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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kateyes

Firstly so sorryyy 4 so late actually still having net n pc prblm 😡😡😡😡😡 ( even my bro is showing his tantrums not doing anything 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 ) its absolutely okk... bcos this time im also late in updating 😉 d liked d new banner very much 😃😃😃😃 n d update was brilliant ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ thanks a ton kanwal... virman scene was really cute whn dey were talking 2 d baby 😊😊😊😊 , ohh our cute n adorable angel got fever n maanvi is back on her protective mother avatar she is blaming herself 4 her angel illness she is confused btw her dreams n daughter she can't choose her dreams over kasak she luved her beyond limits dat she can sacrifice her dreams 4 her angel happiness n virat was right dat she is wonderful mother n dere angel is a understanding kid so gradually she will learn 2 adapt d changes in her life liked him in dat part he was very much supportive , mohit again ( i thought dat naina matter is finished she will b happy with maan 😃😃😃😃 but mohit is not letting her go he should forget her n moves on his life 2 i don't know y it seems like he will do sumthing 2 gain her back hope it doesn't effect virman life q k kare koi or bhare koi dat is unfair ) yes i brought it again but seriously not planning on getting naina n maan back... but for sure there will be some twist... if he do sumthing definately rishabh will not tolerate it n he will definately blame virman 4 dat ( waise ghyb kahan hai rishabh g missing him 2 muchhh 😃😃😃😃😃 ) he is just on his way back 😛 sorrry again 4 late

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Posted: 11 years ago
hiii guys, i am back with the next upadte... i know... i know after long 15 days, im updating it 😳
but i was damn busy... it was my cousin brother's wedding and one of my cousin sister delivered a cute little baby girl...
anyways i hope you guys enjoy the update and do like and comment... it will encourage me to update next part soon... warna main shayad fir gayab naa ho jaun 😛
CHAPTER 72
~~ tere pyaar mein...
mohit : you dont need to worry...
rishabh : i am glad you are there mohit... thank you...
mohit : i am being paid for it sir... you dont have to thank me...
rishabh : no i need to... after whatever happened... you are still working with me and helping me... i trust you mohit...
mohit : thank you sir...
rishabh : like hundred times i have told you... you can call me rishabh..
mohit : i cant... and i have handled the deal on your behalf... you dont need to come office today...
rishabh : yeah i would prefer that... i need to be with madhu...
mohit : yeah... you should support her though she wouldnt leave you mid way, if you didnt support her...
rishabh : i know what you are saying but -
mohit : i am no longer associated to your sister sir...
rishabh : that was not an association...
mohit : i dont care... i dont care what it was...
rishabh : you do care... thats why you are working with me... you think im a fool...
mohit : no... certainly not a fool... though i once thought you are a bas***d but you are not...
rishabh : control your tongue you...
mohit : i am in my total control sir...
rishabh : okk lets come straight to the point... i know you joined my company on my request...
mohit : yeah... because you felt guilty... behen ne mera dil todh diya.. meri zindagi barbaad kardi aur fir uske badhe bhaiya aate hai... to compensate for the loss... meri zindagi bnane... name, fame, money... you are ready to give me everything...
rishabh : yes i can... i can give you everything...
mohit : naina is my everything...
rishabh : stop bringing nain in all this...
mohit : beech mein toh tum log aaye the...
rishabh : listen... lets calm down and forget all that...
mohit : i am sorry... i shouldnt be dragging my personal life into my professional space.
rishabh : its okkk...but honestly i have been wanting to know the reason...
mohit : actually... i.. sir i.. i want to meet naina...
rishabh : mohit... are you insane...???
mohit : please... please make me meet her once... i want to see her please... i dont even have her new contact number... else i wouldnt have asked you... do a favour on me...
rishabh : i cant do it... she is my sister... i cant ruin her life
mohit : you will one day and till that day i m working here... and dont worry i wont cheat you or do harm to your business... i know how to be faithful unlike some rich spilt brats...
rishabh : okk do your job and send me that gupta brothers construction file... i need that...
mohit : will be on your door sir...
mohit disconnected the call and massaged his forhead with his fingers. only he knows why he is working with a person like rishabh. though he always thought rishabh is some evil from birth but alas he is not. mohit realised that rishabh was just hurt the same way he is hurt... they both had a bad experience in love... they both were dumped in one way or another but rishabh has someone besides him... madhu is there for him... no matter what and how bad their relationship is, but they still have someone to look up to when alone... but he... he is all alone... he cant even share his feelings with someone... swamini and pragati will not understand him instead they will again curse naina...
mohit : i will see you soon naina... or who knows you might come back to me one day... i know you love me... that husband of yours can buy you one of the most luxurious car (thanks to facebook, you see) but he cant love you the way i do...
scene shifts
virat was working in his office and got a call...
virat : hello...
pragati : bhai... can we talk please...
virat : yes... kya hua pragati...
pragati : bhai we need you... i dont know why mohit bhai... he is working with rishabh... few days back only i got to know that... bhai something is wrong...
virat : what...??? he left his job...
pragati : hmm... but i dont understand why is he even talking to a person like that...
virat : he is intelligent and smart enough... you dont worry sweetheart... i will talk to him...
pragati : hmmm...
virat : okk chal bye...
virat leaned into his chair and wondered what is happening. mohit who was damn angry and pissed off on rishabh is now working with him. and if he is working, why is rishabh letting him work there...
virat : ohh god... why there is not a end to our problems... now what is all this mystery...???
virat closed the file he was working on, and dailled mohit's mobile.
mohit : hello... how are you bhai...??
virat : i am good mohit... how are you...??
mohit : i am okk...
virat : so whats up these days...?? there has been so many things going on that we couldnt talk...
mohit : hmm...
virat : so how is office going on...??
mohit : its going well... you tell... hows bhabhi and kasak...??
virat : they are good... i heard you changed your job...
mohit : yup... better opprotunities you see...
virat : hmm... so where did you join...???
mohit : singhania industries...
virat : woww... thats great...
mohit : bhia i know what you want to say... but it doesnt matter me anymore... i am just being professional with my boss...
virat : i dont doubt your decision but somehow i didnt like this idea...
mohit : i am fine with it bhai and i think this is what matters the most...
virat : but you could have joined our business as well...
mohit : if i wanted, i would have never joined my previous job bhai...
virat : okk... i respect that... take care and all the best...
mohit : thank you bhai...
scene shifts
manvi was sitting with kasak from the time she woke up. though virat consoled her in the morning and made her understand thing, but it didnt worked. manvi wasnt convinced from that reasoning of his. she still blamed herself and felt responsible for kasak having fever.
kasak : mumma hum ab london nahi jayenge...
manvi was lost in her thoughts unable to register that kasak said something to her. kasak shook manvi a little bringing her out of her thoughts.
manvi : yes baby...
kasak : hum london nahi jayenge...
manvi : hmm... london...
kasak : nahi jayenge na... promise break kiya... mumma papa dono ne...
manvi : arrey i am saying that i dont know anything about this trip thing...
kasak : kyun nahi pta mumma...??
manvi : hmm... kyunki i was thinking about the small baby you wanted...
kasak : ohh achha... matlab ab hum small baby ke saath london jayenge...
manvi : hehe... yes... with our small baby...
kasak : par dad ne toh small baby ki ticket book nahi ki... main daadu ko bol dungi... woh book kara denge...
manvi : okk mera bacha... waise abhi small baby ko aane mein time lagega... toh tab tak we can go to anyother place you want... somewhere nearby...
kasak : no... mujhe na hotel room mein jaana hai...
manvi : so we can go to any hotel and that too anyday... is that fine with you...???
kasak : anyday mumma... promise...???
manvi : promise...
kasak : okk then... mujhe na big wala room chahie... swimming pool wala...
manvi : okk done... anything else...???
kasak : no... bas...
manvi : bas... come here my baby...
manvi made kasak sit on her lap and hugged her and kissed her forehead.
manvi : i love you kasu...
kasak : i love you too mumma...
manvi : mumma loves you three...
kasak : kasu loves mumma hundred...
manvi : aww... my little princess...
kasak : no mumma is princess...
manvi : no kasu is a princess...
" zehnaseeb... zehnaseeb... tujhe chahun be tahasha "
manvi : hello...
virat : everything good...
manvi : yes...
virat : good...
manvi : you had lunch...???
virat : no will have it... you...??
kasak : kaun hai mumma...???
manvi smiled at kasak and replied " papa... "
kasak took the mobile from manvi hurriedly.
kasak : i love you dad...
virat : i love you my princess...
kasak : hehe... mumma ne bhi abhi mujhe princess bola tha...
virat : because you are one...
kasak : mujhe question ask karna hai...
virat : matlab ab meri question bank ko fever nahi hai...
kasak : woh toh chala gya... maine apple khaya tha na dad...
virat : ohhh i see...
kasak : hum london kab jayenge...??
virat : london... again...
kasak : again...??? main toh first time jaungi na...
virat : i mean jayenge na... ek din jayenge...
kasak : tab tak hotel jayenge... mumma ne promise kiya... okk dad...??
virat : okk... you are happy now...???
kasak : yes... par mujhe shopping karni padegi...
virat : kar lena shopping... ab main kaam kar loon...???
kasak : ok... mujhe bhi cartoon dekhna hai... bye...
virat : bbye... aap toh waise bhi bahut busy hoti hai...
kasak gave the mobile to manvi and manvi tried controlling her giggling.
manvi : hello...
virat : you reminded her of london... didnt you...???
manvi : no... i swear...
virat : yaar manvi ye mujhe phaswaegi... mera system hila deti hai iski demands...
manvi : mr. vadera ab toh demands increase hi hogi with the time... ek aur demand karne ke liye aane wala hai...
virat : yeah i know... very true...
manvi : dont worry... hum milke sab handle kar lenge...
virat : i know... love you...
manvi : love you too...
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i got only 51 likes on the previous update... it has already discouraged me n its still doing it... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm first yayayaya... The update was actually awesome and don't worry it's the people ka fault that they are missing out on such an awesome story... Chill di we are there no...nd ya I have been checking DMg since when I don't know to keep a track of the updates... Believe me I'm going mad... Loved the update and continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Its nice to read ur update after a long time. Kasak is so sweet. I likde the way she said she had apple and the fever is gone . I guess Mohit is still believing in his love. Please continue soon. Thanks for the pm
Edited by jayprabu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally you updated..
Lovely update..
Virman and Kasak are soo cute.
Pleasee update soon..
And thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Finally you updated..

Lovely update..

Virman and Kasak are soo cute.

Pleasee update soon..

And thanks for the PM..




thank u soo much chandinie 😊
will try to updt soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jayprabu

Nice update. Its nice to read ur update after a long time. Kasak is so sweet. I likde the way she said she had apple and the fever is gone . I guess Mohit is still believing in his love. Please continue soon. Thanks for the pm



thank u soo much... stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: agarwal.devashi

I'm first yayayaya... The update was actually awesome and don't worry it's the people ka fault that they are missing out on such an awesome story... Chill di we are there no...nd ya I have been checking DMg since when I don't know to keep a track of the updates... Believe me I'm going mad... Loved the update and continue soon.




thank u devashi 😊
congo fr being the first one to comment... 😊
u hav no idea how happy im after reading ur comment... 😊
stay tuned...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum update ⭐️⭐️⭐️ mohit 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 he is getting on my nerves y he is hell bend 2 ruined naina's life ( if u do or think like dat i will surely kill u 😆😆😆😆 ) y can't he let her go ok its not easy 4 him 2 let her go but naina n rishabh was not only at fault he should 2 feel guilty 4 wht he did 2 her whn she needs him 2 support her 2 guide her n help her 2 solve her prblms he was never beside her actually he left her n let her face all prblms by ignoring her all d tym only maan was dere 4 her ( yeah she never let know maan wht her prblms were but still he was dere like her frnd ) how can he blame only naina n rishabh , rishabh was 2 not at his fault he told her sister 2 back out 4rm her decision which she is taking 4 him it was only naina who decide whom she wants in her life ( its her right 2 decide dat who is perfect 4 her ) n now rishabh is doing his best 2 compensate mohit loss but still he can't fulfil mohit wish 2 meet naina how can he ruined his sis life whn he knows she is happy with her hubi ( hope mohit understand dis soon he will not create any prblm 4 any1 whether its naina , rishabh , virman or himself lifes ) n liked d virman n dere angel scene was cute n adorable as always kasak never forgets her demands n never let go any chance 2 tensed her father with her all unusual demands dat was really cute 😃😃😃😃 she is getting adorable day by day ❤️❤️❤️
Edited by kateyes - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update bhi hua, thank you nainu! I loved the update, I was missing kasak for so long, muah, kitni pyari hai, kisi ki nazar na lage! She really is adorable the way you describe her. Mohit working with Rishabh, this doesn't sound good, waiting to read more. Thank you again for the update, and hope the next one will be soon 😊. Take care
❤️Nimi

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