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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

It's indeed nice story but I feel you have to continue this
And try to realise Arjun what he had done
It's right that he belong to roshini but she is no more
And what he have done with sakshi
Which is not accepted she is alive and need him
So please do continue soon

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shymali

@shymali

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awesome update

liked the update

continue soon

please

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I agree this story needs another part. Arjun should realize that Sakshi loves him and what happened was initiated by him. Sakshi tried to stop him. He should give her what is rightfully hers. Please continue and give the story a happy end. Don't leave Sakshi like this.

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

its a wndrful os.. really emotnl

bt wo kya hai na happy endings ki aadat ho gyi hai.. so plz its a request dat u add anothr prt 2 it.. bcz d way arjun is reactng 2 d situatn is nt ri8.. he needs 2 set thngs ri8

bt dat doesn't mean dat ur stry ws nt gud.. it ws suprb.. its jst dat itna dard bardaasht nhi hota 😉

thnx 4 d pm

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Devangana
I agree this story needs another part. Arjun should realize that Sakshi loves him and what happened was initiated by him. Sakshi tried to stop him. He should give her what is rightfully hers. Please continue and give the story a happy end. Don't leave Sakshi like this.

agree to u

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Shreya

@_lovergirl101_

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey guys! So after the great feedback on my tiny little one shot, I have decided to continue it. I was meant to do it yesterday but workload zyaada ta. 😕 I will post the next part later today when I get back from uni.

Love Shreya xx 😳

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: _lovergirl101_
Hey guys! So after the great feedback on my tiny little one shot, I have decided to continue it. I was meant to do it yesterday but workload zyaada ta. 😕 I will post the next part later today when I get back from uni.

Love Shreya xx 😳

thnks for continue this

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Shreya

@_lovergirl101_

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey guys! Thanks for all your lovely comments! Shymali yaar I'm so sorry for the pm problem! I think this OS is probably going to turn into a SS. So here is the next part...

Part 2 -

"Chali jaon yaha se! I hate you Miss Sakshi Anand!" Sakshi looked up at him, this time without fear and spoke, "Main toh chali gayi thi. Lekin abb vapas sirf ek vajhe se aayi hoon. Yeh bata ne kiliye ki.." Arjun interrupted her and said, "Mujhe tumhaari koi baat nahi sunni. Just go away!"

Sakshi turned to leave; she opened the door and turned her head sideways towards him, "Mujhe pata hai Arjun. Ki tume mujhse kuch nai sunna. Aur uss raat jo hua tumhaari zindagi ki sabse bari galati thi. Meh bas yeh batane aayi thi ki.." she sobbed "ki tumhaari galati aur mere sache pyaar ki nishani ab mere andaar jee raha hai." She ran out of the door before Arjun could say anything.

Arjun was shocked. He fell to his knees, unable to comprehend what she had just told him. He always knew how much she loved him, and trusted him. When Sikander was caught, she risked her life to save him and went in front of the bullet. He remembered even then he was still arrogant towards her, until that night. But today, he knew that she was broken beyond repair. "Sakshi.." he just about managed to say.

Sameer, who wanted to talk to him about a case, entered Arjun's cabin. He saw Arjun on the floor and crying. "Arjun... kya hua? Utho. Tum ro kyu rahe ho?" He helped Arjun up onto a chair.

Arjun was lost, "Maine apni zindagi mein bohut kuch ko diya hai Sam. Sakshi..."

Sameer was confused, "Kya? Sakshi? Kaha hai vo? Tumne usse dekha?" Sakshi had left 3 months ago without informing anyone, they still couldn't track her down as she left behind everything.

Arjun said in a broken voice, "Uss raat humare beech.. She's pregnant Sam."

Sameer was shocked out of his wits, "Kya?! Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho Arjun. Pehle usse apne kareeb lana, phir dakha maar ke dhoor bhejna? Yeh bilkul teekh nahi hai. Jao usse vaapas leh aao."

Arjun's heart was shattered by the arrow of guilt. He got up and wiped his tears and said, "Tu sahi keh raha hai Sam. Mujhe usse yekin dilana hoga ki main uski layak hoon aur main usse zaroor vaapas leh aoonga."

I'm so sorry it's so short guys, but I ahve been really busy over the last few days. I promise next update will be longer! Keep the comments coming in or else!😈 But seriously, you don't know how much your comments mean to me. Thali ho ya Gali, sab manzoor hai! Bye for now my sweetharts!❤️

Love Shreya xx

Edited by _lovergirl101_ - 12 years ago