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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
I'm loving this girl !!! she is just awesome...

Yaar yeh toh Sam-jun ki baap nikli!!...It was hillarious..🤣
Rd & She is planning something...what it it?

Do continue...& thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
OMG I was laughing while reading the whole update...it was hilarious...

specially the situp scene and kidnap scene..👏

then neha's interogation..bechara shree..hamesha fasta hai...😆😆

i love this character neha..she is really a mixed RR sister..khon bolta hai..😆

Arjun doesnt live in his house??but y?
and what is RD and neha planning...and why...

continue soon..thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Its really amazing..we can seena diff arjun in this i loved is pls jaldi update karo na and do pm .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Read n replied everyone

@ kaveriw2008 - thankx dear

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@ Shamsad1607 - thankx di n what Neha n Rahul r planning u will know in this update

@ rimi_invisible - arjun left the home to complete his dream of becoming a police-officer n what Neha n Rahul r planning u will know in this update

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Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Chapter 4 a



After knowing about the kidnapping plan Neha goes from ETF in angry mood.

~~

Etf Conference room..

There was no case today so all were doing their paper works...

Jun's phone rang. It was call from Rahul.

Rd - bhai..ye Neha samajhti kya he apne aap ko?

Jun - kyu? Kya hua?

Rd - bas wo hum dono me jhagda ho gaya.

Jun - phirse? Iss baar kisne shuru kiya?

Rd - mene..

Jun - me iss me tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta..pehle hi tumhari baat maankar bahut punish ho liye..ab tum jaano aur baby jaane..me tum dono ke bich me nahi padunga..

Rd - bhai..plzz aap aisa mat kahiye..aap Baby ko manaa lenge..plz mere liye..

Jun - me tumhari koi help nahi karunga..is that clear?

Rd - clean n clear he bhai..lekin problem dusri he

Jun - kya he?

Rd - wo mera phone nahi utha rahi aadhe ghante se call kar raha hu par usne ek bhi call nahi uthaya..

Jun - isme problem kya he? Seedhi si baat he use tumse baat nahi karni to wo phone nahi uthayegi.. ab apna kaam karo aur ghar jaakar use manaa lena.

Rd - thik he..ok bye..

~

This time Rd calls Sam..

~

Rd - bhai u r very good..bst bro in world..best cop n even bst chief..

Sam - apni bakwaas bandh karo aur kaam ki baat karo.

Rd - bhai wo aapse ek favour chahiye thi..

Sam - me tumhe koi help nahi karunga...

Rd - par meri baat to suniye..aap ka koi case to nahin chal raha na?

Sam - nahi..

Rd - to plz aap baby se kahiye ki mujh se maafi maange..warna accha nahi hoga..

Sam - ye tum mujhe kyu keh rahe ho?

Rd - wo mujhse baat nahi kar rahi aur me bhi nahi karunga..me use aadhe ghante se call kar raha hu par wo call utha hi nahi rahi..

Sam - me baat karke dekhta hu..

Rd - thankx bhai!..

Sam dials a no. but it is not picked

~

Rd calls Neha...

Rd - Baby ..jaisa tumne kaha tha..waise hi kaha he..

Neha - good Chalo ab ye to done baaki ka hum sambhal lenge..

Rd - tumhe lagta he ki hamara Sam bhai aur Jun bhai ko ek karne ka plan work karega?..

Neha - ya..I'm sure ki ye dono Rathod Aur Rawte se phir Sam Jun ban jayenge..now its my turn..I'll do the needful..

Rd - ok bye..

~ ~

ETF Conference room..

Jun - Kya baat he Rathod .. tum itne pareshaan kyu lag rahe ho aur kiska call tha?

Sam - kuch nahi..wo Rahul ka call tha..un dono ke bich phirse jhagda ho gaya to mujhse keh raha tha..sulah karwane ke liye..

Jun - to tum kahi uski help karne ke baare me to nahi soch rahe? Aisa kuch mat karna..unka jhagda he..khud solve kar lenge..bachhe nahi he dono..bade ho gaye he.

Sam - me uss baat ke liye pareshaan nahi hu..me bas baby ke baare me pareshaan tha..

Aisha[she still does not know relation of Neha n Sam][in mind] phir se Baby!..iski problem kya he?

Jun - baby ke liye pareshaan..par kyu? Kya hua?

Sam - rahul use aadhe ghante se call kar raha he aur wo phone nahi utha rahi..

Jun - ab dono ke bich me jhagda hua he to... ye Samjhey ya samjhau?

Sam - wo to samajh gaya lekin mera phone kyu nahi utha rahi ye samajh nahi aaya.

Sam's phone buzzes..

Sam n Jun receive a msg from Neha.. Plz help me'

Sam again calls a no. but it is switched off..

Sam - damn it! Ye baby mera phone kyu nahi utha rahi? Sri [gives a no. to him] tum is number ki location trace karo..jaldi.

Sri - sir ye to abhi switched off he..

Jun - ye phone last me kaha tha wo location batao..

Sri - location trace ho gaya he.. it is some far place from city n dangerous area as it is a deserted place..par baat kya he sir?

Jun - wo batane ka abhi waqt nahi he..mujhe lagta he hume wahan jaldi pahuchna chahiye..

Sam - ha..

Team is surprised to see their bosses panicked..they don't know the reason

Chotu - sir me chalu aap ke saath?

Sam - thik he chalo..[to team] tum log apna paperwork khatam karo hum aate he.

They take their guns..tuck them in usual place n leave in haste..

When they reach the place with their guns drawn out ready for firing but no one was found there.they search the area...

Jun - [he calls Neha but it says switched off]

Sam - damn it Rawte..hum bekar me hi pareshaan ho gaye the..

Wo dekho..

[points at Neha sitting in sand n making a sand-castle n they both go there]

Jun - ye kya kar rahi ho tum?

Neha - aapko dikhayi nahi de raha kya? Hum to sand-castle banaa rahe he. Haina bhaisa?

Sam - wo to mujhe bhi dikhyi de raha he rawte.

Neha -[looks at their panicked faces] aap itna pareshaan kyu lag rahe he? Kuch hua he kya?

Jun - kuch nahi..tumne hume msg kiya tha that u need help..kaisa mazaak tha ye?

Neha - mazaak?!! Nahi ye koi mazaak nahi tha humne to saaf-saaf itna hi likha tha ki hume madad chahiye.

Sam - kya help chahiye thi tumhe?

Neha - are wo humari dusty ka tyre puncture ho gaya tha aur phir hum ye sand-castle banane lage to wo bhi aadha hi banaa to humne aapko msg kiya to help me..aap itna dar kyu gaye the ? kahin aapko hume kuch aur musibat me dekhna tha?

Jun - kuch aur musibat..nahi bas wo..[tries to control his anger]

Neha - plz bhaiya aap jhooth mat boliye aur hamare samne to bilkool bhi nahi.

Sam - tumne apna phone switch off kyu kar ke rakha he?

Neha - humne kiya nahi he uski battery dead ho gayi..ab aap yaha khade rahenge ya hamari help bhi karenge ise poora karne me?

[jun moves towards his suv]

Jun - hum ETF office chalte he..koi sand castle nahi banaana mujhe..

[Neha holds hand of jun n starts singing..

na jao bhaiya chudaake baiya

kasam tumhari me ro padungi..]

Jun - ye gaana band karo..chalo rathod..

Neha - aapko jaana ho to jaiye lekin aap bhaisa ko kyu apne saath le jaana chahte he? sand-castle aapko nahi banana..mat banaiye..lekin hum ise poora kiye bina nahi jaane waale aur isme bhaisa hamari help karenge...karenge na bhaisa?

Sam - ha kyu nahi..iss sand castle ko complete karne ke baad chalte he warna phir koi nayi punishment mil jayegi..

Neha - ye huyi na baat ..bhaisa to samjhdaar he..aapke uss samjhey ya samjhau ko sun-sunkar samajhdaar ban gaye

[sam n jun glare at her]

ab hume ghoorna band kijiye aur ise poora karne me hamari help kijiye..chaliye..

[holds both's hands n makes them sit]

Jun - ok..

They three make Sand castle n spend some time together.

Chotu is watching this from a corner..he is happy to see this soft side of their akdu bosses.

After making the sand castle they come to Etf office.

~ ~

Etf Conference room..

Aisha - sir kya baat he?

Ri - kya hua sir? Aap kaha gaye the?

Arjun - Rathod! Mujhe ye samajh me nahi aa raha ki yaha Chief hum dono he ya ye dono?

Sam - stop it Rawte! Kisi aur ka gussa yahan par mat nikaalo..

[Jun bangs his hand on table n some sand falls on table that stuck on his bandage while making sand-castle]

Ri - sand! sir aapne poora table ganda kar diya..

Neha arrives there n says to riya - ms.mukherjee! I guess u need some lens to see that only a part of the table is dirty n not the whole table.

Jun - Neha tum abhi yaha se jao..

Neha - humne kab manaa kiya?humne to ghar chalne ko hi kaha tha..aap le aaye hume yaha.

Jun - behes mat karo [glares at Neha n she hides behind Sam ]tumhe kya lagta he ki tum Rathod ke piche chup jaogi to me tumhe nahi datunga?

Neha - [to Sam]bhaisa aap bhaiya ko ye bataiye ki kya hum aapke piche chupe he ya aap hamare aage khade he?

Sam - rawte..me baby ke aage khada hu..wo mere piche nahi chupi..

Jun - rathod..tum uski side mat lo..tumhe mere saath hi rehna he pure din..

Neha - bhaiya! Aap bhaisa ko dhamki de rahe he?

Sam - tum kise dhamki de rahe ho rawte?

Neha - aapko hi de rahe he..aur koi bali ka gadha nahi mila na..

Chotu - bali ka bakra to suna tha par ye bali ka gadha pehli baar sun raha hu..

Sam - ye tum bali ka gadha mujhe keh rahi ho?

[now Neha hides behind jun]

Neha - ye hum nahi keh rahe..ye to bhaiya ne hi kaha.

Jun - Neha tum ye chabi lo [gives her keys of his SUV] aur ghar jao.

Sam - iss baar ghar hi jaana..kahi ghumne mat nikal jaana..

Neha - ji bhaisa![to Jun]shaam ko ghar par ye angry man ban kar mat aiyega! Aapne gusse ko shaant karna sikh lijiye. It is very good for health!

Jun - ab tum jaa rahi ho ya..

Neha - ok jaate..nahi aate he.

[she tells something to jun in his ears ]

Jun - nahi..

Neha - Hum aapse puch nahi rahe..aapko bataa rahe he.

[she tells something to sam in his ears]

Sam - aaj bhi? Thik he..

[she goes]

Sam - team !tum log apna paperwork khatam karo..[he goes to his cabin]

[Jun also goes to his cabin]

Team is alone in conference room

Ri - how dare she tell me to wear lens..meri eyesight bilkool thik he.

Ai - meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha.

Ri - kya samajh me nahi aa raha aisha?

Ai - ye iska aur Rathod sir ka rishta kya he?

Ri - tumne sunaa nahi usne Rathod sir ko bhaisa kaha to bhai-behen hi honge na?

Chotu - ha wo Arjun sir aur Rathod sir ki behen he.

Ai - mujhe phir bhi kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha..

Ri - ab kya?

Ai - pehli baat to ye ki Arjun sir aur Rathod sir jab jaa rahe the to bahot pareshaan lag rahe the..dusri baat jab wo wapas aaye to gusse me the aur saath me Neha bhi thi aur

Rathod sir ne Arjun sir ko kaha ki kisi aur ka gussa yaha mat nikaalo aur unki baato se lag raha tha ki Neha ne koi galti ki he dekha nahi kaise daat rahe the use..

Ri - ha aur hum dono ko bhi bina wajah itna kuch sunaa diya..

Sri - mujhe lagta he zaroor Neha ne koi galti ki hogi

Li - ya phir koi mazaak kiya hoga..

Sri - chotu! Tum gaye the na un dono ke saath..batao na kya hua waha par?

Chotu - kuch khas nahi..

Chotu narrate the whole incident..how Neha made Sam n Jun make sand-castle n her pranks.

Chotu - waise ek baat to maan ni padegi..Neha me kuch to khas he jiski wajah se wo hamare dono sir ko apni baat maan ne par majboor kar deti he.

All nod in positive..

Sri - ab apna paper work karte he warna ye samjhe ya samjhau aur damnit aakar hume kuch aur karne par majboor kar denge.

All resume their paper works.

~ ~ ~

That's all for today..plz tell how's it..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Loved it dear awesome
Neha ka jawaab nahin
sabko nacha rahi hai 😆😆
Loved aisha n riya convo
n loved neha 7 samjun convo too bali ka gadha 😆😆
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
AWESOME UPDATE 😃
NEHA tu si grat ho 👏
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Awesome update...
Loved Neha & her prank...😆😆😆
Bali ka gadha...🤣🤣🤣
Aisha-Riya confused...😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
beautiful update, love AYESHA n RIYA convo, update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
nice update know they know
neha is a sister there both
senior update soon

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