TAAREY FF - Dance To Your Heart's Rhythm || *LINK FOR THREAD 2 ADDED* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: premlata

Nice update

Taani have a problem with D3 gang why... Plz reviled soon
Taani and swayam cute fight lovely
I am little confused with Taani characters
Update soon... Pm me

I can understand your confusion.
I will clear it in the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Superb start
Taani's plan was really nice..she is so smart😛
Loved taayam part
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
just read it now
it was awesome & very
much intersting plz
update soon & pm me also
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Awsm update
Face off hmm
Gonna be interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
awesome concept
taani plan is nice
swayam also don't know T is dancer???
update soon
pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Just read teaser and chapter one!!
Loved the concept!!
Thanks for the pm!!
Love taani's character!!
Please update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
wow...awesome chapter...

taayam cute fight was awww...

taani has prob with gang...

and taani looking at someone and uski wajah se taani ko mumbai aana pada...i think he is rey...but uski vajah se taani ko mumbai kyu qana pada??

i hope all confusion will clear in next update...so update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Concept is Wonderful
Kriya n rey r in relationship..uggh..noways
Luved dis new taani
Taayam part was nice
Taani is a dancer wow
D3 n dancing devils rivals..OMG
Plz updt soon n PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Awesome concept character and update...👍🏼


So taani performing double role its quite intresting...😉

Precap looks intresting...😃

Waiting for nxt part so update soon and pm me when u update...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RECAP : Taani tricks Swayam into disclosing D3's plans for the evening. D3 Gang decides to go to the club to study the dance moves of DANCING DEVILS unaware that someone was listening to their conversation.
CHAPTER 2
DANCE IT OFF

The D3 Gang is about to leave for the club.
Sw : (shouts) Taani main bahar jaa raha hu. Tum dinner kar lena.
Here Taani was standing near the door listening to their convo. She knew that Swayam was not expecting of any reply. She sends a message to someone.
T : "Aaj puri D3 Gang aa rahi hai club. I'll be there at my usual spot."
Unknown : "Ok. What do you want me to make them do Tan?"
T : "Sean I want you guys to bring the face-off to a tie."
Sean : "Lemme guess. From there you are gonna take charge, right?"
T : "If he comes forward for the tie-breaker round then I am."
Sean : "Fine!"

Taani gets ready, puts on a hoodie and takes out a mask from her cupboard. She looks at the mask lovingly.

TAANI'S DRESS


TAANI'S HOODIE

FLASHBACK

Asha : Tan today's your 1st dance performance. So we bought you something.
T : Di. You remembered it?
Rithvik : Actually we remembered it!
T : Fine Jiju. Now can I please see my present?
Ashvik : Hope you like it.
T : OMG! It's so preety. Di, Jiju I love this mask.

Asha : Tan maine aur Rithvik ne hmare hone wale baby ke liye naam socha hai.
T : Di. Pehle hi clear kar deti hun ki mai aap ke bete ko Ansh bulaungi and main usse NY ka best dancer banungi. And dekhiyega uski shakal Jiju jaise hogi and akal meri Di jaisi.😊
Ashvik : But hme to beti chahiye.
Rithvik : Jiski akal aur shakal bilkul Asha jaisi ho (looks at her lovingly and keeps his hand on her baby bump.)
T : So beti ka naam kya socha hai?
Asha : Tanisha...Tanisha Mehra.
T : And agar beta hua to we'll call him Shantanu.. Shantanu Mehra.
FLASHBACK ENDS
T : Di, Jiju this is my 1st step to avenge your death. (puts on the mask and leaves for the club saying) Tanisha Mehra is here Mr. Singhania to make your life hell.

Meanwhile in the club
Nil : Abey kya faadu dance karte hai ye log yaar.
Sw : Tum inhe challenge kar sakte ho?
V : Rey main ye soch raha tha ki dekh hum dancers to hai hi and NDC ke winners bhi hai so hmlog to aaram se jeet sakte hai.
R : Pehle dekh to le...
K : Rey agar inhe koi problem nahi hai to I think we should challenge them.
Sh : Kriya are you nuts? Guys practically socho. Ye group humare equal me h.
Reyam : Agreed.

VOICE : Anyone who wants to challenge the DANCING DEVILS?
Gang (except Shareyam) : WE ARE. (and move forward towards the spotlight)
R : (aside to Kriya) Ye kya pagalpan hai?
K : Rey hum log jeet sakte hai. Aap, Swayam n neha NDC champs ho. Sharon Dancing Diva hai. Maine New York me Dance sikha hai. And baaki sab apne apne field me ustaad hai. Aap dekhna Universeji hume hi jeetayenge.

No one had noticed a figure standing in the dark near them and smirking. Rey gave a brief glance at that hooded figure but then turned back towards the gang.

T : (standing in the dark near them) tch tch! Over confidence... too bad !
VOICE : So we have the D3 Gang on one side and The Dancing Devils on the other. Face-off begins with the D3 gang. Let's have the music...

D3 Gang performs

Dhakka Laga Bhukka
Khayega Re Mukka
Ban Ja Re Ban Ja Mashal-E-Raah
O Yuva Yuva... O Yuva
Hum Albely Bade Manchaley
Dhum Jo Lagi To Chale Hum Chale
Chahee Phir Kaee
Yuhi Kisi Duniya Ki Kaamo Mein
Haath Milaye Na
Sang Chale Na

Ki Dum Mein Jo Dum Hai
Wo Apna Hi Dum Hai Kasam Se

(D3 Gang stops dancing and indicates the DDs to bring on their moves. DDs begin their performane)

Kisi Pe Bharosa Hum Karte Nahin
Kisi Ke Liye Hum Rukte Nahin
Kisi Ko To Hum Kabhi Chhedy Nahin
Koi Humein Chhede To Chhodte Nahin

Dhanak Nayi Hai Rang Naye Hain
Dagar Nayee Hai Rahi Naye Hain
Aur Jo Hain Kal Ke
Wo Aate Jaate
Yahan Wahan Beech Mein
Aise Hi Aaye Na Raah Kate Na
Humse Mili Na Jo Batien
To Muh Band Rakhon Na

(Both the Dance groups start dancing and pushing and provoking each other)

Kshama Karna Jo Lage Baat Buri
Bole Guru Khaho Baat Khari
Gaadi Aapni Dhekhe Jhandi Hari
Roka Jo Kisi Ne To Chhode Patri
O Yuva...

VOICE: " So here we have a tie between the D3 Gang and the Dancing Devils!"
The D3 Gang gave a deadly glare to their rival team.
The Dancing Devils gave a smirk as if they had a secret unknown to their rival.
VOICE: "So who is coming for the tie-breaker round from the D3 Gang?"
A handsome, young and dashing guy came forward.
Guy: "YOU ALL ARE SO GONNA REGRET HAVING ME AS UR RIVAL!"
UNKNOWN GIRL'S VOICE: " AND SO ARE YOU DARLING"
VOICE: "This is so gonna be interesting. The D3 Champ vs the Dancing Devil herself!"

Sw : (aside to Rey, our D3 champ) Dude hum ne kabhi DDs ke lead dancer ko dekha hi nahi hai.
R : I know. But chill koi ladki hai Tanisha Mehra kar ke. Main usse aram se hara sakta hun.

T (Tanisha) : Never underestimate the Girl power Mr. Reyaansh Singhania. (and puts down her hood)
R : Ladies first.
T : (shouts) MUSIC

I think I did it again (faces rey)
I made you believe, we're more than just friends
Oh baby, it might seem like a crush
(keeps her hand on Rey's shoulders)
But it doesn't mean that I'm serious(brings her face only inches away from Rey's)
'Cause to lose all my senses
That is just so typically me
Oh baby, baby
(and pushes Rey back)

Oops! I did it again (keeps her hand on her lips acting innocent)
I played with your heart, got lost in the game (makes a heart with her hands and rotates around Rey)
Oh baby, baby
Oops! You think I'm in love
That I'm sent from above
I'm not that innocent
(and skids towards Rey looking up)

(Now it was Rey's turn but he was standing like a statue. Swayam pushes him towards the centre which makes Taani aka Tanisha smile)

'Nother day, 'nother night
And she acting like she don't sleep
(he jumps and lands right in front of Taani)
She's a five when she drinks
But she's a ten when she's on top of me
(holds her at her waist)

She don't want love she just wanna touch (and brings her crashing down to his chest)
She's a greedy girl to never get enough
She don't wanna love she just wanna touch
She's Got all the moves that make you get it up

She's a dirty, dirty dancer, dirty, dirty dancer (points toward Taani)
Never ever lonely (smirks and then points toward the centre of the stage and then turns back to go towards the Gang)

(Taani keeps one hand on rey's shoulder from behind and turn him so that he faces her)

You change your mind

Like a girl changes clothes (removes her hoodie while taking a quick spin)
Yeah you PMS
Like a bitch, I would know

And you overthink (making hand movements and gestures)
Always speak critically
I should know
That you're not good for me
(spins and stops right behind him)

'Cause you're hot then you're cold
You're yes then you're no
(holds his hand)
You're in then you're out(pulls him and then pushes him)
You're up then you're down (jumps in the air and lands on her knees)

You're wrong when it's right
It's black and it's white
We fight, we break up
(forces Rey to turn where he is standing)
We kiss, we make up (and gives a peck on cheeks and leaves indicating Rey to start)

Oops! I did it again (Taani places her one hand on her lips and points at Rey with her other hand)

Here our Rey has a dumb expression on his face. He just keeps standing there with his palm placed right where Taani had kissed him.

VOICE : We have the winner here. The DANCING DEVILS!!!!

Taani gives a smile to Rey, puts on her hoodie and leaves the club. The D3 Gang shout on Rey to which Rey gives no response. Gang notices that Rey is lost in his own world and looks at Sharon.

Sh : (slaps Rey and shouts) REY WE LOST!!!!

R : (dreamily) But I found what I had lost. (comes back to reality) Sorry sorry guys. I screwed it up in the last.

Gang : (angrily) Ya! YOU DID!

Sw : Hey. It's ok. Haar - jeet to lagi hi rehta hai. Koi baat nahi Rey. Lets go home.

Meanwhile Taani reaches home, changes her dress puts the mask carefully in the cupboard and lies down on the bed remembering her Di and Jiju.

T : Di, Jiju my 1st victory and his loss. Bhai doesn't know who was driving the car that hit you. Unhe lagta hai ki ye 1 accident tha. But I know the truth.


PRECAP : Rey's POV about the face off. Taani's flashback.



NOTE : I know I just gave a you guys a peek into Taani's past and left it for you to guess the reason for her hatred. I hope I did justice to the face-off. If not to jitna marna h maar sakte ho. Plz like bhi marna. Criticism is welcomed. Kya pasand ni aaya ya koi confusion ho to plz bata dena.


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