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Posted: 11 years ago
sweety...romba thelivana...alagana...arumaiyana updatepa...👏

really,i am surprised at ur creativity...outstanding workpa...

ippathan naan berlina pathi konjam therinchukitten...

kr missing eachother somuch...i can feel it...athuvum karthik last scenela rajiya pathi ninaikum podhu avan siripu...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Acho paavam Raji... Indha phone callukku wait pannum bothu vara helplessness, kavalai, love affection... somtimes nerla pakkum bodhu koda varadhillai :)
But Kartik... ever mature.. ever understanding.. wants to call even during transit... Andha paiyan... erangina udane.. from airport call pannirukkalam to say he has reached... Eppadi idha poyi miss panninan??

Very nice update.. please update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramya05

Acho paavam Raji... Indha phone callukku wait pannum bothu vara helplessness, kavalai, love affection... somtimes nerla pakkum bodhu koda varadhillai :)

But Kartik... ever mature.. ever understanding.. wants to call even during transit... Andha paiyan... erangina udane.. from airport call pannirukkalam to say he has reached... Eppadi idha poyi miss panninan??

Very nice update.. please update soon :)


yes ramyaa... this will get them still closer...

adhu onnum illa paa frankfurt airport la he had time so he called...

in berlin ... land aana udane he had to complete immigration etc and then had no time...
thoongi ezhundhu panni iruppaan but adhukulla Philip vandhuttaan so miss aayiduchi...

next chapter ... will update tomorrow...
Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful sweety. ungalala mattum dhan ippadi yellam update pannamudiyumnu ninaikiren pa.
Yenna oru explanation wow...
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Sweety. Karthik surprising Raji by calling when she dint expect it was cute. Raji falling asleep waiting for his call . Hope she manages the problem.
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update sweety...you took us to Berlin...interesting details about fernsehturm ..
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Hi Sweety! Nice combo of fiction, personal experiences, inspiration from the serial and above all superb flow of writing!! Great going!! Makes one wait for the next at the end of every chapter... Way to go!!
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hai this is ammukuty,
new user to contact you all the writes i logged in this forum.Please post your updates as soon as possible friends.
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waiting for next chapter..sweety seekirama update kudunga
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CHAPTER 64

SUNDAY:

IN CHENNAI:

Raji is drying clothes in the terrace and her athai comes.
Athai: Raji...
Raji: enna athai?
Athai: perianna phone panni irundhaanga... oorula irundhu kilambittaangalaam. inga moonu manikkellaam vandhiduvaaraam. maappilla veetle irundhu 4 manikku varradhaa solli irukkaangalaam...
Raji: 4 manikkevaa?
Athai: 4.30-6.00 rahukaalam illa? 4 manikku avanga vandhittaa... 4.30 kkulla unnai kaattittaa... appuram saavagaasamaa matha vishayangal pesa vasathiyaa irukkum. mani 2 aaga podhu... vaa ... saaptu konja neram rest edu... appuram ready aaga correct aah irukkum... ennoda pattu pudavai edhaavadhu tharavaa?
Raji: onnum venaa... ponnu parkaradhukku edhukku pattu pudavai?
simple aah en kitta irukkuradhe kattikkaren...
Athai: paathu... appuram nee katra pudavaiya parthu nammala kuraivaa yeda poda poraanga...
Raji: naan parthukkaren athai...
Athai: sari... vaa... saappidalaam...
Raji: innum konjam thuni irukku... kaayapottu varen... neenga saaptukitte irunga.
Athai: sari...

Athai goes downstairs and Raji finishes drying her clothes, comes downstairs, has lunch and comes to her room. She checks her mobile if there was any calls and find none.
Raji thinks angrily...konjam aavadhu poruppu irukkaa paaru... muzhusaa oru naal aaga podhu... oru phone panni reach aayitten nu solla evvalo neram aagum? inga oruthi kaathukittu iruppaa ngra nenappe illa pola... anga bore adikkaama jolly yaa iruppan pola... bore adichaa dhaane Raji nyaabagam varum...
She opens images on her phone and keeps looking at his pictures, she stops at a smiling photo of his and speaks to it... atleast flight number aavadhu therinjirundhaa ... naane internet la parthu therinjikittu iruppen ... correct aah reach aayittiyaa nnu...
She calls his number and gets not reachable message. Then an idea flashes in her mind. She takes her laptop and starts mailing him.
...
...
...
Raji presses the send button and feels relaxed.
Her athai calls her and she goes to the living room. Her periappa has arrived.
Raji: vaanga peraippa... eppadi irukkeenga?
Periappa: naan nallaa irukken Raji maa... nee poyi ready aagu... maappillai veetla irundhu naalu manikku correct aah vandhiduvaanga...
Raji: appa eppadi irukkaanga?
Periappa: nallaa thaan irukkaan... nee poyi ready aagu...
He turns towards his sister and enquires..."malligaa... palagaaram enna senjirukke?"
Raji comes to her room and checks her mail for reply but nothing was there. She then goes to her cupboard, takes a simple sari and gets ready. In between she keeps checking her mail for reply. being busy in this way she forgot that she hasn't charged her mobile since yesterday and it gets switched off which she doesn't notice.


IN BERLIN:

Karthik wakes up from a good sleep and looks at his watch. It was 10 a.m . He orders the room service for a coffee and goes to the rest room. He finishes brushing and the coffee arrives. Finishing his coffee , he calls the reception and asks her to connect a call for which the receptionist replies that international calls cannot be transferred to rooms and he can come to the reception and make calls anywhere. He thanks her and puts the phone down. The door bell rings, and as he opens the door, a room service boy comes in with a trolly.


Karthik: what's this?
Waitor: Breakfast Sir...
Karthik: But I didn't order any...
Waitor: This is complimentary Sir... as a token of love, we serve traditional german breakfast for all the guests who ever stays in the night.
Karthik: wow... that's great...
The roomboy leaves, Karthik quickly has a shower, gets ready, has his breakfast and comes to the reception. He tries Raji's number but it's switched off. He tries again and again but of no use. The receptionist informs him that showing his passport at the travel desk, he can obtain a temporary phone card which he can insert in his mobile and use. He thanks her and goes to the travel desk and gets the card. As soon as the card gets activated, his mobile comes to life and a message appears onscreen.."you've got a mail"...

He sits on a couch there and opens his mail. He's surprised to see the sender's name...Raji... He opens the mail excitingly and it read:

Dear Karthik,
How are you? Hope you have reached safely. I'm OK... not fine... bcoz I'm waiting for your call... sari vidu... anga thangara edam ellaam vasathiyaa irukkaa? pudhu idam... kaathu, thanni ellaam maarum... parthu... ozhungaa saappidu... nallaa rest eduthukko... naalaikku client office ku pogumpodhu nallaa fresh aa irukkanum illaiyaa...
Sir sonna maathiri important points ellaam mudhallaiye german la translate panni vachikko... unakku easy yaa irukkum... presentation appo video conference la ellarum connect aagi iruppom nu Lakshmi sonnaa... adhanaale nee relaxed aa iru... help panna naanga ready yaa iruppom... nee nallaa present pannuve nnu enakku theriyum...
ALL THE BEST...
phone panna mudiyalai nnaa... nee busy yaa irundhaa... naan nallaa irukken nu oru vari reply pannu podhum... I LOVE YOU...
Take care,
Bye,
Raji.

Tears fill his eyes and he couldn't see the letters on the screen. He wipes them and reads the mail again. Karthik is so touched and moved seeing how much she cared for him and even as she didn't mention anything about her, he could clearly feel what she has been going through and feels bad that he couldn't be with her to face this situation. He tries Raji's mobile again and it is still switched off.
He looks at the time and it was 12 noon... it would be 4.30 p.m therein chennai, he thinks and replies her.

My dearest Raji,
I've reached safely and I'm fine here. Don't worry about me. I'm SORRY ... I couldn't call you yesterday. But today, I'm trying your phone since morning and it is switched off.
Nethu Berlin la land aanadhum immigration late aayiduchi. adhukku appuram baggage eduthittu velila vandhu phone pannanum nu nenachen. inga Client side la irundhu Philip nu orutharai enakku help panna arrange panni irukkaanga. naan airport le irundhu veliye vandha udane ennai parthu, car la kondu poyi hotel la drop pannaaru. bayangara tired aah irundhuchi... flight la yum sariyaa thoongalaiyaa... kulichittu, saaptu paduthu nallaa thoongitten. Philip vandhu bell adichappuram thaan ezhundhen. innum tired aah irukku naan varalai nnu sonnaalum kekkaama dinner ku velila koottittu ponaaaru. unakku phone pannalaam nu time parthaa ingeye 8 mani aayirundhadhu... anga night 12 dhaandi irukkum... appo phone panni disturb panna vendaam nu thaan pannalai... SORRY ...daa...
Kaalaile le irundhu unakku phone try pannitte irukken. switched off nu varudhu... ennaachu? charge podalaiyaa? kovamaa irukkiyaa?
mobile off aanadhai gavanikkalaiyaa... illai naan phone pannale nnu kovathula off panni vachirukkiyaa nnu onnume puriyalai... appo dhaan mail parthen...
evvalo santhoshamaa irukku theriyumaa? naan nijammaaa ethir parkave illai... Thank You...
naan inga unakku mail pannittu irukkum inneram nee ange evvalo tension aah iruppe nnu enakku puriyudhu... kilambaradhukku munnaadi un kitta pesanum nu thaan nenachen... aanaa ... naan enna pesinaalum nee azhudhiduviyo nnu bayamaa irundhuchi... adhaan pesaama vandhutten... thappaa irundhaa... sorry...

ennamo oru second, naan pesaama vandhittaa neeye manage panniduve nnu thonuchi... adhaan... aanaa... ennai nallaa thitti theerthiruppe nnu theriyum... paravaa illai... athai, periappa kitta edhuvum sollaama amaidhiyaa iru... naan vandhadhum intha saturday kovilpattikku polaam. thiruvizhaa kkaaga wait panna venaa... OK vaa... neeyum naanum ner la poyi appa vai parthu pesalaam ... ennai parthaa... nee love panradhu ennai thaan nu therinjaa eppadi react pannuvaaro ngra tension irundhaalum... parthukkalaam...

idhai ellaam ingeye solla vendiyadhu dhaane nnu ninaikkiriyaa? oru prachanai nnu vandhaa ennoda help illaama neeye samaalippe nnu enakku theriyum... adhu unakku theriyaradhukku thaan... sariyaa...
podhum ennai thittinadhu... mail ku reply vandhirukkaa nnu check pannuve nnu enakku theriyum... idhai padichu mudicha udane modhalla phone On pannu... naan call panren...
I LOVE YOU... I MISS YOU ...

neengaadha un ninaivugalodu,
un,
Karthik.

Karthik sends the mail and Philip comes there. Philip and Karthik come out of the hotel and get into his car.

BACK IN CHENNAI:

RAJI'S RESIDENCE:

Raji is elegantly dressed in a lavender colour sari and opens her laptop to check if Karthik has replied. Her athai comes and ..
Athai: Raji... vaa... keezha polaam... avanga vandhaachu...
Raji keeps the laptop aside and goes with her.

In the living room, Raji's periappa and maama were talking to the groom's parents. Raji comes there with her athai and stands beside her periappa.
Periappa: Raji maa... periyavangalukku namaskaaram pannikko...
Raji folds her hands together and says "Vanakkam".
He turns towards the guests and says..."idhu dhaan en thambi ponnu... Rajalakshmi... en thambi kku ippo dhaan heart operation nadandhuchi... adhaan avan varalai..."
Groom's mother: velaikku poriyaa maa?
Raji: aamaanga...
Groom's father: enga work panre?
Raji: Nettech ngra software company la programmer aah irukken...
Groom's mother: kalyaanathukku appuram velaikku pogara idea irukkaa?
Raji: mmm...


Their son quietly observes his parents interaction with the girl. He sees Raji's head is bend down and her looks are fixed on the ground. She doesn't lift her head even once. He thinks for a minute and turns towards his father and says...
Groom: appaa... naan ponnu kitta thaniyaa pesanum...
Groom's father: enna sir? neenga enna solreenga?
Periappa: engalukku pazhakkam illai...
Groom: illai uncle... naan avanga kitta pesinaa dhaan ... pidichirukkaa illaiyaa nnu solla mudiyum... idhu ennoda vaazhkai... enakku sila vishayangal clear aah therinjaa dhaan ennaala decide panna mudiyum...
Periappa: adhuvum sari dhaan... Raji maa... maappillai ya maadikku koottittu po maa... ponga thambi...
Raji moves towards the staircase, climbs the steps and comes to the terrace. the groom follows her and as she tries to clear the hanging clothes, he says...
"Paravaa illai... vidunga... intha pakkam nikkalaam..."
He moves towards the otherside and sits on the wall with his legs grounded and hands folded.
Raji comes forward and leans on the staircase railing. Even now she doesn't look at him. He starts the conversation..." Hi ... I'm Ashvin...". Raji is still quiet.
Ashvin: Raji... neenga love panravaroda peyar enna?
Raji: puriyalai...
Ashvin: enna puriyanum? adhaan Manirathnam padathula vara heroine maathiri amaidhiyaa, guninja thala nimiraama nikkureengale. idhule irundhe theriyudhe neenga vera yaarayo love panreenga nnu... intha ponnu parkara vishayam ungalukku pidikkalai nnu... enna? naan solradhu correct aah?
Raji: mmm...
Ashvin: avar peyar sollalai neenga innum...
Raji: adhu vandhu...
Ashvin: sari... naan thelivaa pesidaren... enakku ungalai photo partha udaneye pidichiduchi... ennoda appa vum unga periappa vum Virudhunagar la onnaa padichaangalaam... pala varusham kazhichu sameebathula engayo santhichirukkaanga... family pathi pesumbodhu namma friendship ah adutha stage ku kondu poyi sambanthi aagittaa enna nnu yosichirukkaanga... aanaa idhu vaazhkai illaiyaa nnu modhalla jaathaga porutham parthirukkaanga... pramaathamaa irukku nnu sollittaangalaam...
So ... ippo enna pannanum nu neenga thaan sollanum...
Raji: enakku ore kozhappamaa irukku...
Ashvin: enna kozhappam?
Raji: adhu vandhu ... naan love panra vishayam enga appaavukku theriyum... avar venaa nnu solliyum periappa kekkalaiyaam... appa summaa parka varaanga maa... periappa manasu sangada padutha venaa... ippodhaikku amaidhiya iru nnu appa sonnaanga... neenga solradhai paarthaa adutha muhurthathuleye kalyaanathai panni vachiduvaanga pola irukke...
Ashvin: mmm... enna pannalaam?
Raji: adhu dhaan kozhappamaa irukku... enakku support panna poyi appa periappa vai ethirthu nikka vendi varum nu yosikkave tension aah irukku...
Ashvin: cha... en kadhai ... ippadi Manirathnam pada hero kadhai yaa aayiduche...
Raji: adhenna? naanum parkaren... vandhadhu le irundhu manirathnam padathai pathiye pesikittu irukkeenga?
Ashvin: avar padathula eppavume hero ponnu parka vanthaa, antha ponnu vera oruthanai love panren neenga ponnu pidikkalai nnu sollidunga nnu solluva...
Raji: oru mouna raagam la thaan appadi irundhadhu...
Ashvin: mmm...hmmm... ellaa padangallaiyum appadi thaan ... aanaa antha time ku yetha maathiri ponnoda activities la changes irukkum... but basic concept idhu dhaan...
Raji: suthamaa puriyalai...
Ashvin: mouna raagam avaroda first padam... appo.. eighties trend ah follow panni ... heroine vera yaaraiyo love pannen nu sonnaalum ... hero kalyaanam pannikkuvaaru...
appuram Roja... aravindswamy parka vandha Vaishnavi... same dialogue... hero thangachiya pidichirukku nnu solli... antha ponnukku ava lover oda kalyaanam panni veppaaru... idhu nineties trend...
next.. alaipaayudhe... millenium trend... ponnu parka vandhavan kitta... ponnu thanakku yerkanave register marriage aayiduchi nnu solluvaa...
latest aah... 21st century... aayudha ezhuthu... veetla ponnu parka yerpadu panraanga appadinna udane... lover veettukku petti padukkai oda vandhu... avanoda amma kitta naan pregnant aah irukken nnu oru gundai thookki pottu... avan veetla settle aayiduvaa...
Idhula ellaathuleyum ponnu parka vandhavan ... ayyooo paavammm...illaiyaa?
Ashvin asks very innocently and Raji couldn't control and bursts into laughter. He admires her pure and innocent laugh.
Raji tries hard and stops giggling. She wipes the wetness caused in her eyes due to continuous laughing.
Ashvin: happaa... ungalai sirikka vaikkaradhukku evvalo kashtapada vendi irukku... unga manasukku pidichavaroda paadu dhinam thindaattam thaan... ungalai sirikka vaikkanum naa padaatha paadu padanum pola irukke...
Raji: illai... avar entha muyarchiyum seyyanum ngra thevai illai...
Asvin: appuram?
Raji: avar ennai parthu smile pannaaru nnaale podhum... adhu appadiye enakkum thothikum...
Ashvin: OH... punnagai mannan aah?
Raji: illai... maiyyal Kannan...
Ashvin: aal eppadi? semma smart aah iruppaaro?
Raji: mmm...
Ashvin: enakku avarai parkanum pola irukke..photo vachirukkeengalaa?
Raji: illai...
Ashvin: colleague aah?
Raji: aamaa...
Ashvin: Nettech la enakku therinja oruthanga work panraanga...
Raji: yaaru? entha dept?
Ashvin: dept ellaam theriyaadhu... naan avangalukku call pannittu avanga eppo vara solraangalo appo varen... appo unga wouldbe ah neenga kaattanum...
Raji: avar ippo inga illai... onsite poyirukkaaaru...
Ashvin: U.S kaa?
Raji: illa... Berlin... one week thaan ... Thursday vandhiduvaaru...
Ashvin: OK... appo naan Friday varen... unga office ku...
Raji: appo...
Ashvin: avarai parthadhukku appuram ennoda decision solren...
Raji: idhula decide panna enna irukku?
Ashvin: helloo... appo enakku pidichirukku nnu keezha poyi sollidavaa?
Raji: ayyayyooo... venaa...
Ashvin: appo... ennai friend aah ethukkonga... friends?
Ashvin stretches his right hand... Raji thinks...
Ashvin: naan help pannaa..unga periappa vum othukka chance irukku.
Raji: OK... friends...
She also stretches her hand and holds his hand for a handshake.
Both of them smile. Ashvin takes Raji's mobile number.
Ashvin: Ok... Raji... keezha polaam vaanga... innum konja neram naama ingeye irundhaa... rendu perukkum Ok nnu ninaichu thattai maathikka poraanga...
Raji: vera venaye vendaam... vaanga polaam... sari... enna solla poreenga?
Ashvin: Shhh... SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both of them come downstairs...


Chapter 65 ... coming soon...

CHAPTER 65

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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