Dark Love! by Piyu(Priyal) (Rishbala Fanfiction) Chapter 11 [30/08] - Page 2

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Nice start. Pl. Continue and pm me.
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curious beginning!

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Congratulations on your story Piyu 🤗 Lovely prologue ❤️ Looking forward to read more 😳 Continue soon. PM me 😳

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Thank you for the nice comments on the prologue 😳 I'm glad you guys are liking my story 😊 Here goes the 1st chapter.

Dark Love !

Chapter 1- The Cold Treatment

Madhubala regained her consciousness as someone threw a bucket full of ice cold water at her.
The water was too cold and she started shivering.

Firstly she was mobilized and then she slowly remembered that she had been KIDNAPPED !
As if sensing her thoughts the person said


"Yes sweetheart you are kidnapped! And you are going to be under my control from now on just like a pupet! Get it? "


I moved my head left and right to say no.
The next movement he pulled the neck of my dress and almost poured in a bucket full of ice.


"Switch on the AC and keep it at 16 C"


"BE STRONG MADHU! BE STRONG!" She mentally told herself

She felt as if her chest was burning. The ice blocks had not melted yet.

"So what is the answer Madhubala?"

She turned my head to the other side

"Bring in three coolers and keep it all around her"

She was shocked.

"WHAT SHOULD I DO NOW?"


Soon enough the coolers were brought and she could no longer endure the cold.
She felt as if would die of the coldness or probably I would get pneumonia.

After some five minutes of torture the coolers were switched off and taken aside.

He tightened the rope which was around her stomach and it hurt her badly. His hands accidentally touched her bare shoulder and she jerked off.
She cursed myself for wearing the dress as she realised what was going to happen next.
It was a strap less dress which reached till half of her thighs and it was a real tight fit showing off the curves.
He kept his hands on her shoulder and was moving down when she started moving my head vigorously to say okay!

He chuckled but did not stop.
He moved his hands over her forearm then her arms and it slowly reached back and untied the rope which tied her hands back.
He ordered them to switch the heater on and to give me a blanket.
He removed the blindfold and I slowly opened my eyes trying to adjust to the light.
I saw a handsome man in front of me
He had a perfect jaw line and his eyes they were chocolate brown and were mesmerizing.
His eyes held my eyes captive.

He snapped his fingers and I came out of my trance.


"Like this treatment Madhubala? Don't worry then! I have thousands of different types of TREATMENTS for YOU IF YOU DO NOT FOLLOW MY INSTRUCTIONS! And so you will never be bored by any one kind of treatment!"

I gave him an whatever look

His next reply shocked me.




Edited by drashtifan1 - 11 years ago

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