SS: I Really Want To Know.Ch4,pg11 20.02.2014

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Ye story kab likhi mujhe to pata hi nahi...awesome yaar

Poor ariya...aakhir aisa kya ho gaya jo arjun ne riya se divorce liya...kun kun...

Please dear add me in ur pm list dont want to miss any update...

u r already in my pm list,Kaveri di.

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Aks13
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updated.
Ab jaldi jaldi comment ko unres karo.

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

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Readers,
jis gaane pe base karke main yeh story likh rahi hu,woh gaana is in paragraphs.Yeh story Arjun ke point of view se hai.It will end in 2 or 3 updates. Iska sequel ayega after i finish this SS...
Readers,dnt mind if the updates are short.

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Zebbie dear kun mujhe and mere arjun ko rula rahi ho...

This is not fare itna chotu sa update kun yaar...

Lekin sach mein bahot hi emotional update hai...

So many questions but still no answer ...I m waiting

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 11 years ago

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

i just read the three parts together...you have written it so well...

i know this song...lovely song...but how you potray the inner feelings with each lines are beautifulll...plz continue soon...and plz pm me...

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible
i just read the three parts together...you have written it so well...

i know this song...lovely song...but how you potray the inner feelings with each lines are beautifulll...plz continue soon...and plz pm me...

thank you so much,Rimi.
Shune bhalo laglo that u liked it.
Sure,tomakeo pm korbo.

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

updated.
Ab jaldi jaldi comment ko unres karo.

Kar diya... 😛

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Aks13
Want an update Zeb...😊

milega really soon.

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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

milega really soon.

I m really waiting for it...😉

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

ch4.

After having his dinner,he walked upto the balcony and looked at the society park,where,there were many other couples',walking together with each other... He was feeling upset seeing them because he missed Riya,who also used to walk with him after the dinner.. He felt really empty.A tear fell from his eye.He wiped it away and went towards his bedroom,which once used to be their bedroom..

As he entered the bedroom,he went to his side and lied down.. He looked upwards at the blank ceiling and turned towards the side,where Riya used to sleep.He saw the night lamp on.It remained on whenever Riya used to read books before she slept... He rolled over to that side and saw a book,which was there.. Riya had a strong liking on reading romantic stories and detective stories... He took that book and kept it near his heart.. The fragrance of Riya holding the book with her soft hands,was still there.

"Ekhono ki raat nijhum hole (When the night has a lonely feeling)

Shorot kahini pashe khola pore thaake (The story of autumn lies open by your side)

Byakul tiyaashe amar piyashe (With longing and yearning)

Ontor kede more (Your heart is hurt and cries)

Jante icche kore (I want to know)

Khub jaante icche kore (I really want to know)..."

Thoughts creep up his mind and thinks about Riya and in mind,he asks, "Are you still the same? I really want to know..."

Precap: Reason behind the divorce to be revealed..

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago