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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

OMG! 👍🏼 Fab update.👏 ye mulakaten badi interesting ho rahi hai😆
Nidhi please say YES😊


😆😆 I know...I am enjoying penning it down ...😉

Do you think Nidhi will say yes so soon ...😉😆 but don't worry even if She dont say yes ..Ashu is not going to leave her so soon...😉

Thank you so much Rajani 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

nice update...review later.


Thank you so much ...Will be waiting for your review 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome chap. sai...👏i just love ashu here...vase to i m AD...😆long review later...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good update...why isn't Nidhi worthy of him...coz she has been cheated in love or coz she slept with Amar?...but that's all in the past isn't it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update , like the way ashu tells her is falling for her ,liked her honesty in all a lovely update ,the beginning of the chapter beautiful👏but next update Thursday that's miles away , we all will be hounding u then 😡very interesting concept ,enjoying it
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful chapter...
the inner thots- beautifully written
love how ashu comes to meet her n introduces himself as his BF

the way he confesses that he is falling for her is so cute...
why does nidhi thin that she is unworthy of him?


pl do continue soon n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saibanu


Thank u for the quick update Sai 😉

Lovely chap SAI one of my favourite character in KTLK so cute conversation which rememorize KTLK

" kaisi lagi '.?" Arman asked

" Achi lagi '" Ashu replied in flushed voice '

" tu Sharma raha hai ''Ashu " Arman was startled " jis ashu ko main janta hoon wo kabhi Sharma tha nahi hai "

" Oh common '" Ashu chuckled

" teek se bata kaisi lagi '.."

" She is 'huh.." throwing his head back on pillow , Ashu closed his eyes '" She is quite a thing Arman'.I never met anyone like her " he mumbled with a delighted voice

" woohooo'." He could hear Arman's chuckle

Lovely and cute Dios Sai , well written my friend 😛

so cute 😳

"Kya main pooch sakta hoon '..Aisa kya tha madam ji main jo hamare Ashu ji ka dil chura baiti "Arman chuckled😛😛

" My goodness ! so many synonym to explain one girl ''Ashu I never expected this from you , beta thu pass ho gyaa .." Arman guffawed

"And we had good debate on Hitler's actions" Ashu chuckled

"You did what '? " Arman scowled '.Ashu chuckled even more "well I did not expected this from a girl like her , you know 'who spend so much time on blushes and foundation creams, I am impressed '." Ashu beamed and explained him about their debate conversation '

"beta tu kab sudhre ga , you argued with her??! 'don't you know the primary rule to be followed when you go out with a girl 'is that you should not argue'understand this, you should not ARGUE , but you should accept, even if they are wrong" Arman grimaced

" ohh common, it was healthy debate 'we were not arguing "

"Yes, I can imagine that '.What was her reaction? Any positive signs to cling to buddy ' I can see your chances are very thin after listening to your Hitler debate" Arman grumbled

"Yes, She said 'she will meet again, well not literally though but still '.I think, she will" he replied uneasily

Arman did not dared to open his mouth, after a while Ashu asked anxiously "Do you think, she 'you know she will say No just because we argued? Huh Arman! I think you are wrecking my head 'stop doing that ok 'I need to get up early tomorrow '.goodnight for now" He groused

"Don't worry buddy '.Say all is well and let me know how it is proceeding, happy for you...now good night "Arman replied in happy voice after brief pause of couple of empty seconds "But seriously what a topic to discuss '.Hitler and syphilis'such a deadly combination" he added suppressing his chuckle

"Shut up Arman'" Ashu grumbled before hanging up the phone

so cute 😳

" oye kal call kyu nahi pick kiya '?" Anjie came inside scowling

"Here comes our own Ms Sherlock Holmes '.." Nidhi mumbled rolling her eyes "Hi Anjie '.how are you?"

" I was worried when you dint picked the call '..I was expecting at least message for my miscalls" Anjie rumbled

" I am sorry '..I came late yesterday and then I was bone tired so slept off '" Nidhi made a small face...

Slumping into chair next to Nidhi's bed 'Anjie asked "So how was it? How is he ?"

"Here you go, MS Solanki's probing "

"He is fine ...ummm, you know all right " Nidhi replied looking away from Anjie's expectant face "is he good looking?" Anjie asked

" Anjie looks are not so important '.."

" he is not good looking ?" Anjie made a face

" No 'No , he is '..I never expected 'you know '."

" what you dint expected '.." Anjie asked totally puzzled

" he is so young 'so handsome I mean '.! I never expected someone like him '.his smile is cute" She smiled

"You like him '." Anjie froze on spot 'in turn Nidhi just gave her hopeless look

" my goodness Nidhi! Finally god created someone our Nidhi like'." Anjie chuckled

"What made you think '.that I like him?"

"Look at your face in mirror 'you blushing, looking like tomato all red over your face '.his smile is cute! You never say something like that 'you never told something like that from a long time nidhi" Anjie gave her shocked yet pleased look.

" so tell me more ' what was his first reaction, when he saw you '.?" Anjie asked sitting next to Nidhi

"First reaction '..I don't know! I don't remember '..Beside why are you asking these silly questions huh?" Nidhi scowled

"Don't you know first reaction is the most candid one 'it tell you how he looked at you" Anjie explain

"Well I don't know ...I don't remember " Nidhi replied

" Nidhi! You are pathetic...how can you miss out on such important detail, anyways '.was he glad, happy , joyous , horrified 'did he smiled , scowled , made a face .." Anjie asked

" Anjie , you are insulting me '..What do you mean by horrified and making a face '" Nidhi grumbled which in turn made Anjie chuckle "but yeah 'he called me judgmental over Hitler ...Can you believe that?" Nidhi grimaced

Sitting up straight Anjie stared at Nidhi " Ohh don't worry , I gave back nicely '." She smirked

"You did what '?" Anjie asked uneasily

" I told him whoever nominated that Hitler for world peace is a crack head ..And I am not judgmental" Nidhi replied

" Ohh god nidhi! What should I do with you '..You fought with him for someone who died like what 60-70 years back" Anjie grumbled

"We dint fought '." Nidhi replied

"Yes but argued '." Anjie added

"It was healthy debate '..Anjie " Nidhi tried to convince her "Nidhi don't you know about men and their elephant sized ego ''they don't like to feel they are wrong , they don't like someone who argue 'when will you grow up "

"But I don't believe in what he said '.that's why I argued!" Nidhi tried to justify

" yes but it is not necessary to voice it in front of him 'nothing would have snatched out of your hand by just agreeing to his points "

"But then it is like pretence '..I am agreeing something, which I don't believe" Nidhi replied

"Yes 'everyone do that, it's not wrong to pretend sometime '."Anjie replied

"Then he sees only my pretence isn't it'?"Nidhi mumbled suddenly unsure

Anjie did not replied for a long time "but Hitler seriously...koyi aur nahi mila tujhe" Anjie chuckled

This time u are too good u know why i told lke that sai 🤗

"Did he changed his mind, he doesn't want to meet me, and he dint liked me? Or he is in thinking mode just like me huh" She wondered uneasily just then her intercom buzzed showing call from reception "Nidhi '.someone is waiting for you here, he is telling ...He is your boyfriend 'you did not told us that you are seeing someone" her friend from reception desk asked her in hushed voice

" My boy friend ? huh ... " She replied quizzily , then as if she is enlightened " my goodness Ashuthosh ?!!'." She gave joyous squeal

"You are seeing him. '?" her friend asked "Whats with women and probing?" She scowled

👍🏼

" he is not my boy friend " she replied stiffly

" he is not 'ohh he is so handsome" her friend replied

" but he is my fianc '..umm you know going to be" she replied with underlining note, "Stay away from him" which her friend did not missed to catch .

Wa Sai what a description , i am in a dream land sai

.she saw him standing with his dazzling smile wearing khaki trouser and crisp and clear white shirt with sleeves folded till his elbow 'the front first 2 button of shirt is undone slightly revealing his broad chest..His hair is neatly combed and he is wearing glasses which in turn giving him matured look "jeez, he look even hotter with specs on ..."

" Nidhi ' will you come out with me?" he asked anxiously Unsure what to do , she looked up at him "Will you give me 15 minutes time , I need to send some report urgently'.if I don't send ,my boss will fry me alive "

He chuckled "sure '.I will be here, waiting for you and don't worry ...Take your time 'I am ready to wait" he replied with broad smile '.

Driving through familiar locality Nidhi stared at his face, he looked happy and his eyes staring back at her every now and then "I expected your call, but you dint called" he mentioned in mock anger

She gave him angry look "don't you know a girl should not make a first move 'world will think otherwise" she muttered and flushed realizing what she blurted out.

He chuckled "well I don't mind and I don't give a hoot what world thinks '."

Superb Sai

His eyes blazed with unhidden love and faith simmered brighter than his self... Sitting there as she stared at his full form, his handsome face and that anxious looks all over his face, her inside squirmed, deepest of deepest core of her heart clenched exhibiting familiar but long forgotten, forbidden emotions'she felt it erupting in her like butterfly fluttering its wings '.like ripples over the water...but somewhere in darkest corner of her heart a voice hissed "you are not worthy for him...you ...you ...just not worthy for him" like a resentment filled with ugliness and her own despair ...she heard that voice until it intensified and that's all she could hear ...that's all.


next chapter , i will try to give by thursday ,Please do comment and let me know how it came out ...Thank you 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gargpoo

awesome chap. sai...👏i just love ashu here...vase to i m AD...😆long review later...


Poonam i am still waiting for ur review 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sai, I will give the review today.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sai the beginning was typical sai-brand which i hve come to love. Ashu and Nidhi both hve liked each other...one has accepted openly but Nidhi has some problem from the past...this is a twist...

i liked Armu Ashu convo.

This Ashu...is he going to woo Nidhi out of her dilemma ?would love to see this Ashu.

when is the next update ?

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