#2 TAAREY FF - Dance To Your Heart's Rhythm|| *TEASER - Pg55 UP* - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
NICE UPDATE..
it was very cute..
waiting for surprise
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Bechara rey ..hmesha swayam uske romance k beech Mei aa jata h😆
Taayam fight was so cute
Aww..taarey romance nd Sharon was getting irritated😆
Rey proposed Taani nd swayam proposed Sharon😛
Loved it
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello..!!
Awww taarey ka romance... And not so awww swayam ka interruption... >.<
Swayam ka baccha... Idiot..!
Par hamara majnu kaha manne vala????
Hahahahah taani ka cute dialogue.. "Romance main bhai and raat main rey..!!!!"
Hahahahahah sharon's irritation...!!!!
Whaaatt??? Swayam knew?????
Hey did you just steal my playlist???
You put only the songs i like..!!!!!
Awww taarey and swaron proposal...!!!!!
Update soon..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome superrr updt...
love taayam love-war...
plzzz updt soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsme update.. Luved the whole update.. precap is scaring.. Pls tr ko kuch nhi hone chahiye
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Posted: 11 years ago
Taayam are too cute lol
I love their bonding and their fights are hilarious
Aww possessive bhai interrupt Taarey romance time
Rey going to see his Taani at time and then they shared that passionate kiss
It was so romantic
Omg!!! Reyam propose ;)
I'm so happy for them
Superb update, recap is a bit scary
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update ..! 👏
taarey .. luvd dem ..! ☺️

swayam .. har jagah tapak jaata h ..! 😡

rey eager to meet taani ... bechara ..! 😆

taarey in d balcony .. super cute ..! 😳

uggh .. sharon disturbed dem ..! 😡

o teri .. swayam jaanta tha dat rey taani se milne gya tha ..! 😲

luvd d gang's performance ..! 👍🏼

rey proposed taani ..! 😳

luvly update .. 👍🏼

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved how the boys won the girls over and Swayam's possessiveness
Rey is too cute sneaking in to Taani's room from balcony, their phone conversation was too cute, but I loved how Sharon caught them
Loved Taasharey's reaction when they realized Swayam new Rey snuck into the girl's room to see Taani
Proposal was amazing
Please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!! both the chapters were extremely superb rocking hilarious nd amazing!!👏
loved the way the girls gave the boys surprise nd the way rey came to meet taani...
the best part was wen swayam says that u should close the balcony after coming...😆
loved it!!
the way both the boys proposed their girls were just fantastic!! the rings were beautiful!!
plzz keep on updating nd thxx for the pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
RECAP : Rey and Taani have some romantic moments which are eventually spoiled by Swayam and Sharon. They give a group dance after which Rey proposes Taani and Swayam proposes Sharon.

CHAPTER 16-A
FINALLY ONE...

Rey and Taani were having their last romantic walk on the beach of Goa. The waves were crashing on their feet and it felt great. The sun had decided to take rest and was slowly going to rest. With the cool breeze playing on their faces, it felt as if nature wanted this couple to have the most romantic time ever.

Rey and Taani both turned towards the setting sun.



T : Pata hai Rey... Yeh dubta hua suraj yeh bata raha hai ki kumara Goa trip khatam ho gaya. Humare life ka ek aur din khatam ho gaya.
R : Ya yeh bata raha hai ki kal jab wo aayega to humare zindagi mein nayi khushiyaan layega.
T : (looking at Rey) Never knew you can also be so philosophical...
R : Tumhare saath rehne ka result hai...
T : (her mouth open in O shape) REY... (and she ran splashing water on him.)
R : Taani am getting wet.
T : Waise bhigey huye kafi hot lag rahe ho...(she winked at him)
R : Kafi mazaa aa raha hai na... (and he splashed water on her making her wet)
T : Rey... stop it...
R : (started singing) samundar mein nahaake (pulling her close) aur bhi namakin ho gayi ho...
T : (her hand resting on his chest, their lips almost touching) Zyada namak sehat ke liye hanikarak hai... (and pushed him in the water and started running)
R : Romantic moment barbad karna koi tumse sikhey... (and started chasing her)

Taani was running looking behind to see Rey but he was not there. She slowed down her pace but she collided with someone. Before she could fall, she felt strong iron grip on her waist preventing her from falling.

T : (without looking at the person) I am sorry... so sorry... (but before she could complete she felt those familiar rough lips on hers)

"Still sorry? " asked Rey breaking their kiss.

T : (acting as if thinking) Naaahhh...(and again started kissing)

Slowly their kiss turned into a passionate one. Rey was trying to pry open into her mouth but Taani was not going to make it so easy for Rey. She immediately broke the kiss and seductively indicated Rey to follow. Both reached their rooms.

(AGEY READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)

T : (opening the door to her room) Sorry Rey... but I am not going to make it so easy for you...
R : Try stopping me... (and he entered her room)

He kicked the door close and locked it from inside.

T : (biting her lower lips seductively) Tumhare irade kuch thik nahi lag rahe...
R : Actually mujhe to meri izzat khatre me nazar aa rahi hai... (his arms finding their way around Taani's waist)
T : Hmmm... (placing her hands around his neck) ... To tumhe chale jana chahiye...
R : (their lips inches away) Chala jata.. (his tone husky) but kya karu door is locked...
T : (kissing his earlobe) To darwaza band hi rehne do...

Their lips found their proper place. Rey felt like he was nibbling at the soft rose petals. Taani kept on deepening the kiss. Slowly Rey's tongue found an opening and entered her mouth. Both were exploring each other. Rey picked Taani up without breaking the kiss and laid her on the bed.

They broke the kiss when they fell short of breath. Their eyes caught in an intense eye-lock. Both could read the desire and longing in each other's eyes. They again started kissing but this time the kisses were aggressive.

Rey moved his lips towards her neck and continued giving wet kisses. Taani turned her head to one side giving him full access. His kisses were driving her mad.

"Ree...yyy " she moaned with pleasure as her hands started unbuttoning his shirt. His hands lifted her back gently and slowly unzipped her dress. Placing kisses on her collar-bone, he slowly removed her dress while Taani removed his shirt.

She kept on moaning with pleasure as his kisses moved on to her cleavage. His tongue exploring each and every part of her milky white skin. His hands kept on moving over her curves. Her moaning was acting as fuel to his longing to make her only his.

Soon their clothes were lying in a heap on the floor while they continued making love. The sun had set down outside as if giving them privacy. The moon had decided to hide behind the clouds as the two love-birds were becoming one. Gentle breeze blew spreading the aroma of love all over.

They would have still continued had they not heard Sharon banging on the door.

T : (putting on her dress and throwing Rey's shirt towards him as he was putting on his jeans) Coming Sharon...
R : Main kya karu? Kahan chupun?
T : (combing her hair) Balcony se kud ke apne kamre me chale jao...
R : What? Door locked hai...
T : (pushing him to the balcony) To abhi ke liye yahi raho.. (and pulled the curtains close)

Taking a deep breath, she composed herself and opened the door.

T : Sharon...
Sh : Darwaza kholne me itna late kyu hua?
T : Wo... wo main wash room... wash room me thi...
Sh : Ok... (she kept her hand bag on the bed and moved towards the balcony) Aaj ka mausam kitna acha hai and tum ho ki balcony ka darwaza band rakhi ho? And parde bhi kyu band kar diye?
T : Really? I don't think ki mausam acha hoga bahar... (thinking about the consequences if Sharon found Rey hiding there)
R : (standing outside) Mar gaye... Sharon ne dekh lia to main to gaya...
Sh : Taani dekho to ek baar... (and she removed the curtains) See...
T : (her eyes searching here and there) Kafi acha lag raha hai... (and she opened the door)
Sh : Feels great, right? (as she breathed in the cool air coming from the beach)
T : (thinking : "Yeh Rey kahan gayab ho gaya?") Yeah... It is...

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Here Rey took a deep breath of relief.

R : Aaj to marte marte bach gaya... (he said as he laid on his bed)
Sw : (coming out of the washroom) Hey ! Tu kab aaya ?
R : Bas abhi abhi...
Sw : Waise tu tha kahan?
R : (to himself) Balcony me...
Sw : Kahan?
R : Beach... beach me tha... Itna suhana mausam hai... (thinking how he was standing in Taani's balcony) ... Pehle pura andhera tha... (thinking how he was about to be caught by Sharon)... Fir ek moon dikha... (thinking how he saw Swayam open the balcony doors and taking the towel) ... aur fir har jagah roshni hi roshni thi... (and he managed to jump into his balcony just before Sharon removed the curtains)
Sw : (looking at him with suspicion and concern) Waise moon to ek hi hota hai... and tum jis tarah se baat kar rahe ho aise lag raha hai jaise kuch chupa rahe ho.
R : Main... nahi to... (gulping) Tumse kyu chupaunga? (snatching the towel from swayam's hand) Main fresh hoke aata hu (and rushed into the wash room)
Sw : (to himself) Kuch to hai jo Rey mujhse chupa raha hai... But wo mujhse kyu chupayega??? (shaking his head) Uuuggghhh... Main kuch zyada hi sochne laga hu shayad !!!!



PRECAP : a plan unfolds. A dance that may change everything.




NOTE : Hope you like the update. Short update but I felt that our TaaRey were lacking some romance. Plz do hit like and try giving long comments. Criticism is always welcomed. Love you all..

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