ArHi FF: Koi Aap Sa~Thread 2 Link on Pg 140 & Pg 1 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Arilip

Well ...nice update...so they r getting engaged

Though i am not a big fan of POV but I enjoyed it very much...

Loved khushi's questions n Arnav's answers

Thanks for pm

Thanks! A few things before the engagement but yeah..they're getting engaged!! I dont plan on writing too many POV's so I guess you're good to go?? Just out of curiousity...why don't you like POV??

Originally posted by: Saramunirfan

Awww I love this sweet cute hot arnav alottt

Thank you! I love him too! LOL

Originally posted by: jduke

Super cute update. I loved Kushi's POV and her questions. First question she can think of is his opinion on divorce...I almost fell down from chair...LOL...Arnav is perfect gentleman and I thought part-2 will be more elaborated version of how he gave his mental points to her being a psychiatrist. May be that would have been too dramatic. Almost two weeks for next update :(. Do we have a choice ...will wait :).

Thank you! Hahah...yeah...they're not even engaged yet and this girl is already thinking divorce'..lol...It was just her way of finding out how secure this marriage is...he actually didn't give her any mental points...he had heard about her, he saw her, and he just said yes...as Aman said..."he's a goner" ;)

Originally posted by: bhaktiii

V beautiful update

Thank you!

Originally posted by: jolybudy

Wow I loved the first part of this chapter..

Awesome writing in bringing out Khushi;s POV...

OMG.. interview huh

that was tremendous... It was so natural like starting from giving point one to Raizada... guess every girl who goes for boy-seeing shld read thro this ????

duh.. after the questioning session.. Khushi still needed time.. but that was perfect of all.. and continuing to think on the terms of his walk noting each and every thing abt Arnav .. superb..

The second part was also no less

Aman was such a cute bro.. Khushi and Arnav's family - both are so lovely..

Arnav's three decisions nice...

wow.. u gave a shock when Arvind uttered.. "May be not meant to be"

but gud Khushi and Arnav ARE meant to be

waiting to know what happens next..

Thank you!! I've always wanted to write from Khushi's POV and I thought that her monologues for this particular update will be fun to write...I dont know if every girl should go through that same process but knowing myself, it sounds like something I would do!..loll...Khushi's a businesswoman so she would weigh her pros and cons well before making a decision...especially one that concerns her entire life...The families and all the individuals will share nice bonds...minimal tensions but nothing too drastic like we had in the show... Arnav and Khushi are always meant to be...by hook or by crook! ;)

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply fabulous
loved itc

Thanks!

Originally posted by: sudhalata1

Very sweet update. Loved their conversation

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is really amazing update part 1 and 2

Thank you!

Originally posted by: samia19

awesome

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

wonderful updates

loved them

thanks for the pm

Thank you!

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Originally posted by: sfghfj

awesome update. loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: lOVENI

Superb story Katie!! Loving it!!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ranogill

Brilliant story...but only thing is we won't be able to digest Ekta kapoor style twists and turns...that is why we love ipkknd ...

Thanks! Ahh...it wont be that bad...lol...it will have some drama yes...but none of that saas-bahu or multiple marriages crap...

Originally posted by: kooldewdrop

Hi,Katie!! First n foremost! Thanq so much fr sending the p.m.. :))

caught up with both the chapters a while ago n m so excited to hvng strtd reading this story!!! Its super brilliant... :D

u hv put out the thoughts of Khushi as in , a girl going for an arranged marriage , elaborately n exactly so!! Her apprehensions , the assurance from the family n most importantly the synchronizayion of her n the prospective groom's ideas n values... Its simply flawless...

KAS is a refreshing storyline n m loving it to bits!!

waiting super eagerly fr the nxt update!! :D

Thank you hun!! I'm glad that you liked Khushi's thoughts in that situation...personally...I've never been in one so I can just imagine and pen down how I think things would be..lol...I personally feel the values and beliefs of the two people must be in synch...hobbies and interests aren't THAT big of a deal...I'm glad that you're liking KAS so far and I hope to keep it interesting for you guys...

Originally posted by: khareshelley

simply amazing...!!!!!!!

thw way khushi interviewed aranv and he answer her patiently..!!!!!

so she said yes..!!!!

waiting to read more..!!!!!!!

thanks for pm..!!!!!!1

Thanks! Yeap, their values/beliefs match...they're both happy with the outlooks and it's a yes from both of them...lets see where it leads them. ;)

Originally posted by: sweetlife

nice

Thanks!

Originally posted by: love14356

It's wonderful

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Arshi67

I had such fun reading that.

Loved her inadvertently drooling over him as she looks at him *rings a bell in my head*

Her wayward tongue was too cute and so Khushi!

Thank you! Ahahhaha...I think despite the awkward situation, I would be aware of the man's looks too if he looked like Arnav/Barun ;)

Originally posted by: j44a

Awesome updates!!

Loved teh question-answer thing... Sooo displayed Arnavs true character.. Shes drooling over him,.. Yay... Hahha

N Ohh my Aman is such a cutie!!! Lol..

So Kushi said yes, cant wait for the updated and engagement.

Continue soon!!

Thank you! Arnav is attracted to her and she's drooling over him...seems like they wont have much trouble as a married couple after all. ;)

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

Aww!

I loved their interactions! :D

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Love_SA

OMG I absolutely loved it alottt

this was superb and cute and adorable and amazing!!!!

im liking this story aalottt!!

loved the conversation between arshi

and adored the convo between father and son

Thank you so much! Father-daughter, father-son, brother-sister, mother-in-law/daughter-in-law..everyone will share good relationships with each other in this FF for the most part...

Originally posted by: madhu1210

just read this story today...

superb!!

Aman is khushi's brother and they shared amazing bond... Arnav and Aman are friends and doctor..

Aman's parents wants khushi to get marry and same case with Arnav.. and finally the proposal came and like the way khushi asked all the question the way Arnav answered him, truely prince charming a gentleman...

finally khushi said yes,

looking forward...

Welcome to KAS! Glad that you're enjoying it so far. Arnav will definitely be non-ASRish in this ff..as much as I love his ASR persona, I really wanted to write him in a different light...

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

Amazing

Plz pm.me

Thanks! Will do.

Originally posted by: cupcake1234

Chapter 2:

I think Aman's epiphany came a bit too late LOL.I mean for a guy who's a close friend of an eligible bachelor like Arnav the realisation should have come sooner.Oh well it's better late than never...

Well, it was kind of a no brainer that Arnav will be the chosen groom for Kushi and vice versa, but Garima wanting to have their engagement so soon was a bit of a surprise.

Yeah, but you know how they say..sometimes you miss the obvious...like when you're trying to look for something but you're searching so hard that you don't see it even when it's staring you in the face...lol. Khushi's father and Arnav's grandmother's ill health will be putting things in fast forward for them...the story mainly covers their journey as a couple.

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

That was fun and enjoyable update...

Loved the convo between Arshi... I must say ARnav is really a gentle man...

Awww and i loved more Kushi's toungue..

Thank you!! Arnav is going to be a sweetheart in this story save the few anger bursts here and there...Khushi's tongue shall also remain uncontrollable ;)

Originally posted by: rajiarshian

Simply Amazingg

Thanks!

Originally posted by: pup03

simply amazing update !!! khushi's questions and arnav's answers were all so brilliant.. loved the way they both were looking at the alliance.. their thinking match which makes their alliance more strong.. khushi's reply have brought so much of happiness in arnav's family.. loved the update..

thanks for pm Smile

Thank you! Khushi will do justice to her business mind with her logic rather than silly things..lol. but like you said...the fact that their beliefs and values mirror each other is going to help form a strong bond between them...

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom

Amazing updt lov arshi convo u writen so wel that its looks natural so they geting engage eagarrly waiting for next updt tanx for pm

Thank you! I try my best to keep a realistic touch to most of the scenes. :) and yes...engagement coming up soon. ;)

Originally posted by: HUMII10592

Awesome

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Apoorvarani

Beautiful FF Dear!!! Loved the story:)

Thank you!

Originally posted by: kank_dah

completely enjoyed reading it.arnav ,aman nd khushi all are so adorable.

Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: Akorshi

marvelous update ...

loved it...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: barbiebala

awesome parts

totally loved the convo between arnav and khushi

Hope to get more among them

perfect family both them has

Waiting for the next update

Thank you! Definitely more ArHi moments coming up in the story...

Originally posted by: neha2013g

interesting story... awesome update :)

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Maithly

Such a lovely story pls pm me too wen u update

Thank you! Will definitely PM you.

Originally posted by: badfaith4u

Very awesome chapter

Even I liked Arnav's answers to the questions. He answered like a true gentlemen. When how Anjali will react when she finds out Khushi is the girl? LOL

Or will Khushi find out first?

Let the wedding preparations begin...

Thank you! Anjali's reaction might be expected by some readers and might be unexpected by the others...I haven't revealed too much about her personality for you guys to guess yet.. ;)

Originally posted by: ravalisharma06

superb...

loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: shalini_s

the conversation between AK was perfect.. loved it..

Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

I love this Arnav with his easy going attitude and Khushi being so confident

hmm can't wait for them to get married

Arnav will be a sweetheart in this FF...the typical sweet husband...I'm going to give ASR a break...lol..Khushi will be an odd mix of bold and shy in KAS.

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

[B]Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved ArHi convo...sweet...glad Khushi agreed...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

Thank you so much sweets!

Originally posted by: cool_sri

Nice updates...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: srahs

Its fabulous loved it

Thanks!

Originally posted by: chetna19

awesome chapters ...i loved arshi conversation...

nd finally khushi said yss...

waiting for anjali entry...

is there is any villein in this story...??

Thank you! Anjali's entry will take a few more chapters...there is a villain in the story and he'll make an entry later... :)

Originally posted by: cosmina

Katie,great story ,like usual! thank you!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: diyadivya

superb

loved arhi convo

Thank you!

Originally posted by: monaarshiaddict

Really nice...

Thanks!

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Wow we got a double treat, how lucky are we... You my darling are wonderful.

The update was amazing and simply superb,

I absolutely loved both parts to the update, they were a brilliant read.

Thank you so much Sarah!! As usual, your comment has me grinning ear to ear from the very first sentence..lol.

Khushi's point of view was fantastic and I enjoyed reading it, Trust me...I enjoyed writing it too!

Love the fact Arnav had already said yes to the proposal even before he spoke to Khushi, which left her in shock.

Love the questions Khushi asked they were amazing and very important ones and bless Arnav answered them perfectly, Yeah...technically speaking, his entire life depended on the answers..lol...I'm portraying Khushi as a businesswoman in KAS and I'm trying my best to keep her logical mind intact...lol

I'm loving this Arnav he is the perfect guy for any woman and would make the perfect husband for Khushi, Right?!?! Find me one like him!! <3

So Khushi was scoring him and he certainly met khushi's expectations but I love the way she was trying so hard not to stare at him. Who can't stare when that man sits in front of you...heck, If I ever meet him, I might even faint! lmao

Wow Arnav is even a minder reader and knew she wanted to ask a different question, love the fact Khushi asked about the intimacy level as Arnav's answer was superb. Ahh yes..healthcare professional you see...we become good at reading body language and reading the signs...patients tend to lie (believe it or not) and stuff so we become good mind-readers..haha.

Khushi's tongue was definitely working over time and I'm sure Arnav will have many more ways to use her tongue, I know I have got a dirty mind and it starts working whenever I look at Aman's photo which I have to each time I read an update, lol. Did you get a chance to watch Siddharth's movies?? And don't worry...Khushi's tongue will definitely be working mad overtime...even more so than now... ;) this is why we gel so well sarah...great minds (dirty or not) think alike.. ;)

I'm glad there talking session went well, it's a shame Aman interrupted them but I love him and he is so funny so he is forgiven. Aman will be interrupting a lot more... ;)

Awww bless Arnav's mum was so excited in the car journey back home as she is so happy with the proposal,

It's a shame Anjali won't be part of the engagement, Ah yes...I have a plan in mind, dontcha worry...

I don't blame Khushi for wanting more time but I'm glad she agreed, Arnav's reaction was so sweet.

I honestly can't wait for the journey between Arnav and Khushi, Are you going for a quick wedding and then focusing the story on there married life or will we get too read about all the pre wedding ritual moments between the two? I don't mind either options. I will focus a bit on the wedding but the main focus of the story will be their journey as husband-wife and finding love...I will highlight the wedding ceremonies...but I wont have say...one part per ritual or something...

The updates were written exceptionally well, Thank you much!

Thanks for the PM xx

Originally posted by: luvbug

awww such a lovely update... i loved arshi together...haha n khushi is cute...arnav is calm composed and confident... and i agree with khushi.. nowere was he shy :) when talking alone with her... oh n aman haha i love him too... this is such a feel good story :)

waiting for khushi n anjali to know abt their relation soon :D

Thank you! From Arnav's popular ASR persona...all I've taken is that sexy confidence...lol...but yeah...I can't imagine Arnav as shy...

Originally posted by: lakshyaNkt

beautiful update

thnx

Thank you!

Originally posted by: please6

Love the story it's cute and the characters are too sweet which makes it even more better anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

Thank you! The characters shall remain sweet and for the most part this is a feel-good story...will have its ups and downs but that's true of any story, right?

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3 (1)

awesome dear...

excellent...

lovely convo they had...

and Arnav scored all the 5 points...

Khushi is lucky to have a bro like Aman...

and Arnav also happy with this...

part 3 (2)

awesome...

lovely...

Arnav had already said yes...

and Khushi also has said yes...

cont soon dear...

Thank you! Yeap...Arnav in KAS is the perfect guy..how can he not score the points? ;) It's a yes from both, indeed, and now here comes the engagement...

Originally posted by: arshiska

supr story ya..thanks for pm ..finally she say to arnav woow supr..waiting for next update ya..Smile

Thank you so much! :)

Originally posted by: .aarnav

part1 &2 superb yaar...kushi said yes...

continue soon

Thank you!

Originally posted by: suji5

such a wonderful update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Neha.AS

So nice

Thanks!

Originally posted by: rvas

loved the question answer session

Thank you!

Originally posted by: jg12

Wonderful update. So glad that Khushi said yes. looking forward to their courtship

Thanks! Ah, the courtship will mainly happen as a married couple. ;)

Originally posted by: Swaran13

Both parts was amazingClap

Thanks for the pm :)

Thanks!

Originally posted by: amfashionista

loved it

awsum

engagement is coming

Thank you!

Originally posted by: MsDroolKanthan

Haaye, I seriously don't understand how do you writers not combust while writing about these sexy guys and an equally sexy couple?

Oh honey, you have no idea how many times I have gone through that...lol...makes us raise the bar for our boyfriends/prospective boyfriends too...LOL.

Originally posted by: ArShiDelena

Awesome Update

Loved It

Can't Wait 4 d Next Part

Continue Soon

Thank you!

Originally posted by: imran78

I have just found this FF and read all parts in one go. I loved it.

Waiting for the next chapter.

Send you Buddy request, please do pm me.

Welcome to KAS! Glad that you're liking it so far! I have added you to the buddy list and you will get a PM every time I update!

Originally posted by: aayt

I love this ff it's very decently written all characters are well mannered nice family bonds between Arnav's family n khushi's family

Khushi accepted but after discussion whatever bothering her Arnav's POV was very much means to her n he didn't disappoint her he seems to be a good guy attracted to her in his first encounter then possibly he'll fall soon he was anxious about her answer n quite happy to get positive response

Can' wait for next update continue soon

Thank you so much! All the characters introduced so far are good people and they all share nice relationships too..this FF mainly focuses on Arnav-Khushi's journey as husband-wife and the ups and downs that life usually brings your way...Who falls in love with whom first will be revealed as the story progresses but I like your hypothesis about Arnav being the one who experiences that fall first. ;)

Originally posted by: cupcake1234

Kushi's inner monologues are funny as !LOL

Arnav sure acts like a true gentleman.

Loved the little banter around the dining table.

So it's one of those filmy scenarios where , when anyone tried to speak to Kushi about Anjali someone would always interrupt, so she would never know she'll be marring her room mate's brother until the end eh

For a moment there at the end, I thought Kushi had said no.

Honestly speaking, Khushi's inner monologues are the things that I would find myself saying in these situations..LOL...Arnav is a true gentleman in this FF...the ASR persona will be reserved for my other FFs...Nah...that filmy scenario won't last too long...its not very realistic that Anjali's relationship with Arnav and Khushi is under the wraps for so long..

It was a really nice chapter. I enjoyed their chat. They are slowly entering that comfort zone needed in a healthy relationship. I am glad u still kept the temper of Arnav intact, without that ASR is incomplete. I loved how Khushi was a bunch of nerves in front of him, he clearly unsettles her. It is good u cleared the air about Anjali sooner than later. Makes more sense that way. Aman's talks about registrar marriage was nice. I say that often to my mother too seeing the rituals of a Hindu marriage. Lol. It is quite nice that Arnav wanted to see Khushi's reaction to the engagement day being fixed. His family is really down to earth and quite modern. Asha is a sweetheart. By the way was it intentional that u meant it was the 19th century or is it a typo? Great update. Looking forward to the big fat Indian wedding full Yash Chopra style!😆