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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 13


(Arjun piya ko rathore k ghar chod kr sidhe ETF office aata hai'. ETF team arjun ko dekh kr')

Chotu : Sir aap to piya k sath gya the???? Wapas bhi aa gye?????

Arjun : haan.. main sath gya tha wahaan rehne nhi'. aur piya bhi aayi hai' wo rathore k ghar me hai'.

Rathore : wahaan sab theek tha??????

Arjun : haan' sab theek hi tha'..(arjun wahaan ki sari baat batata hai'.)

Rathore : aakhir wo ek ex-army officer ki beti hai'. Use thik hona hi hai'. (tabhi rathore ka phone ring krta hai'.rathore phone attended krne k baad)

Rathore : mujhe commissioner sir ne bulaya hai'. Iss case k silsiley me kuch baat krne k liye' RAW k chief bhi wahi honge'. Ye case itna simple nhi hai' (Rathore ETF office se nikalta hai' pr wo kuch soch pr pehle ghar jaata hai'.Piya aur masi drawing room me baith kr baatein kr rhe hai.. tabhi rathore aata hai'aur dono khade ho jate hai.. rathore bhi khade khade piya se baat krta hai)

Rathore's House

Rathore : Piya ab tum kaisi ho?? Aur tumhare parents'.

Piya : sab thik hai' Pr aap aaj jaldi?????

Rathore to piya : mujhe commissioner sir ne bulaya hai.. wahaan RAW chief bhi honge' agar koi msg dena chaho to mujhe de skti ho'

Piya : sir wo maine aate hi unse baat ki thi' to unhone mujhe kal subah office bulaya hai'. To main kal unse mil hi rhi hu'..

Rathore : ok thik hai.. main chalta hu'.

Piya : Sir aapse kuch puchna tha???????

Rathore : Piya ye mera ghar hai.. office nhi' aur tum meri junior bhi nhi ho'.ghar me mujhe sir sun na psnd nhi'

Piya : to kya bolu' aap mujhse ho bhi to bade.. like a big brother' main aur riya hamesha se baat krte the.. k hamara bada bhai hota to kaisa hota' syad aapke jaisa hota'..

Rathore : tum kuch keh rhi thi???????

(rathore se reply na sun kr'piya thodi si udas ho jati hai' pr wo thik hai')

Piya : haan' haan' wo actual me kal subah main RAW office jaa rhi hu' to ho skta hai' mujhe jaldi hi agle mission k liye jaane pade' so kya main aaj raat dinner pr ghar pr mera matlab hai aapke ghar pr ETF team aur aisha ko bula skti hu'aap sabhi ne mera itna khayal rakha ek thanx to banta hai' aur kya pta ye mera aap sab k sath pehla aur akhiri dinner ho'.

Rathore : haan' kyun nhi.. jab tak tum yahaan ho ye tumhara bhi ghar hai.. tum jise chahe yahaan bula skti ho'

Piya : thank you siiir' sorry no sir'.

(rathore jaane lagta hai.. piya masi ki taraf dekh hai apni khusi ka izhar krti hai.. tabhi enterance pr rathore rukta hai')

Rathore(suddenly) : Piya???

Piya : jee'.

Rathore : tum bol skti ho' pr meri team k aage nahi'..

Piya : thank you so much' (piya masi k gale milti hai'..suddenly rathore)

Rathore : to main aaj k dinner me invited hu ya nhi??????

Piya : ap hi to chief guest ho'.

(Rathore wahaan se chala jata hai'..Piya arjun, chotu aisha aur shree ko invite krne k liye msg krti hai'.arjun chotu aur shree ka cell ek sath ring krta hai msg tone pr teeno ek sath msg padhte hai)

IN ETF OFFICE

Shree : Oh piya ka msg hai' usne dinner pr bulaya hai.. main to definitely jane wala hu'

Chotu : main bhi ' mujhe bhi same msg'.

(Arjun dono ki baat sunta hai pr koi reply nhi deta'shree chotu ETF se sath me rathore k ghar k liye nikalne k liye hote hai..')

Shree : Sir hum rathore sir k ghar jaa rhe hai.. aap bhi aa rhe hai naa?????

Arjun : kyun????? Kuch khas hai kya rathore k ghar???????

Chotu : piya ne dinner pr bulaya hai'. (Arjun realized k wo to bhul hi gya tha)

Arjun : abhi mujhe thoda kaam hai'..tum log jao'

(arjun ka jawab sun kr dono rathore k ghar k liye nikalte hai'wahaan pr aisha pehle se aayi huyi hai' piya khud se khana bana rhi hai'aur abhi khana taiyar nhi hai.. to chotu aur shree use tease krne lagte hai)

Shree : hume pta hota k khana tum bana rhi ho.. to hum khana kha kr aate

Chotu : aur kya'. Lgta hai khana khane k liye kal tak ka intzaar krna padega'

Piya : oh gya tum logo ka'.. zyada bolne ki zarurat nhi hai.. waise bhi abhi tumhare rathore sir aur arjun sir kahaan aaye hai

Chotu : arjun sir ka to pta nhi' humne unse pucha bhi tha to koi dhang se jawab nhi mila

Shree : aur rathore sir ka ghar hai to wo kahaan jayenge'. Yahi aayenge'

(tabhi masi aati hai..)

Masi to PIya : dekho ab tumhare dost bhi aa gye hai.. jakar unke sath baitho' ye main dekh lungi

Piya : pr masi????? Aaj sara khana main banane wali hu

Masi : ban chuka hai sara khana'. Bas jo thoda bahut reh gya hai main dekh lungi.. jao tum

(piya aur baki sab kitchen se nikalte hai' aur drawing room me aakar baith jaate hai')

Shree : jab tak rathore sir nhi aate tab tak to intzaar krna hi padega

Chotu : aise to hum bore ho jayenge

Piya : mere pass idea hai.. mere room me ludo rakhi hai' pta nhi kiski hai'. Wo lekar aati hu wahi khelte hai'..

(Piya ludo lekar aati hai' aur sare saap sidhi khelne lagte hai'.sabhi khel hi rahe hote hai'. Chotu ko saap sidhi me 99 wala saap kaat jata hai'to sare use tease krne lagte hai'..)

Piya : awweee'.99 wale saap ne kataa' (chotu cute sa face banata hai'.)

Shree : koi nhi' chotu ye game ham hi jitenge

Piya : rehne do.. agar ludo me oympics hote to ek gold medal to main hi lati'. Champion hu main'..

(Rathore enter hota hai' usne ye sab baatein sun li hoti hai'.rathore remembers k roshni bhi zabardasti use aur arjun ko ludo khelne pr majboor krti thi'.

Roshni to Rathore : agar aap chahte ho k main iss barish me bahar naa jau to mere sath baith kr khelo wrna main jaa rhi hu

Arjun : ye sahi hai' achchi dhamki hai

Roshni to arjun : ye tumhare liye bhi hai

Rathore to Arjun : aaja bhai khel le'. Iss se pehle se bahar jaaye aur bimar hokar aaye

(aur jab teeno khelna start krte hai' to same chotu wali situation me har baar roshni fasti hai'.

Arjun to roshni : jab pta hota hai k haarna tumhe hi hai to kyun khelti ho'

Roshni : haar kr jitne wale ko bazigar kehte hai'..

Flashback end)

Rathore : ye kya shor macha rakha hai'..

Shree : wo sorry sir'.wo chotu ko snake & ladder me 99 wale snake ne kata'..

Rathore : to isliye itna shor macha rhe ho' isme shor machne ki kya zarurat hai'

(rathore apne room me fresh hone k liye chala jaata hai' shree ka 99 wala dialogue arjun bhi sun leta hai' aur use bhi wahi sab kuch yaad aata hai to rathore ne yaad kia tha'.)

Shree : Office me to boss hai hi'. Aur ghar me bhi' bas inhe to daatne ka mauka milna chahiye'..

(Arjun enters'.)

Arjun : wo office me boss hai kyunki tumhara senior hai' aur ye ghar uska hai to wo iss ghar ka boss hai'.

(Shree is like aasman se gire khajur pr aatke'..Sare khade ho jate hai' piya jaldi se ludo utha kr rakh aati hai'.)

Piya : Main khana lagati hu'..(piya aur aisha wahaan se chale jaate hai')

PRECAP : (Next morning Piya aur rathore RAW office jaate hai' RAW office ek highly protected area hai' wahaan ander jana kafi muskil hai.. high security'.checking'sab kuch k galti ki kahi koi gunjaish naa rhe'.Rathore impress ho jata hai' wahi piya')

Piya Murmuring : fir se aa gyi iss jail me' uff'aisi kaun si afat aane wali hai yahaan jo itni security hai'.


PART 14LINK

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 18


Rathore to Mahesh Father : hum log ETF se hai'. Mahesh kahaan hai

Mahesh's Father : Kahaan hoga sahib ghar me hi hai.. asha ki atma ne jab se iske dono dosto ko mara hai' humne ise ghar se nikalne nhi dia hai'.

Arjun : hume Mahesh se kuch puchtach krni hai'.

(Mahesh k father ETF team ko Mahesh k room me le jaate hai')

RAthore : Mahesh?????? Hum log ETF se hai'.kuch puchna hai tumse

Mahesh : ji saab puchiye' jab se mere dono dosto ko asha ki atma ne mara hai mujhe to bahut darr lg rha hai wo mujhe bhi maar dalegi

Arjun : koi nhi marega tumhe'hum jo puch rhe hai uska jawab do.. Asha ki atma tum teeno ko hi kyun maarna chahti hai'

Mahesh : g wo wohhh'.. ramesh aur mohan dono asha k piche pade huye the (riya interrupted)

Riya : wo dono bas.. tum nhi'. hume to gaon se kuch aur hi pta chala hai'..

Chotu : Pit kr bologe ya pitne tak bologe

Arjun : sach sach batao' kya hua tha 12 saal pehle

Mahesh : hum log asha k piche the'. Asha k iss duniya me uske baap k siva koi nhi tha' to use pareshan krna zyada muskil nhi tha'. Asha padhne me bahut hoshiyar thi'. Uski wajeh se hume school me roz taane sun ne padte' maar khani padti'.Phir ek din mohan, ramesh aur maine asha ko school se aate whqt utha lia'use gaon se bahar wale kuye k pass jo hamara dhaan rakhne ka kamra hai wo khali tha.. usme humne asha ko bandi bana kr 6 mahine tak rakha'.

Arjun : uske aage kya hua bolo'.hum sun rhe hai'

Mahesh : Fir ek raat ramesh aur mohan ko kisi se daru pila di'.. dono ne uss raat asha k sath rape kia' uski agli subah asha jab uss kamre me nhi thi'.

Rathore : aur tum uss raat kahaan the?????? aur ye sab tumhe kaise pta ki uss raat kya hua tha'.

Mahesh : g uss raat main ghar aa gya tha'.mujhe to mohan aur ramesh ne bataya k asha bhaag gyi hai.. aur puchne pr mujhe unhone bataya k unhone nashe me asha k sath kya kia''.

Shree : fir asha ki atma tumhe kyun maarna chahti hai'..aur tumhe kaise pta wo asha ki hi atma hai?????

Mahesh : g uski atma ne mere upper bhi hamla kia tha wo to gaon walo k shor se bhag gyi atma' aur uski atma usi kamre k pass nazar aati hai'.. aur uss atma ne kaha k maine unn dono ka sath dia tha isliye wo mujhe bhi nhi chodegi'.

Rathore : aur ye baat tumne kisi ko batayi nhi' kyun???????? Aur pure gaon me uss ladki ko dhundne ki koshish kisi ne kyun nhi ki''

Mahesh's Father : jii' asha ka baap uske gayab hone k 6 mahine k ander hi chal basa aur use dhundne wala koi nhi tha isliye kisi ne nhi dhunda

Arjun : Pr tumhare bte se jurm kia hai???? Iski sazaa to ise zarur milegi aur ise sazaa asha ki atman nhi' police degi'.

Mahesh's Father : Pr saab iss baat ko 12 saal ho gye hai' aur isne to asha k sath kuch kia bhi nhi tha??????

Rathore : 12 saal ho jaane se iska jurm kam nhi ho jaata'.. (Arjun continues..)

Arjun : aur ye zaruri nhi k ye sab sach bol rha ho'hamari nazar tumhare bte pr bhi rahegi'abhi hum jaa rhe hai'.

(ETF team bahar aa kar' )

Rathore : koi fyda nhi hai iss sab ka' agar koi atma hoti to hume bhi nazar aati'. 2 din ho gye hai hume yahaan

Arjun : haan.. koi asha ki atma k naam pr khun pr khun kiye ja rha hai'

Riya : I'm sure agar koi atma hoti bhi to wo police se kyun darti' hamare aane se pehle logo ko atma nazar aati thi'.jab se hum aaye hai tab se kisi ko nazar nhi aayi hai'

Rathore : hume fir bhi raat me nazar rakhni padegi uss jagah pr jahaan asha ki atma ko dekha gya tha'gaon me darr ka mahol hai'.

(ETF apni SUV me chali jati hai..pr ETF ki ye baatein Mahesh sun leta hai..Mahesh kisi ko call krta hai..)

Mahesh on phone : suno unlogo ko hamari baat pr vishwas nhi hai' to tumhe ye krna hi hoga..main kuch nhi jaanta (aur Mahesh phone cut kr deta hai')

IN ETF SUV

Shree to aisha : tumhe kya hua??????jb se hum Punjab aaye hai tumne ek pal k liye bhi ye kala chasma nhi uthra hai

Chotu : aakhir raaz kya hai iska'''

Aisha : tumhe raaz jaan na hai.. mujhe dhul se allergy hai'meri aakhen lal ho jati hai isliye'

Riya : mil gya tum dono ko jawab to ab chup baitho'

(ETF team wahaan pahuchti hai jahaan Mahesh ne batya tha k unhone asha ko 6 mahine tak rakha tha'ETF team raat me wahi rukne ka faisla krti hai'kyunki Mahesh ne kaha tha k asha ki atma issi kamre k aas pass nazar aati hai'Raat me ETF team position lekar atma ka intzar kr rhi hai pr unhe kahi dur se kuch shor sunai deta hai' team wahaan jaakar dekhti hai')

Riya : Kya hua????????

Villager 1: Ap logo ko ho na ho hume vishwas hai ye asha ki hi atma hai'.

Shree : aap logo ne kahaan dekhi????????

Villager 2 : wo jungle ki taraf gyi hai..usne safed saree pehani thi aur uske hath me bada sa chaku tha

(ETF team jungle ki taraf bhagti hai' pr wo atma kafi aage nikal chuki hai'ETF team white saree me kisi ko dekhti hai.. pr iss se pehle ETF team kuch kr paaye wo kahi gyab ho jati hai')

Arjun : kuch to chhut rha hai???? Yahaan kuch to ajeeb hai'.

Rathore : kuch yahaan sab kuch ajeeb hai' log andhvishwashi hai'hum atma ka intzaar wahaan kr rhe the aur atma yahaan logo ko nazar aati hai' aur hum use pakad paate iss se pehle wo kahi chup jati hai'.

Riya : syad atma jaanti thi k hum uska wahaan intzaar kr the hai'. Isliye wo hume naa dikh kr gaon walo ko dikhi'. taki hume yakeen ho jaye'

Chotu : ajeeb to hai'agar wo atma hoti to chal kr kyun jati'wo to kahin se bhi gyab ho skti hai'aur jaahaan logo ne uss atma ko dekha atma ka saree ka pallu kuch podho me atak gya tha' ye cotton ki saaree hai'uska tukda'.koi gaon walo ko bure tarike se pagal bana rha hai...ho skta hai wo asha hi ho

Aisha : ye nhi ho skta'.

Rathore : tum aisa kaise keh skti ho

Aisha : kyunki agar asha ko aana hota to wo 12 saal ka intzaar nhi nhi.. aur koi gurantee nhi k asha zinda hai ya marr gyi' ho skta hai wo zinda ho..

Shree : ab to hume dobra uss atma k aane ka intzaar krna padega'pta nhi wo kab aayegi'

Aisha : I had a plan' pr jo main karungi uske liye koi mujhse swal nhi karega'

Arjun : tumhara plan kya hai??????

Aisha : Mahesh' Mahesh ka kehna hai.. k asha ki atma uske liye gaon me aati hai.. hum kal raat Mahesh ko yahaan lekar aayenge..dekhte hai kya hota hai'.

Next morning ETF team Mahesh k ghar jaa kar usse batati hai.. k raat ko wo log Mahesh ko apne sath rakhne wale hai'..

Raat ko uss jagah jahaan Mahesh aur uske dosto ne asha ko bandi bana kr rakha tha'

Mahesh : saab' wo mujhe maar degi.. chodegi nhi mujhe

Rathore : kuch nhi hoga tumhe?????? Hum sab yahi aas pass hai' tum bas iss room k bahar hi rehna ander jaane pr hume pta nhi chalega ki kya ho rha hai'.

Mahesh : theek hai'.jaisa aap kaho' pr mujhe kuch hona nhi chahiye

Arjun : yaahaan to hum tumhe bacha lenge pr kanoon se tumhe koi nhi bacha payega'.hum jo keh rhe hai chup chap karo

(ETF team sari sath me)

Rathore : Ye aisha kahaan hai??????

Shree : malum nhi' uska phone bhi nhi lag rha

Rathore : commissioner sir kisi ko bhi permote krke ETF me bhej dete hai.. aur waise bhi uska yahaan aane ka mann nhi tha.. anyway tum sab apni apni position lo.. hume ye case aaj raat hi khatam karna hai' main ab yahaan aur nhi rehna chahta

PRECAP :Atma : Main jaane k liye nhi aayi hu'..(ETF team aisha ki awaz pehchan leti hai')

Rathore : Ye aisha kya kr rhi hai'..

Arjun : usne kaha tha k koi uske kaam me dakhal nhi dega'hume thoda intzaar krna chahiye' dekhte hai aisha kya krti hai

Rathore : okkk


PART 19 LINK

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Revathi K, smneha, sarahjareen, abna1989, rinku95, abjeya, Faruheer, NainaSM, cute_ariya, yams.s, zubiya92, DesiiiDivaaa, Snehajain, ll-Farheen-ll, nakshatra92, pihu_angad, _Nikita_, miss_precious, pink1, ll_megha_ll, preethis, devildiva21, Leki, and all who likes the story...

@ pink1 : thanks for liking it dear...yeah...ab kuch to bonding honi hi chahiye sam aur arjun k bich me...

@ Faruheer : thanks for liking it dear...bs thoda intzaar aur karo..ariya scenes hi honge aage...

@ zubiya92 : thanks for liking dear

@ ll_megha_ll : thanks for loving and liking the story

@ IshitaRocks015 : 😆😆😆shadi ki shopping hai..wo bhi sam ki shadi ki shopping to aaram se thodi hogi...pgalpanti to banti hai 😆😆ab bich bich me shock treatment to chalte hi rehna chahiye...so de dia shock...rathore coffee banayega wo bhi arjun k liye 😆😆😆

@ NainaSM : thanks for liking it dear...ab shree se darr k mare nikal gya k wo rathore ki side se hai...ab samjun k saamne wo kya shopping suggestion dega...aur kaun manega uska suggestion 😆😆😆

@ Radhika Shah : thanks for liking it dear...

@rinku95 : thanks for liking it dear...ariya ki nok jhok to chalti hi rahegi

@ _Nikita_ : thanks dear...thanks for liking will continue soon

@ Aks13 : dear jaldi unres karo..otherwise dusre thread me dhundna padega tumhe 😆😆😆

@ ila_tanwar : thanks

@nakshatra92 : thanks for liking dear...haan arjun ne bacha lia..wrna shopping k naam pr bechari ka kya haal krne wale the ye log 😆😆😆

@ cute_ariya : thanks for liking it dear..will update soon

@ prachi90 : yup yahi last part ki breaking news thi k arjun coffee pita hai..sam k hath ki...aur hamari news reporter thi piya mukerjee 😆😆😆

@ tani.m : thanks for liking it dear..will continue soon

@ yams.s : dear will continue soon

@ devildiva21 : haan wo samjun hai agar wo h team ko nhi sambhal payenge to kisi aur ko bulana padega team ko sambhalne k liye... 😆😆😆 haan shree k pass option khatam ho gye...lekin ye choice bhi ussne khud kia tha...koi aur option hai...😆😆 chotu ki kamjori khana...uska fyda uthaya piya ne...usse khane k liye laane ko bol kr..khud ki psnd se sari shopping karwai aisha ko 😆😆😆...ab sam ki shadi hone wali hai to best friend taunt nhi karega...to kaun karega...aur piya aur arjun ko to rathore ne bhi impossible bol dia hai...to aur kuch keh hi nhi skte inke bare me...shock treatment bhi hota rehna chahiye kabhi kabhi 😉


@smneha : yup sabki party ban gyi 😆😆 aaj kal har jagah politics ka asar hai...so thoda bahut yahaan bhi daal dia 😉 Arjun bhi aaj kal piya ko tease krne ka koi mauka nhi chodta hai..so aaj kal wahi kr rha hai wo...😆😆😆 Mr. khan coffee banaye aur mujhe invite kare..to life long meri coffee kabhi khatam hi nhi hogi 😆😆😆


@pihu_angad : thanks for liking it dear 😊

@007jindal : great...bahut patients hai tum me...itne sare parts ek sath padhne k liye thanks dear 🤗 thanks for liking the story


@Snehajain : thanks for liking the story dear... 😆😆😆 doubt mat rakhna...ho skta hai..arjun sam se ek kadam aage nikle aur mostly mehmaan aisha ki taraf se ho 😆 ab sam coffee bana k dega..to arjun kya main bhi piyungi 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres🤗mataji thanku
lolz rathod ko baat start karne k liye wahi ques poochna tha kya😆 sach mein uska kuch nahi ho sakta😆
ye log itna hass kyu rahe the..ismein hasne wali kya baat thi😆

yaar tu to tapori wale dialogues bhi achche likhti hai👏 ruk jab tu WOTW banega na to tujhse os likhwaungi aur usmein rathod ko tapori banwaungi🤣


though i felt bad abt wat they said to ayesha and bahot gussa aa raha tha😡😡 bt apna angry young man to hai hi😉 dhulayi karne k liye unki😆
dono k arguement mein bhi kitna concern tha😊😃
aww eyelock then his proposal ab main dreamland mein ja chuki hun😊
lolz ye sakshi kabhi nahi sudhar sakti bechare wo ladke khud hi maafi maang liye😆

loved the update 🤗🤗 aww chalo ab bas ek haan ka intezar hai😉 sam ko
ayesha plz wait mat karwa jaldi haan bol de😉


rathod must hav been thinking---

Bas ab ek haan ke intezaar me raat yunhi guzar jaayegi,
ab toh bas uljhan hai saath mere neend kahan aayegi,
Subah ki kiran na jaane konsa sandesh laayegi,
rimjhim is gungunayegi ya pyaas adhuri reh jaayeg
i

❤️Tu meri adhoori pyaas pyaas,
Tu aa gayi mann ko raas raas,
Ab to tu aa jaa paas paas,
Hai guzarish..
Hai haal to dil ka tang tang,
Tu rang jaa mere rang rang,
Bas chalna mere sang sang,
Hai guzarish..
Kehde tu haan to zindagi,
Jharno se choot ke hassegi,
Moti honge moti rahon mein..
Yeah yeah yeah,

Edited by shona14 - 12 years ago
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guys time to make a new thread of this story
new thread link



sorry for late updating the story 😊
Edited by chulbuliannu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start :) loved it
chotu and shree are so funny :)
hope riya is fine and arjun finds her soon
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb start...!!!l👏
lvd it..!!!
hope d gal is riya only...!!
continue soon..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update :) loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update... Riya's father s so cool nd true son of soil... Precap seems intresting... who knows its jus the beginning...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh no aakhri dinner😭😭
hope piya gets transferred to etf from raw

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new morning, new day. what does the new day bring us. what will the morning be like after the storm that rages in my heart all night. What is...

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Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1013 page no 26

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

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Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

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Posted by: desidillse

1 years ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

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Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

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