Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#921

Shrey! Still you didnt give into our please?? That's bad..!

When is the OS gonna be updated?

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#922

Arnav is green with envy...aman kissing kushi in front of him..how can arnie boy tolerate that..

Just 'beautiful'..he must be feeling a lot more than that...he will definitely tell her with his eyes..

About the story being slow paced...dear..always know that it your story and you solely has the prerogative to tell it the way you want..don't bother about others..as with me..am more than happy with your story..i love it..do continue to update soon..waiting..

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Sumana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#923

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#924

Wow! I just read all 18 chapters in one go and it is amazing. I do not know who is criticising your work but they must be mad. I like the pace and I think it is really building up the suspense. So keep it up and PM me when you update. I will try to buddy request you as well.

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#925

great update. Well, atleast arnav admitted she looks beautiful. I really can't wait until some more of the aditya secret comes out. I wonder if he'll come to NY though. Can't wait to read the next update. And, well, the criticizers are just crazy. you can't always please everyone, but obviously you do write really well, considering you already have more than 300 likes on your update

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wildandsweet

@wildandsweet

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#926

just read the story from chapter 1 to 18 and I loved it.
i didn't find it slow paced at all and enjoyed all the detail you have put into the storyline.
looking forward to reading more.

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FlamingsOfLove

@FlamingsOfLove

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#927

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT !

eagerly waiting for Update dear 😍

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Koeli

@Koeli

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+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#928

Oh dear, i am a new reader of your chapters. its fantastic.

I must say you are damn good.

I am sending you a buddy request as i want to read your "BOOK"

I would call it a book...

Do accept my request.

As far as the storyline goes..

I love the way khushi has been portrayed.

It is so refreshing to see her feeling unlike our soap.

Do continue soon.

Love,

Appy

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Becs

@Becs

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#929

I just started to read this FF today from chapter 1 and I cannot stop. It's amazing and beautifully written. I'm enjoying every scene and every detail of their emotions and surroundings. Great job!