virman ff: right path or not? part 2 page 8 14th feb - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab do update collj is starting again after christmas hoilday this will be one thing which may get my brain to relax for a while so do update and pm me. Btw thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Don't seperate them and continue soon ur all stories

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sor sory sory sory soryyy guyzzz... i no i took it soo soo long but i was ery very busy m sooo soryyy...dont b angry on me..i love u guyzz... n i no u guyzz love me too😉
now here's the update

part 2

all the vadhera's and chaudhry's was sitting on waiting area waiting for their turn to come...virman was sitting apposite to each other...manvi was sitting with neha and virat was sitting with jeevika and viren...both sometimes steal grances from each other

va to m-beta
m-ji maa...
va- beta virat will not listen to me but pls atleast ulisten to me ..plss dont do this dont end this relationship...pls
m-maa...
va-eta i noo u love virat so much...then y cant u give another chance to him pls beta
m-ma plss..dont tell him about my love pls...
va-but y beta

manvi look another side
man-u guyzz can go inside...judge is calling u for ur divorse
virman look at man n then each other...pleading to each other in their own eyes that dont do this pls...
they both strted walking when viren n jeevika stop them
virika-pls dont do this...
virman look at them n then strted walking..whole family went inside...
judge-so u guyzz ready for divorse...
virman not looking at each other...n didnt even nod yes
ju-m askung u something...
whole family still have some hope...but virman nodded yes
judge give them paper...virika look at each other...
j-viren do something...
v-i cant do anything...
j-viren...
viren look at her she wink at him ... n collaps on floor...
vi-jeevika
evryone look at them n saww jeevika lying on floor
m-jivi...
manvi n virat went to j n started tapping her cheeks
virman-j ..wake up..kya hua ise
vi-pta nhi...abhi(he got then that she just did a prank ..he smile in his silently) mi cr nikalta hme ise ghr leke chlna chaiy
vm-mgr
vi-bhai..jeevika ki health jyadaimp hai ...
virman nodded okk...viren went to take car...virat pick jeevika in his arms n whole family went to car...all worried for jeevika..what happen to her suddenly...evryone each home...virat took her in her room
v-i should cal the dr...she didnt wake up yet...
manvi nodded yes..j listen to this n scred of dr...
j-amm..ahhh..mera sir...(in fainted voice n weak voice)
m-j..kaisi hai tu,...kya hua tjhe..achanak se behosh kaise ho gai...pta hai mi kitna dar gai ti...
all smile seeing sister bond n virat to smile seeing manvi's care...
j-pta nhi di...kya hua...
m-hmmm..aise behosh hona thk nhi hai...virat ap dr. ko pls fon kijiye...ki abhi thodi din pehle b behosh hui ti...
j-nhi ji mi thk hooo(she is now more scared/...that her prank will come out now)
m-koi thk nhi hai tu...ap dr ko fon kijiye
j-nhi di dr. nhi
m-q...
j-di plsss'
m-j...now its nough...dr aenge...
j-di m pregnant...
evryone look at her with shok...with open mouth..j too realise what she said...n her eyes got bigger in shok...
j(in mind) shit ye maine kya kah dia..j ab to tu gai
m-what
v-what
vi-what
evryone elese -what
m cupid her face-j ye kya kah ri hai tu...tu hosh mi to hai tu kah kya ri hai...
j-dii did di didi...mi mi mi. vo vo vo vo vo..i i i ..me me mean ...mi mi mi
m-j ye kay kah ri hai meri kuch smjh nhi ara..aisa kaise ho skta hai...
j-vo vo vo(she is not getting anything now what to say)
vi(in mind) ek or jhoot...ab kaise bachogi jeevika...(nodded it head negaitvely)
j saw viren he is looking at her...she pleaded sory to him-ye mera or viren ka bacha hai...
viren was carrying water glass n glass fall from his hand-what...hav u gone mad...
j nodded him not to say anything...
vm-what
v-viren.
vi-bh bhb bh bh bhai..mi mi mi...vo vo..jhooo jhooo jhoo
j-viren ab sbke samne bat aaa hi gai hai to
vi-ye ye ye kya kya bol ri ho tum...mi or tum..never

now the melodrama strt
j-diii(acting like crying)..dekho na apne devar ko..mere sath pyar ka wada krke apne pyar ki nishani deke..mukar raha hai..duiii(j fall on manvi's sholder n strted acting like crying)
vi-j ye kya kah i hoo tm yr..aisa kab hua...
j-diii..ekhooo ise e b yad nhi hai..ummm ammm
m-j plss chup hoja hum hai na...
v-viren ye sb kya hai...
vi-bh bh bhai..aisa kuch nhi
v-viren dekh agr aisa kuch hai b ..to saf saf bol de..hum bde kuch sochenge is bre mi...
vi-nhi
j-haa ji plsskuch socho...
v-hum sbko bahar chlna chaiy...viren tum j k sath raho
vi-mein(shout)
v-ha tu
vi nodded n evryone went out
viren full of angr look at j who is pleading sory to him-j
j-isse pehle tum bolo meri bat suno pls...tumhe pta hai na..mi ek k bd ek jhoot mi fasti chli jati hoo bs aj b vo hi hua...yad hai last time behosh hui ti...jb lawyer ghr aya ta sign lene...or ab aj..mi ye divorse hote hua nhi dekh skt...or jb di na kaha dr aega..to maine socha meri pol khul jaegi...or maine bol dia mi...mi preganat..or fr or ek or sawal vo kaun hai..maine socha tum mere sath hoge to asan hoga bat chhupana isliy tumahra naam le dia...
vi-j tum pgl hoo...aisa koi kata hai..mi or tum..never
j-i no i no tumahr liy bhut odd hoga ye sochna ki tum mere sath..but mi adjust kr lungi
vi-pgl LADKI...TUMHE PTA HAI AB KYA HO SKTA HAI

EVRYONE ENTR THEIR ROOM again
v-hmne ek decision lia hai
virika look at each other gulp n then virman
v-tum dono ko shadi krni hogi
virika-what?????
again a plan comes to j's mind-mi ye shadi nhi krogi
viren frustrated look n j n siton bed hit his head with his plaam-ab kya bolegi ye(in his mind)
m-kyuu
j-di agr ap is ghr se gai to mi viren se shadi nhi krogi

evryone shoked n xcpt virman evryone got j's prank ...they laugh silently...

what next stay tuned
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
nice update j making drama to stop
there divorces update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
sakshi i read both the parts just now. they are fab swthrt...!!! but im not getting one thing that why virman are unable to find love. virat already luvs manvi n i suppose manvi fell for him with time. i mean cmon its not that difficult to confess you feelings n that too to your husband/ wife when you know you two r bounded for life... anyways virman elder n virika younger us unusual but soo much fun to read... 😃 jeevika is such a drama queen... she lied n saath mein viren ko bhi phasa diya... 🤣 🤣
waiting for next...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Jeevika liar liar her pants on fire...lolzzz...it was funny...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Nice update. Jeevika's drama to make Manvi stay was awesome. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
jeevika 's prank is nice to stop their divorce
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago

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