah bheega billa nahi hoga.


HARSHAD: Haan bhai. Ab tumhari tarah khookhar bhookhi sherni ki tarah mein tum par kood kar aise kiss to nahi kar sakta. Darpok hi samjho mujhe.


SOMEONE: Ye Zain Aliya kahaan hain? Bhejo bhai. Harshad ko bheja tha, Kho gaya who bhi. Marwaoge yaar sab!


Harshad (giving his hand out to Preetika ): Make out session khatam ho gaya hai to chale, MEC?


Preetika: MEC?


He gives his signature smirk.


HARSHAD: Malika-E-Colors.


Preetika: Yuck, MEC? Like seriously? You couldn't think of anything better? Don't even try copying Zain. He's still tops my Most Wanted list. His MKB is much better than this shit of yours.


HARSHAD: Allah Tuaba! You prefer Maha Khatarnaak Bhootni to Malika-E-Colors? Haye, kis ladki ke chakkar me phas gaya mein bechara.


PPREETIKA: You still have a chance.


HARSHAD: I'm a very firm person. Ek baar commitment kar li, to apne aap ki bhi nahi sunta hoon.


PREETIKA (giggles): Ab Chale?


Preetika took his hand and intertwined their fingers and headed out to shoot the first of infinitely many scenes she had to shoot for the day.

But as long as she had Harshad by her side, she could do it.

And she would.

--THE END--

*EXCLUSIVE DIMPLE AND VIKAAS FLASKBACK*

VIKAAS: You are helping Harshad and Preetika to get together?

DIMPLE: Haan..Koi problem?

VIKAAS: No I just thought th--

DIMPLE: That I'm hitting on Harshad? Nah.

VIKAAS (expectantly): So you don't like him then?

DIMPLE (dreamily): No. I'm a one man woman. I've already given my heart to someone else. (To herself) But he doesn't seem to return the feelings back.

VIKAAS (whose heart deflated like a balloon): Oh...Achha.

He looked away.

But little did he know that the only person Dimple had ever given her heart to was sitting right in front of her, oblivious to the fact...


Another Lovestory was paving it's way...


Love was in the air...on the sets of Beintehaa. ❤️


--THE ACTUAL END--

I know this Jodi is so Atpati types...but this was like...just needed. I donno why, but it was.


I typed 10 freakin' pages for you!

So don't be mean. You have to Comment. It's not a request anymore. It's a threat 😈


Aliya being mad at Zain and making him confess and then the kiss--This scene was inspired by my Dearest Darling Alamu (Ammu1369). ThankYou man. 😃

I suck at writing all that kissing stuff. 🤢


ThankYou for reading my work. I love you all for your Likes&&Comments.

I'd love to write more. ❤️

A ZaYa TS this time. Can't take a risk again with a HarshIka TS. 😆

Please add me to your Buddy List for updates. PMing is tough otherwise.


ThankYou and Adieu..for now.

Edited by SabrinaMalik - 11 years ago

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