New FF *A different Love Story* Pt11 Pg 23

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

👏👏👏👏 AArthi , this was such a sweet Chapter!. Vickram and Sugni's day out. I loved the way they are both having feeling for each other...but not saying anything. Vickram is being protective of her...is so in character, looks like he is always catching her from falling lol!
Keep it up, looking forward to the next chapter soon! Great work!

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rose.lavender

@rose.lavender

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Aarathi,I just wish if cv's of PSH would read yours and Vinnie's FF👏.

Then they will know really how to go about writing creatively👍🏼.

I just love it!

Vikram and Sugni have fallen hook,line and sinker for each other wihout either willing to confess as yet.

Gosh!will the confession come soon?

OH! no, no keep that back a little longer please.

We want some more silent romantic moments together.

It was well written Aarathi, and also I enjoyed it because the entire chapter was tension-filled with deep feelings for each other!😉

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Julie

@JulieD

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Great job Aarti.👍🏼 I loved every word. Thanks for making it a long chapter and I am so looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait for the factory opening for him to get her gift.😃😃 I agree with Rose, CVs need to hire both you and Vinnie for PSH season 2👍🏼. Excellent job Aarti.⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Ron

@ronshaan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Aarti

I read this chapter and I must say I loved it

vikram buy cloths for her and she buy for him that too to gift him 😊 nice going I like it

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payal7

@payal7

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Aarathi

Another fantastic chapter. Such an endearing interaction.

I hope that the bond between will forged on many little things and not just love. ( I remember one of the most endearing intereactions between TVS and Adi was when TVS was going Adi advice on relationships)

Cannot wait for the next chapter.

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Rozey

@rozie

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Lovely update Aarathi, 👍🏼 really enjoyed reading the updates

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

😊 Tulipdaisy chapter 9 & 10 is absolutely beautiful. Vickram and Sugni feelings
for each other is endearing and heartwarming. You're doing a brilliant job on
the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Edited by Sandy66 - 12 years ago

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Aarathi

@daffodil81

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Vinnie79
👏 AArthi , this was such a sweet Chapter!. Vickram and Sugni's day out. I loved the way they are both having feeling for each other...but not saying anything. Vickram is being protective of her...is so in character, looks like he is always catching her from falling lol!
Keep it up, looking forward to the next chapter soon! Great work!

Thanks vinnie I am happy it was so appealing for you

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Aarathi

@daffodil81

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: rose.lavender
Aarathi,I just wish if cv's of PSH would read yours and Vinnie's FF👏.

Then they will know really how to go about writing creatively👍🏼.

I just love it!

Vikram and Sugni have fallen hook,line and sinker for each other wihout either willing to confess as yet.

Gosh!will the confession come soon?

OH! no, no keep that back a little longer please.

We want some more silent romantic moments together.

It was well written Aarathi, and also I enjoyed it because the entire chapter was tension-filled with deep feelings for each other!😉

hey rosy thanks a lot for such wonderful comments.

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Aarathi

@daffodil81

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: JulieD
Great job Aarti.👍🏼 I loved every word. Thanks for making it a long chapter and I am so looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait for the factory opening for him to get her gift.😃😃 I agree with Rose, CVs need to hire both you and Vinnie for PSH season 2👍🏼. Excellent job Aarti.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks Julie... I am trying to keep each chapter as lengthy as possible...