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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: anithu
Waiting for next part..

Eppo update???😳

tomorrow...

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meenu16

@meenu16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

hi sweety really donno wat to say...epdi ukandhu yosikarenga. awesum job.donna wat to say.u r superb..waitng fr d nxt part.plzzz update t asap .

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Sweety... chance eh illa pa... 👏

I was very behind and just now read 10 chapters together...

mothamaa padikkuradhum nallaa dhaan irukku... oru flow la appadiye pogudhu.. and I travel with it by imagining the scenes ...

so far so good... and as u said we find only positives in ur story.. so hoping it continues in upcoming chapters as well.. 😉

I'm waiting (like others)

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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Chapter 75

Karthik comes to Raji's room and Vishnu and Lakshmi look at him eagerly. He sits on the cane sofa with a sigh. Lakshmi gives him water to drink and waits until he finishes.
Vishnu: enna machaan... meesai enna daa sonnaaru?
Karthik: sonnaaru... surakkaiyile uppille nnu...
Lakshmi: enna karthik nadanthuchi?
Karthik explains them the convo between him and Raji's appa.
Lakshmi: nee konjam porumaiyaa pesi irukkanum Karthik...
Vishnu: summaa iru Lakshmi... Raji ya pathi thappaa pesinaa... avanukku kovam varaadhaa?
Lakshmi: Karthik... avaru.. avaloda appa... ponnai pathi enna pesurom nu yosikkaamaiye vaa pesuvaaru?
Karthik: puriyudhu Lakshmi... aanaa avaru use panna words appadi... almost... Raji unnai vittuttu innoruthanoda poga maattaa nnu enna nichayam nu kettaaru... ennaala idha digest eh panna mudiyalai... i lost control...
Vishnu: vidu machaan... nee sonnathula onnum thappillai...
Karthik: illa daa... avaru Raji kitta thappaa sollida poraaru nnu tension aah irukku...
Vishnu: dei... Raji poyi unnai thappaa ninaippaangalaa?
Lakshmi: aamaa Karthik... Raji kku unnai pathi theriyaadhaa enna?
"aamaa... neenga thappe pannaalum... Raji thappaa ninaikka koodaadhu..."
Everyone turns hearing these words and Raji stood at the entrance of the room.
Karthik: sorry Raji...
Raji: nee edhukku sorry solre?
Raji comes and sits beside him and holds his hand. She smiles and...
Raji: adhaan appa sollittaare... naane unnai pathi thappaa pesitten... ennai mannichudu maa ... nnu...
Karthik: Raji...
Raji: enakku theriyum Karthik... antha edathula enga appa thavira vera yaaru irundhirundhaalum ... nee pesi irukka maatte... un kai thaan pesi irukkum nu...
Karthik says "huh" and sits relaxedly.
Vishnu: enna Raji... happy yaa irukkeenga pola?
Raji: aamaa...
Lakshmi: appa enna mudivu sollu vaar nnu unakku tension aah illaiyaa?
Raji: edhukku tension ? eppadiyum sari nnu thaan solla poraanga...
Karthik: adheppadi solra?
Raji: No solradhukku edhukku yosikkanum? pattu nnu idhu mudiyave mudiyaadhu nnu solli irukka laame? Yosichu sari nnu solla poraanga nnu thonudhu...
Karthik: en chellam... enna logic...
Someone calls from downstairs..."Raji maa..."
Raji: periamma kooppidaraanga... naan enna nnu kettuttu varen...
Raji goes downstairs...
Lakshmi: free yaa iru Karthik... Raji paaru evvalo confident aah irukkaalo...
Vishnu: machaan ... congrats daa...
Karthik smiles and relaxes...

Half an hour later, Raji comes with some snacks and tea to her room. Lakshmi is reading a book lying on the bed. Raji keeps the Tea and Snacks on the table.
Raji: enga Lakshmi ivanga rendu perum?
Lakshmi: Pakkathu roomla thoongaraanga.
Raji goes and knocks the door but no response. She comes back to her room, takes her mobile and dials Karthik.
Karthik: hello...
Raji: tea kondu vanthirukken ezhundhu vaanga rendu perum...
She cuts the call and looks at the book in Lakshmi's hand.
Raji: enna Lakshmi? The Fountaihead aah?
Lakshmi: aamaa dee... Ayn Rand ezhuthinathu laye ennoda favourite...
Raji: enakkum favourite... ethana murai padichaalum, ovvoru muraiyum appo thaan pudhusaa padikkira maathiri interesting aah irukkum...
Lakshmi: aamaa... ivanga rendu perum thoonga poyittaangalaa? bore adichudhu... un book shelf nondinaa idhu kidaichudhu... eduthu padikka aarambichen...
Karthik and Vishnu come and they look so tired...
Raji gives them snacks and tea.
Vishnu: Tea appuramaa kooda kudichi irukkalaam... rendu naalaa sariyaa thongalai...
Raji: vera oru vishayam irukku... athaan ezhuppitten... sorry...
Vishnu: paravaa illai ... vidunga...
Karthik: enna vishayam Raji?
Raji: Ashvin oda appa, amma vandhirukkaanga...
Lakshmi: enna Raji solra? nijamaave vandhuttaangalaa?
Raji: aamaa... avanga vandhu konja neram aachu... periappa avangalai... Kazhugu malai Murugan kovikkum, Shenbagavalli-Poovananathar kovilukkum koottittu poraanga... ungalai vareengalaa nnu kekka sonnaaru adhaan ...
Lakshmi: Ashvin oda appa amma kooda naanga eppadi?
Raji: avanga mattum illa... thatha, aachi, periappa, periamma, athai, mama ellaarum varuvaanga...
Lakshmi: nee?
Raji: naan, appa, amma varalai... appa vukku udambu mudiyalai... amma night ellaarukkum dinner seyyanum... adhaan amma vukku help pannalaam nu naan varalai...
Vishnu: enga... unga oorukku vanthaa neenga thaan kooda irunthu ellaa idamum suthi kaattanum... adha vittuttu...
Lakshmi: aamaa Raji... naanga pogalai... next time parthukkalaam vidu...
Raji: nee enna solre Karthik?
Karthik: enna thoonga vidu maa podhum..
Karthik comes and lies on the bed. Vishnu settles on the sofa. Lakshmi sits in a chair and continues reading.
Raji: sari... neenga varalai nnu naan periappa kitta sollittu varen...
Raji starts to move...
Karthik: Raji ... varumbodhu Coffee kondu vaa ... please...
Raji: sari...
Lakshmi: enakkum...
Raji: ok...
Vishnu: ennai marandhudaatheenga...
Raji: ellaarukkum kondu varen...
Raji goes downstairs.

Twenty minutes later, Raji comes to her room with Coffee. She wakes Karthik and Vishnu and gives coffee. All of them have coffee and ...
Lakshmi: ellaam kilambi aachaa?
Raji: mm... kilambittaanga...
Raji's parents enter and all of them get up.
R-appa: ellaam ukkaarunga... mariyaadhai manasula irundhaa podhum...
Raji's appa sits on her bed and her amma stands beside him. Karthik goes and sits beside Vishnu . Raji's appa waits until they finish drinking coffee.
Raji: appa ungalukku coffee konduvaravaa?
R-appa: venaa Raji maa... naan unga rendu peru kitta yum konjam pesanum...
Lakshmi and Vishnu get up.
R-appa: neengalum irunga... ragasiyam laam onnum illai...
Karthik: sollunga...
R-appa: neenga rendu perum orutharai oruthar kaadhalikkureenga... kalyaanam kattikkanum nu aasai padareenga... appadi thaane?
Karthik: aamaa...
R-appa: naanga othukkalai nnaa?
Raji: neenga othukittaa thaan paa kalyaanam...
R-appa: illennaa?
Raji: naan thaan yerkanave sonnene... kadaisi varaikkum unga ponnaave irundhidaren nnu...
R-appa: neenga edhuvum sollaliye thambi...
Karthik: rendu perudhum ore mudivu thaan...
R-appa: unga veetla othukittaangalaa?
Karthik: illa... unga kitta thaan modhalla solli irukkom ... inime thaan enga veetla sollanum...
R-appa: avanga othukkalai nnaa?
Karthik: sari nnu solra varaikkum wait pannuvom...
R-appa: oru vela ... naanga othukittu avanga othukkalai nnaa?
Karthik: udane othukkuvaangalaa nnu solla mudiyalai... aanaa kandippaa venaa nnum solla maattanga...
R-amma: eppadi solreenga?
Karthik: avangaladhum Kadhal kalyaanam thaan...
R-appa: kalappu thirumanamaa?
Karthik: illenga... sontham thaan... athai payyan , mama ponnu... aanaa kaadhalichu kalyaanam pannikittaanga...
R-appa: appo neenga unga kadhal ah pathi sonnaa ... edhuvum maruppu therivikka maattaanga...
Karthik: oru vishayam irukku... adhukku othukka vaikkanum...
R-appa: ennadhu?
Karthik: adhu vandhu...
R-appa: thayangaama sollunga thambi...
Karthik: Raji ennai vida ondra varusham periyava...
Raji: Karthik...
Karthik: iru Raji... pesa aarambichaachu... ellaam thelivaa pesidalaam...
R-amma: enna thambi solreenga?
R-appa: ennappu idhu? unnai vida chinna paiyyanai eppadi nee kalyaanam pannikka mudiyum?
Karthik: oru nimisham... intha vishayam Raji kku therinjadhum ... avale othukkalai... naanga idhai pathi niraiya pesi, sandai pottu, pesaama irundhu, pirinju ... orutharai vittu oruthar irukka mudiyaadhu... appadingaradhai unarndhu... idhu oru prachanai illa nnu mudivu panni irukkom...
R-amma: idhu sariyaa varaadhu thambi...
Karthik: yen?
R-amma: purushanai vida pondaatti oru naal aavadhu chinnavalaa irukkanum nu solluvaanga...
Karthik: illennaa enna aagum?
R-amma: purushanukku aayusu kuraiyum nu solluvaanga...
Karthik: adhellaam summaa...
R-appa: periyavanga sonna ellaathukkum oru artham irukkum thambi...
Karthik: correct thaan... aanaa ippo manasu othu ponaa vayasu oru prachanai ille nnu niraiya peru vaazhndhu kaattittu irukkaanga...
R-appa: veli naattula idhai pathi yosikka maattaanga... aanaa namma kalaachaarathukku idhu othu varaadhu thambi...
Karthik: namma oorlaiyum irukkaanga... Cricket player Sachin Tendulkar ah vida avanga wife 5 vayasu periyavanga, Ulaga Azhagi Aishwarya Rai vida avanga husband 3 vayasu chinnavaru... avanga ellaam perum, pugazhoda, kuzhandhaigaloda santhoshamaa vaazhalaiyaa? appadi parthaa enakkum Rajikkum ondra varusham thaan vithyaasam...
Raji: oru varusham ettu maasam...
Karthik: edho onnu... vidu Raji...
R-appa: adhellaam periyavanga samaachaaram thambi... yaarum kelvi kekka maattaanga...
Karthik: inga mattum yaaru keppaanga? intha vayasu vishayam ungalukkum enga appa amma vukku therinjaa podhum...
R-amma: adhilla thambi...
Karthik: idhu ellaam oru vishayame illa... vidunga maa...
R-appa: sari naanga othukittu unga veetla othukkalai nna?
Raji: rendu peroda veetlayum othukittaa thaan paa kalyaanam...
Karthik: avanga sari nnu solra varaikkum wait panrom...
Raji: Kaadhal ngradhu rendu manasu inaiyira vishayam paa... adhukku rendu peru podhum... aanaa ... Kalyaanam ngradhu rendu kudumbam inaiyira vishayam.
Karthik: unga ellaaroda nallaasigaloda enga vaazhkaiya thodanganum nu aasai padarom...
R-appa: sari unga aasai ya en kedukkanum nu ungalukku Kalyaanam panni vachittu... adhukku appuram engaloda ottu uravu irukka koodaadhu... neeng aasa patta vaazhkaiya engala maranthittu vaazhunga nnu sonna?
Karthik: appadi oru kalyaanam naanga panna virumbalai... ungalai kashta paduthittu engalaala santhoshamaa irukka mudiyaadhu...
Raji: neenga ellaarum enga kalyaanathukku manappoorvamaa othukkanum...
Karthik: ellaaroda sammatham, aaseervaadhamum serndhu naanga pudhu vaazhkai thodanganum...
Raji: oru nalla naalu, kizhamai, pandigai, visesham naa oruthar veettukku oruthar vandhu poyikittu ellaarum santhoshamaa rendu kudumbamum onnaa irukkanum
R-amma: neenga solradhu kekkumbodhu nallaa thaan irukku...
Karthik: nadakkumbodhu arumaiyaa irukkum...
R-appa: idhu naan mattum mudivu panra vishayam illai... enakku ellaame enga annan thaan... avar kitta pesittu thaan solla mudiyum...
R-amma: ungalukku therinjirukkum pona vaaram thaan Rajimaa vai avaroda friend paiyyanukku ponnu kettu vandhaanga... antha paiyyanoda appa, amma ippo vandhirukkaanga...
Karthik: theriyum... Ashvin enga office la thaan work panraaru...
R-appa: avaru edho america la velai nnu sonnaanga...
Raji: anga thaan irundhaaru... nethu thaan enga company la Project Manager aah join pannaaru...
R-appa: periya velaiyaa Raji maa?
Raji: aamaa paa... Susan irukkaanga illa? avangalukku samamaana post... ippo Monday la irundhu Karthik avaroda serndhu dhaan pudhu project la work pannanum...
R-appa: ippo enna panradhu?
Karthik: oru prachanaiyum illai... Ashvin kitta enga kaadhal pathi sollittom... avarum purinjikittaaru... romba nalla type aah theriyudhu... avare veetla pesikkaren nu sollittaaru...
R-appa: appo sari... innoru mukkiyamaana vishayam...
Karthik: sollunga...
R-appa: Raji enakku ore ponnu... kooda porantha porappu nnu yaaru illai... engalukku appuram avalukku amma veedu nnu poga idam irukkaadhu...
Raji: en paa ippadi ellaam pesareenga?
R-appa: neruppu nnu sonnaa vaayi vendhudaadhu daa... ennai pesa vidu...
Raji: sari...
R-appa: naalaikke illennaalum.. pathu varusham kazhichu keppaaru ille nnu en ponnai kashta padutha maatteengale?
Karthik: enna bayam ungalukku? naan Raji mela uyiraiye vachirukken... avalukku kastam naa enakku valikkum... enakku intha vaazhkai la kidaicha pokkisham ava... ennoda kadaisi moochu varaikkum avala santhoshamaa vachikkanum ngradhu thaan ennoda aasai... idhai neenga enga sathiyam panna sonnaalum panni tharen...
tears fill Raji's appa's eyes... he gets up...
R-appa: naan annan kitta pesittu ennoda mudivai naalaikku neenga kilambaradhukulle solren...
And he leaves. Raji's amma sits on her bed...
R-amma: unga kooda poranthavanga ethanai peru thambi?
Karthik: naanum en appa amma vukku ore paiyyan...
R-amma: Rajiya ippo parthukitta maathiriye entha soozhnilaiyilum, evvalo periya prachanai vandhaalum, kooda irundhu support pannuveengalaa?
Karthik: kandippaa... en ullangaiyyile vachi thaanguven...
Raji: appa enna solraanga maa?
R-amma: unakku theriyaadhaa?
Raji: sari nnu solluvaanga nnu ninaikkiren...
R-amma: modhallai nnaa othukka vaayppu illai... aanaa ... ungalukku eppadi nandri solradhunne theriyalai thambi...
Karthik: edhukku periya vaarthai ellam solreenga?
Raji: ennaachu maa?
R-amma: nee sollalai nnaa? pasangalukku oru prachanai nnaaa pethavangalukku theriyaama irukkumaa?
Raji: puriyalai...
R-amma: appa oda snehithar muthulingam maama vai nyaabagam irukkaa?
Raji: eppayo chinna pullai la parthadhu... peru nyaabagam irukku... aal uruvam theriyalai...
Karthik: enna peru sonneenga?
R-amma: muthulingam...
Karthik: intha peru engayo ketta maathiri irukke?
R-amma: avar chennai la police aah irukkaru...
All four of them look at each other.
Raji: maa...
Karthik: Raji... DIG office la statement record pannaare...
Raji: aamaa Karthik.. avar peru Muthulingam thaan... avar enna sonnaru maa?
R-amma: unakku avarai adayaalam theriyalai... aanaa avaru unnai parthadhum kandupudichittaaru... pesi pala varusham aanadhaalai avar unkooda irundhadhu unnoda purushan nu nenachi... appa vukku phone panni sonnaaru...
Raji: kadavule... ennannu?
R-amma: un ponnu velai seyyara idathula ippadi oru prachanai nadanthirukku ... adhu ippadi sumugamaa mudinjidichu... nalla paiyyana un ponnukku katti vachirukke... intha maathiri vishayam nu therinjaa pondaatiya santhega padaravangalai thaan naan parthirukken... aanaa pondaattiya ullangai la vachu thaangittaaru un maappillai nnu...
Raji: entha vishayam appa vukku therya koodaadhu nnu nencheno adhu avarukku therinjiduchi...
R-amma: nalladhu thaan therinjadhu... appo thaan sambanthame illaatha oru ponnukku ivvalavu udhavi panravan pondaatiya eppadi parthukkuvaan nu avarai yosikka vachirukku...
Karthik comes near Raji's mother and holds her hands.
Karthik: unga kitta venum nu maraikkalai... therinjaa neenga kashta paduveenga nnu thaan sollalai...
R-amma: en ponnai ippadiye kadaisi varaikkum parthuppiyaa?
Karthik: kandippaa...
She keeps Raji's hand in his hand and holds together with her hands.

Chapter 76... coming soon...

CHAPTER 76

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

sorry friends for the delay...
my laptop caused hell of problems and given it to service...
it took me more than 2 days to type on my phone and update..
please bear with any typing errors...

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Ramya05

@Ramya05

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#646

Super ma... Very very nice... Nicely connected:)
U typed all this on a phone... Kudos :)

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

thanks for the pm sweety...

appa,enna oru upadate😳...thella thelliva iruku...

r's dad and mom pechu nyayamanathuthan...athuku kr bathilum arumai...

kadaisile ellam sumukama mudincha seri...r's dad enna solla poraro...parpom...

Edited by shiningstar77 - 12 years ago

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Mathi

@mathimathi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

wow..what an update sweety..sema..

yaarune theriyaadha palakkame illadha orutharuku ponnu katti kudukura oru amma appavuku ulla niyayamana bayam.. u have very nicely put it...and also u have nicely connected them.. idhu kandippa raji parents ku oru nambikaiyai kudukum...

the bond between a father and his SIL becomes spcl when the father believes that thanna vida avan namma ponna nalla paarthupanu thonum bodhu ...pls I wud love to see that spcl bonding between raji's parents and karthik in this story...

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: mathimathi

the bond between a father and his SIL becomes spcl when the father believes that thanna vida avan namma ponna nalla paarthupanu thonum bodhu ...pls I wud love to see that spcl bonding between raji's parents and karthik in this story...

Definitely mathi...
Karthik will win the hearts of Raji's parents... and they'll also rely on him as Raji does...
it'll be unfolded in upcoming chapters

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sweetie18

@sweetie18

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#650

Hats off Sweety!👏

Loved ur update.I always imagine while reading your story

as if I am watching the episode in real. Wow! enjoyed mamma mapillai

sandippu, How nice it wud be if the director takes the story like this in the serial, serial fulla sodapalla pogudhu ... but unga kadhai padikum podhu

romba aarudala irukku..u r doing a great job..😊