MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 11

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RAMI CAN U FINISH TIS PG I MISS TE CONTINUNITY
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKES..LOVE U ALL
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HAPPY VALENTINES DAY TO MY MAANEET AND MY MAANEETIANSWHO GAVE A MEANING TO MY LIFE



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H2 -46


Both were so tired so they took a small nap, Geet woke up after some time and saw Maan was sleeping on his side, she hover on him and caress his face

Geet smile at him : hmm how he is sleeping like a small baby but wen he woke up, real devil, dust dhanav.. I will do something special for him.. very special. she smirk, MSK wait for ur surprise

She got ready and went out. wen Maan got up , he was alone in te bed, he saw te time it was 7' clock.. he thought were is Geet. He saw a dress was placed on te bed, but he know it was new, he didt have like tis dress , it was white transparent shirt and jeans, sighing he took te dress and went to get ready

He came down wearing te dress and saw no one was there , one of te servant came to him

Servant : sir mam ask me to give tis letter to u sir

Maan : were is she

Servant : in TE garden, he left

Maan open te letter and start to read


'' This bond of ours ...u cant escape even if u want...The bond between us is such that u can never break it... Forever holding it...I shall wait ... standing today ..waiting for u''

Maan smirked (st) : so madam trying to manofly MSK


MSK reached garden and surprised to see te decoration and calls .. Geet'...Geet comes running and her payal can be heard..! MSK walks towards her. Geet walks back to maintain distance. and slowly walks away giving a sideway glance to MSK. MSK follows and looks , were te whole place was decorated with flowers and candles

Geets voice can be heard.

'Till today...u have done a lot for me... Today for the first time..i m doing something for u...!!

Geet says..


Today a small dream ..i have woven for u..where..even though being separate...we are one'

Maan walks down looking here and there for Geet who is playing with him

Maan : Geet were are u

Geet continues saying...

'And i have to make a promise to u Maan... this lite of the candle.. this nite.. this moon... this breeze.. are witness of Geets promise...that.. after today.. whichever turn life takes...till breath runs.. Geets happiness is in ur happiness..!'

Maan :Geet come out' enough of ur hide and seek game

Maan calling out for Geet and Maan asking her to come out.

Maan slowly taking his steps :Geet

Geet was drooling on him, te shirt was tuck to his body like second skin, he was looking so hot in tat shirt...Maan saw her near te pillar, wen he reached her, she was not there, she was playing hide and seek with him...

Maan : Geet were r u and wat is tis, cum out, he was walking and there looking all te sides

Geet giggled making him annoy with her antics

Geet came out and saw him, both are looking at each other. They gaze was burning they soul. Maan saw her, she wearing a transparent red sari , she was looking breath taking, he already got aroused seeing her..

Both were walking to each other, Geet cheeks was cue with red colour, how ever she try, his gaze was burning her . te wind was blowing making te candels to off, but Geet placed her palm to prevent it form off, Maan too kept his palm over her hand and both looking at each other. Geet slowly raised her hand and placed on his cheeks, Maan was staring at her,


Maan : Geet

Geet came back to her sense and try to run away, Maan hold her pallu, Geet was breathing heavily, her chest was going up and down, Maan came slowly behind her holding her

Geet holds his hand : Maan

Maan came near her near and whispered : wat is tis Geet

Geet was totally lost in his spell, only air came form her throat , Maan left her and stood in front of her folding his hands , Geet open her eyes wen she missed his warmth and look at him, she slowly came near him,and placed her palm on his cheeks and started to trace . Maan was staring at her , she tracing his face with her fingers making him to groan


Geet : Maan

Maan : Geet r u trying to pacify me

Geet glared at him : why only u can give me surprise I cant

Maan raised his eyebrows, he was not angry on her but he want to know wat she is trying to do, so he maintain his angry look

Geet : I want to cook for u , wat naa im bored eating inside

Maan : so

Geet : so I arranged dinner in garden

Maan smirked: date

Geet : wat

Maan : dinner date

Geet : wat ever , now cum im so hungry, afternoon also u didt let me eat

Maan: I did't Geet,hmm

Geet look at him : nothing, she drag him near te table, te dishes answer all his fav, he smiled but controlled himself, he know Geet was trying to cheer him,

Geet : Maan sit naa we will have our dinner

Maan : hmm, he just ignored her and started to serve his plate

Geet was feeling sad wen he answering her in mono syallbus and he is not looking at her , Geet stop her eating and looking at him, tears were flowing form her eyes

Geet was sobbing , Maan who heard her sobbing sound look at her and got shock to see her tears

He cursed himself for making her to cry, he was not angry but just hurt and now he was just wanted to tease but she took it very seriously

Maan(st) : Maan now face ur cry baby


Maan stood and came near Geet, Geet stood up and try to leave , Maan holds her and cupped her face

Maan : Geet wat happen why u crying

Geet : Maan why u doing tis to me, I was just, u know I want to gift u something with my first salary u know I still have not touched my first month salary, I thought my first gift to u, but u got hurt naa

Maan felt overwhelmed thinking abt her first gift, he felt he is luckiest person in te world who got his angel

Geet tears were flowing: im sory, before she completes , Maan placed his finger on her lips

Maan : CHUP BIKUL CHUP


Both are staring at each other, Maan hugs her

Maan : im sory Geet, I was not angry but hurt thinking I didt win ur trust still

Geet broke te hug and node no : no Maan

Maan : Geet but wen u said u want to gift me , I was fool to think like tat, but later i was just teasing u and wanted to know which extends u will use ur manoflying session, but u cry baby started to open ur well

Geet was happy thinking he is not angry but wen he said he is teasing her and cry baby , she got angry and glared at him, pushing him

Geet : my life went off thinking I hurt u but u were teasing me, u know wat I felt , u uDUST DHANAV


She turn away from him and folding her hands to her chest, Maan nodes his head and came behind her, hugging her

Maan : so my misty is angry on me, she try to snap his hands but he tighten his hold and whispered In her ears making her cells to shiver

Maan sulking her earlobe : Geet I love to see ur angry red face, my jungle billi, I want to eat u raw

Geet : Maan leave me

Maan : no way after seeing all tis I cant leave u , he try to carry her, but she stops him

Geet : not now first we will have our dinner I prepared for u and im hungry too, she know if she didt stop him, he wont leave her for whole night but she is damn hungry as she didt have her lunch too properly , all thanks to Maan

Maan nodes no : first I want tis, he pulled her lower lips with his fingers making her to blush, before he realize Geet drag him to table and made him to sit making him to frown..

Geet was serving him, and abt to sit In her chair, Maan pulled her on his lap ,

Geet : Maan wat is tis

Maan : u sit here, tis will suit u better

Geet signed and started to fill his plate,

Maan : Geet u selection is very nice

Geet : tis decoration Maan


Maan : hmm and ur gift tis shirt, u know Geet till now no one got me any gift after maa and papa left me

Geet felt sad and just smack her lips on his, started to kiss him, he open his mouth and Geet started to explore his mouth.. Maan decide to let her lead te kiss and he just enjoying it, soon both lost in passionate kiss, they broke after some time we they were breathless, both are panting heavily,

Maan eyeing at her lips : Geet im hungry

Geet blushed : Maan app bhi naa, she took te plate and started to fed him

Maan : Geet u looking sexy in tis sari ,

Geet shied : hmm

Maan hands slowly started to trace her bare tummy making her to tag her breath and she was wriggling but his hold was so tight tats he cant escape

Geet : Maan wat u doing

Maan : Geet u do ur work and let me do my work

Geet thought : Maan im too hungry , u fed me, she thought tat he will take his hands to fed here , but naughty Maan had some other plans, he smirk and open his mouth , indicating Geet to fed him, wen she did , he just smack his mouth on her and started to fed her with his mouth making her eyes to pop

Maan : how is my style of feeding

Geet blushed and smack on his shoulder : Maan

Maan : wat u thought tat I will take my hands hmm

Geet : Maan ur shameless

Maan : really Geet I will show wat real shameless means, Geet hide herself on his chest.. they feeding cum kissing session went till they filled they tummy

After they finished they dinner,

Maan : Geet can we have a dance

Geet stared at him and his hand which was extend to her,she slowly placed her hand and both were looking at each other, Eyelock..te music started

MAHI MAHI, imagine tat song and te dance..te music stops and both hugged each other.. this night was very beautiful for them.. both are hugging each other and calming they uncontrollable heart beat


Geet broke te hug : Maan I brought something for u

Maan raised his eyebrows,

Geet : Maan close ur eyes

Maan : why Geet

Geet : pls Maan

Maan closed his eyes, Geet took a box and open it , a diamond ring, tis is te one she went to buy afternoon

Geet : Maan open ur eyes, MAAN slowly open his eyes and look at her hands which holds a shining diamond ring, he got confused and look at Geet who was smiling at him, her eyes showed so much of love for him, only for him

Geet took his hand and placed te ring on his finger and kissed his finger, making his heart to burst with emotions..

Geet : I LOVE U MAAN, actually I want to get tis for u, u dont have any symbol of our relation so I thought to get tis, now no girls will see u.. tis ring will show to others tat u belong to some one who is mingle with ur soul forever, tis says ur mine, GEET KI MAAN and looks at him


Maan don't know wat to say, a pure angel is standing in front of him who came to pure his soul, he just hugs her in bone crashing hug, pouring his emotions.. Geet sense her skin wetting, Geet broke te hug and shock to see tears on Maan's eyes, she didt know tat he will cry but tis, Geet wipe his tears

Geet : Maan

Maan : Geet u don't know how happy im, thank so much, he cupped her face and kissed her forehead, thank u so much

Geet hugs him

Maan : Geet wait a min, he went inside

Geet got confused and saw him cuming, with a small box

Maan open te box and there was a ring in it

Geet got excited : Maan tis for me

Maan nodes

Geet :wen u brought

Maan : wen I decide to confess my feelings for te first time

Geet felt bad how she have rejected him : im sory


Maan nodes no , he put te ring, both were staring at each other, Maan made her to sit In te swing, and sat beside her, Geet hugs him.. suddenly it started to rain.. Geet was happy and abt to get up to play in te rain, but Maan holds her

Maan ; were u going

Geet : Maan I want to play in te rain, pls

Maan : no

Geet snap his hand : wat naa Maan nowadays if u say no also im hearing yes, and wink at him and went to play in te rain.


She was playing in te rain and spreading her hands to catch te water drops,.. she was so happy tat she didt realize one soul is burning .. Maan who was watching her wet form and her sari which was struck to her body like another skin.. he was drinking her beauty, he don't wen he started to walk near her like a moth attrack to te fire.. he stood beside her making Geet to shiver with his closeness..


Geet turn and saw maan : Maan

Maan hugs suddenly which made both of them to tip and fall on te ground.. Maan was on top and Geet below him.. Maan raised himself , staring at her shivering lips

Maan smack his lips on her lips, Geet letting Maan devour, tease, and bite her lips driving every nerve on her body off the edge of insanity.Geet opens her eyes but couldn't take his rippling passionate gaze and touch; little Geet moaned as she ripped opened his shirt and let herself feel more aggressive..Their hands moved over each other.they broke te kiss wen they felt lack of air


Cupping her face in his hands he stares deeply into her eyes, his lips just inches away from hers. He gently stroked her lower lip with his thumb, parting them for his invasion. Geet's breathing increased noticeably, her chest heaving, her eyes glazed over

his eyes caught sight of a rain drop as it fell on her right eye, trailing down her nose, her lips, he moved towards Geet, who was enjoying herself totally oblivious to how her sari had become nearly see thru and was plastered to her body making it seem as if she was almost n***. Her skin gleamed through the wet material hugging her body prominently showing off all her lush curves.


he bit down hard on her neck, kissing her shoulder to soothe the marks of his teeth! Geet moaned with the bittersweet pain n pushed herself against his aroused body, wanting to feel him n soothe the restlessness she was feeling within. He trailed the tip of his tongue from her collar bone down towards her cleavage, lining the edge of her blouse by his tongue making Geet shudder with the warmth left behind his trailing tongue! His lips moved over her breast covered by her blouse, biting n nibbling her through the blouse.

His hands slowly brush against her hands and trail upwards to rest on her smooth tummy below the folds of the saree. Blushing a bright red as she sees him tasting her each and every curve revealed through the saree.

He slowly came down kissing her over her blouse and reach her tummy, he licked te water drops from her tummy with his tongue making her wriggle, she suddenly started to giggle wen he started to lick it with his tongue..


Geet : Maan stop it

Maan started to bite her tummy making her to scream and he started to devour her tummy, liking it sulking, squeezing it.. he inserted his tongue inside her belly button , Geet holds his hair in her fist and massaging it pulling him towards her and twisting her head right and left bitting her lips...

Maan lips was busy In her tummy, and his hands started to move further down to lift her sari up, Geet stops him

Geet : Maan pls not here ,

Maan know he cant control, he at once pulled himself, just put her on his shoulder like a sac and took her to their room to finish wat he left

He throwed her on te bed and soon both they clothes were shattered on te floor and they nude body was rubbing each other..


He gently pushed until his tip was inside her. His hands grasped her, lacing his fingers through her own pressing them on either side of her head, into the mattress. In one swift motion, he plunged the rest of his gender into her.he rose up above her n plunged into her once more.

He continued to slowly pull himself out n press himself in until she was peaking with each thrust..they made wild love for full night and slept at early morning..














PRECAP : BACK TO DELHI

NEXT PART: 47,PG 29




Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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geet manofying maan teasing maneet romance
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phew that was close
they almost made love out in the garden
but thankfully maan controlled himself for a while
well he cant control too much when it comes to her
wow what a way to manaofy her
kya baat hai geet aap toh chaa gayi
she was so cute right
the way she prepared the surprise for him
awww that was so cute of her
and the way he also let his emotions flow
thank god they have one another
they both needed one another
her to protect her from this world
and him for some love and happiness in his life that was missing
unique style of having dinner is it
kitna bhav kha rahe the maan
but then he had to tell her he wasnt angry with her
so back to delhi again huh
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Awesome and hot update..😳 love it
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thank you for the gift you have given us in this day by updating. nice update .i loved it.
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maaneet ka hot hot romance 😳😳😳
aweee geet seriously a cry baby 😭😭😭
chalo maan ne chup karwa diya 😉😉
lol now maan crying 😭😭
geet ne chup karwa diya 😆😆

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wt a nice wala update fr v day jus perfct hw sweet f geet she made a super date plan n maan gv the ring to her ha ha cry baby geet instead f geet manofyin maan had to do it luvd t n didi sry fr inyeruptin yur res ing post

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