TAAREY FF - Dance To Your Heart's Rhythm || *LINK FOR THREAD 2 ADDED* - Page 63

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...👏

Just love it...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swayam is too cute lol
I like his possessive Bhai mode
Finally Taarey revealed their relationship to Swayam
Its awesome that he accepted their relationship lol
But with a condition lol
Hmm who is that witch that is in Rey house and that jerk that send Taani those gifts??
Superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
eagerly waiting to knw who is that girl n boy...
plzz update soon... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!! FINALLY THE SUPRISE UPDATE!!
Love d rey and taani's closeness!!
Taarey cheek kiss was cute!!
Loved swayam's possessivness!!
Stalkers are back!!
Scary scary scary!!
Please update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ziya_taarey

Flowers ka kya matlab?


Flowers or red Roses - sign of love...
would be updating soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello..
Ye kya game chal raha hai tumhara???
Kabhi bolti ho rey ka surprise.. Nikalta hai taani ka..
Uffdf hats off to u..!!!
Ab acche bacche ki tarah jaldi update karo..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ziya_taarey

Hello..
Ye kya game chal raha hai tumhara???
Kabhi bolti ho rey ka surprise.. Nikalta hai taani ka..
Uffdf hats off to u..!!!
Ab acche bacche ki tarah jaldi update karo..!!


ON MY WAY...
UPDATING...
AND SURPRISE REY & TAANI DONO KO MILA HAI...
BUT KISI AUR NE DIA HAI...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt
loved the chapter
full of surprises
updt nxt part soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vrindaroxz



ON MY WAY...
UPDATING...
AND SURPRISE REY & TAANI DONO KO MILA HAI...
BUT KISI AUR NE DIA HAI...


I know right..!!!
Surprise kiska mila kisko..!!!
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RECAP : Rey sees a girl waiting for him in his house and mistakes her for Taani. Taani recieves flowers and gift and thinks it to be a part of Rey's surprise. Both of them soon find out that they were totally wrong...
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T : (with a cute frown on her face) Rey ye aap kya suna rahe hai baby ko?
R : Wahi jo tumne kaha sunane ko...
T : (glaring at Rey) Maine kaha baby ko pyaari si kahani sunane...
R : To suna to raha hu...
T : (crossing her hands in front) Humari love story?
R : (caressing her baby bump) Yep... humara baby bhi soch raha hoga ki mummy daddy ki love story kitni romantic and thrilling hai...
T : But Rey...
R : Nothing Doing!!! (placing his hand on her baby bump) to baby hum log kahan the?... Haan papa na fir apne ghar me...

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CHAPTER 13
SURPRISE OVER

Rey was shocked at the behavior of the girl standing in front of him. She smirked at him and tossed his phone on the sofa...

R : Tum chahti kya ho?
Girl : (placing her hand on his shoulder) Aap ko chahti hu...
R : (shrugging off her hand) Tumhe samjh nahi aata ITS OVER BETWEEN US !!!
Girl : (angrily) ITS NOT OVER...
R : Kitni baar kahu ki I DONT LOVE YOU KRIYA...
K : (grabbing his collar) YOU USED TO LOVE ME REY...
R : CORRECTION...(pushing her away) I THOUGHT I LOVED YOU...
K : Kal ki aayi us ladki ke liye aap ne mujhe dump kar dia???
R : Correction again... Hum kabhi relationship me the hi nahi... at least mere side se to nahi...
K : BUT MERE LIYE HUM EK COUPLE THE AUR HAMESHA RAHENGE... US LADKI...
R : (cutting her off) SHE HAS A NAME !!!
K : NAAM ? KAUN SA NAAM REY? TAANI SHEKHAWAT YA TANISHA MEHRA ???
R : Chahe wo khud ko Taani bulaye ya Tanisha... hai to ek hi... and I LOVE HER...
K : KYA BAAT HAI REY.. EK HI DIN ME PYAAR BHI HO GAYA !!! WHAT YOU FEEL FOR HER IS ATTRACTION... PYAAR TO AAP SIRF MUJHSE KARTE HAI...

"NOT EVEN IN YOUR DREAMS KRIYA..." a voice came from behind...

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Taani was hell shocked when Rey disconnected her call. She re-dialled his number but his phone was switched off now.

T : Rey ne achanak se call kyu cut kar diya? Aur abhi uska phone bhi off aa raha hai... (she heard some one entering the house ) BHAI? (no response) BHAI AAP HO KYA? (saying this she came out of her room, only to be shocked again) SEAN ???
Sean : SURPRISE...
T : Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Sean : Tumhe surprise de raha hu beautiful...(pulling Taani to a hug)
T : (giving him a small hug) Sean you remember that despo stalker jo mujhe hamesha flowers and gifts bhejta tha...
Sean : ...jo hamesha dust bin me end up karte the...
T : Haan wahi... Wo yahan aa gaya hai... He's in Mumbai...
Sean : ...And as usual tumne us ke gifts phek diye, hai na?
T : Haan... (stopped midway) ... Tumhe kaise pata ki usne mujhe gifts bheje the?
Sean : (holding Taani by her shoulders) KYUN KI SAARE GIFTS MAINE HI BHEJE THE !!!
T : (trying to free herself) SEAN ITS HURTING ME...
Sean : (speaking through his teeth) DARD HO RAHA HAI? MUJHE BHI DARD HUA THA JAB TUM NE MERI JAGAH REY KO CHOOSE KIYA...

FLASHBACK

Sean : (to himself) Aaj main Taani ko propose kar dunga... Fir no more ye secret admirer jaise rehna padega... (he had just reached the green room when he heard Taani talking with Asha and Ritvik. He hid behind the wall and listened...)
Asha : My... my... look who's blushing ! Kaun hai wo jo meri behen ko itna blush kara raha hai?
T : Di... aap bhi na...
Ritvik : Aarey... Itna kya sharmana... ab bata bhi do...

Sean was waiting to hear Taani's reply. He was expecting his name but...

T : Reyaansh... Reyaansh hai uska naam
AshVik : So finally Ms. Taani Shekhawat ko pyaar ho hi gaya...

FLASHBACK ENDS


Sean : ... AAAHHH...

Taani had pushed Sean away when he was lost in the past, grabbing her car keys she ran out of the house. While running her ankle git twisted due to the heels but she had to make her way away from Sean. She sat in her car and drove as fast as she could to Rey's place. The pain in her ankle slowed her down as she climbed upstairs in Rey's house when she heard the conversation...

R : Chahe wo khud ko Taani bulaye ya Tanisha... hai to ek hi... and I LOVE HER...
K : KYA BAAT HAI REY.. EK HI DIN ME PYAAR BHI HO GAYA !!! WHAT YOU FEEL FOR HER IS ATTRACTION... PYAAR TO AAP SIRF MUJHSE KARTE HAI...
T : (not able to control her anger and pain, she shouted ) NOT EVEN IN YOUR DREAMS KRIYA...
K : (turning abruptly) KISI NE TUMHE MANNERS NAHI SIKHAYE KI KISI KI BHI BAATEIN CHUP KE NAHI SUNNI CHAHIYE?
T : (moving towards Rey) AND TUMHE KISI NE NAHI SIKHAYA KI KISI AUR KE BOY FRIEND KO GANDI NAZAR SE NAHI DEKHNI CHAHIYE...
K : Tum hoti kaun ho humare personal matter me taang adane wali? REY MERE BOYFRIEND HAI...
T : (before Rey could speak) BOYFRIEND YA EX-BOYFRIEND???
K : (about to slap Taani) HOW DARE YOU...
T : (holding her hand, pausing it in the air) ITS RUDE... BUT ITS TRUTH !!! JITNA JALDI ACCEPT KAR LOGI UTNA ACHCHA HOGA... GET THAT?
R : (holding Taani's hand) KRIYA GET LOST !!!
K : Lekin Rey...
R : I . SAID . GET . OUT. !!!

Kriya stormed out of his house in anger. She was not going to give up on Rey easily... and she knew where to go for help. As Kriya left, Taani hugged Rey and started sobbing. Rey knew that Taani won't doubt their relationship still he wanted to make sure...

R : Taani please humare relationship pe question mat uthana... Main seh nahi paunga...
T : (looking in his eyes) Rey humari relationship nayi hai but weak nahi... (she tried to move forward but the pain in her ankle made her wince) ...OUCH !
R : (concerned) KYA HUA TAANI ? TUM THIK TO HO NA...
T : Rey its ok.. I twisted my ankle while running away from him...
R : (picking Taani in his arms) HIM ? HIM KAUN?
T : (angry and hurt) Wahi jisne mujhe gifts bheje the... SEAN...
R : (thinking)... SEAN... Ye naam kahi suna hai but yaad nahi aa raha kahan... (his chain of thoughts was broken by the door bell) COMING... (moves towards the door with Taani in his arms) Taani... sweetheart... main darwaza khol deta but kya karu Bhagwan ne do hi haath diye hai aur wo abhi tumhe uthaye huye hai... So tum please door khol dogi?
T : (blushing) Rey... (opens the door)

GANG : (shocked on seeing the sight in front of them) TAANI ? REY ?
Boys (except Swayam who was shocked as well) : BAHON KI DARMIYAN... DO PYAAR MIL RAHE HAI... (doing their 'CHEMISTRY' step) BOLE KYA... (got a deadly look from Reyam)
Sw : SHUT UP GUYS ! And Rey maine kaha tha "MAINTAIN DISTANCE" !
T : Bhai wo...
R : ...Wo ankle ki Taani twist ho gayi... I mean Taani ki ankle twist ho gayi hai...
Sh : OMG... Taani bohot pain ho raha hai?
T : Its ok Sharon...
Sw : What OK? Andar chalo fir baat karte hain... And Rey ab to Taani ko niche utar do... (saying they enter Rey's house)




PRECAP : A SMALL LEAP OF 3 MONTHS DIRECT TO INDIA FEST.😉


NOTE : SORRY GUYS FOR LATE UPDATE... Hope ye update acha lage. I tried to start the chapter in a different way... hope you like that. If not criticism is always welcome along with chappal, sandals, tamatar... plz hit like and leave your precious comments... Love you all...


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