||VIRMAN||PYAR THA YA KUCH AUR * EPILOGUE * Pg 147 - Page 95

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Manvi's situation is reversed now how much she wants Virat's attention and Virat is backing out. Wating for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update! Virman and their never ending arguments :p.. Both are immature and stubborn.. But they love each other unconditionally and that's what makes them so special.. Now Manvi wants to go to honeymoon but Virat is upset because she lied to him.. Eager to read the next part.. Will be waiting for it.. Take care :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: panama

awesome. but don't seperate them once more




thank u n stay tuned...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorrryyy 4 2 much late 😡😡😡
Ch 34 : Brilliant update
👏👏👏👏👏 its 1st tym dat maanvi thinks like a mature person she wants 2 sort out her all prblms by her own her convo was superb 👏👏👏👏 with prem n he is so understanding n mature he luvs her but still know dat she luvs sum1 else she was not in his destiny n d way he said if she had anything prblm with virat in future he will b always dere 4 her liked dat 😊😊😊 , virman phone convo was nice it seems like he doesn't cut d call but liked dere last scene 2 where dey were enjoying sandwiches with jeevi 😃😃😃😃
Ch 35 : Brilliant update 👏👏👏👏👏 virman r still so immature n stubborn still after getting married dey both don't miss a chance 2 annoy n tease each other liked d way virat make her jealous dats d prove how much dey both luv each other n now its virat turns 2 get angry with her 4 hiding about prem n her convo n he thinks she is just pretending 2 b happy with him ( in dono ka kch nhi ho skta 😉😉😉 ) but liked it now its maanvi turns 2 make him understand d situation 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update nd really enjoyed it..
awww virman cute fights are always treat to read..they can never change their way..
love that manvi's jealous part where she thought he kissed sonia and in fact a litle gal kissed him n i was rofling when he said 'woh ayi n mujhe kiss karke bhag gyi'🤣 oomg really :p

manvi is such a nautanki na nd so does all her family..awww poor viru their honeymoon is cancelled :p
whata about last line which virat said that she met prem??

cont soon plz
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

awesome update nd really enjoyed it.. thank u n im glad 😃
awww virman cute fights are always treat to read..they can never change their way.. i agree
love that manvi's jealous part where she thought he kissed sonia and in fact a litle gal kissed him n i was rofling when he said 'woh ayi n mujhe kiss karke bhag gyi'🤣 oomg really :p

manvi is such a nautanki na nd so does all her family..awww poor viru their honeymoon is cancelled :p
whata about last line which virat said that she met prem?? virat knows that manvi met prem aur kya 😛

cont soon plz
take care

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Posted: 11 years ago
guys this is the last chapter and then there will be an epilogue...
CHAPTER 36
virat : you both should go... thats the right thing...
jeevika : but -
virat : no but bhabhi ji... cmonnn... main aur manvi baad mein bhi jaa sakte hain...
viren : virat jeevika is right... we should stayback yaar...
virat : staying back wouldnt mean that you both will join me n manvi on our honeymoon... no waysss...
jeevika : haha... very funny...
viren : its not happening...
virat : cmon bro... manvi wouldnt like this... samjho na bhabhi... cmon na jeevs...
jeevika : i think viru is right viren... we should go and i think he is here na... he will take care of manvi in the best way possible...
viren : maari palti... paltu...
jeevika : ab accha lagta hai main apne devar ke saamne apne pati ko room se bahar nikal doon...
virat : hahaha... dont worry main hi chala jaata hoon...
virat came downstairs to be greeted by the chaudharys'. he went and geeted them all...
badi b : boyfriend you should have taken care of that chudail...
virat : girlfriend woh chudail sunti kahan hai kisi ki...
naina : kya badi beeji... now how is manvi...???
virat : i think she is sleeping aunty... i gave her medicine half an hour ago...
naina : ohh... u know virat now i dont worry about my mannu... tum ho na uske liye...
virat : i will never disappoint you...
vanshika : jeevikaa... viren...
jeevika : mommm...
naina : hii jeevu... mera beta...
jeevika : beeji nahi aayi...??? is she okk...???
badi b : theek hai wo... par main aayi hoon...
jeevika : badi b... maine apko bahut miss kia...
viren : jhoothi... badi beeji ki haal...???
badi b : main mast hoon beta... tu...???
viren : apke samne hoon bahut hai...
jeevika glared at viren and he giggled.
vanshika : tarun... bring tea for all of us...
tarun : okk ma'am...
naina : before the tea comes, i will go and see mannu...
virat : i will join you aunty... shall we...???
naina : chalo...
outside virman's bedroom
naina : she is fine na... jyada pain toh nahi thi...
virat : nahi... theek hai... aap tension mat lo... main hoon na...
naina : i know virat beta... i am really thankful to you... i was at wrong place when i tried to separate you two...
virat : aunty please...
naina : nahi virat... uss din agar tum nahin hote toh mannu ko kho hi chuke the... tumhara pyaar meri manvi ke jeene ka reason hai... sirf tum aur tumhara pyaar...
virat : aapko aisa lagta hai... sach...???
naina : bilkul sach... dil se...
virat : thank you... cmon now let me wake her up... atleast talk to her once...
naina : no... let her rest... she looks peaceful right now...
virat : okkk...
back downstairs
naina : now we should leave... we have to go to a party tonight...
vanshika : the one at khanna's place...???
naina : yes... are you also invited...???
vanshika : yes we were... but will are not going...
naina : why...??? its ok vanshika... bache badhe ho gayi hai... sambhal lenge... you n bhai-sahab are coming...
vanshika : i know but still...
badi b : mujhe toh koi leke bhi na jaa raha tu ho aa vanshika puttar...
swamini : haan bhabhi... bhaiya n you should go...
vanshika : okk... we will go...
naina : thats better... see you tonight...
after sometime
manvi : listen to me na...
virat : we are done with the listening and all... and before i forget today aunty and girlfriend came to see you... you were sleeping that time...
manvi : toh mujhe uthaya kyun nahi...
virat : naina aunty ne mna kiya tha... she siad you were looking peaceful while sleeping...
manvi : okk... par main chuapana nahi chahti thi...
virat : toh kyun chupaya... listen i dont care... you can go to hell...
manvi : dont talk to me like that... now i am your wife...
virat : haawww... you suddenly realised it... too bad...
manvi : realisation...??? why would it take place NOW...??? i married you in my senses...
virat : that i still wonder... you apparently knew that i cheated on you, blah blah blah... why did you marry me then...???
manvi : what are you asking me...??? you know why i married you...
virat : no i dont know... tell me...
manvi : becuase I LOVE YOU...

virat : but you were once in love with prem as well...
manvi : i was never in love with prem for god sake... i just found comfort being with him at that time... he was the only one who was supporting me... he shared my pain and my loneliness... BUT with YOU, i shared everything... everything that has anythiung to do with me... YOU SHARED MY LIFE WITH ME...
virat : then why didnt you trust me manvi...??? why...????
manvi : i- i-
VIRATTT
viren yelled virat's name from downstairs and virat ran down before manvi could say anything.
virat : what is THIS...???
viren : that what we are asking her...
virat : sonia...
sonia : chill viru... its nothing serious... we just got married...

virat : i can see that you idiot... and what do you mean by 'just got married'...????
sonia : we got m-a-r-r-i-e-d
virat : dont spell it for me...
jeevika : but why suddenly...??? bta toh diya hota...
viren : so thats you could shop for it... cmon jeevika...
jeevika : i didnt mean that viren...
virat : please bhai bhabhi... ab kya karna hai...???
sonia : kya karna hai matlab...??? humara welcome karo baby... mummy n daddy aaye hain tumhare...
virat : are you sure you didnt kidnap with sonia...???
prem : i married her... she is all i ever wanted virat...
virat : dude are you sure...??? you dont know what kind of girl she is...??? gale padh jaati hai boss...
sonia : mommy ki respect karo atleadt daddy ke saamne...
virat : yeah yeah... new daddy ko aisa lagna chahie ke mummy bahut acchi hai...
sonia : excuse me... lagna chahie matlab...???
prem : matlab baad mein toh pta lag hi jaega...
virat : haha... right dude...
viren : yeah right... so congrats to both of you... wish u both a very happy married life...
prem : thank you viren...
jeevika : my good wishes are always with you guys... you are such a gem of a person prem... glad we all met you...
prem : pleasure is all mine jeevika ji...
virat : cmon now... you both can come inside... cant stand outside you see...
sonia : yeahhh...
prem : can we talk virat...???
virat : sure... come...
sonia : daddy hai ye... remember that kido...
virat : okk mommy...
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prem : listen virat i have no hard feeling for you...
virat : same here...
prem : i called manvi today and she was crying... after trying soo much, she told me what happened...
virat : you called her... why...???
prem : because we are just friends now... no feeling other than friendship...
virat : i heard that... that conversation... but i wanted manvi to tell me about it...
prem : you also had many chances to remind manvi that she belongs to me at that time... but did you do it...??? nooo... because you were scared to lose her again...
virat : i ahte to say it but i got it... i got it what you mean...
prem : so from now love her, fight her, cherish her, love her... do whatever but dont let her go... she is yours and you are the luckiest one to have her in your life...
virat : thank you soo much... and please take care of sonia... which i know you will... she got such a wonderful person as her life partner... sonia is special to me... i never developed such a bond with anyone in such a small time frame but i fdid it with sonia...
prem : i know... she will always be the best thing that will ever happen to me...
virat : i hope so... chale ab... warna sonia yahan aa jaegi...
prem : yeah... lets go...
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after everyone left, virat went to his bedroom and shook manvi a little; who fell in asleep waiting for virat to return and tell her what was happening outside. manvi woke up and looked at virat who held her hand and kissed her forehead.
virat : i am sorry and i love you...
manvi : love you too...
virat : prem is such a great guy... he married sonia...
manvi : married what...????
virat : sonia... they are happy from this marriage manvi...
manvi : hmm...
virat : he did it for us... so that i dont doubt on you... i am sorry mannu...
manvi : its okk viru... but i didnt lie to you intentionally...
virat : i know... you were scared to lose me... right...???
manvi : hmm... who made you understand this...???
virat : prem...
manvi : dekha isko kehte hai friend... tumhari sonia jaisi nahi...
virat : manviii...
manvi : nahi i mean... she is a nice girl... very nice girl...
virat : hahaha...
manvi ; but who told you i met prem...
virat : you forgot to disconnect the mobile... i heard the convo...
manvi : toh tum bhi toh disconnect kar sakte the... vishwaas nahi tah mujhpe...
virat : curiousity...
manvi : jealousy...
virat : let it be na...
manvi : i love you...
virat : i love you tooo...
manvi : but mera honeymoon reh gaya iss fracture ke chakar mein...
virat : baad mein chalenge... bhai bhabhi ho aaye pehle...
manvi : haan better rahega...
virat : haan... unka experience humare kaam aayega...
manvi : right... but that was cheap...
virat : haha...
manvi hugged virat and slept in his arms feeling safe and secure welcoming a new morning, a new turn intheir life... the actual beginning of their new life... their married life...
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i want to ask you all something regarding the EPILOGUE
so you want the epilogue to be showcasing the phase after few months or after few years...
do reply soon...
so that i can work on it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
res for nainu 😳
wow naina tussi cha gayi ji with u r update
all the stories u have written are all excellent and even this on too felt bad that u ended but thn u have many more virman stories😳so its ok i am happy
loved virman and also prem heer opps prem soniya part very much👏👏
always keep writing nainu ji am fan of u r stories😳 u also knw that ⭐️
pls dnt be dissappointed with the likes i guess exams are gng on na so that y may be
i suggest dnt bother much abt likes naina because many silent reders who dnt like will also be there
so be happy and keep rocking with u r updates😛⭐️


Edited by prathe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one... :-)

My fav story ended... :-(

Waiting for the epilog..
Update soon...!!!
😊


I would like to read some virman cute scene.. That depends on you which ever time gap u wish...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: miss..chalana

Nice one... :-)

My fav story ended... :-(

Waiting for the epilog..
Update soon...!!!
😊


I would like to read some virman cute scene.. That depends on you which ever time gap u wish...



first of all thank u soo much... 😃
and i got what u meant 😉
all gud things come to an end 😳

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