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Posted: 11 years ago
One of my fav stories!!!
Beautiful update as always ❤️
Please update all your other stories soon... Pleaseee
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kays94

One of my fav stories!!!
Beautiful update as always ❤️
Please update all your other stories soon... Pleaseee


Updated Two Of My Stories Keany! 😃
Bundle Of Joy May Be I'll Update Today!! 😛 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay so where do I start from?
PHENOMENAL
Okay I'm totally in love with this story
You're doing an outstanding job
I really like virika's relationship
I love the bond which Jeevika share with Viren's family
Okay I wanna see virika on honeymoon please
Thanks a lot for lovely update and all the pms
Btw when are we getting the next pm?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Haju-

Okay so where do I start from?

PHENOMENAL
Okay I'm totally in love with this story
You're doing an outstanding job
I really like virika's relationship
I love the bond which Jeevika share with Viren's family
Okay I wanna see virika on honeymoon please
Thanks a lot for lovely update and all the pms
Btw when are we getting the next pm?


May Be Tonight Haju...😛 And About HoneyMoon...Hmm...I Think There's Still Some Time...😆

Missed You Comments!! 😭 😛

All The Best For Your Exams Buddy!! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update ya
i love this story
so much like i cant express
the update was superb
as i asked you to put some fight in between virika
it was nice fight and cute fight also
but it ended so soon in between them
they are so perfect viren asking sorry and jeevika
kitne jaldi se maff kar di
poor viren he was feeling bad to see the angry jeevika
and crying jeevika
their love is making them strong day by day
total
amazing
superb
fantastic
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
really loving d sweet romance of virika😳nicely written

im kind of loving dis story now read all d parts today fab job ❤️
continue soon
thanx for d pm
Edited by --Ayesha-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...I really love it
Love virika's relationship in this story...its pure magical love story :)
Loved each and every thing :)
Amazing
superb
fabulous
Fantastic
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter ~ 18

Author's POV

Viren Entered The House Sneezing,Capturing The Attention Of Mom And Dad And Virat Who Settled Down On The Dining Table.

Va - "Why Did You Get Drenched In This Rain Viren?" She Said Placing Hand On Viren Forehead Just To Check Temperature.
V - "My Car Broke Down In The Middle Of Road, I Parked It Side By, And Hired A Auto..."
Viren Said Placing His Stuffs And Settling On The Couch. "Jeevika!? Can I Get I Coffee Please?" Viren Called Out To Which Everyone Giggled.
Va - "I'll Get It Viren, Go Change Yourself First..."
V - "But Why Did You Guys Laugh? And Mom, Jeevika Can Just Get My Coffee You Rest..."
Vi - "Ehhhmm... Bhai? Did The Fever Get To Your Brain So Early That You Forgot Bhabhi Is In Her Mayka??" Virat Said Teasing Him.
V - "Uhh, I Totally Forgot About It..." Viren Said Embarrassed. He Was So Gotten Used To Her! In Just Few Days Of Marriage. In fact All Of Them. Viren Heard The Trio Saying There Bit Of Little Experience On How They Forgot About Jeevika's Absence.
He Headed To His Room.

It Was Late Night, When Viren Sensed His Phone Vibrating.
"I Knew You Would Be Up At 2 In The Morning!" She Roared. And Viren Sneezed. "What The...Viren? Why Did You Get Drenched In Rain!?"
V - "Hello, I'm Your Husband Not A Servant Madame!"
J - "Your Are Sneezing, I'm Sure You Have A Fever And You're Sitting With That Laptop And Files If Yours? You're Having Holiday Tomorrow Doesn't Mean You'll Not Rest When You're Sick!!"
V - "How About You Bring Down Your FM Meter Wifey?"
J - "Get In Your Bed Now Viren! Out From The Study NOW!!!" She Was Upset. "And I'm Coming Home Tomorrow Morning...!"
V - "Jeevs, This Ain't Needed You Get Back In Monday. I'll Be Fine..."
J - "I Don't Think So!"
V - "Uhh, You don't Think So, I Promise I'll Be Fit By Tomorrow!"
J - "We'll See. Do You Know If Dad Took His Medicines? I Couldn't Sleep Thinking Of It..."
V - "I Guess Yes He Did Have His Medicines." Making A Sad Face "But I Thought You Couldn't Sleep Without Me Next To You...You Know..."
J - "Whatever!!" Trying Not To Let Viren Know That She Was Blushing, And Also, He Was Right! "Now Will You Sleep Please? Good Night!"
V - "Don't Try To Hide Your Feelings Wifey, I Know You Well. Missing Me Huh?"
J - "I'm Hanging Up The Call Viren. Sleep Soon!!"
V - "Okay Okay, Good Night, Love You!!" He Said Kissing The Phone And Hanging Up To Which Jeevika Continued To Blush And Went Off To Sleep.

Jeevika's POV

I Was Woken Up By My Ringtone Playing Harsh Next To My Ears! Displaying Shirley's Name.
J - "Hey, Urgent Meeting?"
S - "Yes Ma'am. I Tried Calling Viren Sir A Lot Of Times It's Switched Off And No One's Receiving The Landline Phone."
J - "When's The Meeting?" I Said Scratching My Head.
S - "It's By 11:30"
J - "Okay, And Now It's 7. Alright Shirley, I'll Send Him. Take Care."
S - "Okay Ma'am Thanks." She Said. I Hung Up The Call Rushed To Shower. Coming Out I Packed My Stuffs And Placed The Bag In Car Trunk. Just As I Got Back Inside Bhabhi Stood There "Hustle Bustle Kyun?"
J - "I Just Gotta Go Back Home. Viren Has A Meeting By Afternoon, And He Had A Fever Yesterday I Guess His Phone Is Switched Off, And No One Else At Home Is Picking Up The Call, So I'll Have To Rush." I Hugged Her Lightly. "Please Inform The Others At Home. I'll Leave."
P - "Alright. Drive Safe. And Call Me When You Reach."
J - "I Will! I'm Sorry..." I Said With A Said Face As I Settled On Drivers Sit.
P - "It's Alright, Next Time You Come, We'll Have Loads Of Fun!!" She Said Kissing My Forehead. I Drove Away.

Parking The Car, I Rushed To The Main Door, Taking Out The Keys I Opened It And Entered To See Everything Silent And Things Lying Here And There. Wow! What Happened To My House? I Kept The Handbag On The Ledge Of The Cabinet And Entered Mom And Dad's Room To Find No One. I Went To Virat's Room To See Him On Laptop. Just As I Entered, "Bhabhi? You Here? When Did You Come? And You Were To Come On Monday Na..?" He Asked Getting Up.
J - "Well I Had To Come Because I Gotta Call From Shirley, Viren Has A Urgent Meeting With His Client. By The Way, Where's Mom And Dad?" I Inquired As I Took A Glance Of His Room! I Had So Much To Do Today.
Vi - "Sorry Bhabhi, For The Mess In Entire House..."
J - "It's Alright..."
Vi - "Mom And Dad Went To Mumbai Yesterday, There'sSome Death Occurred, Some Relative I Guess...They Weren't That Close With Us Though..."
J - "When Are You To Leaving For Office?"
Vi - "In An Hour..."
J - "Okay, Till Then I'll Wake Viren And Prepare Breakfast And Also Your Tiffin. You'll Get Back By Evening Or You'll Be Home Early?" I Asked As I Placed The Pillow On Bed.
Vi - "Evening..."
J - "Okay, Get On The Table In Next 40 Mins, Go Shower First..." I Said Shaking My Head And Heading To Our Room.
Viren Was Sleeping Peacefully. I Placed My Hand On His Forehead For Checking Temperature. Thank God He Had No Fever Now. I Shook Him By His Arms To Which He Opened His Eyes And Sat Up.
V - "Whoa! I'm Dreaming Or You're Here?" He Said Trying To Touch Me With His Index Finger Just To Make Sure Whether I Was There Or Not...I Slapped His Hand To Which He Smiled And Leaned To Kiss Me. Pushing Him By His Shoulders " Viren Get Up You Have A Meeting By 11:30 And Now It's 9:30. Get Up And Get Ready!"
V - "How Did You Know, When I MySelf Have No Idea About It?!?"
J - "Shirley Called Me As Your Phone Was Switched Off, And There Was No One To Receive The Landline Phone..."
V - "Ohhh...So That Explains You're Presence Here? I Thought You Came For Me.." Making Sad Face He Continued.
J - "You're So Cute Viren..Just Like A Little Kid...Anyways Enough Of Your Drama, Chalo Utho Ab..."I Said Making The Bed.
Viren Pulled The Blanket I Was Folding, Took It Over His Head And Slept.
J - "Do Whatever Want. I'm Going To Make Breakfast. If You Wish, Get Up And Get Ready." I Said Putting His Phone On Charging, And Heading To Kitchen.

I Had Prepared The Breakfast And Almost Done With Making The Messy House, Look My Sweet Home!! Virat Entered The Dining Area And Settled.
Vi - "Bhabhi? Where's Bhai?"
Before I Could React Viren Entered Wearing His Blazer, "Your Bhai Is Here..." He Settled On His Seat. I Served The Two, Virat Left Immediately After Having Breakfast, While Viren Retreated To Our Bedroom, And I To The Kitchen. Just As I Cleared The Kitchen Counter, I Heard Viren Calling Me. I Entered The Room To See Him Searching For Something In Drawers.
V - "Jeevs, I Can't Find My Wallet, Car Keys, And Also My Pendrive!"
J - "You Seriously Can't Find Your Things Or You Do It Purposely Viren?" I Edged Towards The Side Table, Opening The Drawer I Removed His Wallet And Handed It To Him. Opening The Drawer Of His Study Table I Removed His Pendrive And Handed It To Him. Just As I Was About To Leave, He Pulled Me Back, Holding Me Firm By My Waist And Planting A Few Kisses On My Shoulder And Neck "I'm Sorry, You Had To Come Here Because Of Me..."
J - "Viren It's 10:30 Already, Leave For The Firm Now. And Also, You're Car Isn't Home Yet, So Take Mine...Before That Lemme Get My Bag Out From The Trunk..."
V - "Okay..." He Said Kissing My Cheek, Turning Them Crimson.
Soon He Left, Leaving Me To Myself Cleaning The House.

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Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ress!!
*unresss!!
yayyy im first once againnn
wowww
wat an update
craving moreee!!
u always want me to want more and more of ur updates
its mindblowing
Viren Said Placing His Stuffs And Settling On The Couch. "Jeevika!? Can I Get I Coffee Please?" Viren Called Out To Which Everyone Giggled.
Va - "I'll Get It Viren, Go Change Yourself First..."
V - "But Why Did You Guys Laugh? And Mom, Jeevika Can Just Get My Coffee You Rest..."
Vi - "Ehhhmm... Bhai? Did The Fever Get To Your Brain So Early That You Forgot Bhabhi Is In Her Mayka??" Virat Said Teasing Him.
V - "Uhh, I Totally Forgot About It..." Viren Said Embarrassed. He Was So Gotten Used To Her! In Just Few Days Of Marriage.
aww
that was cute
blesss
viren embarrassed
aww bless
luved it totally
once again fantastic
cont soon
update quick
cant wait
thnxx!

Edited by sumayyah1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
riddhi... OMG!!!😳
i m in love🤗
the way u wrote it 👏
i am amazed 👏
ur language😊... awesome😳
u made me speechless😃
the simplicity and the way u express ohh...gosh...
sorry cant explain in words!
i m loving it❤️😳
viren is so used to her😳
awwweeeiieee... i m loving it😳
the way she handles house 👏😊
amazing 😊😉
nothing is coming in mind to write it
u r true writer😊
i can say u have a best future👍🏼
the way u write it...superb dear👍🏼
ur all stories are made me carzy 😊
i cant stop thinking about this😉
amazing riddhi 👏⭐️
i love it⭐️
and u too

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago

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