THE GODFATHER- Part2...Index/ pg1 - Page 85

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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww such a cute, romantic, and sizzling suhaag raat!
but that BOOOOMM ruined it...it got me scared too!! i was like nooo!!!
but thank god they were in a different cottage!!

wow!! i must say godfather and his gang are pretty smart!! thank god they changed rooms!!

ok that stupid raghu needs to die!! lol!!! he betrayed godfather!! he is soo stupid...instead of going to godfather he went to damodhar!!
godfather would have helped me out!! now no one can help him out!! that stupid man!!!

awww prateeek was soo scared!! but yayy!! it was angad to the rescue!!! lol it was amusing to see prateek calm down when seeeing sooo many guns...another kid would panic...but since josh always used to carry a gun...prateeek got used to it!
and yayy!! all three of them can now sleep in the same room!! woohooo!! prateek will never let angad go now!!
how sweeeet!!

and that whole negotiation thing...i am pretty sure godfather has something up his sleeve!!

wonderful part!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rima791

great parl thank god AK didn't die and i was wondering why isn't angad wondering something unusual?? but there was no unusual anyways keep up the good work and continue soon 👏

Thanks rima! 😃

Of course I cant kill A-K in my story.....I love them too much! 😳

Angad knew abt GF's plan....thats what they were discussing in Study that night. But if he didnt know, he wouldnt suspect anything, his instincts were overshadowed by Kripa's presence! 😉

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey di it was soooooooooooo cute and romantic part
woe GF is more smarter then what i think lol thank god angad and kripa are safe and now damodar would be dead soon can't wait till he died 😆 😆 😆

poor prateek he gets scared a lot it so sad that he is see all this in his little age i hope they can live happily ever after

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya di

mittal
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part but m sure godfather is upto sumthin.
quite romantic too!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
grt part.....smart way to save em'.....u are a marvelous writer....i wonder what godfather's plan is...cont. soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW! WHAT A TWIST! AMAZING! 👏 👏

I thought that when AK were talking about the serenity and peace of the night, then Angad would hear the ticking of the bomb or something. I was desperately hoping his Zaib instincts and 6th sense would kick back in! Guess he was too drugged with Kripa's love 😉 😆

But was really smart of the Godfather to decorate a fake villa for AK! and really clever of you to think of it 😆

Chalo room ka tho solution ho gaya 😆 But you know I found it ironic that Prateek found solace in the presence of guns, it was sad but true...

Raghu, that was a curve ball! But I'm glad it wasn't Kalyani, she's such a nice lady, reminds me of dadi 😊

Godfather and negotiating will D-gang? and that too for the property of his dear friend,yeah right! Maybe this is just a way to come face to face with Damoder, make him a easier target...I'm sure he has something up his sleeve 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Something's cooking in that brain of GF, isn't it? He's not the type to compromise easily.
Angad's not doing a good job of being a good father... trying to soothe a terrified child with the sight of guns... highly irresponsible ... and sets a bad example too.
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Posted: 17 years ago
glad tha Gf's plan was successful. awesome part.


~Sana~
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part 👏

It was so romantic, then that bomb had to ruin it. Thank God AK weren't in that villa, I was worried for a sec.
Its interesting now that GF is accepting defeat wonder is it because of Kripa? GF should know that Damodar would never want to negotiate, with him. Wonder what GF is up to now. Continue soon 😊

Thanks jdsean! 😳

Of course I wouldnt kill my A-K! 😃

GF accepting defeat becuz of his family or is it part of some bigger plan? 😉

GF knows how greedy Damodar is and also how vicious and vengeful! Both men know each other very well, but GF is much smarter than Damu....😃

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire9

That was a great twist....them anticipating the attack....good thinking by GF and gang. Loved the suhag raat details 😳😆.....nicely done.....it was passionate, perfect for AK!😳😍
So it seems like AK and their son can sleep in the same room now 😉😆. But will Prateek not wonder about it in the long run? 😆. I think GF have something in mind to trap Damodhar....I doubt he will let him get away....that too by giving him his property 🤔😆. The final showdown seems to be approaching soon since your ending it in a few more parts .
Excellent work, Pallavi 👏👏👏. Btw, the AK video mix by Selina was nice...👏

P/S: I didn't know I write a lot like AK4eva 😳...Hmm, maybe it is the Aussie effect 😉😆. Now that I recall back, I do remember seeing her posts during the KYPH days although I was pretty much a silent member. She was nice 😊...I also remember reading a FF of her's which was later on continued by another member...I reckon it was called pyar hua 😳

Thanks sapphire! 😳

GF knows the way Damodar think! He invited trouble by printing Angad's name on the wedding card. It was like a challenge to react...and Damodar took the bait. GF anticipated a bomb as he suspected Raghu who was an explosives expert, besides Damu is obsessed with blowing ppl up! 😡

Poor A-K whenever they get married, theres an explosion.....either the good kind 😉😳😆 Or the bad kind!

Yeah now A-K can sleep in same room 😳.....by the time Prateek realizes something he will have his own room like he did when Kripa was married to Josh. 😉

GF definitely is cooking up something! 😃

Yes, Shelly is a very gifted vdo mixer....I always use hers and ashu's vms in my FF....both are too good! 😳

pallavi

Edited by pallavi25 - 17 years ago

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