#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148)

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: rhythmsangh
no dont tell me that asad will leave zoya stranded😭
he also told her that he will always be at her side😲

oh god

...update it fast waiting to know more😊

but love ur updates

There will be a separation, like I said before, but I can promise u a happy ending. U can count on me for that. :)

I think i'll update on Monday. :)

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: akaswan
Hi awesome update 👏👏

I just loved it i really missed this story

I'm reading it again i love how you wrote ❤️

Continue soon please 😃

And amazing precap i'm already waiting for the next update 😎

Hey there!

Thank u!

I'll try my best to update on monday. :)

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Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Hi guys! I'm here with a surprise preview of the next chapter 😃. But its not much really, but I'm posting it anyways. So here goes the preview of the 14th chapter:

Shattered

Tanveer's declaration hit Asad like a storm. Asad staggered back a few steps, till he hit the car, "Y...you're lying." "Why should I lie? You can get a DNA test done, if you want." Asad felt like someone was choking him, words refused to leave his mouth. Asad managed to let out, "How...how do you know?" Tanveer smirked, she replied, "Well, Razia bi did need someone to thwart Zoya's hopes of finding her father and obviously she wanted Zoya to believe that her abbu was no more so that she would quit searching for him and well, I think you can tell the rest of the story yourself." Something inside Asad broke, he stared at Tanveer, as tears made way to his eyes. Tanveer clicked her tongue, feigning sympathy. "Life is so unfair, na? Fell in love with the daughter of the man who ruined your family and you didn't even know it. That's a little cruel." A huge lump formed in Asad's throat. He dabbed at his eyes furiously, forcing away tears that threatened to spill. Asad knew more than well that Tanveer was an untrustworthy brat, she could get away with the biggest of lies, but he knew that she couldn't possibly be lying, this time. The very glint in her eyes depicted her joy in seeing Asad's heart shatter. For once, she looked satisfied with herself, for ruining two lives with just a simple truth. Tanveer sighed exaggeratively. "Well then, my job is done, I should get going now.", she announced. She smiled triumphantly. That one was for insulting me, Asad, she thought. She cast one last glance at him before turning and walked away. Asad stood there, aimlessly, watching the sun disappear below the horizon. He noticed a couple walking by, hand in hand, smiling and laughing at each other, while another sat in a bench beside him, snuggled up next to each other, watching the sunset. Every little gesture and action going on around him seemed to be mocking his fate, they reminded him of everything he couldn't have in his life anymore. Those moments that he was yet to cherish, all destroyed in the wake. He didn't know how long he stood there, time seemed to be distant. Finally, Asad straightened himself up. He swallowed the lump in his throat, his voice was hoarse, he whispered into thin air, "Zoya was never mine and never will be."

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I know, I know, it wasn't much. I could have posted a more important part of the chapter but then there wouldn't have been anything to look forward to.

About the next update, it will be on monday for sure. I'll finish of typing quite a bit today, in fact, I've already done 2 paragraphs more than what I've posted here.

I was a little disappointed that I didn't get as many comments as I used to, but then again, if there's anyone to blame, its me, coz I already said that I was gonna be discontinuing the ff and I'm sure that most of u must've forgotten the whole plot of the story.

Another important thing, I noticed that quite a lot of ppl aren't happy with the way that Asad treats Zoya, in this story, I'm really sorry if I've heart anyone in the way that depicted Asad, that was definitely not my intention. But if u guys remember, I started this story off at the point where Asad tell Zoya to leave the house in the show, after the faisco at Ayaan's engagement. If u were to look at it the time period from the story, it hasn't really been long. Right now, in the story, Asad is still the guy who hates his father and Gaffur. So that would explain Asad's unacceptance towards Zoya. But Asad is Asad, doesn't use his brain before he says anything, but then ends up regretting in the next 5 minutes 😆. You guys should know what I mean. But regardless of my explanation, I apologise again if u guys feel that Asad is being depicted in too much a harsh way. :)

So that's abt it, plz plz plz do leave ur reviews behind! I love reading them! 😃

Love,

Ramya

Edited by ..Ramya.. - 11 years ago