#T2 ASYA ff:vishwaas note pg93 22/5/14 - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
just found ur ff and read it it was amazing
actually saw it a few months ago but ignore bcuz of hindi
but then I got ur index and so glad I did I read it and wow
I could have slapped asad at time he was an ass y was he so
mean well I guess his akduness never left him his friend really did
a number on them zoya could have seen but he was totally blind
hope anaida appi did get jail too for doing wrong a a doctor
plz continue soon as I cant wait to see if zoya will forgive him
plzplz and pm plz
good luck on ur exams
Edited by anopama - 11 years ago
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PART : 43

It was next day when light entered the room and he found himself stir in his sleep . He quickly got up with a jolt when he found anaya sitting behind the sofa and praying to allah he smiled looking at her she was his daughter his beloved daughter . Gesturing anaya with his hand and asking what happened only reply he got was anaya gesturing him back to stay quite ...

he was confused what was happening ? but as soon as anaya told him to hide he like a small puppy followed it and was quite happy he was with his only daughter right now and how much he wanted to tell her that yes i am your abbu little one . But could he ? no not at all ! Zoya will again take him wrong and think that he only wants anaya's custody but no he didn't he wanted his whole family including his zoya his wife ...

his thoughts were broken by a loud shout of of coarse Zoya ...


Z:" Anaya !! ... kha ho tum ? abhi ke abhi bhahar niklo aur apna doodh finish kro ...right now !/.."

asad was left gaping at zoya my god how beautiful she was looking in that suit black white with a touch of green though she looked amazing in every color but today she was just looking hevenly and while holding that glass of milk she was looking damn cute the scene in front of him was just what he needed in his house ...

Z:" anaya ! ? ...baahar aao abhi k abhi aur apna doodh finish kro !..."
i mean it anaya mai tumhe aaj shopping nhi leke jaaungi agar tum nhi nikli abhi k abhi aur hann...
madam aapko yaad ho tho zareen khala ke yaha bhi jaana hai aur agar aapne ye doodh khatam nhi kiya na tho mai aapko nhi leke jaaungi !...


An:'' Nhi ammi !!!..."

next moment anaya jumped up and with a shocked face and asad who stood behind the cupboard could just laugh helplessly at her ...

Z:" anaya ki bachhi !...idhar aao !.."

said zoya while pulling her ears and bringing her in front of her and making her stand in front of her while she was sitting on the bed ...

Z:" achha ji tho aapko lga ki aap apni ammi ko ullu bna lengi haan ?... chalo ab jaldi se ye doodh peelo !...common common jaldi se hume bahr bhi jaana hai yaad haina aapko ! .."

An:" ammi ! ...please na doodh nhi peena !..."

Z:" anaya !!..."

An:" ammi mujhe dhoodh nhi achha lgta kitna ganda sa yaki !"

Z:" achha tho phir tho aapko chocolate bhi nhi pasand hai na maine issme choco flavour mila diya hai ab jaldi se peelo n taiyyar ho jaay ok !..fast fast ! ,,.."


and then anaya gulped doen every bit of that glass and sighed

Z:" good girl !..."

"Ammi ab tho aap ayat se milvane le chalengi na mujhe ?..."

Z:" haan !..."


An:" ammii !..."

with tis she hugged zoya ferociously !...
and zoya stroked her hair she picked anaya up and walked out of the room leaving a teary asad behind !...

after about two hours spending in his room he moved downstairs and saw zoya COOKIng something while anaya was seated on the kitchen slab just very far from the gas and was continuosly talking !...


zoya's hair was tied in a messy bun her dupatta was hanging loose and was irritating her and she couldn't help but move it everytime ...

an:" ammi aur kitna time lgega ...i am hungry !..."

Z:" bas bas hogya meri bachhi ! ...umm anaya please aap ammi ka dupaatta baandh dooge wo mujhe aata gundhne m e problem ho rhi hai ..."

An:" ammi sorry mai uthar nh skti neeche ..."

she said refering to the height while zoya smiled and said ok !

just then the little girl saw her abbu ...

An:" aree asad uncle aap...aap please ammi ko help kr dijiyena unhe problem ho rhi hai khana bnane me ...and mujhe bahut bhook lg rhi hai !..."

Z:" ANAYA !/..."

An:" no ammi i am hungrly ! ...and i need food ..."

asad looked at zoya and entered the kitchen slowly wrapping his arms around zoya and taking off her duppatta delibrately brudhing his hands on her neck and then getting a gasp he tied it in a slant manner and then adjusted her flicks in place and went back to anaya and sat with her zoya not aware of this was still cooking whie asad was admiring her ...

Z:" lo ban gya aap bahar jao and mai abhi aapke liye khana laati hu ok ?..."

An:" no ammi i want here !..."

Z:" anaya ...khana dining table pr hi khaate hai ammi ne aapko samjhaya hai na ..."

A:" khaane do na usse yaha pe zoya !..."

she heard his voice and turned back giving a deadly glare to him and when she was about to tell smthing anaya spoke !

An:" ammi...please na !..."

zoya's haert melted and she instantly picked up the plate washed her hands and settled the food that was momos on anaya's plate with the sauce of spice !...

she fed anaya smiling at her and when she was done she placed her down and said her to go and wash hands and play till when she comes after anaya left zoya closed the door and turned to asad !...\\


A:" zoya !.."

Z:" what the hell are you still doing in my house ?...i asked you to leave mai nhi chahti ki anaya tumhare pass rhe tumhe samajh me nhi aata ... anay sirf meri sirf meri beti hai ...koi haq nhi hai aapka uss par aur khabardar jo uski custody ke liye appeal ki toh aaj hallaat waise nhi hai jaise 5 saal pehle the ...mai ab wo tooti hui zoya nhi rhi ! ...jisse jab chaha pyaar kiya jab chaha phek diya ...mai anaya ko kabhi ptah nhi lagne dungi ki uske abbu kon hai ..."


A:" aur mai usse samjha kr rahunga ki wo meri bhi beti hai ...aur tumse mai ye kehne aaya tha ki maine kuch nhi kiya tha anahida se shaadi tho dur tumhare jaane k theek pehle mujhe pta chala ki usne ye sab kuch krvaaya hai bas ye nhi jaanta tha ki tum tabh bhi mere bachhe ki ammi bne waali ho ...usse police ke haantho chhor kr mai tumhe sab sach btana hi aa rha tha jab ghar pahuncha tho tumhara likha khat mila mujhe ... tumhe dhoondhne bhi gya tha mai ...lekin tum mili hi nhi ...huh kaise milti doosre bus me jo thi ...mai bus tumhe ye bta dena chahhta tha ki jis bus ko tumne zikr kiya uske accident hogya tha and tha's y mujhe nhi pta tha ki tum aur anaya zinda ho...mujhe khaali anaya nhi tum bhi wapas chahiye zoya ...please ghar chalo ...tumhare jaane ke theek 2 saal baad ammi ka bhi inteqaal hogya ...tumhare jaane ke baad ammi toot gyi thi zoya ...please ghar chalo please "


saying this he knealt in front of her both in lots and lots of tears ...


Z:" asad !...ammi ?..."

this was only thing she could manage

A:" haan !...unhe heart attack aaya tha !..."


after 10 mins zoya spoke finally bursting into tears...

Z:" I AM SORRY ! ..."

asad looked up and smiled through his tears and took her for a long hug ...asking for forgiveness and making her understand it was all the fault of the fate !...

A:" zoya chalo hum anaya ko sab bta dete hai !...phir..phir tum apna samaan pack kro ...hum sab wapas jaayenge ..."


Z:" NHI ASAD !!! ...hum aisa nhi kr sakte ! ..."

A:" lekin kyu zoya ?..."

Z:" kyunki anaya apne abbu se NAFRAT krti hai !...maine usse uske 4rth birthday pr sab bta diya tha ye soch kr ki wo bht intelligent hai samajh jaayegi...aur wo sunne k baad wo..."


Asad's face fell immediately

A:'' koi baat nhi zoya tum jaao hum koi na koi raasta nikaal lenge ! ..." 😊😭


she nodded and after what seemed like hours she broke away and went inside to change and get anaya ready !...

they came out wearing a saree (zoya of coarse ) and a frock ( anaya )


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, Hi,

I am the first ...

I loved it 😊

Oh, asad's mom died 😭

zoya and asad reunion 😊

anaya hates her dad 😲

I am sure asad will do something 😉

and thanks for update

after a long time u are updating .

and thanks for pm ,

pm me for next update.

continue soon ...



Edited by aishw09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ressy fr outfits😉
unress

zoya's suit outfit ?(milk scene )


zoya's saree after confrontation !


anaya's outfit !

ignore the makeup and the hair band !

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb part
finally updated
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
EuphoricDamsel thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishw09

Hey, Hi,

I am the first ...

I loved it 😊

Oh, asad's mom died 😭

zoya and asad reunion 😊

anaya hates her dad 😲

I am sure asad will do something 😉

and thanks for update

after a long time u are updating .

and thanks for pm ,

pm me for next update.

continue soon ...




thanks my pm was late ! 😕😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part dear
but anya hates asad...sad
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA


thanks my pm was late ! 😕😆



its ok , 😆

and the dresses are nice .

continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my god...anaya hate her father...poor Asad but anyways they r going back na...I am happy...pls update soon...tnx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishw09





its ok , 😆

and the dresses are nice .

continue soon


tell me something new ~! 😆

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