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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome and intresting concept...👍🏼

Waiting for 1 part so update soon...😊

Pm me when u update nxt part...😉


Thnks dear..
will pm u wen i updte nxt prt..
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: rose_taarey

khadoos nd musibattt...😳...atlast wapas aa gye dono...ab jaldi e start bhi kr do story...awesum concept nd thnks fr pm...😊...do update asap...😛


Thy r bck..😉😆
THANK U DEAR..
WILL UPDATE SOON..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Amazing concept nd cs😊

Taarey as BFF..wow
Looking fwd to it
Continue soon nd plz pm me too

THANK U DEAR..
WILL UPDATE SOON..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Sweetypie0234

Amazing concept

Pls do continue
and do pm me

thnk u dear..
will continue soon n ofcourse will pm u...😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Lachu_taarey

THANK U DEAR..
WILL UPDATE SOON..
n i knw u r waiting for mitwa.lil more tym buddy...


dear buddy
i am really waiting for the first chapter of kadoos and musibat and thanks for informing that u will update mitwa and it will take time ...and u know for mitwa i can wait till eternityyy

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997


dear buddy
i am really waiting for the first chapter of kadoos and musibat and thanks for informing that u will update mitwa and it will take time ...and u know for mitwa i can wait till eternityyy

Awww..😳
Will post d first chapter by tomorrow morning..
n mitwa,I wll b writing soon,so no worries dear..
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
TAAREY FF-EHSAAS-PART 1
Hey guys,
Thnk u for each n every comments n likes,
I cnt tell u how much i missed writing n everyone here,
So enough of my buck buck,
Start reading...

MUMBAI 2013

TAANI'S FLAT-


Kitni baar kaha tujhse subah subah tumhara sada huva shakal n
pair mat dikhaa mujhe,thrwing d alarm clock which was buzzing d tym of 7 am..
Taani woke up with a messy hair,slightly irriated tht kadoos's leg was on her pillow..

Itni subah subah shor machana zaroori hai kya drama queen..
Rey woke up from d opposite n upside down posture n smiles at taani..
Taani got irriated n thrw a pillow at his face..

Kaku enters with taani's lukewarm water n Rey's lemon tea..

Kaku-subah shuru hogaye tum donon.
Taani bitiya udo,aapka jogging shoes nikalkar rakhi hai,
aapka jogging ka tym hogayana n
Rey baba aap ghar jaakar naahkar aajao aapka breakfast luch tayyar hai..

Taani-(kicking rey's but) jaana mera moof kya dekh raha hai,jaana..
Rey-tum jaona apna olympics 3000 main jaane keliye practice nahi karni,
jaana bhaag bhaag..bhaag bhaag ke humare kutte ke bone jaisa hogaya hai..

Taani-shut up
N dey started catching each,othets hairs...
Rey-aaj choddongi nahi..
Taani-kadoos kayinka,baal chod mera
Rey-tu chod

Kaku enters again-tum log sudroge nahi,
ek doosre ke,baal chodo abhi n baba aap bhi
Taani-baba aap bhi kya matlab kaku..
Kaaku-kuch nahi apna apna kaam karo..
Taani n Rey gets up..

Taani-Rey(in a sweet tone)
Rey-mmm,
Taani-shoes ki lace tie karke dona..😳
Rey-tumko kaam ho toh tumhare moof se mera naam kitna accha lagtha...
Taani-tum bhi kya muhamad rafi ke tune main mera
naam bhulata hai huh,
woh sab chod,tie karke donoa
Rey-mere paas koi,aur option hai..
(bents dwn to tie d laces)
Mere liye ek kaam karega
Taani- kya
Rey-jo nayi ladki aayi hai,are tumhare nxt cabin main
Taani-aah Shikha,uska kya
Rey-uska number dilwaado mujh ko plse...(luks at taani)

Taani-chod lace chod..
Are pichle baar yaad,hai,tumko ek numbr dilwaayi thi,
woh receptionst ki,aree usne toh mujhe marne ke poore plnning kiya tha
n mujhe ussse chupkar ek hafta bhaagna pada tha..tumhare wajase se.
Rey-are woh ladki itni self obseed thi,
dinner kum table ke spoons ki reflction dekhkar lipstick chck kar rahe thi..

Taani-tu lace chod mera,are iss baar tumko numbr dilwwaya na,
subah ki jogging ka koi zaroorat nahi padegi mujhko..
Rey-c I am helping u that way too.. I am such a gud frnd..
Taani-kadoos,tu jata hai ki nahi (taani raises her leg to kick him n rey by thn ran thr u d stairs to his flat n taani ran beind n rey shouted-

Rey-main nikalta hoon,tu jaana bhaagne keliye,n numbr ke baare pooch lena

Taani comes bck frm her jogging,gets freshen up in black office tshirts n blue jeans her hair tied up n glossy pink lips with her slight touch of versace perfume,
she can nvr luk bad according to kadoos n as usual at d dinning table..
Kadoos dressed in same black office tshirt n d sleeves pulled up to d muscles was
as usual,luking gud looking whch according to him Taani nvr notices..

They hve their usual fyt again over breakfast.
Rey-kitna der lagaogi tum,aana mujhe bhook lagi hai jo tumhe nahi lagta.pata nahi yeh ladki zinda kaise rehthi hai.
Taani-haha vry funny,are,mujhe mere pen drive nahi mil rahi thi ,isliye..
Kaku mujhe bas ek coffee n apple de deejiye
Rey-shut d hell up,no cofee n no apple,yeh bread butter n milk pee nw..
Taani-no way,mujhe itne subah bhookh nahi lagti
Rey-khaa ya phir ulta tapkavoon tujhe..
Taani-haa baba khaaloongi
But no milk k,it stinks..
Rey-but bread butter khaa
Taani-kadoos kayinka,
Ab hogaya,main chaloon,pata nahi mera interns aaj kya naya drama karne waala hai..
Taani picks her bag up wears her stunning heels n kisses her dog n runs.
Rey-dheere jaana,n ghaadi sambalkar chalana,main peeche aata hoon...
Taani-k,c u at d office..

At d office-

When papers go flying in d air,nvr luk tht side according to d office waalon n evn boss too dont go that way,
its Taani getting pissed of by her interns bcoz she hve d dumbest 5 ppl in d world who are workng for her..
Taani-Do u hve any idea what hve u done?
For god sake ppl,get some brains,how CN u possibly delete d gile frm d pendrive whch has d presentation for nxt week'meeting.
Intern1-Mam,thr s no problm,in,tht,jus right click,scroll dwn n,press delete,hogaya delete...
Taani(pissed out bangs d table) n tells-out,ryt now!!
Everyone luking at d conferene room..
Vicky-1000 rs bet,she will fire them today
Swayam enters-2500 she will hit them with those chairs
Nil-i am with swayam
Sharon-tum logon ko mazak soc raha hai,luk at her,she will kill them,call rey
evryone in d same tone-RREEEYYY


Rey see d interns running out of the conference room in a rush.
N sees Taani luks at him..
Rey smiling luks at her..n luks at her n asks her to tke a deep breathe.
Taani sits dwn on d,floor removing her heels..
Rey too sits with her..
Rey-bad day huh,(n hands ovr a cup)coffee with no sugar
Taani smiles at him.
Rey- messed up?
Taani-mera first international assignment ,
I couldnt even present it at the conference nxt week.
Rey-y,its only,monday today..
Taani-its on nxt monday
Rey-so
Taani-me n,those stupid interns managed to bring piece by piece together
by workng our back of from last month..i couldnt evn take a day off..aur deko na kya ogaya
Rey-ssshhh
Taani rests her head on shoulder.
Rey-tumne yeh akela kiya tha na unlogon ke saath...
Taani-ha
Rey-main help karoonga na,
Taani-par tumhara kaam kaun karega
Rey-main office hours ke baad tumhara help karoonga na,we will pull it off better together k...nw gve me tht 420 walt ka smile...
Taani hugged-tumhara bina main kya karoonga
Rey-mera bina kyun hoga tum
Taani-par
Rey-zindangi bar akela nahi chodoongi tumhe,
ab sent mat ho boss bhulaa rahi hai tumhe...
Taani smiles n gets up n wear d heels.
N she was about to walk out of the door,she turns bck...
Taani-dinner at oberoi for two
Rey-huh(clueless)
Taani-shikha ke saath jaana nahi..?
she will be waiting at 7 there...
Rey runs towards her-u made a dinner pln n tht too with shikha,Taani u r too gud
Taani-i knw,ab senti mat n iss baar mujhe kam baagaane ki koshish karna...

Precap-
will shikha come in between these two frnds or
will it make them realize each other's lives...??


Piece of sharing-
Kisi par itna bhi dependent mat ho,ki,unke jaane ke baad,
humare liye saans lena bi muskhil ho jaoon...


So guys,
This story s really really close to my heart,
I really wish u all will like this story...
Please do tell me whether i should write this story further n if u guys me 5-6 pages of comments atleast i am ready to post a new part every day...so wht say guys?😉

P.s-silent readers commnt plse..😃




PART2



Edited by Lachu_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
AWESOME OUT OF THIS WORLD UPDATE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
awesome update

taarey were fighting like small kids
rey is so caring about taani he made her take her breakfast
office part was so funny how inocently her intern said that he delete presentation
rey calm her down

interesting precap
update it asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
So finally...
khadoos n moosibat are back
missed them a lot

luved the update
taarey best frnds wow
taani is so fitness freak
rey knows how to cool her down

precap intresting

update soon

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