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awesome update dear..!! 😉
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read chapters 28 and 2 awesome updates, glad rk and madhu got married, dipali got what she deserved
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Read all parts in one go...
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what a lovely update...glad that bi*** is out of rishbala's life, forever😃
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LOVE WILL TAKE YOU THERE

EPILOGUE



It was another beautiful morning. The sun kept rising for another fresh day. A new beginning with new hopes. Life is beautiful. They could not ask for any better. They simply had everything in their lives. Their small world was filled with love & care. RK & Madhu were blessed to have each other in their lives. Their cute world is revolving around the new addition who will come to their lives soon.

RK brought the morning tea into their room. He made it by himself, blended with love. Madhu was sleeping peacefully. Their little angel Rithu, was snuggled up to her mom. They both looked really cute when they were asleep. RK stared at them. He was really blessed to have a wonderful life partner like Madhu in his life & a cute little daughter like Rithu who resembles him. RK placed a soft kiss on little Rithu's forehead.

RK caressed Madhu's face. He was lost in his beautiful wife. Madhu felt the warmth of her hubby's protective hands. She opened her eyes slowly. RK was staring at her. He was smiling. ''Good morning biwi.'' ''A very good morning to you too, patidev'' RK placed a soft kiss on her forehead. RK caressed Madhu's nearly 9 months old belly. Just a week left to welcome their new bundle of joy. ''Good morning meri junior jungli billi'' ''Daddy is waiting for you.'' ''Come soon ok?'' RK whispered.

''RK, it's gonna be a junior right kameena ok?'' ''We already have a jungli billi'' ''So what biwi? We will have two jungli billies.'' ''It will be awesome.'' ''Will see pati! I'm sure it's gonna be a ..'' ''Ouch..'' Madhu was in pain. ''Madhu? what happened are you ok?'' RK was worried. '' I told you nah, it's a boy!'' ''Kicking me too much!'' Madhu smiled forgetting her pain. ''No it's my little jungli billi'' RK winked. ''No it's a boy! '' ''Girl!'' ''Boy!'' Girl!'' ''Boy!'' RK & Madhu was arguing about the baby's gender.

''Mommy...'' Little Rithu opened her eyes slowly, yet sleepy. She was disturbed by her parents' argument on her little sibling who is yet to come to their lives. ''Mommy?'' ''Daddy?'' She yawned. ''Good morning.'' But none of them noticed that their princess was awake. They continued their argument on their to-be born baby's gender. ''Umm mommy?'' ''Daddy?'' She called again. But no response.

''Arrey what's going on here?'' RK's mother Radha entered their room. ''Daadi'' Little Rithu jumped out of the bed & hugged her grandmother. ''Good morning Daadi.'' ''Rithu?'' RK & Madhu suddenly noticed that their little daughter was up. ''See! they started their usual morning fight!'' ''They forgot their Rithu.'' Rithu made a face. ''Aww'' ''Good morning Rithu.'' RK & Madhu both spoke at once. ''Hump! a bad morning to you mommy & daddy!'' ''Both of you forgot me!'' Rithu looked away.

RK & Madhu exchanged a glance. ''Umm.. Rithu.. please come here.'' Madhu called out. ''No!'' Rithu spoke without even looking at her mom. '' Aww my little miss sunshine. Aren't your forgiving your daddy dearest huh?'' ''I'm sorry baby!'' '''Come on give me a hug!'' RK extended his hands. ''No way!'' ''Aww..'' Rithu darling, please forgive mommy & daddy.'' Radha caressed the hair of her naughty little granddaughter.

''No they should be punished!'' It was RK's father Mohan entered the room. ''Haina my little pari?'' He took little Rithu on his arms. ''Yeah! Daada!'' The grandpa & granddaughter high fived each other. ''Papa?'' ''No Rishu!'' ''Both of you should get punished for ignoring my little princess.'' ''Ok then tell me sweety what should daddy & mommy do for you?'' RK asked placing a soft kiss on Rithu's forehead who was in her grandpa's arms.

She whispered something to his grandpa. RK & Madhu were curious about their punishment. ''Ok that's good Rithu.'' Mohan smiled. ''Umm.. can we know what it is?'' Madhu asked. ''Shall I tell daada?'' Rithu winked.''Yeah sure!'' Mohan winked back. ''Mommy & daddy should spend the whole day with me today!'' '' & I want lots of teddy bears, barbie dolls, chocolates, cupcakes & ice cream.'' ''Capiche?'' Rithu giggled. ''Sure baby! daddy will buy anything you want!' ''Yay!'' Rithu screamed with joy.

''Now come here my junior jungli billi!'' ''If you are planning to stay like this with your daada, he will definitely get a back pain!'' RK took her little girl on his arms. ''Oh no! daada is strong! haina?'' Rithu giggled. ''Why not daada is stronger than your daddy.'' Mohan laughed out loudly. ''Chalo! it's getting late for school. Come on you have to get ready.'' Radha called her little granddaughter! ''Arrey daadi! did you forget? today is Saturday!'' ''No school!'' Rithu giggled. Everyone smiled sharing a funny moment.

''Ok ok! sorry! So enjoy your day with mommy & daddy!'' Radha & Mohan kissed their granddaughter. They left the room, leaving the cute little family alone. Little Rithu caressed her mom's belly. She was so much excited about her sibling who is going to join their family soon. ''Mommy when is our angel coming?'' ''Tell her to come soon!'' ''I can't wait to see her.'' ''Aww Rithu your angel is gonna come soon!'' I want to show all of my dolls & teddies to her.'' ''So we can play together.'' Rithu giggled with excitement.
RK & Madhu smiled at their daughter's cute antics. ''Yeah your little play mate is gonna come soon.'' RK caressed Rithu's soft milky face.

Their life turned out to be a beautiful one after their marriage. RK was a caring husband & a dad. Soon the happiness of their life doubled with the great news of Madhu expecting again. When RK was told about the good news, he was over the moon as he missed being with Madhu when she was pregnant with Rithu. Everything was new for RK. He became an overprotective husband where sometimes Madhu hated his over protectiveness. RK took a break from his busy schedules & spent more time with his pregnant wife & little daughter.

RK was so much excited of being a father. It was totally a new experience & he enjoyed every moment of it. He used to talk to his unborn baby for hours, narrated stories every night for the baby & his cute little princess. He had to handle Madhu's mood swings but supplied everything she wanted in seconds. The preparations for a baby room started right after he heard the good news. He filled up the house with baby equipments & toys. They didn't want to know about baby's gender even after the doctor informed them as they can check it out if they want. They wanted it to be a surprise. Anyhow RK wanted another little daughter for them, Rithu also wanted a little sister to play all the doll dress up games with her & in the other hand, Madhu wished for a son to complete their family.

RK, Madhu & Rithu spent the whole day with each other. RK fulfilled each & every demand of his little princess. They had so much of fun roaming in shopping malls, spending hours in the children's park & enjoying in ice cream parlors. Madhu too enjoyed visiting outside along with her protective hubby & her little angel. With all of these RK was planning to make their 1st anniversary so special which falls the next day. He wanted it to make a memorable one.

Finally they headed to a restaurant to dine. While they were enjoying their dinner Madhu felt a tight pain on her abdomen. "Ahh..'' Madhu cried in pain as she felt that the contractions has started. ''Madhu?'' What happened?'' ''Ahh... RK.. I..Aaah.'' ''Madhu are you ok?'' RK was worried. ''Mommy?'' ''Why? ''What happened?'' Little Rithu was worried to see her mom in pain. ''Madhu relax'' ''We will go the hospital now'' ''Please relax'' RK tried to calm her down. He couldn't see her crying with pain. They rushed in to the hospital.

When she was about to be taken inside the delivery room, he held RK's hand tightly with fear. ''Please RK don't leave me alone.'' '' Relax Madhu. Please!'' ''Everything is gonna be fine! Ok?'' ''Please don't worry!'' RK assured her that everything is gonna be fine. Though it was Madhu's second pregnancy. she was so scared about the delivery as she is facing such a situation almost after 6 years.

RK was tensed outside the theater. Everyone including RK's parents, Padmini , Trishna & RK's secretary, Bitto ji arrived at the hospital after hearing the news. The actual delivery date is in another week & they didn't expect such an emergency. Radha prayed along with Padmini & Trishna. RK could hear the painful cries of Madhu, he kept walking up & down the pathway near the operation theater. Bitto ji tried to calm down her chief. Rithu was so much scared & Mohan tried to pacify his little granddaughter.

''Daddy?'' Rithu went towards RK & pulled from his hand tightly. ''Hmm baby?'' ''Daddy, mommy is in pain nah?'' ''Hmm yes baby.'' RK sighed. '' Daddy! I'm gonna punish our angel when she comes! because she is giving so much pain for my mommy!'' Rithu spoke in a worried tone. RK took her little girl on his lap.''Aww.. no baby! mommy will be fine soon & you can meet your angel soon.'' Rithu hugged her father tightly. She was scared of her mom's scream due to pain.

After about 4 hours of labor, finally RK & Madhu's symbol of love was born. RK's world stopped for a while when he heard the baby's cry for the first time. Yes, it was his baby. His blood. Finally their bundle of joy has arrived. ''Yay! is that our angel daddy?'' Rithu jumped with joy after hearing the baby's cry. ''Yes darling!'' RK hugged her daughter tightly.

The doctor came out. ''Congratulations Mr. Kundra. Now you are a father of another cute baby girl.'' ''Aww my.. my. baby girl?' RK was on cloud nine as another little angel has joined their little family as he wished. ''Doctor, Madhu? How is my Madhu?'' ''Don't worry Mr. Kundra. Both the mother & the baby are doing fine.'' The doctor replied back with a smile seeing the excitement of RK.

RK rushed inside the room with Rithu. Their cute bundle of joy was in Madhu's hands. Madhu placed a gentle kiss on her new born baby girl. The pain was faded away after seeing their new born baby girl's angelic face. RK was staring at them with happy tears. ''Mommy!'' Little Rithu was excited to see her newborn sibling. The baby was clung to her mom, seeking the warmth.

''RK, here is your little angel you've been waiting for.'' Madhu smiled. ''Thank you so much Madhu.'' He placed a kiss on Madhu's forehead. ''Like your anniversary gift?'' Madhu winked. ''Anniversary?'' huh?'' It was almost 1 am in the midnight. Their baby was born exactly on their date of marriage anniversary. RK had forgotten all as he was so much tensed about the delivery. ''Madhu..'' RK stared at her. He hds been gifted with the most precious gift he could ever ask from Madhu on their 1st anniversary. ''Thank you so much.'' ''I'm sorry I forgot everything! I was really worried.'' ''I was planning something special but...''

''Enough daddy! Your time is over!'' '' I wanna see my angel.'' Rithu pulled RK's hand hardly. She was impatient to see her little sister. She was standing & wasn't tall enough to reach her little baby sister who was on her mother's hands. ''Aww sorry! Here look at our angel.'' RK took Rithu in his arms & came more closer to Madhu & the baby. ''Aww she's so tiny.'' Rithu was overjoyed after seeing her newborn sister. She caressed her tiny face gently. ''Aww she's so soft & pink.'' ''She's truly an angel.'' Rithu smiled brightly.

The little baby was staring at her elder sister. She seemed to be happy to meet her family members. ''Look she's staring at me.''' Rithu shouted with excitement. ''Hello! I'm your didu Rithika'' ''But everyone calls me Rithu.'' ''So you can call me Rithu didu'' Rithu giggled. RK & Madhu smiled at each other. They are proud parents of two girls now.

''Daddy what's her name?'' Rithu questioned. ''Hmm name?'' ''Oh yeah our angel need a name to call on!.'' ''Hmm suggest a nice one Rithu.'' ' No! 'Mommy suggest a name nah! soon!'' Madhu was smiling. ''Hmm.. I have a name.'' ''What?'' both Rithu & RK were excited about naming the baby. ''How about, Madhuri?'' ''Wow nice name.'' Rithu was happy about her sister's new name. ''Madhu is from my name & ri from Rishabh''' Madhu smiled. ''Why not ri from Rithu?'' Rithu giggled. ''Oops I'm sorry! yeah ri from Rishabh & Rithu.'' Madhu smiled caressing her elder daughter's hair.

''Hmm Madhuri Rishabh Kundra!'' ''Such a beautiful name.'' ''Ok, now Madhuri, do you like your name?'' RK whispered to his baby girl. The baby seemed happy. ''Yeah she's happy with her name daddy!'' Rithu giggled.

They all hugged each other. They couldn't ask for more happiness in their lives. They have got everything. RK & Madhu were proud of their kids. RK couldn't thank Madhu enough for making his life beautiful with gifting him two cute angels. They got the best gift ever for their 1st wedding anniversary & they could celebrate it in a memorable way.

''Biwi, I told you nah! it's another jungli billi'' RK smiled. ''OK patidev! you won this time!'' ''Haaw 'this' time?'' ''Biwi that means you are ready for another?'' RK winked. ''Shut up RK!'' ''hehe biwi, in the next anniversary, you are gonna get your gift for sure! don't worry.'' RK winked. ''RK you!'' Madhu was embarrassed . ''Oops shush!'' ''Our little Madhuri will wake up.'' RK & Madhu smiled at each other & hugged each other back.

Love will take you there ends...

~A thank you note~


So finally our story became to an end.❤️ I know most of you are sad about that. But no worries, it was quite a happy ending. 😆 I can't thank enough you all for staying with our story for 30 chapters for nearly 7 months. 😳 Well that's a long time. 😆

I never thought me & my co-writer Titli di could bring up a successful story like this 😳 It would have not been possible with your tremendous support ❤️ As we mentioned in our introduction, that was just a little idea that came in to our minds when we were chatting about our Rishbala at Facebook. I ended up writing the first paragraph of our story that day 😆 We were so much excited to write a story on Rishbala together mixing our different writing styles. 😃 We started it last August & could bring up till March 😳 Well, it took a long time because we've been writing our own fan fictions & we were both busy with our studies. Somehow we could manage our schedules & could continue our story. 😳

Rishbala is no more with us I never expected that such a thing will happen our show. 😕 But RIshbala left us leaving lots of unforgettable memories. 😳 Their memories are still alive. ❤️ Actually earlier I decided to discontinue my writing career in the forum, but reconsidered about my decision because many of my readers asked me to continue 😳 So I decided to continue writing more stories 😳 I hope my co-writer Titli di will also continue her amazing fan fictions 😳

I would like to specially thank my co-writer, Titli di for being a great support throughout this journey. She was really a helping hand for me when I was out of ideas & we always had a discussion before writing a chapter. 😳 I'm so glad we could make our story a success. 😳

Thank you so much everyone. 🤗Your support really meant to us. ❤️ Thank you so much for the amazing feed backs after every update 😳 Your views really helped us to develop our story 😳 Silent readers, thank you so much for hitting the LIKE button 😳 I hope everyone enjoyed reading our story & I believe we could end up this story as you all wished, with a positive note which our CVs couldn't do in the real story 😆

I hope to meet you all with a new story 😳 At the moment, I'm really busy as a medical student, tackling my schedules 😆 But whenever I get a break, I will definitely write one 😳 Till then Good bye 🤗 Love you all ❤️


~Vinu~



Edited by VinuRox - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unresd!
Vinu once again didn't leave anything for me to say! 😆 LOL jokes apart. As she said I also enjoyed throughout the ff writing for u, planning the upcoming updates, how to make the suspense, siggies etc etc, and I must thank her for being the best ever co-writer in the world. I never thought n experienced such co-writing but only because of my sister Vinu it became possible. i'm highly grateful to her n to all our readers. I really love u. thanks for being there and I wish to have ur support in future too. 😳🤗
P.S. was so engrossed in thanks note that I forgot to give feedback. 😆 no offense. I really loved loved the epilogue..it was planned to and I gave her the idea to bring a baby girl so we can mix up the parent's name. Madhu+Rishabh=Madhuri!! 😛 Awesome piece of writing and loved Rithu's reaction to Rishabala's fighting n her baby sister's birth. 😊 So cute and adorable.




Edited by titli4love - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shasha1989

superb update dear👏
waiting for the epilogue
p.s titli update ur other story trending towards love plz plz plz.

yup will update it as soon as I get time..thanks. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVELY UPDTAE
FINALLY DIPLAI WAS CAUGHT BY THE POLICE AND IS OUT OF THEIR LIVES
RK ANDM MADHU GOT MARRIED AND WITH RITHU MADE A HAPPY FAMILY
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Originally posted by: VinuRox

OMG I wanna hug you for giving such an awesome update 🤗 Brilliant 👏 Loved the slaps You know I've been waiting for it for a long time 🤣
Finally RK & Madhu are together with their princess 😳

Can't believe our story has come to an end 🥺 I'm really sad 😭 next part is from me, the epilogue 😳 will update it most probably on Sunday 😃

Dii thanks for being such a supportive co-writer 🤗 Love you ❤️


Love u too. I should thank u dear as the idea was generated from ur brilliant brain. LOL. In all the updates u was the first to comment and praise me.😆 waiting for ur babaywala epilogue. 😉
I'm also sad but I know this is not the end. We can come up with more beautiful stories of Rishbala..hope we will. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

this is really awesome..!!!👍🏼

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