St. Louis ki GS!! #i'll b all r8 #KR Discontinued :( - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Dee, As always love reading your work. Thank you so much for updating this.
Eager to know KriSha secret.


I really loved this FF. Will miss it alot :'(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Love the storyline...!
Awesome update..!
Cant wait to see the next part..:)
Please PM me when you have updated, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Awsum update dii..


Loved it..

Haye the update was just ah-mazing..

Haye poor swayam gang ke question se pareshaan hogya bichara..

Haye sharon saved swayam nice..

Haye swaron convo haye ye sharon baadi confusion create karti hai..

But god knw why i have a feeling that KriSha are sissy..??

Anyways update soonwa will be waiting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
amazing update
bt bahut chota h...
kounsa secret h...i want to know

update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
finalllyyy... *phew* thanxx 4 d update... :D it's jzt beautifulll... Swaron part is grttt here... D way sharon is trying to undrstand him is jstt wowww... Nd then house convo ... I guess now he knws abt sis part.. It's going to be intrsting... Continue supr soon... Loved d update ... Thanxx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
amazing update
n eagerly waiting for krisha's secret
update nxt part soon
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
part 10 chapter was amazing... the question and answer round of gang to
swayan thanks to sharon she some how saved swayan from the gang... and the reaction
of sharon made both gang and swayan shocked... and finally sharon and swayan had
a conversation and want to know what the secret they are hidden both sharon and kriya
and i think after listen to that swayan is sure mess up... pl reveal the truth soon...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Kriya aur sharon sisters hain... obviously...

aur kya aisa ho sakta hai jo sirf sharon ka secret ho and swayam ko bhi naa pata ho... 😆


so it was all SS update...which i think was much required...

Needless to say i loved itt..!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
oyee deeethuu... kitna tadpati hai tu... 😛

ab tak krisha secret nhi khola... swayam se zyada toh mujhe tension hoying... 😆

rofl... i wonder .. if kriyam ko gang ne sath dekh liya hota toh... 😉

i wish kriyam sach me aise masti karte kaash show me... cvs zyada acche scenes nhi dete unke... 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Part - 11



" Hey swayam!! Tu kab aaya?? " She grinned looking at him coming out of the kitchen . She has the maggi plate and a coffee in the each hand. She sat beside him placing the plate on the table before adjusting herself. She looked at him with wide mouth when he took the plate and started eating not offering a bit to her.

"That was for me " but she got no reply. She frowned and looked at him. He grabbed the remote beside her and switched on the TV and changed the channels before settling on some cricket match. He was so engrossed into the screen , she couldn't believe he is ignoring her royally..

"Swayam will you speak up?? " She said sternly but was trolled when he gave a deaf ear. She placed the coffee mug not able to believe his actions and getting ready to shout at him . But she was more shocked when he placed that empty plate on the table and grabbed the coffee and started sipping it .

" Wo mere liye tha " she pouted. But again he gave a deaf ear .

"Swayam kya hua?? You are acting weird " she said annoyed. He yawned soon after she uttered those words making her jaw drop to ground again.

Before she could shout his phone rang and he attended.

" Hey Shar!! " He smiled and she went silent . She sat straight and looked front at the now mute screen.

" Wo mai Kriya ke ghar pe hun " he said casually as her eyes popped out of their sockets.

" Arrey tum baat karo, waise bhi mai akele baite bore ho raha hun "

this fumed her more.

" Wo?? Pata nahi kaha hai , yahi kahi pe padi hogi " She couldn't believe her ears.

"Swayam !! "she said not able to believe.

" Okay Sharon.. 8 ko tayyar rehna.. I will pick you up " He said and grinned knowing well that Sharon was blushing.

"Ohh tum yahi pe ho?? " He asked casually seeing her.

She pushed him on the couch and started punching him and shouted.

" Are you kidding me idiot, you are the one ignoring me "

"Ohh!! Sorry I thought it's Sharon's sister, mai usse jyaada jaanta nahi na.. so baat nahi kiya. I don't know it's you , sorry " he said mockingly. But she stopped long back, looking at him shocked.

"Tum kaise jaante ho?? " She mumbled slowly.

" Wo kya haina, meri bestie mujhe utna trust nahi kar paayi jitna usse karna tha.. so mujhe Sharon se hi poochna pada " He looked at her , anger visible on his face.

" Swayam it's not like that, it's sharon's secret "

"Oh shut up.. ye tum donon se judi baat hai , and do you know how much she is hurt knowing this ?? " He narrowed his eyes.

"Par wo toh mujhe hate karti hai " He rolled his eyes.

"Yeah She hates you and you hate her right?? Wah , sahi hai.. prove karliya donon ne ki behane hai ... "He said frustrated.

" Wo mujhe hate nahi karti?? " She asked shocked .

He rolled his eyes and got up from there to make him something.. He is starving badly. No use in explaining these two girls.

"Par wo toh mujhe hate karti thi "Kriya mumbled to herself lost in thoughts.



Here comes the Third one!!*Phew*

Done with today's quota!!

Hope you like,,

-Deetha😃

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