Hameshaa -Thread Three- [NTL PG144] - Page 22

Originally posted by: starsarun

OMG! This is really not working...
I am getting curious but more of impatient!
It felt like an episode of IPK going on..
And weekends are killing!
At last Arnav and Shyam reached Kala's house... What will happen now? Is arnav going to pay for Khushi? :(
Very Sad!

Originally posted by: mbbsrocks

Jiji yar this flashback?? Who is telling this?

Or Somebody is thinking?

Btw you are writing it tooo good

I loved how you are explaing three areas and time periods so aptly..

This seems Very interesting...

Poor khushi..stuck with such bad people..These things are awful.God bless girls in real life...😔

Ohhh and thanks for the Dedication...m such a cute Chamchi na :D

Oye itni jaldi Theek hogae? You dint get an injection 🥱

a😆

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP

When will this torture end for her? At least for the first one we can be sure of the fact nothing will happen to her!


This present time is the main kostin????? Hmm!


I don't know what to comment! This is intense man! Hope it ends soon this tough ordeal for he! Poor soul!

Shyam found his?



Cheers

Originally posted by: say_cheese

Phew...m here finally. Remember me? ...
Anyway m giving no excuse for my late-lateefy coz simply there is not any except i am busy these days 😛
Okay so i have read all the pending chapters (26-30) and i knew that Khushi's past was terrible but reading it literally would be this much horrible, i didnt know it.
So, Human trafficking happens even in the most sophisticated and modern societies. And its a harsh truth that this thing cant be abolished. Reasons are simple;sex and war bring the demons out of men and the patriarchical nature of the society is just the ghee in the fire. So this does and will continue existing like many other evils of society. We can only make people esp. Women aware of these vultures and help them as much as possible.

Though its heartening to see such things are happening to poor and innocent soul like Khushi and after reading all these updates mood ki band baj gyi, kudos to you Di that you write about this.

Coming to the story, so Jai & Veeru reached the place, lets see how they gonna rescue Khushi and other girls.
Cute and innocent protagonists, disgusting Villains, heartbeat skipping twists and turns, this story is totally like a 70s-80s bollywood masala movie. ( i have already said it na di? )
Will love to read more and more of this story. Let them come.
Thnx 4 the pm! TC Di !
(And agar aap bhool gyi ho to yaad dila dun its your 'cheesy' here 😃 )

PS - Okay Di ! So the thing is due to my a bit out of aukat career aspiration and further academic obligations, m busy these days. This is the reason of my terribly unexcusedly late comment.😊..

PPS - Atm m following only one story of yours i.e. Hameshaa and us par se mere late comments. So i wont mind..okay i will mind but wont be surprised if you shunt me off from your buddy list. So Di ball is in your court now, keep me or kick me. *puppy face* ( ohh i love playing emotional card 😈 )

Originally posted by: luvbug

Hi J, I just started reading this story n I'm hooked to it... Oh my khushi is going through soo much... Oh n tht argh kala didi... Grrr n tht shaheer.. Uff I hate them ...

Wat will happen to aman .. Oh poor him first his heart breaks n then the attack... Hope is recovers..

N wat do I say abt arshi just awesome