Ashlok SS-Bandhan (Part18...pg146)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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meerb dear post it soon I die to read it plzzz...

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meerb dear post it soon I die to read it plzzz...
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thank u sooo much dear for ur so much love...
But i will be extremely busy in coming days...as i have lots of assessments ...so it will be bit difficult to update soon...i m sorry for that...but hope u will understand my problem...
And if in between i get even a little bit of time i will update it...pakka...🤗

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ashloks pakka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I will be wait ur next part 😉

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I will be wait ur next part 😉

thank u sooo much sweety ...i m really blessed to have readers like u...love u😳😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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lovely story meerab...👏

read it in one go n m lost in ur story... ashlok are so cute n adorable...hope swati does not create any new problem for them...

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Originally posted by: naina..
<font color="#990033">lovely story meerab...👏</font>
<font color="#990033">read it in one go n m lost in ur story... ashlok are so cute n adorable...hope swati does not create any new problem for them...</font>

thank u soo much sweety

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Ashlok SS-Bandhan

Part 14

After confessing everything infront of astha shlok dropped her home...there was complete silence between the two...even astha didn't say him bye nor shlok was having the courage to say something...
The day was passing slowly for both of them...after astha reached her home she silently entered her room...as heer was not back yet...she cried a lot...
Astha:shlok main ne kabhi nahi socha tha ke aap jaisa insaan kabhi paisey ko rishtoon sey ziada importance de sakta hai...ab main kya karoon???...main yeh bhi nahi keh sakti shlok ke aap ne mujhey dhoka diya hai...mera yaqeen thora hai...kyun ke aap ne tu sab sach keh diya hai mujhse...par ab main kya faisala karoon shlok...agar main aap ko haan bolon gi tu shayed baba ko naraz kar doon gi...
Her tears were flowing when avdhoot entered her room..but it was a shock when she saw her daughter badly crying...
Avdhoot:astha...beta kya hua tujhey???...ro kyun rahi hai???...he sat next to her on bed ...asking her again and again that why she is crying like this...and astha just hugged him...
Avdhoot smiled...arey pagli kal tu sirf teri sagai haina...aur tu abhi se itney ansoo baha rahi hai...he wiped her tears and kissed her forehead...
Astha:baba main aap se kuch baat karna chahti hoon...shayed aaj aayi zinda hoti tu main uss se kehti ...she was continuously sobbing...
And slowly she told avdhoot everything about shlok...on knowing about shlok avdhoot got little worried and a bit angry tooo...
Avdhoot:aisi baat thi tu shlok ko rishta karney se pehley kehni chahiye thi...
Astha:lekin baba shlok ne yeh baat sagai se pehley bol di na...shlok ne hamein dhoka diya hum aisa bhi tu nahi keh saktey na...ghaltiyan tu sab se hi ho jati haina ...she said in a low voice while sobbing continuously...she was not understanding that why she is defending shlok infront of her father...
Avdhoot:astha...beta aik taraf tu shlok ka sach jaan kar rooo rahi hai aur saath uss ki support bhi kar rahi hai...issey main kya samjhoon???...
Again tears fell from her beautiful eyes...baba main aap ka faisala jannana chahti hoon...jo aap bolen gey main waisa hi karoon gi...
Avdhoot:mera faisala...mera faisala yehi hai keh ab yeh shaadi nahi ho sakti...he said in a angry tone...
Her beautiful hazel eyes once again filled with tears...her face was becoming pale now...
Avdhoot:main ne tu apna faisala suna diya...par lagta hai tujhe mera faisala pasand nahi aaya...apna chera tu dekh aik dum kaisey murja gaya hai ...
Astha:nahi baba merey liye aap se bardh kar koi nahi hai...mujhey aap ka faisala manzoor hai...
Avdhoot:phir tu theek hai astha...tu ne khud hi keh diya ke tujhey apney aur shlok ke rishtey se koi faraq pardhta hi nahi..tu ab aisey main yeh shaadi ho ya na hooo koi bari baat nahi hai...he said with a naughty smile...
Astha:nahi baba mera yeh matlab nahi tha...
Avdhoot:matlab keh tujhey faraq pardhta hai...tu karna chahti hai shlok se shaadi????...
Astha:ji..her eyes widened in shock...par abhi tu aap ne kaha na keh aap shlok ko maaf nahi kar saktey...
Avdhoot:par agar tu maaf karey gi shlok ko tu kuch ho sakta hai...
Astha:baba aap kya kehna chahtey hain...mujhey kuch samjah nahi aa raha...she said wiping her tears...
Avdhoot:seedhi si baat hai main dekh raha hoon ke meri beti dheerey dheerey shlok ko pasand karney lagi hai...aur yeh baat shayed tujhey khud ko bhi nahi pata...par tera baba hoon na iss liye terey dil ki har baat samajh sakta hoon...aur rahi baat shaadi ki tu wo tu...he stopped and lifted her chin...
Astha looked into his baba's eyes with surprise to know what his answer is...
Avdhoot smiled...theek samajh rahi hai tu apney baba ko...teri aur shlok ki shaadi par mujhey koi aitraaz nahi hai...main ne kab ka maaf kar diya ussey...
Astha:aap jantey they ...shlok ne aap se bhi yeh sab bataya hai????...she was quite confused now...
Avdhoot:shlok ne nahi...mujhey tu niranjan aur anjali vahini ne shlok ke barey main pehley hi bata diya tha...aur rahi baat shlok ki tu uss ki umar main...main bhi bohat ambitious hua karta tha...meri bhi bohat dosti hoti thi lardhkiyon se par jab teri maan meri zindagi main aayi tu aik baat samajh gaya tha main ...ke kuch cheezein zindagi main waqai anmol hoti hain...jaisey shlok aaj yeh baat samajh gaya hai ke wo lardhki swati nahi balkey tu uss ke liye khaas hai...waisey sach bolon thora khussa mujhey bhi aaya tha sach jaan kar...par jab maine apney past key barey main socha aur apney aaj ko socha ...tu dil ko yaqeen ho gaya keh zaroori nahi keh aik ghalti ke badley insaan se jeeney ka haq hi cheen liya jaye...aur ab itni piyaari piyaari lardhkiyon se koi kab tak door rahey ga...he teased her daughter...

Astha who was still hugging her father ...smiled and looked his face with surprise...baba aap aisey huya kartey they apni jawani main...
Avdhoot laughed...tha tu par tu yeh heer ko mat batana warna tu iss umar main mera mazaq ban jaye ga...
Astha with a big smile on her face politely said...nahi bolon gi baba...yeh aap ka aur mera secret hai...
Avdhoot placed his hand on her head ...hamesha aisey hi muskarati reh...kush reh...mujhey yaqeen hai shlok tujhey mujhse bhi ziada pyaar de ga...tujhey hamesha kush rakhe ga...ab aik baat ki khushi hai ke agar mujhey kuch ho bhi gaya tu shlok...before he could say next word astha placed her hand on his mouth...and with teary eyes she said..
Astha:aisa mat boliye baba...aap ko kabhi kuch nahi ho ga...aur agar aap ne aisi baat dobara ki tu main aap se naraz ho jaon gi...
Avdhoot:theek hai ab aisa kuch nahi bolon ga...akhir main tujhey naraz nahi karna chahta...he laughed patting her cheek...
Astha:par baba agar aap sach jantey they tu aap ne merey saath itna mazaq kyun kiya...she made a innocent face...
Avdhoot naughtily said ...tu pata kaisey chalta ke tujhey iss rishtey se koi faraq pardta hai ya nahi..he lifted her face to look into her eyes...hearing these words ...astha hide her face in his baba's chest with shyness...''please baba ''
Avdhoot laughed seeing her daughter's shyness...
Avdhoot:Main iss rishtey ke liye maan gaya hoon...par ab tujhey shlok ko aik surprise dena hai...
Astha:surprise???.kaisa surprise???..aap konse surprise ki baat kar rahey hain baba???...
Avdhoot:tujhey aik chota sa mazaq karna hai kal uss ke saath...he told her about what she has to do...
Astha:nahi baba yeh mujhse nahi hoga ...aap jantey hona...
Avdhoot:arey shlok se kal sagai hai teri shlok ke saath...uss se baat nahi karey gi tu kaisey samjhey ga woh terey dil ki baat...ab jaisey aaj uss ki baat sun kar tu ne aisey hi ansoon bahaye hongey aur ussey laga ho ga key tu uss lardhki ke baarey main jaan kar roo rahi...par ussey tu yeh pata hi nahi hoga keh tu uss ke liye rooo rahi hai...kyun ke tu apney baba aur shlok ke beech faisala nahi kar pa rahi thi...pagli kahin ki...
Astha:par aap ho na jo mujhey hamesha sahi faisaley ki taraf le aatey ho...
Avdhoot:haan yeh tu hai...par astha tu mujhey emotional kar ke bach nahi sakti haan...merey liye na sahi...lekin niranjan aur anjali ji ke liye tu tujhey yeh karna hi hoga...akhir itni si saza tu banti hai shlok ke liye...
Astha:baba yeh ghalat baat hai...shlok ji ko bura lagey ga...
Avdhoot fake out anger...bus apney baba ki itni si baat bhi nahi maan sakti tu...aur abhi se shlok ki itni fikr hai tujhey..he turned towards the other side...
Astha with little confusion agreed to make her baba happy...
Astha:theek hai baba sirf aap logon ke liye main kisi tarah yeh sab kar loon gi...but sirf aik baar...ok...
Avdhoot gave a loud laughter and hugged her ..ok beta..yeh hui na baat...ab tu dekhna subah shlok kaisey shocked reh jaye ga...

Precap:Shlok was standing behind her...making her heart beats louder and louder...
Shlok:Astha...aap ne bhi un sab ka saath diya...mujhey aap se aisi umeed nahi thi...he slowly whispered in her ear...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago