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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

sorry,cud'nt comment on time as I was on vacation.very dff theme n characterization.its very rare 2 find village stories.Liked NA n Anjali here.they r so sweet here.And avjoot rich.Too good.But missed Kalindi.Shlok in love with Swati.But actually its not luv.without knowing her identity he fell 4 aastha.that wound scene...he keeping his lips on her wound...the final fall scene were so romantic.their proper meeting was so good.Now shlok has decided 2 marry aastha 4getting swati.But will it b that easy?How will swati react?How will astha react when she cums 2 know abt swati?I feel there is something fishy abt swati.Here there is swati.At least here plz put ur imaginary swati's pic.its depressing that in d show they r not showing swati's face.At least u show her.plzzz

Thank u sooo much dear for this deatailed comment ...i m happy that u liked it🤗...reg. pics...i will put pics of all main characters in the start of the os in my free time...as putting the pics for every update takes lots of time...🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
I understood that u r finding it hard 2 put pics in every update.Bcz usually u put pics.All characters r familiar except the friends.If they r just random friends its fine.but since swati is an imp character I want u 2 put her pic soon.

Originally posted by: meerab...

Thank u sooo much dear for this deatailed comment ...i m happy that u liked it🤗...reg. pics...i will put pics of all main characters in the start of the os in my free time...as putting the pics for every update takes lots of time...🤔

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I understood that u r finding it hard 2 put pics in every update.Bcz usually u put pics.All characters r familiar except the friends.If they r just random friends its fine.but since swati is an imp character I want u 2 put her pic soon.

ok sweety i will do this thing today or tomorrow...😳 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovwe this onew specaiily that shlotha sxcewnwe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2

lovwe this onew specaiily that shlotha sxcewnwe

thanks a lot dear...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ashlok SS-Bandhan

Part 10



Astha was still in his tight hold when shlok questioned her...
Shlok:mujhey aik baat samajh nahi aati astha ...aap itna girti rehti hain tu mujhse milney se pehley aap ko kaun sambhalta tha...
Astha slowly opened her closed eyes and her hazel ones meet the pair of dark brown eyes which were staring her ...waiting for their answer...but she remained quiet...
After a short eyelock...shlok helped her in standing and asked her...should we go now...and she statred walking...without looking at him for even once...
On reaching the car shlok opened the front door for her and without saying a single word she sat in the car...shlok joined her on the opposite seat and they left for shopping...
As they left...heer and muskaan who were hiding behind the tree gave a hi five to each other...
Heer :plan successful muskaan...ab in dono ko aik dosrey ko kareeb se jannaney ka mauqa mil jaye ga...
Muskaan:haan...issi bahaney kuch baat tu karein gey yeh dono...
Heer:chal humein ab shopping ke liye jana hai...
Muskaan:par hum time par kaisey pohanch payen gey????...
Heer:jab main terey saath hoon tu fikr kyun karti hai...tu dekhna hum shortcut rastey se un dono se bhi pehle pohanch jayen gey...she winked...

Shlok was driving slowly as he wanted this time to stop here ...he wanted to speak with astha...he wanted to know more about her but she was quietly watching outside or may be she was hiding her nervousness for being alone with him ...
Shlok was thinking ways that how to start the conversation with her...should i ask her for radio??..should i ask her about her favorite dress or colour or anything else???...or should i directly told her that i wanted her to speak with me?...
Finally he gathered some courage and spoke...astha...
And she slowly turned her face towards his...''aap ne kuch kaha shlok''...her heart squeezed at her innocent way of responding to him...
Shlok:astha aap kya kar rahi hain????he asked in a stupid way...
Astha was baffled by his question...ji...main..main bahir dekh rahi thi...
Her answer made him to smile...main bhi kitna idiot hoon na aik question bhi theek se nahi poch sakta ...pochna kuch aur chahta tha pocha kya????..shlok cursed himself for behaving so awkwardly...
A small kid came infront of their car...and shlok suddenly applied brake making astha to bump into him...
SHLOK:astha ...r u ok...
Astha:main theek hoon...and soon she settled back on her seat now she was avoiding eye contact with shlok...and this went noticed by shlok tooo...
He extended his hand and placed on hers ...
His this move changed something inside astha...her small hand stiffened beneath his huge one...
Shlok:astha mujhey lagta hai ke humein aik doosrey ko jannana chahiye...aik doosrey ko waqt dena chahiye...aur iss ke liye zaroori hai ke hum strangers ki tarah behave karna bandh kar den...aik doosrey sey baat karein...
Astha who was peviously looking into his eyes lowered her eyes...
Shlok:boliye na astha...aap ko nahi lagta ke main sahi keh raha hoon????...
She nodded in yes...
Now he was somewhat satisfied that she responded to him positively...
On the way shlok asked about her qualifications and astha gave him shock by telling that she is about to complete her masters soon...shlok was not expecting that her qualification would be equal to his...
Astha also apologized for heer's joke...and shlok asked her not to apologize for such small things...as he liked her cousin's sense of humour...

Soon they reached the shopping centre...shlok opened the car door for her...
As they entered the shop heer and muskaan were also there to welcome them...
Astha and shlok both questioned them that how they are here before them...and they again made some excuses to fool them...
Anjali also appreciated heer's plan to bring them closer...

All females were selecting sagai dress for astha while shlok was selecting his dress with sojal...

Sojal:shlok tujhey tu koi dress pasand hi nahi aa raha...itna time tu tumharey dada ne bhi kabhi nahi lagaya...
Shlok:vahini...kuch acha hoga tu pasand karun ga na...he was rejecting dresses because his eyes were fixed on astha...
Sojal:aisa tu nahi ke tujhey apni honey wali patni ki pasand ke mutabiq dress select karni hai...she said when she saw shlok staring astha who was going to trial room now...
Shlok:vahini aap ne tu merey dil ki baat keh di...yaad hai varad dada bhi shaadi se pehley kaisey aap ke aagey peechey ghooma kartey they...he tried to tease her...
Sojal:chup ho ja..sab kya sochen gey...
Shlok:theek hai...he said while picking some dresses...chalo vahini main yeh try kar ke aata hoon...
As he was about to enter one of the trial rooms...suddenly electricity went off ...he turned to see what happened when someone informed that its some minor light problem and will be solved in few seconds ...shlok also heard a door click while listening to the man...thinking that the person in the trial room has left and its free now he entered there and locked it...when suddenly the light came back and the sight before him was shocking...astha was standing there...her expressions were telling that she is extremely scared ...on seeing shlok she just rushed to him and hugged him tightly...
His arms also went around her and he took her in a soothing hug...he was worried seeing her like that ...''kya hua astha aap itni pareshan kyun hain???''...

Astha:mujhey andherey se bohat dar lagta hai ...main bahir janey wali thi ke kisi ne zorr se darwaza khola ...mujhey laga ke koi zabardasti ander aana chahta hai...main darr gayi thi shlok...
Shlok was cursing himself for being sooo careless...''atleast i should have knocked for once before entering here...she was already tensed and i made her scared tooo...i m totally idiot''...

Shlok:dekhiye pareshan mat hoyiye...woh koi aur nahi main hi tha...actually mujhey laga ke trial room khali hogaya hai...yaha basement ki light jo chali gayi thi...i m really sorry mujhey knock karna chahiye tha...he gently moved his hand on her shoulder to make her relax...
When astha realized that she is in shlok's arms she at once moved a step back...
It was when shlok noticed that she is looking breathtaking in that skyblue and silver lehenga ...his eyes traveled down her whole existence...
The realization that she is not wearing any dupatta made astha really nervous and she folded her hands immediately in shyness and turned around...
Shlok was smitten by her beauty...he slowly came tooo closer to her that she was able to hear him breathing...
Shlok held her from her shoulders and nuzzled her hair...his hands slowly moved on every inch of her bare milky arms as the blouse was having extra small sleeves...
His touch was magical...and she was gasping for air now..as his hard mascular body was almost against her soft one...
He moved her hair to one side and unzipped her blouse a bit ...giving her a moist kiss on her exposed skin...making her to shiver under his effect...

But the very next minute shlok realized that he is day dreaming and still standing away from her and she was also facing the mirror due to her shyness ...he picked her dupatta from the stand behind him on the door and reached close to her and wrapped that dupatta around her...and gave her way to go outside...

Astha was really moved by his actions...her eyes were clearing saying her feelings...but with silence she stepped out of the trial room...
Today in the true sense she was attracted towards him...her heart was feeling something for him...


Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. Really like astha. She's so timid with him. She's so endearing. Thanks for the PM. Will be waiting for the next update as always.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...dat was a really really really sweet update!!
One request..can u pls make aastha talk more when dey get known wid each odr!
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Posted: 11 years ago
really nice update thank you, it's a really nice and sweet story, thank you for the daily updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
ashlok part was so romantic..
aaj to shlok ne astha ka dil chu liya

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