Arshi: The Symphonious Saga!!! #Bairiyaa 16/3 Pg. 42 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lol loved ur reply on my comment lol and plss update soon dear...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dekho hum keh dete hai..
Ab hum se or intezaar nahi hoga...
Ek update ASAP.
Warna...warna hum aappe dhaava bolenge...
Haan...samaj mai aaya NK ?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: praj.shrish


I am extremely happy that you happened to read TSS and liked my writing.

As you correctly mentioned, I tried to to give different treatment to every story and happy that you liked it.

And about the latest story. Well , we are bound to love the chirpy and crazy Khushi because that is why we are here in first place 😃

Thank you for your comment dear and you will definitely get PM for next update




Thanx for replying 😊 Looks like I missed the 3rd story altogether and took the 4th as 3rd 😕

here goes my take on the 3rd one ...

I started reading the story and listening to the song at the same time and enjoyed how each line of the song was fitted perfectly into the story..sumthng u r so good at👏

Oh how I wished the way Khushi handled that snake Shyam in the show was like that in ur story ..so well deserved..and Khushi actually comes across as having some brains and also using it occasionally😆

Coming to Arnav behaving like the typical Joru ka Ghulam... Ahhh !!😲what is arnav without the angry young man look he alws carries..the tall brooding khadoos Laad Governor...naaahi(hema malini type)😡 I TOTALLY agree wid Khushi "Rehna tu hain jaise tu,thoda sa dard tu thoda sukoon"

Khushi's plan "tit for tat" became a rocking hit..aur ho kiun na,akhir jab sankadevi pe sanak char jaye,to Arnav ko to uske agey jhukna hi padta hain 👏

Keep writing and PM me for updates 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Praju...sunti ho 😆
next update ASAP...
ab songwa dhoondh ke de ka NK ?
kitna tarsaaogi aap...😭
koi mannat rakkhe kya ?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaja update ki karein deal..
dono deal karein seal..😳
comment se ho agreement..
aur chalein uspe permanent ...😆
aur husraton ki court mein..
yeh Dil ka judge kahein..One more one more..😳

khali pili khaali pili chokne ka nai..
tera pichha karoo toh chokne ka nai..😉

Hai tujpe right mera..
tu hai delight meri..😉
tere iss thread pe aaoo toh chokneka nai..

Khaali pili khaali pili chokne ka nai..
teri aashiq hoon mujko
rokneka nai..😆

Ho update karne ka time toh bataa..
taki rahoon mein online zaraa..😆
rehti hoon mein aajkal busy..😳
wait karna hai muskil bada...😆

agar apne aap ko inn hathodo se bachaana hai toh jadi se update doh...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful, excellent, brilliant story. ...just completed reading all the stories...interesting concept. ...loved all songs in the stories. ...please accept my buddy request. ...can you please PM me future updates. ...thanks in advance
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
😃

simply brilliant update Praju...
you made me cry ...
though Arnav is at fault but still feel bad for him...
both are madly in love but one wrong step in beautiful relationship and bas sab khatam nahi hota hue bhi khatam break up...😭...an old song for this update...the singer is Talat Mehmood.

phir vohi shaam vahi gam vahi tanahaai hai
dil ko samajhaane teri yaad chali aai hai

phir tasavvur tere pahalu me bithaa jaaegaa
phir gayaa vaqt ghadi bhar ko palat aaegaa
dil bahal jaaegaa aakhir ye to saudaai hai
phir vohi shaam

jaane ab tujh se mulaaqaat kabhi ho ke na ho
jo adhuri rahe vo baat kabhi ho ke na ho
meri mazil teri mazil se bichhad aai hai
phir vohi shaam

phir tere zulf ke rukhasaar ki baate hogi
hijr ki raat magar pyaar ki baate hogi
phir muhabbat me tadapane ki qasam khaai hai
phir vohi shaam.


thank you for this wonderful n very emotional update.
hope you'll continue soon,
lots of love n hugs,
take care of yourself dear.




Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
IT'S WEDNESDAY TODAY...😳
evening hone ko hai,
coffee time hone ko hai,
aur dil 🥺...

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