MG FF- Mohabbat...ki adhuri Kahani/pt11/pg114/th#2added - Page 9

nice teaser looking forward to update

Originally posted by: mmradhu

Congratulations for new ff
Nice character sketch
Continue soon

Originally posted by: envi

thank you cs pls update soon

Part 1

He came home at late night around 12 pm... he directly go to own room and see her princess sleeping peacefully , covered in duvet... but his jaan is so angry to came late at night...

One voice takes his attention, which is lost to admiring his daughter...

Sahib wo mahi ne ye aapko dene ke liye kaha tha

He : tum jaayo

She leaves...

He came and sit near to mahi , then kissed on her forehead... then he open the sheet which mahi want to give him... but today he late due to work and his princess slept ...

He sees his princess mahi made a drawing, she made his image and own...

Then he sees towards his jaan...

Jaan I know, tumhe mera itni raat tk kaam krna pasand nhi hai

.

Really jaan mujhe waqt ka pata hi nhi chala

.

Pakka mein next time dhyan rakhunga

Ab tum dinner ke baare mein puchungi

Maine wo client ke sath kr liya tha

.

Schi kiya tha

.

Love you jaan

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Sunrays fall on his face , he turn the face to other side, but his princess wake up and want dady attention , mahi sit on his back, and pulled his vest...

Princess dady ko please sone do

Mahi again pulled his vest...

Ok princess, phle aap niche utariye

She sits on bed... he turn and takes her into arms and kissed on her forehead...

Good morning princess

Mahi bend and kissed on daddy cheek, she is her style wishing to dad good morning...

He called lakshmi ...

Lakshmi : ji sahib

Princess ko tyaar krke niche le aayo

Lakshmi : ji

Chale mahi

Mahi : na

Mujhe dady ke pass rhna hai

Dady :-Princess didi ke sath jaayo

Dady abhi fatafat tyaar hoke aapko niche milte hai

Mahi : nhi

Dady : toh aapko dady ke sath nhi jaana hai

Mahi : jaana h

Dady : toh ready ho jaayo fir

Mahi : ok

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He came out from washroom after taking bath; he sees her jaan wearing mangalsutr, she smiling to seeing him... for her smile he does anything...

Mohabbat se zyaada
Mohabbat hai tumse
Mohabbat se zyaada
Mohabbat hai tumse

He going towards her, before he hugged her from back, she turn and stop him, forwarded sandoor, he happily take sandoor and fill her maang..,

Yeh dil keh raha hai
Kasam Se Kasam Se

He wants to take her arms but mahi voice came ...

Mahi : dady

Dady : meri princess toh bhut hi beautiful lag rhi hai

Mahi gives her dimple smile...

Mahi : ab chale

Dady : bs thode der mein chalte hai

Dady ready ho jaaye

Mahi : ok

Dady : aap niche chaliye

Daadi ke sath baatein kriye

Mahi : ok

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he came downstairs and found no one on dining table...

nakul ..

nakul : ji

sb kaha hai

nakul : daadi ji, meera mam ke sath mandir gyi hai

aur dev shahab jaldi chali gye

hmmm

He closed both eyes and felt her jaan encircled her hand from back around his neck...

Jaan tum kaha chli jaati ho

Mere pass hi raha kro

Mein toh hamesha aapke sath hi ho maan

He sadly smiled...

Tumhein chahti hoon mein
Chaahat se zyaada
Tumhein chahti hoon mein
Chaahat se zyaada

maan aap mujhe jaane hi kaha dete ho

aur jaane bhi nhi dunga

maan

jaan bs

Yeh Rab janta hai
Kasam se Kasam se

Nakul : maan baba

Maan opened both eyes and said: hmmm

Nakul : nasta laga du

Maan : hmm

Mahi kaha hai

Nakul : wo lakshmi ke sath garden mein breakfast kr rhi hai

Maan : mera breakfast bhi whi le aayo

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He going towards garden area, but her voice, her giggle makes stop on spot... when he see, he feels, he got all happiness, her presence give happiness to him...

Tumhein dekhta hoon to
Lagta hai jaise
Mujhe meri saari khushi mil gayi hai

she take steps towards him and came near to him & said "kya dekh rhe the aap"

Maan : tumhe

Kyun

Maan : zindagi ho tum meri

Sadiyon se jiski
Tamanna thi mujhko
Mujhse woh meri zindagi mil gai hai

Someone pulled his pant...

Maan : princess

He takes her into arms... and go towards garden...

Maan: princess didi ko itna pareshaan nhi krte

Chalo chup chap khana khayo

She pouted... and he imagines geet face... she totally geet copied...

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Maan : nakul ye bags car mein rakhwa do

Nakul : ji

Maan : lakshmi mahi ka saara samaan achi tarah pack kr diya hai na

Lakshmi : ji

Maan : chale princess

Mahi : daadii

Daadi sees maan and understand him very well, where both going...

Daadi : bina mile hi jaa rhe the

.

Maan : daadi

Daadi : maan bs kriye ab

Kb tak bhagte rhehnge

Maan : daadi mein khi nhi bhag raha hu

Meri ek meeting hai

Aur bs mahi bhi mere sath jaa rhi hai

Daadi : meeting mein mahi kya karengi

Maan : aap uski chinta mt kijiye

Daadi : maan sch maan lijiye

Maan : mahi chale

Hume late ho raha hai

Daadi : aap dono khi nhi jaayenge

Aur kal ki pooja aap hi karenge maan

Maan : daadi mujhe koi pooja nhi krni

Maan take mahi and left...

Daadi : maan

Kyun aap khudke sath aur hum sbke sath asa kr rhe hai

Meera sees all, but no says any word...

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Daadi : meera hum kya kare

Kaise apne maan ko wapas laaye

Meera : daadi aap ase himmat haar jaayengi

Toh kaise chalenga

I hope you like first part... please do long comment...

Liked mahi's scene.His imagination scene was also good

i think yeh kaisa yeh pyar hai ka next season hai shayad

nice update!!!!!!