VIRIKA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 03Kamya

God i have never came through this tpe of story till now..

Its the bestest virika story i have read..

Its so fun reading it.
GOD my stomach is paining just bcoz of laughing.

Hatss of gal for writing a briilian story.
Thank you For the PM.

Will love to read more and more.
Update fast


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Posted: 11 years ago

part 9 :

viren: so ... Such diverse people like us, can also have some similaries in interests n likes ... That's really nice to know !

jeevika: even I'm surprised to know !! ... Done with ur first aid ... how are u feeling now ?

viren: it's not like ... something went into my eyes, ... u remove it n ask ... how are u feeling ๐Ÿ˜†?

I got hurt n u've done dressing just now ... It needs some time to heal jeevika !! ... I'll tell u tommorrow, whether I'm feeling well or not ... !!๐Ÿ˜‰

ok, lets go now, we r getting late !

jeevika: late for wat ?

viren: are you planning to stay back here for the rest of ur life ๐Ÿ˜†? ... We need to go !! ... Mom n dad might be waiting

jeevika: oh yeah ... lets go !

they go near their cars but don't find anyone there !

viren: where did they all go ?

jeevika: how can I know ?๐Ÿ˜‰

viren: come, lets see around ... they might have gone to roam !

jeevika: wat abt our friends ?

viren: oh yeah ... i forgot to remove our friends from my pocket, ... just a min !๐Ÿ˜†

jeevika: is that a joke ? ... I didn't get laugh !!๐Ÿ˜ก

viren: who told u it's a joke ... ? ... N not getting laugh isn't my problem !!โญ๏ธ

jeevika: for god's sake, will u please keep quite ?๐Ÿ˜ก

viren: finally ... u've understood the peace in silence !! ... I'm glad that from now, u'll maintain silence !๐Ÿ˜†

jeevika: all ur games are fine until we find them ... Once it's done, u'll know wat is jeevika !!๐Ÿ˜ก

viren: no, I need to know abt it right now !! ... Tell me ... Wat ..is ..jeevika ?๐Ÿ˜‰

jeevika: jeevika ... Umm ... jeevika isss ... a good girl !!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

viren: ( laughs off ...) first think wat to speak n then speak ... Ok ?

he starts walking with slippers in his hands leaving his footprints in sand ! ... Jeevika stops for a moment, thinks n runs towards him ...

jeevika: wat wrong did I speak that u asked me to think before I speak ? ... I know very well ... That I'm a good girl !

viren: firstly, everyone thinks that they are gud ... !! ... We need any other person to confirm it !!๐Ÿ˜‰

secondly, I don't think u r gud or ... u donno the meaning of good ... So, get a dictionary !!๐Ÿ˜†

jeevika: I'll remember this forever ... Mr.viren !! ... U insulted me in beach ... that too ... a public area !!๐Ÿ˜ก

viren: hold on !! don't decide to have a grudge on me !! ... Though it's a public area, there's no one to hear that u r insulted !!๐Ÿ˜‰

n by the way, does the public space matter to u more, or the insult ? ... Is it ok if I scold u in our room ?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ

jeevika: so, u also know how to speak !! ... I thought ... by now, u would've understood me , but no ... U r still the foolish one !

vanshika: ( shouts ... ) now stop it !! ... Since the last 15 min's, u both are arguing with eachother ... Don't u have any other thing to do ?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

jeevika: but aunty, how do u know that we were arguing ? ... n from where did u come here all of a sudden ?๐Ÿ˜ฒ

vanshika: coz, I was eavesdropping ur convo through phone !! ... I called ur dad's no. through my phone n dropped my phone in ur handbag ...โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘

Viren: wat ?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก

Varun: actually, ur mom wants to know if everything is fine btw u both or not, so ... she did this ...sry on her behalf !

Vanshika: sry ? ... For wat ? these 2 are useless ! ... They donno how to behave atleast like a boy friend n girl friend !!๐Ÿ˜†

Viren: mom ?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก

Jeevika: yes aunty ... it's ur son who's going soo fast leaving me behind !! ... Then wat can I talk ?๐Ÿ˜‰

viren: I'm not fast, u r only slow !

vanshika: but u r not fast in every sense, viren !!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰

viren: mom ?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก

jeevika: that's soo true ...๐Ÿ˜†

vanshika: lets go now ... it's waste of time even to let u guys stay alone !!๐Ÿ˜‰

such stupids !!

they all go home ... jeevika's parents go to their home !

everyone go to their rooms after dinner

in virika's room:

viren: wat were u doing wen my mom was keeping phone in ur bag ?๐Ÿ˜ก

jeevika: I did wat u always do ... Ask in a shocked expression ... " Mom ? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

viren: I think this is all my mom's plan to get us closer, ... but remember, I'm not going to ditch aenna for u !!๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

jeevika: that's soo sweet of you ๐Ÿ˜ณ!! ... Even I'm not waiting for us to get closer ... n u know that better !!๐Ÿ˜†

viren: we should stop my mom from doing all these things !!โญ๏ธ

jeevika: even I'm feeling so !! ... Wat shall we do ?

viren: we'll plan something tomorrowโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ, gud night !

jeevika: gud night , but can I ask u something ... if u r not going to fall asleep ๐Ÿ˜ณ?

in varun n vanshika's room ... They start to read viren's diaries ๐Ÿคข!!

Actually, I can continue this part with the dairy n jeevika's question, but didn't coz I'm not feeling to write it ๐Ÿ˜†!!

friends ... I'm getting actually the lowest response ... for 356 pm's, I'm getting 32 likes n even less comments !๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I'm completely disappointed !

If the response is same in this part also, then ... I'll end my stories ... both ... as even that story is getting less response !๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

I'm sry for saying like this, but this time ... I'm pretty sure to discontinue both my stories if the response is soo less !!

if u like my story, please share my story with ur buddy's also ... else ... this will be my last update !!



********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres ๐Ÿ˜Š
sorry for unressing late๐Ÿ˜ญ
but it was just too good
love to see silly fights btw vrika ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
and vanshika
i love this characters๐Ÿ˜Š
its amazing
i love the ideas she put to unite virika๐Ÿ˜†
just too good
๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ
Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing
superb
fantastic
loved their plan to make them closer
reyna superb dear
cont sooon
cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update reyna...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Loved it...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Vanshika's plans...God...!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†
She will definately make them one..!!๐Ÿ˜†
And virika...why are they fighting so much..!!๐Ÿ˜ญ
Plz continue soon...Wanna read more...
Thanx for the pm...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update
cant wait to see what happens next
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey amazing update
again virika fight ohhh
pls bring virika together
viren mom dad role is really gud
continue soon
thanks for the pms
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
cannot wait to find out what is in virens dairies
superb
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8


awesome
loved the volley ball match

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