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Posted: 11 years ago

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1300 words hogaya... bas thoda sa editing karna hai


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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 25


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"Bohot acha lag raha hai meera tumko khush dekh kar. Hamesha aisa hi rehna" told geet who is preparing a sweet dish as instructions given by meera. Meera smiled and told "Geet, i think kanhaji sent you and your family in my life so that i can meet my maa and brother so soon. If you guys are not there dont know what might had happened to me" told meera. Geet smiled and told "Sach meera khurana family did so much to me too. When I was all alone in this whole world they took me to their house and even now they gave me a new life. Aaj mai jo kuch bhi hu uski wajah mere maan, maa aur dev ki wajah se hu. I don't know what might have happened to me if khurana's are not there with me" told geet, a layer of tears formed in her eyes. Today she is living a happy life because of them, when she was 10 years old she lost her parents and her relatives were greedy about her money. Maan's mom who knew that took geet to her house. And before dying geet's dad has written a WILL in which till geet will become 18 years maan's mom is the guardian. When maan's father expired, mom explained maan everything about their property and geet's property. Maan along with his business, he is taking care of geet's property. On the day of their marriage maan has transferred everything on her name.

Maan and dev who came to kitchen listened geet's talk with meera, they both looked at each other and sighed thinking madam is getting emotional. They went to geet and hugged her on either side. Geet wiped off her tears and smiled at them. "What you guys are doing here? You go i will prepare this and come" told geet. "Tum aaj kal kuch jyada hi rone lagi geet, aur tum yeh kya bakwas bol rahi ho hmmm? Come on geet tum meri sherni wo jagao aur yeh rondu shakal band karo. Pata hai rote hue tum bhootni jaisi dikhti ho" commented dev making yucky face. Geet smiled and punched dev on his chest "Bas tum kuch jyada hi bol rahe ho. Beware Mr. Dev mai tere baare mein maan ko batati hu" threatened geet. Dev pouted and told "That's not fair" Geet smiled and turned off the stove. "Who will taste first?" asked geet looking at maan and dev. "Nahi baba mujhe risk nahi lena" teased dev. "Who asked you, I asked maan and meera" retorted geet. "Bhai ko hi khana padega" told dev. "Don't tease your bhabhi much dev, agar wo sherni ban gayi tho tut ho gaya" maan supported geet. Geet smiled sweetly at maan and filled a small bowl with sweet, she took a spoon and fed maan with her hands. Maan happily ate and relished the sweet. "Kodak moment" smiled dev. "Kaisa hai?" asked geet curiously, maan is calm. Geet looked at meera pouting. Meera smiled at her, she is such a baby at times. "Dev, shayad acha nahi hai. Yeh tum hi khalena" told geet.

Maan laughed out loud seeing dev's reaction, he opened his mouth wide gaping at geet as she is not human but some alien. "Bohot acha banayi geet, its superb. My geet is perfect in everything" told maan and looked outside kitchen and smirked seeing angry dadi. Seeing maan's look on her she left from there don't want to face his wrath now. "Sachi?" asked an excited geet and maan came back from his thought and smiled at her. "Muchi" told maan. Geet's smile widened and she hugged maan excitedly. "Mujhe bhi chahiye" asked dev making baby face. Geet took a spoon full of kheer and fed dev as well as meera. She thanked meera for helping her in preparing sweet. "Meera, aunty ghar par hai ya hospital mei?" asked maan. "Maa ghar par hi hai. Oops I totally forgot why I came here. Actually maa asked me to inform you all that today you all are coming for lunch to our house and Mr. Khurana maa's strict order that you should not go to office today" told meera. Maan sighed and replied "Ok I am not going and waise we will have breakfast and go there together" "Ummm actually I need to go to hospital, I have some work there" told meera. "Hospital?" questioned geet. "Ok let me clarify you, I came here with dad just to help him in his presentation and I am not an architect but a Psychiatrist" told meera.

Dev coughed as he is in total shock while geet is impressed. "And I am gonna take up a case as per maa's wish" told meera looking at maan. Maan stiffened hearing meera "Mr. Khurana, I need you to come in the evening to hospital once" told meera. Now maan fully understood meera is taking up his maa's case and he felt very happy. "Sure meera and thank you very much" thanked maan. "Ok I need to leave now" told meera and bid good bye to everyone. "Maan, why you should go?" asked geet confused. "Meera's patient is none other than maa" told maan. Geet and dev are shocked and delighted. They have a confidence that meera will surely cure their maa. "Maan, kya mai bhi aao aapke saath?" asked geet hoping maan will say yes. "No geet you have some other work to do which I will tell later and dev you are also not coming. Dadi is here now and we can't take risk try to understand" told maan. They both nodded feeling sad, they want to see their maa but anyways they don't want more problems as the main problem is there at home in the form of dadi.

Dev went to office and maneet are in their room. Maan is looking at some papers while geet is arranging her things in the cupboard. "Maan, how dirty your cupboard is?" commented geet admiring his everything which are kept in place but she just commented to gain his attention as maan is totally engrossed in some papers. "Nice try geet, wait for 10 minutes dear I am coming these are important papers and let me check and come" replied maan without looking at her. Geet pouted and left her work in the middle and sat beside maan. "For you work is important than me" cribbed geet like a small baby. "No dear, these papers are related to you and I want to make sure everything is perfect" told maan. Geet looked at him shocked and asked "What? Do you want me to study MBA or something or what? Then I am so sorry Mr. Khurana I am not going to do that" told a scary geet. "Oh just shut up geet, why would I ask you to study further when I know how much you are interested in your studies" replied maan. "That's good, for a second I was so worried" sighed geet while maan rolled his eyes and concentrated on the file. "Completed and geet here are your property papers" told maan and handed over those papers to her. "From today you are MD of HKC" told maan. Geet for a second didn't understand what maan is saying. What does he mean my her property papers, geet read the whole document as she is totally confused.

When she completed reading, she understood everything. "Maan, what is the need of all this? Do you think I am behind your money" asked geet. Geet said out of blue. "Ha geet mai nahi chata hut um mera saara paisa apni shopping mei katam karde isiliye tumari property tumko de rahi hu" taunted maan. "Very funny" replied geet and made a face. She gave those papers to maan and got up. "Yeh kya, its yours geet" told maan. "Oh come on maan you know I don't need all this and I am not interested too. Yeh sab mera hai iska matlab yeh sab aapka bhi hai na. Papa ko bhi nahi mujhe bhi aap par poora barosa hai so please" geet walked towards maan and told "MD aap ho ya mai koi farak padne nahi wala kyun kaam tho sirf aap hi karte ho. I will also work but I want to spend all my time with you for some more days. After that I will start working with you" "You are too smart hmmm. All work for me and all enjoyment are yours" commented maan and pulled her towards him. Geet landed on his lap, she held maan's shirt tight so that she will not fell down. "You will get punishment for this" whispered maan. Geet tried to get up but tightened his grip on her. "Maan, chodo na koi aajayega" told geet which came out like a whisper. "Koi nahi ayega" told maan. Maneet lost in their passion, their lips are locked and they were in other world forgetting all their worries.

After sometime they broke the kiss due to lack of air, geet hugged maan tight feeling shy and she is glowing in his love. "Maan aap bohot besharam hogaye ho" commented geet. "Kya karu meri biwi ho hi itni kubsurat" replied maan. They spend in their room till afternoon and arranged their cloths and geet arranged few things in the room as per her choice and few things as per maan's choice. "Maan, waha hamara shaadi ka picture frame hoga aur yaha hamara full family ka" told geet showing the places while maan nodded like a obedient child. "Geet, you are the only one who give orders to MSK" "Aur nahi tho kya wo haq sirf mera hai and the great MSK will follow my orders as he have no other option" retorted geet. "Ha ha dekh lena jab office aogi na tab pata chalega MSK kya cheez hai. Log darte hai mujhe dekke" maan tried to scare her. "Maan aap bhi na bohot comedy karte ho, geet sherni hai sherni kisi se nahi darti" retorted back geet with full attitude. Their cute nhok-jhok continued for some more time and they both went to ramya's house after getting ready. While dev called maan and told he will be there in half an hour. Ramya came home early with meera and krish didn't go to college as his DB and geet are coming.

They had lunch and enjoyed while every teased maneet and geet is blushing profusely. In the evening when everyone are in the hall relaxing by watching tv. Meera messaged maan "Mr. Khurana I need to talk to you" maan checked the message and looked at meera. Maan got up and walked towards garden and meera followed him.

Precap: Maan-meera talk.


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Edited by _GoldenStarz_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeahh me first
Awesome update di
maan geet dev ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hai
aww love the way dev teased geet to bring back into sherni mood
haayee geet jab maan ne kuch nahi kaha toh kheer dev khayega nd dev face was funny
oye dadi itna mat jal warna ash ban jayegi
aww love maaneet moments
geet aur main kitne similar hai even i don't like studies
haayee love maaneet scene unka love aisa hai usse jitna baar bhi pado wapas read karne ka mann karta hi hai
wow meera is going to take case of maan's maa
nd all have believe that they will get their maa soon
oww geet aur dev ko bhi maan se milna tha but snake ko akele ghar par nahi chod sakte iss liye dono nahi jaa payenge
oo meera want to talk to maan
kya baat karni hai
Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago

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