MG#2- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan/pt29/pg117/th#3added - Page 8

Originally posted by: priya_21

Part 12

shweta : bte aapne sb samaan ek baar check kr liya hai na

geet : ji

shweta : bs koi kami nhi rhni chaiye

geet : mom aap fikr mt kriye

sb dekh liya hai maine

sb kuch ready hai

shweta caressed her face and said "yuhi khush raho"

geet smiles...

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Aap sb soch rhe honge

Ye sb tyaariya kisliye ho rhi hai

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Socho

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Socho...

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Aaj hum Vicky ka rishta leke jaa rhe hai

Jisse Vicky pasand krta hai

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In starting I felt same its attraction only.. How you fall in love with someone in first sight...

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Par Vicky ke sath huya

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He meets her in Europe trip... she is his friend sister...

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Jiske baare mein is Vicky ko kuch nhi pata tha

He only knows her name...

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Kbhi iski himmat nhi huyi aapne dost se is baare mein baat krni ki...

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She laughs on this...

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Bilkul apne bhai jaisa hai...

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Unhone bhi toh mujhe I love you khehne me kitna waqt laga diya

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Vicky : bhabhi phle aap bhai ko toh ready krlo

Geet : mein tumhare bhai ko kya batayu

Ki unka chotta bhai ko pyaar ho gya hai

Jisse wo ek trip mein mille the

Jaha dono ke bich mein hey ... hello huya

Aur dono mein formal chat ke alawa aur koi baat nhi huyi

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Tumhe uske naam ke alawa aur kuch nhi pata

Vicky : mere pass uski pic hai hai

Geet : toh kya mein usse newspaper mein chapwayu

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Vicky its only attraction not love

Jo is umar mein aksar ho jaata hai

Vicky : bhabhi maine bhi phle asa hi socha tha

Isliye aapko 1 year tk kuch nhi btaya

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Par I really loved her.

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Mujhe bhi yha lagta tha

Love at first sight keval filmo mein ya kahaniyo mein acha lagta hai

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Kissi se hum mile

Jaha bs hey

Hello bhi .. hmare group members ne karwayi

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Pura Europe hum sath mein gume

Fir bhi ek dusre se kuch nhi pucha

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Pr itne time ke baad mein usse nhi bhul paaya

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Isliye toh aapse kaha tha

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Wo yhi delhi se hai

Aap pata kare uske baare mein

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Geet : ok

Tum apne us friend se kyun nhi puchte jisne tumhe introduce krwaya tha usse

Vicky : bhabhi I try

Pr uska number ab nhi milta

I think he change the number

Geet : hmm

Baki friends se puchlo

Ho sakta hai

Unme se kissi ko kuch pata ho

Vicky : bhabhi ase kaise

Geet : you want her in your life na

Vicky: hmm

Geet : so, ask from your friends.

Vicky : bhabhi

Geet : ok

Firstly you go for your meeting.

Jb tum wapas aayonge

Toh apne friends ko lunch pe invite krna

Vicky : us se kya honga

Geet : maine jo kaha

Utna kro

Vicky : ok

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Vicky ne mujhe toh convince kr liya... par maan

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Unhe kaise batati...

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Kaise smjhati...

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Thoda muskil tha

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He loves family so much...

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Is Vicky ne toh mujhe fsa diya...

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Geet enter in her room, maan silently closed the door...

Geet : maan

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Maan

jaroor study room mein honge

aur as usual kaam mein busy honge

She turns and bumped on him, he encircled her waist.

Geet : uff

Mein aapko jb awaaz laga rhi thi

Tb aap bole kyun nhi

Maan : jaan kaam mein busy tha

Jaise tum khudse kh rhi thi

Geet : kaam

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Kaunsa kaam

Maan : apni wife ki complains sunane ka kaam

Geet : acha

Maan : hmm

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Acha ye batao

Tum mujhe kya batane wali thi

Geet : ha wo

Vicky

Maan : kya kiya vicky ne

Geet : usne kuch nhi kiya hai

Maan : fir

Geet : aapke bhai kp pyaar ho gya hai

Maan : kya

Usne ye mujhe kyun nhi bataya

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Aur wo kaun hai

Kya naam hai uska

Kaha rhti hai

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Aur ye sb kbse chl raha hai

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Aur ek baat aur tumhe ye sb kbse pata hai

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Geet : yhi bs ek-do saal se

Maan : bs ek - do saal se

Geet : hmm

Usne mujhe ek saal late btaya

Maan : great

Aur tum mujhe ab bta rhi ho

Geet : maan

Relax

Aap smjhne ki koshish kriye

She held his hand and made sit on bed, she sit near him and rest her head on his shoulder.

Geet : maan mujhe ek saal phle usne btaya tha

He loves someone.

Par wo usse itni achi tarah nhi janata hai

He meet with her in Europe trip and fall in love with her in first sight, he only know her name and city... her family background, number, address nothing know.

Mujhe laga wo usse bhool jaayenga

Its only attraction.. usse bhi yhi laga tha... isliye usne mujhe is baare mein kuch nhi btaya...aur jb btaya...tb maine usse khud aur waqt dene ko kaha

Aur jb usse kuch din phle baat huyi toh usne mujhse request ki he wants give one chance to own...

Toh maine uska sath dene ke liye ha krdi

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Hume ek mauka dena chaiye

Maan : par geet

Ek rishte mein ek dusre ko smjhna...janana bhi pdta hai

Geet : mein jaanti hu maan

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Par shaadi ka rishta toh asa hi hota hai

Jaha do ajnaabi ek dor mein bnd jaate hai

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Yaha par Vicky na jyada nhi.. par kuch pal hi shi uske sath toh bitaye hai

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Wo sch mein usse pasand krta hai

Aur waise ladki dikhne mein bhi thik hai...

Maan : bs thik hai

Geet : are baba

Bhut achi hai

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Maan : tumne ladki ko kaise dekha

Geet : wo uske pass Europe trip ki pics hai na... usme...

Maan : hmm

Geet : ab aapko ek kaam krna hai

Vicky jb meeting se wapas aa jaayenga

Toh wo apne friends ko invite karenga lunch ke liye

Toh aapko baat baat mein Europe trip ki baat chedni hai

Aur us ladki ke baarein me pta krna honga

Maan : ye tum mujhe kyun kh rhi ho

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Wo ye khud kare na

Geet : ye lo

Usne krna hota hai

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Toh ab tak kr liya hota

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Aur aaj usse date kr rha hota

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Par as usual dono bhai ek jaise hai

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Apne dil ki baat smjhne mein hi itna waqt bita dete hai

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She continuing saying about him and his brothers... he placed lips on her...make quite further saying any word more...

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She flushed and hugs him tightly...

Maan : tum abi kya kh rhi thi

Mein waqt ka shi se use nhi krta

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Ab toh mein bilkul shi use kr rha hu na

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Aaj hum officially taani ko dekhne jaa rhe hai

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Vicky jis ladki ko pasand krta hai uska naam "TAANI" hai

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Aaj dono taraf se ha ho gyi toh ...aaj hi hum shagun de denge

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Waise humari taraf se toh HA hi hai...

Ab basi Taani ki ha ka intzaar hai aur uski family ki taraf se

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Yaha tak baat kaise puchi...ye sb baad mein batayungi

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Hey babaji...maan ne mujhe kb bulaya tha

Aur mein kaam mein bhool hi gyi

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Aaj toh bhut badakenge

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Geet tumhare pass sbke liye waqt hai

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Par tum mujhe bhool jaati ho...

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bala mein unhe kaise bhool sakti hu...

wo hai toh sb hai...nhi toh kuch nhi...

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Part 13

Aaj hum officially taani ko dekhne jaa rhe hai

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Vicky jis ladki ko pasand krta hai uska naam "TAANI" hai

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Aaj dono taraf se ha ho gyi toh ...aaj hi hum shagun de denge

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Waise humari taraf se toh HA hi hai...

Ab basi Taani ki ha ka intzaar hai aur uski family ki taraf se

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Yaha tak baat kaise puchi...ye sb baad mein batayungi

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Hey babaji...maan ne mujhe kb bulaya tha

Aur mein kaam mein bhool hi gyi

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Aaj toh bhut badakenge

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Geet tumhare pass sbke liye waqt hai

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Par tum mujhe bhool jaati ho...

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bala mein unhe kaise bhool sakti hu...

wo hai toh sb hai...nhi toh kuch nhi...

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Geet entered in room and see one beautiful red maroon sari placed on bed...

Geet : maan

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Maan aap kaha hai

He encircled her from behind...

Geet : maan ye sb kisliye

Maan : bs ase hi

Geet : par in sbki kya jaroorat thi

Maan : kya gift jaroorat dekhke diye jaate hai

Mera mann kiya toh le aaya

Geet turned and hugged him...

Geet : mein toh bs ase hi pucha

Maan : chalo ab jaldi si ready ho jaayo

She came out from hug and said maan mein toh ready hu na

Maan : but I want you wear this...

Geet : kya mein isme achi nhi lag rhi

Maan : you look gorgeous as usual

Par mein tumhe is sari mein dekhna chahta hu

Geet : maan ye mein baad mein phen lungi

Kbhi kissi aur din

Abhi hume late bhi ho raha hai

Maan ; as your wish

Tum niche aa jaana

He left...

Geet : bura maan gye

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We reached maheshwari house... in this between I try to manofy the maan, par ye hai maante hi nhi... meri taraf dekha bhi nhi... jbki maine inki laayi huyi sari bhi phen li...

Aryan : mom hum puch gye

Geet : yes beta

Aryan : toh chalo na

Geet : hmm

Maan

Maan : hmm

Geet : aap abhi bhi gussa ho

Maan : nhi

Before she say further, maan take mehar and going towards house...

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Maheshwari family grandly welcomes the khurana family...

All are busy in simple talking and here I try or waiting his one glimpse, but he, my dust danav busy in talking with Swayum and Vicky...

Swayum (Swayum is a simple guy with hidden qualities)

Aap sb soch rhe honge...Swayum kaun hai... he is tani big brother...And Vicky friend too...

Daadi : taani ko bhi bula lena chaiye ab hume

Mr. Maheshwari : ji

Sharion

Mrs. Khurana : ji ye kaun hai

Mr. Maheshwari : ye humari hone wali bahu hai

Shairon going towards taani room but I stop her...

Geet : mein bhi tumhare sath chalti hu

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Geet : tum kuch pareshaan lag rhi ho

Shairon : nhi asa kuch nhi hai

We reached to taani room, stand in front of her room...

Geet : andher chale

Shairon nervously knocked taani room... no voice came from room, we both enter into room...

Shairon : taani tum ready ho gyi

For seeing taani ready, shairon felt relaxed, I noticing her expressions...

Taani simply nodded, but I noticed on her face no smile, she worried for something...

Shairon : taani ye geet hai

She suspiciously looked me...

Shairon : Vicky ki babhi

Taani : namastey

Geet : namastey

Shairon kya mein taani se kuch der akele baat kr sakti hu

Shairon : par

Geet : shairon mere liye baat krna jaroori hai

Shairon looks towards taani, after getting tani assurance, shairon nodded and left the place...

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Geet : taani

Tum job hi khehna chaho kh sakti ho

Taani denied...

Geet : mein kuch puchu ... Toh kya tum uska shi jwab dongi

She nodded...

Geet : tum kissi aur ko chahti ho

Taani shocked...

Geet : koi aur hai toh tum mujhe bta sakti ho

Mein sb smbhal lungi

Taani : asa nhi hai

Geet : fir kya baat hai

Ab ye mt khehna kuch nhi

Tumhare chehre pe haasi ki jagh pareshaani dekhi hai maine

Isliye maine tumse wo sb pucha

Taani : mein abhi shaadi ke liye tyaar nhi hu

Geet : bs itni si baat

Taani : ye itni si baat nhi hai

Mere liye

Geet : mein smjh sakti hoon

Acha ek baat btao

Jb tum ready nhi thi

Fir hum sbko kyun bulaya

Taani : mujhse kissi ne pucha hi nhi

Bs kh diya

Ready ho jaana

aaj ladke wale tumhe dekhne aane waale hai

ab aap hi batao mein kaise ase kissi bhi ladke se milne ko ready ho jaayu

jisse mein jaanti hi nhi

geet : arrange marriage mein asa hi hota hai

taani : isliye mujhe arrange marriage pasand nhi hai

kissi bhi ajnaabi se shaadi krlo

baad mein wo ladka kharab nikla toh

meri toh puri life kharab ho jaayengi

geet : toh phle us ajnaabi ko smjh lo

dekh parak lo

fir ha khehna

acha lage toh ha

nhi toh tata bye bye

taani : hmm

wo mere sapno ko toh smjhenga na

mein professor banana chahti hu

aur abhi toh meri post graduation bhi complete nhi huyi hai

ydi usne mujhe aage padne nhi diya toh

geet : tum usse apna dream abhi share kr lo

if he is ok with this...

toh hi aage sochna

taani : thanks

geet : most welcome

taani : sorry

geet : wo kisliye

taani : aaj aap yaha apne devar ka rishta leke aayi aur mein

geet patted her cheek and said " mein is ulzan ko smjh sakti hu...

Mein bhi is mod se guzri hu

Par mein ek baat jaroor kahungi

Meri family bhut hi achi hai

Shaadi se phle mere bhi kuch sapne the

Mujhe bhi yhi darr tha

Ek ajnaabi mere sapno ko pura karenga ya nhi

Par maan ne mera sath hamesha diya

Sirf unhone nhi ... meri puri family ne

Sbne smjha

Mein architect banana chahti thi

Maan ne us dream ko pura kiya

Aaj mein khurana construction ki head architect hu

Ye post mujhe unhone isliye nhi di mein is family ka hissa hu

Balki is post pe puchne mein mujhe 9 saal lag gye

Taani : 9 saal

Geet : hmm

Dhere dhere ek stairs upar chalti gyi

Aur har kadam pe puri family sath thi

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Isliye tum chinta mt kro

Tumhe bhi sb smjhenge

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Ab niche chale

Taani : hmm

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Both descending the stairs, and maan & Vicky staring own partners...

Vicky : pretty hai na

Maan : bhut

I love her

Vicky sees towards maan and notices his gaze too...

Vicky : I love her too

Maan sees little angrily to him...

Vicky : bhai bhabhi waha hai

And I love my bhabhi so much

Maan : apni pe dhyan de

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Note: - friends I am really disappointing due to decreasing in like... please tell me u want to continue this story or not...

Friends this story based on couple like real life couple... I try to add maaneet flavor too... but I want to show how real life married couple live the moments...in real life couple not live dreamy or imaginary life, in this many hurdle came, both have so many responsibilities on shoulder, and want to share but don't get approx time, how one girl fulfill each responsibility, try to best, how his husband support her.. New relation added time to time, and her/his responsibility increases... jitney rishte utni jyada umeede... har rishte ko ek sath leke chalna asan nhi hota... I hope you all support me...

In this I showed caring, loving husband like maan... And my another story "is life a dream?" its opposite from this...

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previous part 12 on page 13

see this update too...

MG- jaane dil mein kabse hai tu -part 33 on page 71

wonderful update and so realistic too...you are so right, in real life wife in fulfilling all her other duties has less time for her husband. This is what I find different in US. Couples go out for dinner/dance or whatever to spend time with each other leaving a babysitter to take care of their kids...This is what is lacking in India atleast in my opinion.

priyanka it was superb. geet is a very good daughter in law. she wants to complete her all duties. but unintentionally somewhere maan is feeling neglecting. i loved the way geet was talking with taani. waiting for next dear.

awww thats so cute
she made taani understand thats its okay to be scared
that even she went through it all
i think we all have such feelings as taani
even if its arranged or love marriage i think
well can say that i know what she feels
we all go through that too
but luckily maan and his family wont stop her
which is nice right
maan he meant his wife to be
not your wife mate
am glad geet talked to taani
that sure cleared her confusion

gr8 part..

awsum geet nai jis tarha tani k samjhya uski problem ko samaj k that was awsum